2023 英语新中考二轮复习热点透析 热点01 书面表达之新冠病毒

热点01  书面表达之新冠病毒

一、考向分析

中考书面表达题贴近学生实际生活，紧密联系热点话题，写作话题真实从而让考生有话可写。书面表达情景实用性程度高，各地试题都符合同学们的认知水平和日常生活经历，题目设计关注学生成长，注意培养其良好的道德品质和健全的人格：另外，所涉及话题关注社会，富有时代特色，能唤起同学们强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。 这种贴近生活、立足基础、发扬个性的命题理念仍将是今后几省各地中考书面表达的基本思路。

二、考点详解

1. 认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

2. 构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

3. 初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

4. 修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

三、真题再现

一、材料作文

1．（2021·陕西宝鸡·三模）假定你是李华，当前新冠防疫进入常态化，你受学生会委托，请围绕“从我做起，共同抗疫”这个主题，为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一封倡议书。

参考词汇：新型冠状病毒COVID-19

要求：

1.参考提示表格，可适当发挥；

2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书泻工整；

3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名校名和地名等）；

4.词数：不少于70词。

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【答案】例文：

The fight against the COVID-19 will last for a long time. In order to keep safe and healthy, I will give you some advice.

Staying at home is the best way. You can keep in touch with your family and friends by video chat instead of getting together or having parties. When you go out, remember to wear masks. Try to use your mobile phones to pay while shopping. After you get home, wash your hands immediately.

You’d better not go to the crowded places or go abroad. If you have to, remember to keep social distance.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。内容分为2部分，第一部分是应该做的事情，第二部分是不应该做的事情。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰；同时，注意合理拓展，逻辑顺畅。

2．（2021·江苏·苏州市平江中学校二模）英雄于平凡，在新冠病毒(Novel Corona-virus)疫情发生期间涌现出了很多平凡而伟大的英雄，张敏的姑姑就是其中之一。她是一位支持武汉医疗队的护士。假如你是张敏，请根据以下信息及提示，以“My aunt is my hero”为题完成一篇学校“战疫情”主题征文。

要求：1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

3)词数：100 词左右(征文的开头己给出，不计入总词数);

4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

My aunt is my hero

After the outbreak of Novel Corona-virus, many people have done a lot to fight with it. In my heart they are all heroes and my aunt is one of them._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文：

After the outbreak of Novel Corona-virus, many people have done a lot to fight with it. In my heart, they are all heroes and my aunt is one of them.

My aunt is a nurse. She is in her forties and has worked in People’s Hospital for fifteen years. My aunt is kind and warm-hearted and she often helps the sick in our community.

After hearing of the outbreak of Novel Corona-virus, my aunt offered to join the medical team for Wuhan. She worked hard and carefully. She worked for over twelve hours a day and did whatever she could to help the sick. All her patients believed in her because she not only saved their lives but also gave them hope.

During the stay in Wuhan, my aunt sometimes chatted with me on WeChat. She told me not to worry about her and it was her duty to save lives. She is my hero and I hope to be a great person like her when I grow up.

【详解】

1.题干解读：该题目是材料类书面表达，根据表格内容提示完成，短文开头已经给出，补充剩余内容即可。

2.写作指导：该题目主要使用第三人称，时态主要使用一般过去时；内容包括作者姑姑的基本信息、在武汉的具体工作内容以及对作者的影响，同时保证结构清晰，叙述有条理，无单词拼写错误和语法使用错误。

3．（2021·江苏·苏州高新区第二中学二模）为了彻底地战胜新型冠状病毒(COVID-19)，我们学校开展了“为抗疫而战”(Fight Against COVID-19)的征文活动，号召大家从身边的小事做起，尽自己最大的努力，为抗疫贡献自己的力量。请你写一篇文章参赛。       

 要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；            2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

            3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头己给出，不计入总词数）；

            4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

词汇：健康码 green health codes

At the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out and spread rapidly around the world. It has brought us a great disaster and is challenging us completely._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】例文

At the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out and spread rapidly around the world. It has brought us a great disaster and is challenging us completely.

The spread of the epidemic has hindered the development of society. It affects our life and study. Many medical workers are working hard to help the patients recover. In order to fight against it, we need to observe rules in public places, such as showing green health codes and not gathering. We should develop good hygiene habits, such as washing hands frequently and wearing masks. We have online classes at home in order not to gather.

To respect life, to treat nature well and to live a healthy life are what I have learned in this fight. We should improve ourselves and be willing to help others.

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，号召大家从身边的小事做起，尽自己最大的努力，为抗疫贡献自己的力量。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段概述疫情、介绍自己的行动；第三段描述参加的意义。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

二、电子邮件

4．（2021·湖北荆门·中考真题）假如你是李明，你的英国朋友Henry给你发来电子邮件，询问关于新冠疫情 (COVID-19 pandemic) 对你们生活习惯带来的改变。请你根据以下要点给他回邮件，并表达你对此变化的看法。

要点：1.在公共场所带口罩的多了；

2.去人群聚集场所的人少了；

3.更注重身体锻炼了；

4.养成了餐前餐后勤洗手，餐中用公筷的习惯；

5.你的看法……

要求：1. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范；

2. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥；

3. 词数：100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。

参考词汇：病毒 virus (n.)        口罩 facial mask (n.)        公筷 serving chopsticks (n.)

Dear Henry,

How is everything going? You asked me about how the COVID-19 pandemic has changed our living habits in your e-mail, and I’m glad to share with you the new changes.

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Yours,

Li Ming

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Henry,

How is everything going? You asked me about how the COVID-19 pandemic has changed our living habits in your e-mail, and I’m glad to share with you the new changes.

Many of our habits have changed because of the COVID-19 pandemic. Nowadays, we usually wear facial masks in public places to protect ourselves from viruses. In addition, many people don’t go to crowded places any more, for it’s better to be safe than sorry. Different from before, we exercise a lot more now, hoping to build up our health. Another big change is in our dining habits. We wash our hands as much as possible before and after dinner and try to use serving chopsticks when taking food from plates, which greatly reduces the risk of spreading the virus.

In my opinion, these changes are good and necessary, because they can best protect us and help us finally defeat the pandemic.

Please take care and stay in touch.

Yours,

Li Ming

【详解】

1.题干解读：本文是一封电子邮件。在邮件中向朋友介绍疫情给生活带来的改变。

2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。分为四段式：第一段点明主旨；第二段根据所给的提示要点描述疫情给人们带来了哪些改变；第三段发表自己的观点；最后一段表达自己对朋友的关心。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

三、启事类

5．（2021·陕西·西工大附中分校模拟预测）抗击新冠疫情（COVID-19）取得了阶段性的胜利，但是，这场战役离最终胜利还有一段路程，还需要我们每个人认真对待和防控。暑假在即，全国将会出现较大数量的人口流动，这对我们全民疫情防控是一个大的挑战，请你代表学生会为全校同学写一篇倡议书，对大家暑期的安全及疫情防控提出切实可行的建议。

(be supposed to, wear masks, wash hands, public chopsticks, avoid ... , get sb. vaccinated 给某人打疫苗……)

要求：

1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2.可以参考所提示内容，并作适当发挥；

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名；

4.词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数）。

Boys and girls,

Because the battle against the COVID-19 has not got the final, we still need to fight on. In order to have a safe, happy and meaningful summer vacation, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you!

The Students’ Union (学生会)

【答案】例文：

Boys and girls,

Because the battle against the COVID-19 has not got the final, we still need to fight on. In order to have a safe, happy and meaningful summer vacation, I think we can do the following three aspects.

First of all, we should actively respond to the call of the country and get vaccinated. Secondly, we should try to stay away from virus by wearing masks, washing hands and not visiting affected are as of high-risk as the serious situation is not over yet. Furthermore, it can be practical to gradually cultivate some good habits. For example, having a balanced diet, as well as taking exercise, is beneficial to our health.

Most importantly, remember to be positive. Although we sill need to fight against the virus, we should believe that the future is bright. Now let’s take action to make a difference to fight against the COVID-19.

Thank you!

The Students’ Union

【详解】

1.题干解读：题目要求写一篇倡议书，针对暑期安全及疫情防控提出可行建议，

2.写作指导：写作时要用一般现在时，主语以第一人称为主，可分三段写作：第一段引出话题；第二段给出具体建议；第三段发起号召。要注意倡议书的格式，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。