2023届统考版高考英语二轮专项分层特训35分写作规范练(六)含答案

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35分写作规范练(六)  写作(共两节，满分35分)第一节　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(\划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。[2022·皖江名校高三摸底考试]Yesterday we were in a supermarket. It was Saturday, or most people were in casual clothes. A lady, who was in her late thirty, I thought, was wearing beautiful suit. My 10­year­old daughter Amy whispers: “Mum, I love that lady's suit！” “Why not telling her about it？” I responded. Then I accompanied her to the lady.“Excuse me. Madam. You look amazed today with this suit.” said Amy. The lady stopped for a minute and jumped with excite: “Oh thank you, you've made my day.”Saying something nice can change the direction of someone's day, what costs us nothing but means a lot of to them. Children don't just automatic become kind adults—we need to teach and show them how. 
第二节　书面表达(满分25分)[2022·内蒙古包头市高三上学期开学调研]即将毕业的你应校刊英语园地栏目的邀请为高一学生写一封倡议书，主题是“如何更好地度过高中的学习生活”，请你用英语书写该稿件，内容包括：1．身体方面；2．心理方面；3．学习方面。注意：1.词数100左右；2．题目已写好，不计入总词数。Live a better life here　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 
35分写作规范练（六）写作第一节Yesterday we were in a supermarket. It was Saturday, most people were in casual clothes. A lady, who was in her late , I thought, was wearing beautiful suit. My 10­year­old daughter Amy : “Mum, I love that lady's suit！” “Why not her about it？” I responded. Then I accompanied her to the lady.“Excuse me. Madam. You look today with this suit.” said Amy. The lady stopped for a minute and jumped with : “Oh thank you, you've made my day.”Saying something nice can change the direction of someone's day, costs us nothing but means a lot  to them. Children don't just become kind adults—we need to teach and show them how.第二节参考范文：Live a better life hereAs is known to us all, senior school life is significant, meaningful and unforgettable. How can we live a better senior high school life? The following are several aspects which may help you out and serve you well.Initially, keep it in mind that physical health is the foundation to study. Working out regularly is an efficient approach to building up a strong body. Additionally, mental health contributes to our study and growth. Whenever faced with obstacles in school life, do keep a positive and optimistic attitude. Never hesitate to turn to your teachers or parents for help. More importantly, you may as well set a long­term goal. Learning to study effectively and getting involved in class actively will benefit you a lot.