中考写作技巧课件PPT

这是一份中考写作技巧课件PPT，共15页。PPT课件主要包含了评分档次，评分原则，过渡句，关联词，结果状语从句，变换句式，并列句，复合句，tooto结构等内容，欢迎下载使用。

中考英语书面表达评分标准
1 短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大错扣1分。　 2 通篇人称错误，统扣2分。 　 3 拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。3个小错相当于1个大错。 4 相同错误，只扣一次。字数过多或过少词扣2分。 5 文中若出现自己及老师、学校等真实姓名扣2分。 6 书写潦草，卷面不清，扣1分。
第五档A（13～15分）：能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。第四档B（10～12分）：能写明大部分要点，语言有一些错误（句子结构或动词时态错误1～2处), 但行文基本流畅，表达基本清楚。第三档C（7～9分）：能写明一些要点，语言错误较多（句子结构或动词时态错误3～4处），但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第二档D（4～6分）：能写明少数要点，语言错误多，意思不连贯，影响意思表达。第一档E（1～3分）：只能写出若干单词，无可读的句子。
中考写作技巧1、审：主题、人称、时态2、列：分段，要点齐全3、连：①过渡句（首、中、尾） ②关联词（恰当、避免重复）4、美：多用短语代替单个单词 巧用高级词汇 多用经典句型结构 5、查：a. 大小写、拼写； b. 要点； c.语法（时态、语态、词组搭配、句式结构）； d.标点；e.中式表达；f. 书写、字数
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2.我认为学生们应该正确使用网络。
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善用意义相近的高级词汇，避免单调.
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