初中英语中考复习 专题42 书面表达叙事描写类-2020年中考英语母题题源解密（解析版）

专题42    书面表达叙事描写类

【母题来源1】【2020 •浙江省温州市】

【母题原题】

56.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味，像年糕（New Year cake）、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。

请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题，写一篇约100词的短文，向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭，让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。

注意：文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出，不计入总词数。

The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve

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【写作思路】

这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

【参考范文】

The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve

The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner.

There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means "having more than we need". Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.

It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.

【名师点评】

例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态以一般现在时为主；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。

高分亮点：

短语：get together；all kinds of；For example；thousands of等。

句型：For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation.

At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.

【母题来源2】【2020 •北京市】

【母题原题】

39.从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假如你是李华，你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意，请用英语给他写一封邮件，告知此事，并提出弥补的办法。

提示词语：lose, make up（弥补）, buy, send

提示问题：

What happened to the book?

What will you do to make up for it?

【写作思路】

该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。开头介绍我写信的目的；接下来介绍我打算如何弥补我的过失；最后希望你能原谅我。

【参考范文】

Dear Peter,

How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry, because I lost the book which I borrowed from you a week ago. I want to make up for my error. I will buy the same one from the bookstore and send it to you. What do you think of my method? I hope that you can forgive me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

                                                                                              Yours,

Li Hua

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时，用一般将来时介绍我提出的弥补办法，介绍全面，条理清晰，用连词连接并列成分，文章前后连贯。

2.高分亮点：

短语：borrow from；want to do sth；send…to…；look forward to。

句型：定语从句which I borrowed from you a week ago；宾语从句that you can forgive me。

【母题来源3】【2020 •浙江省宁波市】

【母题原题】

71.假如你是李华, 学业考试后要参加"21世纪杯"中学生英语演讲大赛, 题目为A/An _____________Winter Holiday, 请你根据所给信息完成一篇英文演讲稿, 讲述刚过去的那段寒假经历, 并谈谈它对你今后的影响。

注意:

(1) 将演讲稿标题补充完整;

(2) 演讲稿必须包含所有要点, 并适当拓展;

(3) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;

(4) 词数100左右;首尾句已给出, 不计入总词数。

A/An _____________Winter Holiday

Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your time.

【写作思路】

本文是一篇演讲稿。文中描述了在一个难忘的寒假里做的事情，学到的东西以及对自己未来的影响。

【参考范文】

An Unforgettable Winter Holiday

Ladies and gentlemen, it is my pleasure to present my speech here. My topic today is an unforgettable winter holiday.

Personally, this winter holiday was quite different. Because of the COVID-19, I had to study at home and take online classes. As a result, I found I was able to learn by myself. I also helped parents with housework like coking. And I learnt how to cook well. Last but not least, I had more time to communicate with my parents. Therefore, I learnt to get on better with them.

What I learnt during this holiday will surely influence my future life. I will be more self-controlled and independent. And I’m sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely.

That's all for my speech. Thank you for your time.

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：本文主要采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般过去时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。句子通顺，逻辑性强。

2.高分亮点：

短语：because of因为；as a result因此；learn by oneself自学；help sb with sth帮助某人做某事；communicate with sb与某人交流。

句子：And I learnt how to cook well句中用的是宾语从句的简略形式；I will be more self-controlled and independent句中用的是形容词比较级；I’m sure I will face difficulties and challenges more bravely句中用that引导宾语从句，引导词that已省略。

【母题来源4】【2020 •浙江省台州市】

【母题原题】

61.假如你是李华, 最近收到外国好友Andrew的电子邮件, 请你根据该邮件内符给Andrew 回复。

注意: (1）请回复邮件中所提及的问题, 可适当发挥;(2）邮件中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息; (3）词数:80～100.

【写作思路】

该题目是书信类书面表达，根据安德鲁的邮件内容进行回复，格式按照邮件格式。

【参考范文】

Hi, Andrew,

Welcome to China. So glad you’ll come and see me.

In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. You’d better bring shorts and T-shirts. A light raincoat would be good.

Paper cutting is one of the traditional Chinese arts with a history of around 1,500 years. The art of paper cutting turns a simple thing into a beautiful piece of art. It sounds very easy but can be difficult to do. Paper cuttings are usually put on windows and walls as symbols of good luck.

See you soon.

Li Hua

【名师点评】

1.例文点评：例文采用四段式结构，第一段表示问候，第二段介绍天气情况，第三段介绍中国传统剪纸艺术，第四段表示期待与对方见面；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；时态主要是一般现在时。

2.高分亮点：

短语：turn into；put on；good luck；welcome to…；most of the day；with a history of…。

句型：In July, it’s quite hot for most of the day, but there is some rain, too. there be句型；You’d better bring shorts and T-shirts. had better do sth.表示提建议。

【试题分析】

在解答写作这类试题时，要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题．

【命题意图】

    考查考生的叙事描写能力和基础英语。

【考试方向】

叙事描写类书面表达。

【母题1】【来源】【2020 • 北京市101中学三模】

假如你是李华，在你的帮助和陪伴下交换生 Peter 即将完成为期一年的交换学习生活。请你给他写一封祝贺信，表达你真诚的祝贺，回忆你们共度的一年美好时光以及他的学习经历，并谈谈你从他身上学到了什么。

提示词语： Great Wall, museum, culture, pronounce, practice

提示问题：

●Why do you congratulate Peter?

●How did you spend the time together and his study experience?

●What have you learnt from him?

Dear Peter,

I’m very happy that you will finish your one-year exchange study life. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________   

Best wishes to you!

Yours, Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear Peter,

I’m very happy that you will finish your one-year exchange study life.

First of all I congratulate you because you have made big progress in studying Chinese as well in understanding our Chinese history and culture. When you first came here, you were so shy and afraid to make mistakes in talking with others. Luckily, we were in the same group. I helped you with your Chinese and you helped me with my English. In order to improve your Chinese, we climbed the Great Wall and visited many museums together. What a great time we had! With the help of the teachers and yourself, you are much braver and outgoing now. Meanwhile, you won the first prize in the Chinese speaking competition. I still remember how happy you were at that moment! At the same time, I learn how to keep fighting to achieve the dreams from you.

Best wishes to you!

               Yours, Li Hua

【解析】1.题干解读：该题属于材料写作文。写作时要注意提示问题的信息要写齐全。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，第一大段表达对Peter的祝贺；第二大段说明祝贺Peter的理由，讲述一起度过的时光和他的学习经历，以及从他身上我获得的东西；第三大段表示祝愿，结构清晰，段落分明。主要用第一人称进行写作；时态采用一般过去时为主。

3.高分亮点：

短语：First of all，make progress，In order to，make mistakes，With the help of，in public，At the same time。

句型：how引导的感叹句，how引导宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句。

【母题2】【来源】【2020 • 安徽省合肥市瑶海区二模】

作为一种新型学习方式，网络学习日趋流行，某英文社现在向中学生征文，请你根据以下要点完成短文。

要点：

1.优点：足不出户，内容丰富。

2.缺点：无法面对面交流，不够真实；

3.你的观点

注意：

1.词数80-100

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。

4.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

There is no doubt that online learning is becoming more and more popular._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

There is no doubt that online learning is becoming more and more popular. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages of online learning.

For the advantages, the most prominent reason is that you can learn well without even going out of the door. It’s quite convenient. In addition, the Internet is rich in content. You can learn whatever you want on the Internet by learning online. As for the disadvantages, you can’t communicate with your teachers or classmates face to face. It is a virtual world. It is not real enough. 

In my opinion, online learning provides convenience of learning for people. We should encourage the public to enjoy the advantages of online learning.

【解析】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。在写作之前，应仔细阅读所给的要点提示，从而确定文章框架：1. 网络学习的优点；2. 网络学习的缺点；3. 个人观点。 

2.例文点评：例文采用了经典的“三段式”结构 ，语言简明扼要，要点齐全，表述准确。文中还使用了for the advantages，in addition， as for the disadvantages等词，为文章增色不少。

3.高分亮点：

短语：

both... and...，without+动词-ing，go out of the door，be rich in，provide sth. for sb.，in my opinion，encourage sb. to do sth.。

句型：

For the advantages, the most prominent reason is that-从句。

You can learn whatever you want on the Internet by learning online.

【母题3】【来源】【2020 • 江西省宜春市高安市二模】

假定你是李华.收到英国笔友Hary的邮件，询问你对中学生做家务的看法。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数80左右。

To: Lihua 2020@163. com                        From: Harry@ hotmail. com

1.回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给用，不计入总词数；

2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；

3.请勿在文中使用真实的校名及地名。

Dear Harry，

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，

Li Hua

【答案】例文
Dear Harry,
I think children should learn to do chores and help their parents with housework.These days many children depend on their parents too much and do not know how to look after themselves.
However, when they leave their parents and get into a university, they have to live on their own. Doing housework can make them know how to take care of themselves and their families. As for me, I often help my parents wash dishes, clean rooms and make beds. It is not only a kind of exercise but also a way to relax myself.
Yours,
Li Hua

【解析】

【详解】1、题干解读：这是一篇回信，因此需要搞清楚回信内容，主题是孩子们是否应该在家帮助父母做家务，内容包括你的意见——孩子们应该在家帮助父母做家务吗？为什么？你经常在家帮助父母做家务吗？因此这些内容是回信的要点。时态应用一般现在时；人称应以第一人称（我）和第三人称（孩子们）为主。

2、例文点评：例文分为两段。第一段点题并解释了原因；第二段描述了做家务的好处以及“我”经常做家务且得到的益处。语言流畅，逻辑严谨，无语法错误。

3、高分亮点：

词汇： learn to do sth.; help...with...; depend on; too much; look after; get into; have to; on one's own; take care of; not only...but also...; a way to do sth.; relax oneself

句型：省略that的宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句

【母题4】【来源】【2020 • 江苏省南通市海门市中考二模】

Nick的班级上周在英语课上举行了关于是否缩短寒暑假并增加春秋假的讨论，假如你是Nick，请你根据下表中的讨论记录，结合你对此事的看法，用英语写一篇短文。

注意:1.词数90左右，文章的开头已经写好，不计入总词数；

2.文章必须包含所给要点，具体内容可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；

3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

We held a discussion about whether to shorten（ 缩短） the summer and winter holidays and add the spring and autumn holidays last week. Opinions are different. 

Some students think____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

We held a discussion about whether to shorten（缩短）the summer and winter holidays and add the spring and autumn holidays last week. Opinions are different.

Some students think that the terms are long and boring at present and students can't get enough rest. Spring and autumn have beautiful views. If the spring and autumn holidays are added, students will have more chances to feel the beauty of the nature.

Some students think if we add the spring and autumn holidays, a year will be divided into four terms and it will have a bad effect on teaching and learning. If so, students may have more homework to do and get more pressure to face.

I don't think we need to add the spring and autumn holidays, but we need more holidays without too much homework. It will be better for students to have more time for their hobbies.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，谈谈关于假期的问题。要求中只给出了要点，需要自己发挥的地方较多，注意将提示的要点表达清楚，并发表自己的观点。结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述，人称问题较为复杂，注意主谓一致问题。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，如宾语从句，条件状语从句等。注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。­

2.例文点评：本文结构紧凑，首段开门见山，引入需要辩论的主题；第二段阐述正方观点；第三段阐述反方观点；最后一段阐述个人观点。全文逻辑清晰，层次清楚，符合辩论类文章的表达形式。文章使用了正确的人称和时态，符合表达的需要。

3.高分亮点：

短语：at present；divide into；have a bad effect on。

句型：that引导的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。

【母题5】【来源】【2020 • 江苏省南京市建邺区二模】

初三中考最后复习阶段，同学们要学会调节并且劳逸结合，可以积极参加一些有意义的活动来丰富自己的生活。假定你是李磊，你的朋友 Frank 想邀请你与他共度周末，请认真阅读他写给你的邮件，根据邮件内容及你的想法用英语问复。

注意： 1.词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

2.回复必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

Dear Frank,

Thanks for your invitation for this weekend.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I am looking forward to this weekend!

All the best,

 Li Lei

【答案】Dear Frank,

Thanks for your invitation for this weekend. I am very glad to have the opportunity to participate in environmental protection activities. I have been hoping to take part in an activity to make contributions to protecting the environment.

I prefer to plant trees in the park, because trees provide not only fresh air but also protect against wind and sand. I have some old clothes, so I don’t have to use yours.I want to go to visit the old people in the nursing home, talking with them during my stay.

I am looking forward to this weekend!

All the best,

Li Lei

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时先表示我很高兴参加保护环境的活动；第二段介绍更喜欢在公园种树；最后我期盼这个周末。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，介绍我喜欢在公园种树的原因，叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

3.高分亮点：

短语：participate in；take part in；make contributions to ; prefer to；protect against; look forward to。

句型：because引导的原因状语从句；so连接的并列复合句。