2023届统考版高考英语二轮专项分层特训35分写作规范练(三)含答案

这是一份2023届统考版高考英语二轮专项分层特训35分写作规范练(三)含答案，共4页。
35分写作规范练(三)  写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。[2022·安徽省蚌埠市第一次教学质量检查]Going to works by train on a daily basis is never pleasant in the city. But today was different. In the morning I got up a little early than usual to catch the first train. I almost have an opportunity to sit down when the elderly lady got on the train. But I directed her to the seat I had my eye on and she thanked for me. A few stops later as I was about leave the train, she gently stopped me. And a moved act took place—she gave me a smile card! Which seems rather small or unimportant in life really matter! 
第二节　书面表达(满分25分)[2022·安徽省阜阳市高三质量统测]假定你是李华，你的美国网友Mike的父母希望他加入学校篮球队，但他不喜欢团队运动。他来信寻求你的建议。请用英语给他写一封回信，内容包括：1．你对团队运动的看法；2．你的建议。注意：1．词数100左右；2．开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Mike，I'm glad to hear from you and I'd like to give you my opinion about team sports.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua
35分写作规范练（三）写作第一节Going to by train on a daily basis is never pleasant in the city. But today was different. In the morning I got up a little than usual to catch the first train. I almost an opportunity to sit down when thean elderly lady got on the train. I directed her to the seat I had my eye on and she thanked  me. A few stops later as I was about leave the train, she gently stopped me. And a act took place—she gave me a smile card! seems rather small or unimportant in life really !第二节参考范文：Dear Mike，I'm glad to hear from you and I'd like to give you my opinion about team sports.Team sports are sports that offer many great benefits. Firstly, they can improve your leadership abilities. It is essential for every player in any team sport to be aware of their roles in the leadership. Secondly, they can promote responsibility because every player should be responsible for the whole team. Thirdly, they can hugely enhance a child's social life since he or she is going to make many new friends. Team sports also boost self­esteem and therefore increase happiness. There is a Chinese saying, “The person who does not listen to an elder's advice gets his or her leg broken.” So I think you should do as your parents wish.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua