专题六 训练42 读后续写微技能——情绪及心理描写课件PPT

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在读后续写中往往会涉及人物情绪的描写，诸如生气、愤怒等，以及人物心理的描写。识记以下素材，写出经典篇章。表恐惧1.At the sight f the fercius wlf，I felt s scared that my thrat tightened and my knees felt weak.(喉咙发紧，膝盖发软)2.At the sight f the fercius wlf，I frze with terrr，t scared t mve an inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹分毫)
3.At the sight f the fercius wlf，I was seized by a strng sense f hrrr and my palms were sweating.(被深深的恐惧感所控制，手心在冒汗)4.He turned t me，with his eyes full f hrrr.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。5.Fear slwly creeps upn her.恐惧慢慢向她袭来。
6.She was struck with hrrr when...当……时，她感到恐惧。表震惊1.Hearing the bad news，Mary fainted away n the spt and fell int uncnsciusness.(当场晕倒，陷入昏迷)2.Hearing the bad news，Mary frze with shck，as if rted n the grund.(惊得呆住了，好像扎根在地上一样)3.It is desperately sad news and I am abslutely shattered t hear it.这是极为令人悲伤的消息，我听后完全被击垮了。
4.Mther fainted away，with the shck f the bad news.坏消息带来的震惊让妈妈昏过去了。5.The car was gne in secnds，leaving Alice shaking her head in disbelief.(难以置信地摇头)6.I sensed a flash f surprise in his eyes.我感觉到他眼里的一丝惊讶。
表愤怒(生气)1.He flared up at the wrds.听到这些话，他勃然大怒。2.His face cluded with anger.他气得脸色阴沉。3.He culd hardly/scarcely cntain his rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。4.He was breathing fire and fury.他充满着怒火。5.Sheldn felt s angry that he strmed ut f the rm，slamming the dr furiusly behind him.(冲出房间，狠狠摔门)
6.Biling with rage，Sheldn shk his fist at me.(怒火中烧，挥舞拳头)7.Anger engulfed him like a wild beast.愤怒像一只野兽吞噬了他。8.She culd feel the anger grwing，bubbling up inside her.(在身体里沸腾)9.I had an undercurrent f resentment twards the new prpsal.我对新提案有一股潜在的不满情绪。10.She threw the invitatin n the table with annyance，murmuring...她恼怒地把邀请函扔在桌子上，低声抱怨道……
表绝望1.Lisel returned at night with a hllw，pale face.(空洞、苍白的脸)2.He gave up the attempt in despair.他绝望地放弃了尝试。3.As the result f an accident，Tny was suddenly thrwn int a wrld f darkness and sank int hpelessness.(突然陷入黑暗绝望的境地)
表悲伤1.Upn hearing the bad news，her heart ached，tears streaming dwn her cheeks.(心痛，眼泪顺着脸颊流下)2.Upn hearing the bad news，she，numb with grief，had truble speaking.(悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话)3.Upn hearing the bad news，she felt seized by a burst f sadness and culdn’t help crying bitterly.(被一阵悲伤控制，忍不住痛哭起来)4.Jack is vercme with grief.杰克悲痛欲绝。5.Grief cmes in waves.悲伤如潮水般涌来。6.A ripple f sadness welled up inside him.(涌起阵阵悲伤)
表羞愧/愧疚1.She felt s ashamed that she culd feel her face burning.(脸上滚烫)2.S ashamed was she that she culd feel the bld rush t her face.(血液涌上脸颊)3.He went hme in shame，chking with anger.(气得说不出话来)4.He was cnsumed with guilt after the accident.(心中充满愧疚)
表失望1.Overcme with bitter disappintment at his failing t win a prize，he lcked himself up in his rm.(感到极度失望)2.His heart sank when he heard the news that he failed t win the prize.(心一沉)3.The news that he didn’t win the prize immediately threw him int lw spirits.(精神不振，情绪低落)4.She rebunded frm disappintment.她从失望中振作起来。5.He was dismayed t learn f their dislyalty.得知他们的不忠，他感到很失望。
表激动1.When the hst annunced that she wn the prize，her eyes twinkled with excitement.(激动得两眼放光)2.When the hst annunced that she wn the prize，her heart was thumping with excitement.(激动得心怦怦跳)3.When the hst annunced that she wn the prize，a wild excitement tk hld f her.(兴奋得不能自已)4.She tingled with excitement.她感到非常兴奋。5.When yu walk in，a hush falls ver yur sul and yur bdy starts t tingle with excitement.当你走进去的时候，你的灵魂会安静下来而你的身体则开始激动不已。
表感动1.Tuched deeply/immensely，we...被深深感动，我们……2.Tears filling her eyes，she ffered her heartfelt gratitude.她热泪盈眶，表达了衷心的感谢。3.With tears streaming dwn her face，she...泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，她……
表高兴1.When his mther kissed him n the cheek，it seemed as if the baby were n tp f the wrld.(非常开心)2.When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek，he beamed and his bright smile lit up the rm.(眉开眼笑，笑容照亮房间)3.When the mther kissed the baby n the cheek，his eyes danced with jy and sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)4.He trd n air fr getting high marks.他因得了高分而洋洋得意。
5.Everyne rejiced at the news f his safe return.听到他安全返回的消息，大家都欣喜万分。6.His eyes twinkle with pleasure every time he remembers last winter.每当他想起去年冬天，就喜上眉梢。7.Smiles are dancing in his eyes./His eyes dance with jy and happiness.他眉开眼笑。8.I laughed ut lud/laughed heartily when I saw that funny vide.当看那段有趣的录像的时候我开怀大笑。9.The crwd became restless(骚动)，excitement filling the rm.(激动不已)10.Her smile hit the deepest f my heart.她的微笑触动了我内心深处。
(2022·广东佛山二模)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Mai Lin wasn’t ding well enugh at schl，r at least she wasn’t satisfied with herself.She wished she culd d better.
“Let’s review the material we learned in the last unit，”the histry teacher said.“Wh can tell us what caused the War f 1812？”Mai Lin sat at her desk，staring ahead.She hped the teacher wuldn’t call her name.They hadn’t studied the War f 1812 at her ld schl and she didn’t knw the answer.“Alisn？”the teacher asked instead.Oh，perfect，Mai Lin thught.Of curse Alisn wuld have the answer.She seemed t have all the answers.Alisn was the mst ppular girl in schl—always surrunded by millins f byfriends，best friends，and thers.She was like a brilliant sun.
Mai Lin hadn’t made ne r tw friends f her wn s far.Her ld schl was small and lw-key，but a shy persn like Mai Lin had a chance there.This new schl，hwever，seemed as big as an airprt t Mai Lin，and it seemed very hard t get arund in it.She still gt lst smetimes in the schl.Mai Lin frwned(皱眉) as Alisn answered the teacher’s questin.Alisn prbably never gt lst，Mai Lin thught t herself.Yu culd prbably put Alisn dwn in the middle f a desert，and within five minutes she’d be able t tell yu the best way t get hme.
Histry class finally ended，and Mai Lin headed fr the gym.The class had been playing basketball.Alisn，wh was as tall and thin and attractive as a tree，was very gd at it.Beside her，Mai Lin felt like a very small and flish ant.Tday，hwever，the gym teacher pinted t a thick rpe hanging frm the ceiling and said，“Everybdy！Yu’re ging t climb this rpe tday.”
注意：续写词数应为 150 左右。Hearing the teacher’s wrds，Mai Lin smiled._______________________________________________________________________Mai Lin stepped frward and gt clse t the rpe._____________________________________________________________________
Hearing the teacher’s wrds，Mai Lin smiled.She knew what was cming.They’d dne lts f physical fitness training at her ld schl and she was quite gd at rpe climbing.“Wh’s first？”the teacher asked.“Alisn？”T Mai Lin’s surprise，Alisn turned as pale as the mn and shk her head.“She’s scared，”Mai Lin thught.“Perfect Alisn was scared.”Suddenly Mai Lin heard her wn vice saying，“I’ll d it.”Alisn lked up at Mai Lin in great surprise，and all the ther classmates seemed surprised，t.The teacher ndded and tld Mai Lin t climb.
Mai Lin stepped frward and gt clse t the rpe.She appeared calm but was extremely excited.She climbed the rpe very fast and reached the ceiling within what seemed a few secnds，effrtlessly.As she reached the tp，she glanced dwn at her fellw students belw.Nw it was Alisn wh appeared like a small ant.She saw Alisn lking up，eyes wide with admiratin.Mai Lin clung t the tp f the rpe fr a mment lnger and then headed dwn t jin the class.Once she gt n the grund，everybdy cheered.Mai Lin knew she wuld be different frm that day n.
1.文章故事情节紧凑合理，叙述流畅，表达准确。语言表达形式丰富，情绪、心理的描写尤为突出。如：T Mai Lin’s surprise，scared，calm，extremely excited和with admiratin，cheered等生动细腻地描写了文中人物的内心活动，使故事内容更加充实动人。2.运用了比喻的修辞手法。(1)T Mai Lin’s surprise，Alisn turned as pale as the mn and shk her head.(2)Nw it was Alisn wh appeared like a small ant.
一、(2022·河北保定一模)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was early mrning，yet already it had been a very bad day.One thing after anther，the dwnward spiral(螺旋) cntinued when a large bttle f range juice slid frm my hands and fell t the flr.
Glass and sticky juice splashed t the farthest crners f the kitchen.Shcked，I lked at the mess.Then I drpped heartbrkenly dwn t the flr，my eyes filling with tears.The tears seemed t shw that“tday is just nt my day”.Bad day r nt，things had t be dne.Filled with anxiety and negative mental baggage，I gt in my car t drive int twn.In the few minutes it tk t travel t the bank，I made a decisin.I wuld be careful nt t pass my bad day ff t anyne else.I wuld be friendly and plite.And I wuld NOT be angry when that careless driver pulled quickly and rudely in frnt f me，causing me t brake suddenly.
Standing in line at the bank，I was silently talking t myself.Actually，I was sclding myself.All f the events that had accumulated and cntributed t my bad day were，in reality，s very minr and trivial.I was ver-reacting.I was filled with self-pity.I tried t imagine the innumerable，individual lives that had been affected by terrrist attacks，by war，by hurricanes，earthquakes，and ther natural disasters.
Fr the secnd time that day，my eyes filled with tears as I realized hw discnnected I felt frm all thse individuals wh are trying t cpe with truly miserable experiences in their lives.They all seemed s distant and unknwable，and this justified and strengthened my belief that I was being self-centered and selfish.I was sure that all my effrts t be a caring and lving persn were in vain.
A vice brke thrugh my mental distractins.Smehw I had mechanically finished my bank transactin(交易) and the teller was trying t get my attentin.“Yung lady，”she was saying，gently，“Yung lady！”注意：续写词数应为150左右。I lked up and int the eyes f the bank teller，a silver-haired grandmther with a gentle beauty._______________________________________________________________________________________In the mment f her tuching my hands，my self-dubt disappeared.________________________________________________
[参考范文]I lked up and int the eyes f the bank teller，a silver-haired grandmther with a gentle beauty.Her keen eyes reflected cncern as she leaned frward and sftly said，“I dn’t knw what is happening inside f yu，but please，believe me when I tell yu that—everything will be kay.”And then she did smething quite marvelus.My hands were resting n the cunter.She tk her hands and placed them gently n tp f mine.The tuch was quick but electric.And at that mment my wrld shifted.
In the mment f her tuching my hands，my self-dubt disappeared.I fund understanding and acceptance.I knew that lve was being channeled thrugh the heart f this beautiful wman directly int my heart.I was filled with a deep awareness inside me—that I am lved.I was speechless.I smiled and gave her a little nd.It was my first smile f the day.But it wuld nt be my last，as frm that mment n my entire day was transfrmed.
二、阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。One day a man named Steve Gwan was fishing in the Thames Estuary in Britain.By the end f the day，besides fishes and sea weeds，he fished a message bttle.He pened it carefully and inside the bttle was a brief lving letter frm a British sldier named Hughes t his wife：Dear Wife，I am writing this nte n this bat and drpping it int the sea just t see if it will reach yu.If it des，sign this envelpe n the right hand bttm crner where it says receipt.Put the date and hur f receipt and yur name where it says signature and lk after it well.
Ta-ta sweet，fr the present.Yur HubbyAls attached was a cvering nte intended fr the finder f the bttle：Sir r madam，wuld yu kindly frward the enclsed letter and earn the blessing f a pr British sldier n his way t the frnt this ninth day f September,1914.Signed Private ，as Hughes crssed the English Channel frm Suthamptn t St.Nazaire n 9 September,1914，at 7:52 p.m.，he drpped a message in a green beer bttle ver the side f the ship and he died tw days later in the war.
85 years later，the bttle was finally caught by Steve Gwan，the fisherman.Steve Gwan examined the letter carefully.It had the sldier’s name and army number，s he suppsed that the message shuld be real.But hw culd he deliver it t the intended recipient？In 1999，the Internet was still in its early years.N way wuld he be able t find Hughes’s pssible surviving family that way！S，what t d?
Well，he put an advertisement in a lcal paper！The stry captured s many hearts and minds that it gained natinal cverage.Smewhere alng the way，thrugh magic and luck，he learned that Hughes’s daughter，Emily，was still alive in New Zealand!
注意：续写词数应为150左右。Right away，Gwan and jurnalists managed t get in tuch with Emily.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________The lcal paper decided t ffer Mr Gwan an air ticket t deliver the letter in persn._____________________________________________________________________________________________
[参考范文]Right away，Gwan and jurnalists managed t get in tuch with Emily.It felt like a miracle t this senir lady and she culdn’t even believe it was true.Emily said in an exciting vice: “I nly pssess a few phts f my father and spent mst f my life trying t find mre abut him.I am s verwhelmed t hear this discvery！”The letter meant s much t her and it seemed that it was a gift frm her father.What was mre surprising was anther gift frm the lcal paper.