2023届高考英语二轮复习Howtowritealetterofadvice(建议信)课件
展开(2018年安徽高考) 为了帮助中学生健康成长,某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为Wrried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:近日容易发脾气,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。注意:1.词数120左右;2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:temper n. 脾气,情绪
Discussin (Find ut the structure)
Hi, Wrried, I’m srry t knw that yu’re having such a bad time at the mment. Yu knw, life is nt always sunshine and flwers, s it is f vital imprtance t cntrl yur temper and have a crrect attitude t face up t yur situatin. First f all, talk t smene yu trust abut hw yu feel,which is a gd way f letting yur anger ut withut hurting thers r yurself. Secndly, it is imprtant t d regular exercise such as playing ftball r badmintn, as physical exercise is an effective way t relax yurself. Last but nt least, yu shuld nt hesitate t ask a psychlgical cnsultant fr help.Only in this way can yu reduce yur stress, and yu will becme a strng and cnfident persn in the end. I hpe what I say here can help yu a lt. Yurs, Jamie
Part 1: Talk abut the prblem
Part 2: Give prper advice and reasns
Part 3: Express yur hpe
Part 1: Talk abut the prblem
I’m srry t knw that yu’re having such abad time at the mment. Yu knw, life is nt always sunshine and flwers, s it is f vital imprtance t cntrl yur temper and have a crrect attitude tfacing yur situatin.
Skills: 1. Offer _______ and shw ____________. 2. State (陈述) the ________ f writing the letter.
understanding
Have a try
你的同学Jack因为沉迷于手机,导致考试不及格,你给他写信劝说他如何戒掉玩手机。 I am srry t knw that _____________________ _____ because___________________________________. S I am writing t give yu sme advice n hw t _________________________.
yu didn’t pass yur
yu have been addicted t mbile phnes
quit playing mbile phnes
Useful sentence patterns
*I am srry t knw yu have truble in... S I am writing t give sme advice n hw t...*I am glad t receive yur letter saying that... My suggestins are as fllws.*I quite understand the great truble yu are suffering are sme suggestins fr yu.
Exercise 1
你收到你朋友Alice的来信,说她准备在即将 到来的夏天节食减肥,想听听你的意见。 I’m glad t receive yur letter saying that yuare ging t be n a diet in the cming summer, hping t lk mre attractive. I think it is understandableand I’d like t share my ideas with yu.
Part 2: Give prper advice and reasns
First f all, talk t smene yu trust abut hw yu feel,which is a gd way f letting yur anger ut withut hurting thers r yurself. Secndly, it is imprtant t d regular exercise such as playing ftball r badmintn, as physical exercise is an effective way t relax yurself. Last but nt least, yu shuld nt hesitate t ask a psychlgical cnsultant fr help.Only in this way can yu reduce yur stress, and yu will becme a strng and cnfident persn in the end.
Skills: 1. Give advice ___________the prblem. 2. Use ____________________________ like mdal verbs and imperatives (祈使句).3. Use ________________________ t give reasns.
sentence patterns f suggestins
it is imprtant t
yu shuld nt
advanced sentence patterns
Can yu think f ther sentence patterns f suggestins?
*Yu had better d...*Yu might as well d(不妨做)...*It wuld be a gd idea t...*It wuld be mre beneficial if yu culd...*If I were yu, I wuld...*I wuld like t suggest that…*I wuld like t put frward the suggestin that…*It’s strngly suggested that...*My suggestin is that...*I think it necessary / essential / imprtant that...
Exercise 2
1.你的英语老师Mr.Su最近感冒了,请你向他 提出如何保持健康的建议,并阐述理由。 建议:健康饮食 充足睡眠 积极锻炼身体 First, yu had better_______________________ _____, which will ffer yu much energy and keep yu energetic. In additin, make sure that ________ ___________________s that bth yur bdy and brain can have a gd rest. Last but nt least, it is strngly suggested that yu shuld_______________ ________. Nt nly is it a gd way t reduce pressure, but als it can help yu keep strnger. 2.你的同学Mike 沉迷于电脑游戏,导致厌学, 就如何戒掉电脑游戏向他提出一些建议,并阐述理由。建议:意志参与有益活动远离沉迷游戏的人
keep a healthy and balanced
enugh sleeping time
d physical exercise
2. 你的同学Mike 沉迷于电脑游戏,导致厌学, 就如何戒掉电脑游戏向他提出一些建议,并阐述理由。建议:意志参与有益活动远离沉迷游戏的人 First f all, t quit playing cmputer games , yu must be determined and have a strng will , withut which yu might give up halfway(半途而废). Meanwhile, I think it essential that yu shuld take part in sme healthy activities such as hanging ut at a bkstre and jining a sprt team. Only if yu have much t d will yu frget t play cmputer games. In additin, it wuld be mre beneficial if yu culd stay away frm thse wh are addicted t cmputer games because they may have a bad influence n yu.
Part 3: Express yur hpe
I hpe what I say here can help yu a lt. I sincerely hpe these suggestins will be helpful/ useful/ beneficial.I'm willing t discuss this matter with yu whenever yu need help.It is my sincere hpe that yu will take my advice int cnsideratin.
Skills: Express yur hpe s _______ and p_______ .
Hw t write a gd letter f advice? 1. Offer _______ and shw ___________ . 2. State the ________ f writing the letter. 3. Give advice_______ the prblem. 4. Use ______________________like mdal verbs and imperatives (祈使句). 5. Use ___________________ t give reasns. 6. Express yur hpe _______ and ______ .
Practice
假如你是李华,你收到你的同学李平留言说期中考试英语考得很不理想,向你请教如何学好英语。请你写一篇回给李平的建议信,帮他解决问题,促进学习。注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
Pssible versin
Dear Li Ping, I'm srry t knw that yu didn't d well in yur English mid-term exam. Hwever, the situatin is easy t change if yu can take my fllwing advice. First and fremst, yu shuld listen t the teachercarefully and take ntes in class s that yu can g ver yurlessn after class as sn as yu can. Besides, it is essential that yu shuld persist in (坚持)reciting new wrds every day, asvcabulary is f great imprtance in English learning. Last butnt least, if I were yu, I wuld listen t English sngs andwatch English mvies ften, which are als effective ways t practice yur English listening and speaking skills. Only if yu keep practicing English in this way will yu make greatprgress. I'm willing t discuss this matter with yu whenever yu need help. Yurs, Li Hua
Hmewrk
1. G ver what we have learnt tday. 2. Swap yur cmpsitin with yur deskmate, assess the cmpsitin based n the assessment chart and hand it in.
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