初中英语中考复习 专题05 描写人物类-备战2021中考英语六大类作文高分秘笈
展开如何写好人、物描写类文章
写好人物描写类文章的三点建议:
1. 写人重写外貌特征。2. 一般用第一或第三人称写,时态一般用一般现在时。 3. 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征和与众不同之处。
写好物品描写类文章的三点建议:
1. 抓住特点,注重顺序2. 一般用第三人称写,时态一般用一般现在时。 3. 要抓住所描写物品的典型特征(外观、用处、产地等)和与众不同之处。
关于人物描写的英语作文素材
1. 描述人物心情的常用词语:
sad 难过的 happy 高兴的excited 兴奋的 pleased 高兴的satisfied 满意的 angry 生气的wrried 担心的 disappinted 失望的terrified 恐惧的 friendly 友好的anxius 焦虑的 curius 好奇的eager 急切的
2.表达人物兴趣和爱好的常用词组或短语:
like very much 非常喜欢 lve 喜爱be interested in 对……感性趣 be fnd f 喜欢hate 憎恨 be tired f 对……厌倦be crazy abut 对……极度喜欢 enjy 喜欢lse interest in 对……失去兴趣
3. 描写人物外貌和性格特征的常用词语:
gd-lking 长得好看的 ugly-lking 长得难看的funny-lking 长相滑稽的 rdinary-lking 长相一般的
white-haired 白头发的 warm-hearted 热心肠的kind-hearted 好心的 absent-minded 心不在焉的bad-tempered 脾气不好的 near-sighted 近视眼的far-sighted 远视眼的 tall 个高的shrt 个矮的 pretty 漂亮的naughty 淘气的 lvely 可爱的easy-ging 温和宽容的 smart 精明的wise 明智的 bright 聪明的diligent 勤奋的 lazy 懒惰的clever 聪明的 healthy 健康的humrus 幽默的 funny 滑稽的silent 沉默的 attractive 有吸引力的talkative 多话的
4.介绍人物的姓名、出身:
She was brn in Beijing n Oct. 12, 1986.
She was a great wman with the name...
Brn f a pr clerk’s family, she had little schling.
说明利弊题型作文模板
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)。
要求:1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
Nwadays many peple prefer A, because it has a significant rle in ur daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as fllws. First ____________(A的优点之一). Besides ____________(A的优点之二). But every cin has tw sides. The negative aspects are als apparent. One f the imprtant disadvantages is that ____________(A的第一个缺点).T make matters wrse,____________(A的第二个缺点). Thrugh the abve analysis, I believe that the psitive aspects verweigh the negative nes. Therefre, I wuld like t ____________(我的看法). (Frm the cmparisn between these psitive and negative effects f A, we shuld take it reasnably and d it accrding t the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ____________(对前景的预测).
典例一【2020 •盐城中考】
学校网站英语栏目将组织读书分享征文活动,请根据提示,写一篇短文投稿。
注意事项:
(1)词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
My favurite bk
Gd bks are valuable treasures. Amng all the bks I’ve read, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题是一篇话题作文。主要以“My favurite bk”展开描写。文章要写出题目中给出的所有的要点,同时也可以自行发挥,可以使用现在时描写,要注意语言的衔接要自然连贯。
【参考范文】
My favurite bk
Gd bks are valuable treasures. Amng all the bks I’ve read, the Mnkey King is my favurite bk.
The Mnkey King is the main character in the traditinal Chinese bk Jurney t the West. He is nt a nrmal mnkey. In fact,he is brave enugh t fight with any bad persn and he can always win the fights. S I like t read it.
The bk mainly talks abut three things. First f all, it tells us why the mnkey can make 72 changes and what different animals and bjects he can change int. Secndly, the bk shws us hw the mnkey uses his magic stick. Smetimes he can make the stick s small that he can keep it in his ear. Last but nt least, the bk tells us hw the mnkey fights with bad peple. I like t read this part very much because the mnkey always tries his best t win the fights.
The bk teaches us t be brave when we are in truble. And it als tells us t keep fighting t help the weak. Mst imprtantly, it tells us t keep trying in ur lives and never give up.
名师点评
文章分四段描写。第一段开篇点题最喜欢的书是什么;第二段介绍书名的由来;第三段介绍整本书中的内容;第四段写为什么要读这本书,能够学到什么。整个文章结构完整思路清晰,语言表达准确,意思明确通俗易懂。
亮点回放
短语:in fact;fight with;talk abut;first f all;try ne’s best t d;be in truble;give up。
句型:
hw引导的宾语从句;because引导的原因状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句;s…that引导的结果状语从句。
典例二【2020 •遵义中考】
2020年3月3日是联合国第七个"世界野生动植物日",我国提出了"维护全球生命共同体"的主题。我们的世界因这些生物而丰富多彩、妙趣横生。保护它们,就是守护我们的未来。下面,让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧!
假如你是熊猫惜惜,请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封80词左右的书信。
要求:1. 信中包含所给信息内容;
适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
注意:1. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 书信的开头和结尾已为你写出,不计入总词数。
基本信息:13岁,来自四川,中国的象征;爱好(自主发挥)。
我的烦恼:朋友少,家园常常遭到破坏……
我的愿望或建议(自主发挥,至少两条)。
参考词汇:symbl (n. 象征) 、destry (v. 破坏)
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yurs,
Xixi
【写作思路】
文章是一篇书信作文。主要是以熊猫惜惜的身份向人类写一封信。先是介绍自己,然后告诉自己的烦恼以及期待和愿望。要把题目中给出的要求都写进去,要注意人称之间的转换和时态的应用,还要注意语句之间的连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. I’m ne f yur favrite animals — Panda. I cme frm Sichuan, China. I am 13 years ld. I am a natinal treasure f China and a symbl f China. I usually like t play with my friends. I als like climbing trees and sitting n the trees. I like bambs best. It’s my favrite fd.
But I’ve had sme prblems recently. My hme is ften brken and I dn’t have much rm t mve arund. My friends are fewer and fewer because sme peple have destryed my hme. There is n ne t play with me and I am very lnely. My favrite fd is getting less and less. I’m really sad.
I hpe human friends can help me. I hpe that peple can prtect the envirnment and give me mre space fr live. If yu can cut dwn fewer trees, my friends and I will be very happy.
Yurs,
Xixi
名师点评
文章分三段描写。第一段是对自己简单的介绍;第二段介绍自己的一些烦恼和忧虑;第三段写自己的期望。整个文章结构完整思路清晰,语言表达准确,意思通俗易懂。
亮点回放
短语:ne f;cme frm;play with;like ding;mve arund;cut dwn。
句型:
My friends are fewer and fewer because sme peple have destryed my hme.(because引导的原因状语从句);
I hpe that peple can prtect the envirnment and give me mre space fr live. (I hpe+宾语从句);
If yu can cut dwn fewer trees, my friends and I will be very happy. (if引导的条件状语从句)。
A
【2020江苏如皋模拟】
每个人都有自己崇拜的偶像(idl),原因也各不相同。请根据下表内容,结合你自己的看法以“Wh is the idl in my heart”为题,写一篇90词左右的英语作文。
要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下连贯;
2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3)词数:90词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不使用真实姓名和校名等。
Wh is the idl?
Everyne has an idl in his heart. Different peple have different reasns fr it.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In my pinin, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
B
【2020山东章丘模拟】俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为“My Neighbrhd” 的征文活动。假设你是李雷,住在花园社区,根据以下提示,完成一篇英语征稿。
要点:
1.社区的条件。
2.邻居。(邻居是什么样的人,他们是如何帮助别人的……)
3.你曾为邻居做过什么?举出一到两个例子。
4.你对社区的感情。
要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
3.词数:100 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My Neighbrhd
My name is Li Lei . I live in Garden Neighbrhd.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
A
Wh is the idl?
Everyne has an idl in his heart. Different peple have different reasns fr it.
Sme peple admire actrs r singers, because they are yung, gd-lking and dress fashinably. In additin, they can sing, dance r act well. They earn a lt f mney s easily that many teenagers admire them very much.
Sme peple admire scientists, because they have rich knwledge. They are experienced in their wn field. They make cntributins t ur cuntry’s science and technlgy.
Others think dctrs are their idls, because they prtect ur health r lives. Sme f them even lst their lives. Fr example, when the nvel crna virus brke ut in Wuhan, a lt f dctrs gave up their wn family and did what they culd t save the patients when they were needed.
I think my idl is …, because …
B
My Neighbrhd
My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbrhd. It is a beautiful area with sme tall buildings.
I have sme neighbrs wh are kind and friendly. They are always ready t help thers. They help thers by taking care f their pets and ffering umbrellas n rainy days.
I ften help my neighbrs when they need help. One day, ne f my neighbrs kncked at my dr. He left his key at hme. He wanted t use my phne t call his mther and I agreed. After he called his mther, I asked him t stay at hme and wait fr his mther.
I lve my neighbrhd and I feel happy t live in my neighbrhd.
My favurite bk
*What’s the name?
*What’s it abut?
*Why d yu like it?
…
明星
光鲜亮丽,能歌善舞,时尚多金
科学家
严谨治学,知识渊博,卓越贡献
医生
抗疫先锋,治病救人,无私奉献
……
……
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