初中英语中考复习 专题40 书面表达说明介绍类-2020年中考英语母题题源解密（解析版）

这是一份初中英语中考复习 专题40 书面表达说明介绍类-2020年中考英语母题题源解密（解析版），共15页。

【母题来源1】 【2020 •贵州省黔西南州】
【母题原题】
61. 假如你叫李华，你们学校刚刚开学，正在开展 “Happy Mnth”活动，请你以 “Learn t BeHappy”为题，给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿，号召同学们返校后快乐生活。
内容包括:
1.新冠疫情使学校延迟开学;
2.通过上网课学习语文、数学和英语等课程;
3.“Happy, Mnth”活动和你的心情:
4.如何快乐生活(至少2点)。
写作要求:
1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰;
2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名和学校名称等信息；
3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：新型冠状病毒COVID—19
Learn t Be Happy
Gd mrning, everyne! We’re very happy t be back t schl.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hpe all f us can live happily in this schl. Thank yu fr yur listening!
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，假如你是李华，学校刚刚开学，正在开展 “Happy Mnth”活动，要求你以 “Learn t Be Happy”为题，题干内容提示，给学校英语广播站写一篇广播稿，号召同学们返校后快乐生活。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Learn t Be Happy
Gd mrning ,everyne! I'm very happy t be back t schl.
T prevent the Crid-19, ur schl has delayed (put ff) the pening f this term. But we didn't stp studying. Our schl gave us nline curses such as Chinese, Math, English and s n. We were very happy.
Nw ur schl is carrying ut the plan“happy Mnth”. Hw t be happy? First, I think we shuld have life aims ,with life aims, we can live a happy and meaningful life. Then, we must keep healthy. What’s mre, we shuld be ready t help thers.
I hpe all f us can live happily in this schl. Thank yu fr yur listening!
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
2.高分亮点：
短语：put ff，such as，s n，keep healthy，be ready t。
句型：I think we shuld have life aims. 我认为我们应该有生活目标。I think后接宾语从句。
What’s mre, we shuld be ready t help thers. 更重要的是，我们应该准备好帮助别人。be ready t d sth.准备好做某事。
【母题来源2】【2020 •黑龙江哈尔滨】
【母题原题】
80.假如你是中学生李平，曾经在你们班学习的交换生Peter看了你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。
写作要点：
1.班会的主题：我的理想
2.介绍你和几名同学的理想：
（1）赵勇：想成为一名勇敢的警察；
（2）张红：想做一名志愿者；
（3）你：想成为一名优秀的医生。
3.说说中学生如何才能实现（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。
写作要求：
1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear peter,
I'm writing t tell yu smething abut the class meeting held last week. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【写作思路】
这是一篇话题作文，介绍班会情况，班会的主题是谈论理想，通过分析可知，除了短文开头介绍上周班会情况，我们应该使用一般过去时态，其他内容可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时，注意谓语动词要随着时态和人称的变化而改变。
【参考范文】
Dear peter,
I'm writing t tell yu smething abut the class meeting held last week. The theme f it was “My Ideal”. Our mnitr hsted the meeting. During it, all f us tk an active part in the discussin and shared ur pinins with each ther.
Zha Yng is ging t be a brave pliceman. He hpes t help peple in danger. Zhang Hng wants t be a vlunteer, she will help peple in need especially the disabled and the hmeless. My dream is t be an excellent dctr, I think it’s a meaningful jb, because I can save peple’s lives and help them ut f danger.
T realize ur ideals, I have sme pinins. Firstly, we must try t wrk harder frm nw n and learn as much knwledge as pssible. Secndly, we shuld believe urselves, because cnfidence is the key t success. Besides, it’s als imprtant t find ut hw successfully peple did it s that we can learn frm them.
Best wishes!
Yurs,
Li Ping
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：例文采用分段式，文中衔接流畅，在写作的时候选择了一些相对高级的词汇，也运用多种句型，句式丰富多彩，避免单一化，增加了文章的亮点，润色了文章的内容。
2.高分亮点：
短语：hst the meeting；take an active part in；in danger；a meaningful jb；frm nw n；learn frm。
句型：① I think it’s a meaningful jb, because I can save peple’s lives and help them ut f danger.
②Secndly, we shuld believe urselves, because cnfidence is the key t success.
③Besides, it’s als imprtant t find ut hw successfully peple did it s that we can learn frm them.
【母题来源3】【2020 •黑龙江龙东地区】
【母题原题】
81.为加强机场服务工作，现面向社会招募志愿者，若你具备以下条件，请致电：63688881。
1）身体健康；2）性格善良、有耐心；3）擅长与人沟通；4）会讲汉语和英语。
请根据以上信息，用5-6句话写一份招聘广告。
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【参考范文】
Vlunteers wanted
We need vlunteers at the airprt. Are yu in gd health? Are yu kind and patient? Are yu gd at cmmunicating with peple? Can yu speak bth Chinese and English? Please call us at 63688881.
【母题来源4】【2020 •黑龙江龙东地区】
【母题原题】
83.仔细观察图片描述，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
12 3.45.
提示词：mask（口罩）；keep a certain distance（保持一定距离）
要求：1. 话题作文或图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数：80-100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
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【写作思路】
本题属于图画作文。要求观察图片，展开合理想象来写一篇作文。观察图片及提示词可知这里是五条关于预防新型冠状病毒肺炎的建议。写作时要紧扣图片内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Nvel crnavirus is spreading arund the wrld and many cuntries are fighting against it. We shuld d smething t avid it.
Here is my advice fr everyne. Firstly, if we have t g ut, we must wear masks t prtect urselves. Secndly, we shuld always wash hands t keep germs away. Thirdly, we need t pen the windws very ften t let the fresh air in. Futhly, we shuld take ur temperature ften and if we have a fever we shuld g t the dctr in time. Finally, keeping a certain distance with thers is als very imprtant.
【名师点评】
1. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，从图片内容延伸出5条预防新型冠状病毒肺炎的建议，用上了所给提示词并进行了适当发挥。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
2. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：spread；arund the wrld；fight against；avid；wear masks；keep germs away；take ne's temperature；have a fever；in time；keep a certain distance。
句型：and连接的并列句；以here开头的倒装句；if引导的条件状语从句。
【母题来源5】【2020 •湖南省常德市】
【母题原题】
61.假设你是Angelica的朋友Alan，请根据第二节（回答问题）材料并按照提示给Angelica回信：1. 恭喜乔迁并简单评述其新居。2. 回复能否参加聚会。3. 若能参加聚会，你会准备什么节目，对整个活动有什么建议等；若不能参会，说明原因，表达自己的心情等。注意：1. 80词以上，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；2. 不得出现人名和校名等真实信息。
Dear Angelica,
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Alan
【写作思路】
这是一篇书信作文。本文要求按照提示要点写一封回信，写作中注意要包含所有的提示要点，可适当发挥。时态以一般现在时为主，人称是第一人称。
【参考范文】
Dear Angelica,
I’m glad t receive yur letter last time. First f all, cngratulatins n yur settlement t the new huse，which is s warm and cmfrtable that I’d like t have a lk at nce. The small independent garden is the best design in the huse, and als a gd place t relax. Secndly, I really appreciate yur invitatin f the husewarming party. I’d lve t, but I can’t. As yu knw, the Natinal Pian Grading Test is cming, my curse schedule n these days is already full. I have t devte myself t the preparatin until the end f the test. At last, it’s a great pity that I can’t cme t yur party. But I’ve prepared a gift fr yu and I hpe yu will like it.
May yur party be a great success and enjy yurself that day!
Yurs,
Alan
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文采用两段式，第一段：（1）恭喜对方乔迁之喜；（2）告诉对方因为要准备钢琴等级考试无法参加聚会；（3）表示很遗憾并准备了礼物；第二段以祝福结尾。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
2.高分亮点：
短语：be glad t；s…that…；wuld like (lve) t；have a lk；at nce；have t；devte myself t；prepare fr；the end f；enjy yurself。
句型：First f all…Secndly…At last…；which引导的非限制性定语从句；s…that…引导的结果状语从句；and并列句；but并列复合句；As yu knw…；it’s +名词+ that从句。
【命题意图】
考查学生的基础英语和逻辑写作能力。
【考试方向】
说明介绍类书面表达。
【得分要点】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
【母题1】【来源】【2020 • 山东省菏泽市曹县二模】
减负之后，同学们有了更多的课余时间。请你根据下图提示，以"Hw T Make Our Spare Time Mre Meaningful?"为题，用英语写一篇短文(100词左右)。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。

Hw T Make Our Spare Time Mre Meaningful?
Nwadays, we students have much mre spare time than ever befre, but hw t make ur spare time mre meaningful?
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【答案】One pssible versin:
Hw T Make Our Spare Time Mre Meaningful?
Nwadays, we students have much mre spare time than ever befre, but hw t make ur spare time mre meaningful?
In my pinin, it's gd t help ur parents d sme husewrk t shw ur lve fr them. Secnd, we will knw mre abut the wrld by reading. Third, it is a gd chance fr us t get clse t nature and relax urselves. I think sprts have becme mre and mre imprtant in peple's life. We can d sme sprts t make us strnger and healthier. What's mre, we can take an active part in sme scial activities as vlunteers t help thse wh are in need.
In a wrd, let's make full use f ur spare time and make it mre meaningful.
【解析】
【详解】1. 题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要以“Hw T Make Our Spare Time Mre Meaningful”为主题展开的描写，根据题目中给出的图片提示具体的描写，要包括每一个细节，同时还要有自己的意见，要注意文章的层次以及语言的逻辑性。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段总体抛出文章的主题“该如何利用业余时间”；第二段具体的从各个方面介绍业余时间要做的事情；第三段总结要充分利用业余时间。整个文章结构完整，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当合理，意思明确易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：in my pinin；get clse t；d sprts；What’s mre；in a wrd；make full use f。
句型：I think+宾语从句；wh引导的定语从句；let’s祈使句。
【母题2】【来源】【2020 • 安徽省合肥市瑶海区二模】
一个人可以非常清贫、困顿、低微，但是不可以没有梦想。只要梦想一天，只要梦想存在一天， 就可以改变自己的处境。——奥普拉
初中三年，你一定遇到过很多困难，但最终梦想给了你勇气，帮助你战胜了困难。某英文报社以“梦想的力量”为话题展开征文活动。请你用英文写篇短文给报社投稿，谈谈你在梦想的力量下战胜困难的一次经历，以及你的收获感受。
提示词语： dream, pwer, remember, defeat, prud
提示问题：
●What was yur dream?
●Hw did yur dream help yu t vercme a difficulty?
●What have yu learnt frm the experience?
Everybdy has a big dream. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Everybdy has a big dream. A life withut a dream is a life withut a sun. Therefre, in n circumstances can we give up ur dream. Unquestinably, dreams are f great imprtance.
My dream is t be a reprter. T achieve my dream, I have t wrk hard t enter the best high schl in my twn. I still remember when I failed my math exam last mnth, I was s sad and upset that I was ready t give up my math. In my mind, I was a stupid girl wh wasn’t gd at it, it was s difficult fr me t wrk ut the prblems. Luckily, my dream encuraged me t walk further and cheered me up. It is like a gd friend and always gives me a lt f energy and pwer t defeat the failure.
I realize n matter hw difficult the rad is, I shuld try my best t keep walking t reach the end f the rad. And my dream is always guiding me crrectly.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于材料写作。写作时要注意问题信息要写齐全。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段说梦想的重要性；第二大段陈述我的梦想是什么，梦想在一次经历中给我的力量；第三大段陈述从这次事件中的收获，结构清晰，段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析；时态采用一般过去时为主。
3.高分亮点：
短语：give up，wrk hard，be ready t，encurage sb. t d sth.，cheer me up，wrk ut。
句型：s ... that引导的结果状语从句，wh引导的定语从句，when引导的时间状语从句。
【母题3】【来源】【2020 • 甘肃省张掖市一模】
2020年春节期间，“新型冠状病毒肺炎”爆发,全国展开了抗击病毒的斗争，你们班就此召开了一次主题班会讨论如何预防“新型冠状病毒肺炎”，请你根据提示内容写一篇英语短文，介绍新型冠状病毒肺炎的症状及预防方法。
要求：1.文中需包含参考词汇中的主要内容；
2.句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范；
3.可做适量拓展；
4.文中不得提及考生个人的相关信息,如人名、校名或地名等；
5.词数:100词左右。(开头需抄写在答题卡对应作答区域,不计入总词数)
6. 参考词汇：新型冠状病毒 COVID19; 口罩mask; 疾病 disease; 感染 infect
be infected by COVID-19：have a sre thrat； have a high fever and cugh ；hard t breathe
prtect urselves：stay at hme；take temperature every day; wear a mask；wash ur hands; have a healthy diet; d mre exercise
During the Spring Festival f 2020, a very serius disease caused by COVID-19 spread arund China, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
During the Spring Festival f 2020, a very serius disease caused by COVID-19 spread arund China. If yu are infected by COVID-19, yu may have a sre thrat, have a high fever and cugh, r yu may feel hard t breathe. It’s urgent fr yu t seek medical attentin, and fllw the directins f yur lcal health fficial. Hw t keep urselves safe frm COVID19？ Here are sme ways.
First, dn’t g t places full f peple, such as hspitals, railway statins and airprts. Wear a mask if transprt r mvement is necessary. Secnd, wash ur hands frequently and prperly. It’s necessary t wash hands with sap and running water thrughly fr at least 15 secnds. Third, we’d better stay at hme and take temperature every day. Finally, we can have a healthy diet and d mre exercise. Regular exercise is ne f the mst imprtant ways t keep infectin at bay.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示介绍新型冠状病毒肺炎的症状及预防方法。
2.例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。介绍预防方法分四点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：are infected by；have a sre thrat；have a high fever；seek medical attentin；keep urselves safe frm；full f；at least；stay at hme; take temperature; have a healthy diet; d mre exercise; keep infectin at bay。
句型：it做形式主语的句子；if引导的条件状语从句；and表示并列的句子。
【母题4】【来源】【2020 • 广东省广州大学附属中学一模】
假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。
要点 提示如下：
1.几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞。
2.从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。
3.现在，奶奶比以前更健康了，有很多朋友。
4.有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。
5.你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但------
参考词汇：
跳广场舞 d square dancing （对某人）有意见 have a cmplaint (against sb.)
写作要求：1.词数：80-100 个
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
3.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
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【答案】例文
Bys and girls
I'm very happy t speak here and I'd like t talk abut my grandma.
A few mnths ag, my grandma went t d square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in lve with square dancing. Nw, she is much healthier than befre. What's mre, she has a lt f friends. Hwever, sme neighbrs have a cmplaint against the peple wh d square dancing. They think that the music is s lud that they can't fall asleep at night.
In my pinin, peple can d square dancing because it is a gd way t keep healthy. But they shuld think abut the feelings f thers and they shuldn't make a lt f nise.
That's all. Thank yu!
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。内容是根据下面提供的材料就“奶奶跳广场舞”这一问题写发言稿，在兴趣活动小组里发言。我们可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：1. 先介绍奶奶喜欢广场舞及跳舞后的变化。2. 然后写跳广场舞缺点。3. 发表自己的观点。4. 注意一些过渡词 since then, hwever, in my pinin, but等。
2.例文点评：例文采用四段式；时态主要为一般现在时。人称主要为第三人称。第一段介绍奶奶喜欢广场舞及跳舞后的变化。第二段介绍跳广场舞缺点。第三段发表自己的观点。最后致谢。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be in lve with；What’s mre；have a cmplaint；a gd way t d…；keep healthy；make a lt f nise。
句型：1. Nw, she is much healthier than befre. 现在，她比以前健康多了。
由比较连词than，可知这是一个含有比较级的句子。much+形容词比较级+than+比较的对象。
2. They think that the music is s lud that they can't fall asleep at night.
他们认为音乐如此大声，他们不能在晚上入睡。
本句主要运用了s…that…句型。表示：如此……以至于……，引导结果状语从句。
3. they shuld think abut the feelings f thers and they shuldn't make a lt f nise.
他们应该考虑别人的感受，他们不应该制造太多的噪音。
and 连接两个并列分句，分别叙述了应该怎样做，不应该怎样做。
【母题5】【来源】【2020 • 湖南省长沙市双语实验中学一模】
假如你是李华，你有一个出生成长在美国的小堂弟李小华，他在上次的电子邮件中请求你给他讲一个中国民间故事以帮助他完成一项作业，故请你给李小华回复一封电子邮件,邮件内容应该包括以下内容：
1、讲述一个趣味中国民间故事:
2、告诉他你从这个故事中学到的东西;
3、鼓励他学习汉语和传播中华传统文化。
要求:
1、语句通顺、语法正确、句式多样;
2、100 词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear cusin Xiahua,
Hw's it ging with yu in America? At yur request, I will tell yu an interesting Chinese flk stry.
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Yur sincere cusin,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear cusin Xiahua,
Hw's it ging with yu in America? At yur request, I will tell yu an interesting Chinese flk stry.
Thusands f years ag, there was a farmer in China. He did the farm wrk very hard every day. Hwever, he gained little. One day, when he was n the farm, suddenly, a rabbit ran int a tree nearby, then died. He gt a rabbit fr supper withut any wrk. S he decided t wait fr mre and mre rabbits t cme and run int the tree. Finally, he waited and waited and watched. His field lay waste, but he never gt a secnd rabbit. This stry tells us that n pains, n gains. One can’t wn frtune all the time, if yu want t get smething, yu must make yur effrts.
Our great traditinal culture makes a difference t the wrld, nwadays, ur cuntry is becming strnger and strnger. Yu shuld learn Chinese well and spread Chinese traditinal culture t the wrld. D yu think s? I’m lking frward t yur e-mail.
Yur sincere cusin,
Li Hua
【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇书信作文，要求回复一封电子邮件，根据题目要求内容要包括三个要点，这样写作才能要点齐全，表达通顺。另外，讲述故事部分应用一般过去时，其余部分要根据写作的内容选用恰当的人称和时态。
2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
3.高分亮点：
短语：thusands f years ag； n the farm；run int a tree；withut any wrk；wait fr；all the time；make a difference；lk frward t。
句型：①宾语从句 This stry tells us that n pains, n gains.
②条件状语从句 One can’t wn frtune all the time, if yu want t get smething, yu must make yur effrts.