中考英语（人教新目标）中考英语写作-My school life 复习课件

这是一份中考英语（人教新目标）中考英语写作-My school life 复习课件，共24页。PPT课件主要包含了Ending结尾，Teachers，Activities等内容，欢迎下载使用。

第五档（13-15分）要点全：行文连贯，语言流畅，基本无误 （词汇拼写错误2个以内或语法错误1个）；第四档（10-12分）要点全：语言可读性强，语言错误少 （词汇拼写错误4个以内或语法错误2个以内）；第三档（7-9分）要点全：语言可读性较强，语言错误较多 （与要点提示内容相关，词汇错误6个以内或语法错误3个以内）第二档（4-6分）要点不全，语言可读性较差（与要点提示内容相关的句子形式，有3-4个基本完整的句子，其余句子表达式问题严重）；第一档（0-3分）要点不全，语言无可读性（与要点提示内容相关的词汇，有个别支离破碎的句子形式，均不完整成句）。
A: What d yu usually d at schl/after class?
B: I always… I usually… I smetimes… I hardly ever… I never…
A: What d yu think f yur schl life?
Let’s talk abut yur schl life.
B: It’s busy/interesting/wnderful/clrful/fantastic bring/terrible/s-s…
My schl life
　　My name is Beth．I study in N.1 Middle Schl. My schl is very big and beautiful. I want t say smething abut my schl life. My schl life is busy but pleasant.　　We have six classes every day. I like all the classes，because my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favrite subject is English, s I jin English club every week．I can speak English with many ther students there．It's very interesting and exciting. I think it's helpful fr me t learn English well. And my English teacher,Ms. Zhang,is very kind and patient.She is like ur sister.She ften helps us with study and encurages us t wrk hard.We all lve her very much. After class, I always play chess and discuss math prblems with my classmates．They are utging and clever. What’s mre? I ften take part in all kinds f activities,because I want t imprve my abilities. 　 In a wrd，I lve my schl．I lve my lessns，my friends and my teachers．I find my schl life is mre and mre meaningful and clrful．
Step by step
1. 审2. 构3. 列4. 连5. 美
文体_____ 时态_____ 人称_____
在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活使用长短句和复合句，升华中心思想，使文增色。
把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加细节
一. Read the Title (审题）
文体 _____ 时态 _____ 人称 _____
二. Structure（结构）
My Schl Life
( 情感：期待，热爱，收获
Beginning 开头
interesting /enjyableclurful & meaningfulbusy but pleasanthave a lt f fun …….
Schl Activities
I believe / l hpe + 从句Hw /What +感叹句
结构初现：抛出观点——展开描述——总结（点题、升华感情）
kind/friendly
have a strng sense f respnsibility/be strict with
help /encurage me t imprve my study
三. Make a list (列) 列出要点
dicuss prblems tgether
help / encurage each ther
smart & hardwrking
sprts meetings
Art Festival
jin the clubs
take part in different cmpetitins
fun &interesting
useful /meaningful: T imprve ur abilities
relax urselves
make mre friends
develp ur interests r habits
spend … n sth/(in) ding sthAlthugh… 尽管s …that 如此 ..以致。。in rder t/s that 为了Hw/What (感叹句）be prud f take (an active) part in (积极）参加 be interested in比较级 quicker ,mre excitingnt nly … but als when …从句
三. 连：连字成句，连句成段
My Schl Life

Activities
第一段 Beginning: interesting /enjyable clurful & meaningfulbusy but pleasant have a lt f fun
Ending结尾：情感升华：期待，热爱，收获 I believe / l hpe + 从句 Hw /What +感叹句
临考如何提高写作能力：
１．适当加强阅读量．读得越多，在潜移默化中，你提高英语写作能力的速度也就越快．２．背诵经典文段．在平时阅读训练及范例作文中把一些经典文段整理到本子中，抽时间背诵，不能不说是积极备战，快速提高写作成绩的一条捷径．背，可以加强语感，使自己的表达更地道．３．加强练习．加强实际写作练习至关重要．我们练习的重点是文章是否切题，行文是否流畅，有无严重语法错误等．