2023届统考版高考英语二轮专项分层特训35分写作规范练(五)含答案

这是一份2023届统考版高考英语二轮专项分层特训35分写作规范练(五)含答案，共5页。
35分写作规范练(五)  写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。[2022·哈尔滨市高三大联考]A recent survey has shown that are the hobbies of the 1，500 students in our school.The result showed that over 40% of them are fond of playing musical instruments because they can improve their life quality. About 35% enjoy surf the Internet, which helps them know about world affair. To our surprise, a number of the students paying much attention to reading is small. It only takes up for 12%, if reading is the best way to gain knowledge.Therefore, more students are strongly advised take up reading. Plus, they should take an active part in sports and develop other hobbies proper besides entertainment.
第二节　书面表达(满分25分)[2022·皖江名校高三摸底考试]假定你是李华。志愿者们最近对你校学生的周末时间分配进行了调查。请你结合下表内容，给校报英语专栏编辑Mr. Johnson写封信，反映这次调查的结果。内容要求：1．描述图表内容；2．分析所反映的问题；3．提出你的看法。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Johnson，Recently volunteers have conducted a survey about how the students spend their weekends. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours，Li Hua
35分写作规范练（五）写作第一节A recent survey has shown are the hobbies of the 1，500 students in our school.The result that over 40% of them are fond of playing musical instruments because can improve their life quality. About 35% enjoy the Internet, which helps them know about world . To our surprise, athe number of the students paying much attention to reading is small. It only takes up  12%, reading is the best way to gain knowledge.Therefore, more students are strongly advised take up reading. Plus, they should take an active part in sports and develop other hobbies besides entertainment.第二节参考范文：Dear Mr. Johnson，Recently volunteers have conducted a survey about how the students spend their weekends.As can be seen from the pie, among the surveyed students, about 51% of their time is spent on homework while online activities account for nearly 35%. Meanwhile, doing physical exercise takes up about 7% of their time, sharing the same percentage with reading books.The survey certainly leaves me deep in thought. Too much homework leaves the students no time for physical exercise or reading, affecting their health and further development. Even worse, many of the surveyed waste much time online, some even addicted to computer games.So more attention should be given to this case. Students should have more freedom to something more meaningful, rather than just doing boring repetitive exercises. Otherwise, it may have a negative effect on our future.Yours，Li Hua