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备战2023年中考英语书面表达
（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）
第一章 记叙文

记叙文是一种以记人叙事为主要内容的文章,通常包括六个要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果,写作时各要素要交代清楚,但并不要求全部具备.写记叙类文章时除了六个要素外,还要注意以下几点：
1.记叙方式.
通常有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种.顺叙是英语记叙文最常用的一种记叙方式,即按照事件发展的时间先后顺序来叙述.
2.人称.
一般用第一人称和第三人称进行写作.第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述；第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙,通过作者与读者之外的第三者,直接把故事呈现在读者面前.
3.时态.
记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历,因此常用一般过去时,还可根据上下文辅以其他时态.

Part 2 记事
写法点拨
在写记事文章的时候,我们可以分成以下三部分来写：
1.事情的开端.交代时间、地点、人物和事情的起因等.在这部分的写作中,不用详细地展开,只需简单交代,并可使用“设置悬念”等写作手法.
2.事情的经过和高潮.详细描写事情是怎么开始、发展、并达到高潮的.这部分是文章的中心,所以一定要具体、详细地描写出事情发展全过程的细节,要尽量地真实、引人入胜.
3.事情的结尾.这部分简单地进行描写就行,还可在这部分加上一些自己获得的启发和教训,但无须详细展开,用一两句话带过就行.

必备词汇
1 叙事顺序
first, to begin with, first of all, firstly 首先
secondly, then, besides, what's more, in addition, moreover 然后
at last, last but not least, above all, all in all, to sum up, on the whole, finally 最后
2 时间描写
after在······之后 after a short/long time/period 在一段很短／很长的时间后
afterwards后来；然后 as soon as -···就······
from that time on 从那时起 immediately 立刻；立即
lately 最近；近来；不久前 nowadays现在；如今
recently 最近 shortly马上；立刻
since then 从那时起 when,while 当··...·的时候
3 地点词汇
church 教堂 tower 塔
bridge 桥 station 车站
dormitory 宿舍 supermarket 超市
shop 商店 hospital 医院
theater 剧院 playground 操场
cinema 电影院 museum 博物馆
4 动作描写
go out for a picnic 去野餐
have a party 举行聚会
go camping 去露营
ride a horse 骑马
fly kites 放风筝
have a walk 散步
hurry to...匆忙赶到·.....
take photos 拍照
set off 出发
see a doctor 看医生
watch the match 看比赛
climb mountains 爬山
4 结尾词汇
thanks to 多亏
as a result 结果
luckily 幸运地
because/because of 因为
at last/in the end 最后

必备句型
1 介绍事情的开端
(1) One day / The other day / A couple of days ago while he was...,he...
一天／前几天当他正在······,他······
(2)It was snowing/raining heavily on Monday/Sunday morning, when...
星期一／星期天早上,正在下着大雪／雨,当··..
(3) All through my junior high school, I couldn't forget...
在我整个的初中生涯中,我不能忘记··...
(4) Last week, when I was on my way home, something terrible happened.
上个星期,当我在回家路上的时候,一些糟糕的事情发生了.
(5)The event took place/happened/occurred in the early morning.
那件事情发生在一大早.
2 描写事情的过程
(1) Without hesitation, I decided to give him a hand.
毫不犹豫,我决定帮助他.
(2) It was my first time to Mount Tai.
那是我第一次去泰山.
(3) We spent many hours talking happily.
我们愉快地交谈了几个小时.
(4) The line of people was endless.
人们排成的队伍看不到尽头.
3 交代事情的结尾
(1) I'll never forget the day when we visited the farm.
我将永远不会忘记我们参观农场的那一天.
(2) What a pleasant trip!
多么愉快的一次旅行啊！
(3) This will be an unforgettable experience.
这将会是一次难忘的经历.
(4) I have never seen a comedy like that.
我从未看过那样的喜剧.
(5) I had fun at the party tonight.
今晚我在聚会上玩得很愉快.

抛砖引玉
题目：家是我们温暖的港湾.你的家庭幸福吗?请讲述一个发生在你和家庭成员之间的难忘故事.请根据提示要求写一篇英语小短文,词数不得少于80.
提示：1.简单介绍一下你的家庭；
2.讲述一个发生在你和家庭成员之间难忘的故事.
注意：不要出现真实的人名和地名.
思路导航
第1步：例文审题
主体人称
题目要求讲述一个发生在“我”的家庭中的难忘故事,故主体人称应为第一人称“I”.
主体时态
由于题目里要求讲述的故事是已经发生了的,故主体时态用一般过去时.
写作贴士

题目只给出了一个写作大纲,没有具体细节,作者在写作时要进行补充.注意文章中不要出现真实的人名和地名.
第2步：列提纲
(1)简要介绍“我”的家庭的基本情况；
(2)具体详细地描述发生在家庭中的难忘往事.
第3步：参考词句
(1) warm; ask for return; care for; family...
(2) hurry home; prepare for the exam; unhappy; angry; filled with tears...
(3) turn a blind eye; be grateful for...
第4步：连句成篇
Love from My Family
I have a happy and warm family. My parents often give me love without ever asking for return. They always care for me. I still remember that day.
On that day, as soon as the class was over, I hurried home for lunch. There would be an exam in the afternoon, so I wanted to go back to school early to prepare for the exam. But when I got home, the lunch was not ready yet. I felt unhappy and kind of angry, so I ran out of the house. On the way back to school, I was very hungry. When I got into the classroom, I saw a lunch box on my desk. One classmate told me that it was my mother who took it to me. After opening the box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes were filled with tears.
We often turn a blind eye to the love from our parents. We should not do this any more and should be grateful to them.
参考译文
家人的爱
我有一个开心、温暖的家庭.我的父母给予我很多爱,并且从未要求过回报.他们总是关心着我.我仍记得那天(的情景).
那天,刚一下课,我就赶回家吃午饭.下午有一场考试,所以我想早点回到学校复习准备考试.但当我回到家的时候,午饭还没准备好.我感到不高兴,并有点生气,所以我跑出了家.在回学校的路上,我感觉很饿.当我进到教室的时候,我看见我桌上有一个午餐盒.一个同学告诉我,这是我妈妈拿给我的.打开盒子后,我看到里面有我最喜欢的菜.我的眼里充满了泪水.
我们经常无视父母对我们的爱.我们不应该再这样做了,我们应该对他们心怀感激.


成长记忆
范文1
Mountain Climbing
Last summer, I went mountain climbing together with my father. I still remember the day until now.
We started climbing the mountain early in the morning. But when the sun came up, it became very hot. I got all sweaty, feeling dizzy and tired, so I couldn't help complaining and wanted to quit. Hearing my complaint, my father encouraged me not to give up and helped me wipe away the sweat on the face. He said,“ We won' t see the fantastic scenery unless we reach the top.”I suddenly cheered up and continued to climb with full strength. We got to the top at last and enjoyed the beauty of the nature that I had never seen.
I could never forgot that experience and the lesson from that day. The beauty can only be seen after you make your efforts.
参考译文
爬山
去年暑假,我和爸爸一起去爬了山.直到现在我还记得那天.
一大早,我们就开始爬山.但是当太阳出来的时候,天气变得很热.我全身都是汗,又晕又累,所以我禁不住抱怨起来,并想要放弃.听到了我的抱怨,爸爸鼓励我不要放弃,并帮我擦掉了脸上的汗.他说：“除非我们到达山顶,否则无法看到美丽的景色.”我突然受到了鼓舞,继续全力往上爬.我们最终到达了山顶,并欣赏到了我从未看过的大自然的美丽.
我永远不会忘记那次经历,也不会忘记那天得到的启示.只有在你努力过后才能看到美丽的景色.
亮点词汇
1 together with... 和······一起
2 come up 出来；出现
3 sweaty /adj. 出汗的
4 dizzy/adj. 眩晕的
5 complaint / n. 抱怨；怨言
6 wipe away 擦掉；抹掉
出彩句型
1 I couldn't help doing... 我禁不住做··....
2 Hearing...,my father... 听到了··.··,我爸爸··.
3 We won't...unless... 我们不会·····.,除非··....
4 I continued to do ...with full strength. 我继续全力做······.
5 The beauty can only be seen after you make your efforts. 美丽只有在你努力过后才能看到.
高分点评
本文描述了作者和爸爸的一次爬山经历,丰富的细节描写,使人有身临其境的感觉.作者在文中运用了丰富的句型,如when 引导的定语从句和unless引导的条件状语从句,为文章增色不少.最后得出的启发,更是点出了文章的主旨,将文章提升了一个高度.

范文2
Go Back Home Alone
There was an unforgettable experience in my childhood.
When I was seven years old, my mother would pick me up from the school every day. But one day, my mother told me that she wouldn't do this any more. I was afraid of going back home alone, so I tried to persuade her. Although I told her my fear, she still insisted on her idea. She thought it was good for me to learn to be independent. The next day after school, I took a bus to go back home. I forgot to see the bus route when I got on. Therefore, when the bus was more and more far away from my home, I felt very terrified. Finally, I got to the last stop, and then took the same bus back home.
After that, I learned to go back home alone. And this experience made me know more about independence.
参考译文
独自回家
我的童年有过一次难以忘怀的经历.
在我7岁的时候,我的妈妈每天会接我放学.但是有一天,妈妈说,她不会再接我放学了.我害怕一个人回家,所以我试图说服她.尽管我告诉了她我的恐惧,她仍坚持她的想法.她认为学会独立对我来说是件好事.第二天下课后,我就独自坐了一辆公共汽车回家.当我上车时,忘记看路线了.因此,当车离家越来越远时,我感到非常害怕.最后,我到达了终点站,然后坐了同样的公交车回家.
从那以后,我学会了独自回家.这次经历让我更了解了独立的含义.
亮点词汇
1 go back home 回家
2 persuade /v.劝说；说服
3 far away from...远离······
4 alone / adv. 独自地
5 independence /n.独立
出彩句型
1 There was a(n)...experience in my childhood.在我的童年,有一次···...·的经历.
2 Although...,she still insisted on her idea.即使·....,她仍坚持她的想法.
3 She thought it was good for me to..,她认为······对我好.
4 I forgot to...when I got on.当我上车的时候我忘记......
高分点评
本文以颇具戏剧性的经历展现了作者学会独立的过程－学会自己放学回家,文章细节生动,真实具体,并在其中呈现了“我”和“妈妈”两个人物鲜明的性格特点.作者对宾语从句的运用非常娴熟,如“my mother told me that...”和“She thought...”,增加句式变化的同时,使文章的表达更为流利、顺畅.

家庭记事
范文1
A Funny Thing
There are three persons in my family, my mother, my father and I. We live together happily and there are many interesting stories about my family. Now I will tell you one of them.
My father is a hard-working man. But sometimes he works so hard that he can't remember the date. One day, he wanted to get up early as usual, but he wasn't able to do that, because he forgot to set the alarm clock the night before. When he got up, he did everything in a hurry and left home quickly. But he came back home soon with an angry face. He shouted at my mother and me, “Why don't you tell me it is Sunday today?” We first stood there, confused, and then burst into laughter.
What an interesting family I have! What about your family?
参考译文
一件有趣的事情
我家有三口人：我妈妈、爸爸还有我.我们在一起幸福地生活,我们家有许多有趣的故事.现在我给你讲讲其中一个.
我爸爸是一个努力工作的人.但有的时候,他工作太勤奋以至于忘了日期.一天,爸爸想像平常一样早起,但是他没能做到,因为他前一天晚上忘记设置闹钟了.当他起床时,他匆匆忙忙地做完一切事情,就离开家了.但是他很快就回来了,脸上满是愤怒.他向我妈妈和我大喊,“为什么你们没有告诉我今天是星期天?”我们一开始在那里非常困惑,接着放声大笑.
多么有趣的家庭！你的家庭怎么样呢?
亮点词汇
1 hard-working /adj.努力的；勤勉的
2 remember /v.记得；记住
3 as usual 像往常一样
4 in a hurry 匆忙地
5 angry /adj.生气的
6 burst into laughter 放声大笑
出彩句型
1 There are many interesting stories about my family.我们家有许多有趣的故事.
2 He works so hard that...他工作如此努力,以至于···..·
3 He forgot to...他忘记了······
4 He...with an angry face.他面带怒气··....
5 We first stood there, confused, and then burst into laughter.我们一开始站在那里,非常困惑,然后放声大笑.
6 What an interesting family I have!多么有趣的家庭！
高分点评
本文记叙了“我”家中的一件趣事－爸爸忘记日期,星期天仍赶去上班.文章极具趣味性,体现了作者家庭中和睦幸福的一面.作者运用的句式颇为丰富,如“so...that...”句型和文章最后一段中的感叹句,是这篇佳作出色的重要原因.

范文2
The First Time to Make Dumplings
During the Spring Festival, there are often many celebrations in my family. Last year, my mother decided to make dumplings at home, and she asked me to give her a hand.
At the beginning, I thought it would be an easy task. My mother showed me how to make them and then let me follow her. I did as she showed me, but l found my dumplings could not cover well. And I tried another one, still the same. I was very confused. I seemed to fully follow my mother's steps, but I failed in the end. My mother said to me with a smile, “Practice makes perfect”. I was encouraged, and continued to make dumplings.
After making several ones, I finally made a beautiful dumpling. I was very happy, not only for making a dumpling, but for having the experience of doing something with the family together.
参考译文
第一次做饺子
春节期间,我的家里经常有很多庆祝活动.去年,我的妈妈决定在家包饺子,她还要求我给她帮忙.
一开始,我以为这会是个简单的任务.妈妈先向我展示如何包饺子,然后让我跟着她做.我照着她示范的做,但我发现我的饺子包得不好.我尝试再包一个,但结果仍一样.我很困惑.我明明完全按着妈妈的步骤,但是我包出来的效果不好.我的妈妈笑着对我说：“熟能生巧.”我被鼓舞了,然后继续包饺子.
在包了几个之后,我终于包了一个漂亮的饺子.我非常高兴,不仅因为包了一个好看的饺子,还因为拥有和家人一起做东西的经历.
亮点词汇
1 celebration /n.庆祝活动
2 give her a hand 帮她一个忙
3 cover/v.盖住；覆盖
4 follow...steps 跟随··.··步骤
5 have the experience of...有··.··的经历
出彩句型
1 My mother decided to... , and she asked me to...我的妈妈决定·...·,她要求我·····
2 At the beginning,...一开始,·
3 I did as she showed me. 我照着她示范的做.
4 I tried another one, still the same.我尝试再包一个,但结果仍一样.
5 My mother said to me with a smile. 我的妈妈笑着对我说.
6 I was very happy, not only for..., but for...我非常高兴,不仅因为······,还因为···..·
高分点评
本文记叙了作者与妈妈一起包饺子的经历,既蕴含着满满的家庭温情,又充满哲理.本文句式虽看似简单,但句句之间均有细微差别,文章中还运用了大量的短语、词组,如 “give her a hand”“have the experience of”,大大增加了文章的特色.




校园生活
范文1
Getting on with Classmates
There is a lot of fun in my school life, because I have many lovely and friendly classmates there. We get on well with each other.
I often study in the classroom with my classmates. While meeting with difficult problems in our homework, we discuss them together. When classmates are in trouble, we try our best to help them. After school, we play sports on the playground. We play basketball, football, badminton and so on. Sometimes we have some class activities, such as singing songs together.
We are in a harmonious class.
I am very glad to meet my classmates, who bring me so much fun. I hope that we could all get into a good senior high school.
参考译文
和同学相处
我的校园生活充满乐趣,因为在那里我有很多可爱又友好的同学.我们相处得很好.
我经常和我的同学在教室里学习.当做作业遇到难题时,我们会一起讨论.当同学有困难的时候,我们会尽最大的努力来帮助他们.课后,我们在操场上运动.我们打篮球、踢足球、打羽毛球,等等.有时候我们有一些班级活动,比如一起唱歌.我们(生活)在一个和谐的班级里.
我非常高兴遇到我的同学们,他们带给我很多的快乐.我希望我们都能进入一个好的高中.
亮点词汇
1 friendly /adj.友好的
2 difficult /adj.困难的
3 discuss /v.讨论
4 in trouble 在困难中
5 class activities 班级活动
出彩句型
1 There is a lot of fun in my school life.我的校园生活充满乐趣.
2 We get on well with each other.我们相处得很好.
3 We try our best to do...我们尽最大的努力来··...·
4 We are in a harmonious class.我们(生活)在一个和谐的班级里.
5 I am very glad to...我非常高兴··..
高分点评
本文的主题明确,逻辑清晰,主要叙述了和同学相处的时光,表达了浓浓的同学之情.文章采取了三段式的写法,开篇点题,中间详细展开,最后再进行回应,并表达自己的期望,脉络清楚.文章的句式简洁而又富有变化,短语、词组的运用也恰到好处,如 “a lot of fun”“get on well with”等.

范文2
A Relay Race
The sports meeting in our school is very interesting, and many students participate in it every year.
This year, I took part in the relay race, in which I ran the last lap. It was the final event at the sports meeting. Everyone paid great attention to it. All the runners got ready at the starting line. As soon as the race began, everyone was too nervous to cheer. When it was my turn, I could feel that a runner was catching up with me, so I tried my best to run faster. Finally, our class won the first prize in this most exciting event.
I was very happy that I won the prize for my class. This was the most unforgettable sports meeting that I had had.
参考译文
一次接力赛
我们学校的运动会很有趣,每年很多学生都会参与其中.
今年,我参加了接力赛,在比赛中我跑最后一棒.这是运动会的最后一个项目.每个人都很关注这个项目.运动员们在起跑线上做准备.比赛一开始,所有人都紧张得停止了呼喊.轮到我时,我能感到有一名运动员正在追上我,所以我尽最大的努力让自己跑得更快一些.最后,我们班在这项最激动人心的项目中赢得了第一名.
我非常高兴自己为班级赢得了奖项.这是我最难忘的一次运动会.
亮点词汇
1 participate in...参加·..·;参与·...
2 relay race 接力赛
3 starting line 起跑线
4 nervous /adj.不安的；紧张的
5 win the first prize 赢得一等奖
出彩句型
1 Everyone paid great attention to...每个人都很关注······
2 As soon as...-....就··....
3 Everyone was too...to...每个人都太·····,以至于···.·
4 It was one's turn.轮到某人.
5 This is the most unforgettable... that I had.这是我最难忘的··.··
高分点评
本文将接力赛的“interesting”描写得淋漓尽致,使读者产生身临其境的感觉,感受着运动场上的紧张与激动.本文的开头、过程、结尾交代得清清楚楚,让读者一览便明.作者在文中还运用了大量的精彩句式,如“too... to...”“It was one' s turn..”等.


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范文1
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
One day, when I was on my way home, there was an old man walking slowly in front of me. Then something unexpected happened.
The old man walked more and more slowly. While he walked around the corner, he fell down. I ran to him, and l was the only one there to help him. I couldn't move him by myself. I looked around, but no one passed by. Just at that time, I found that my phone was in my pocket. I quickly took it out and called the doctors at 120 in a minute. The ambulance came soon. They thanked me for helping the old man.
I was so happy that I helped the old man and saved his life. We all should do this when others are in trouble.
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帮助别人让我开心
一天,我走在回家的路上,有一位老人慢慢地在我前面走着.然后意想不到的事情发生了.
老人越走越慢.走过转角的时候,他摔倒了.我跑向他,我是那里唯一能帮助他的人.我自己无法搬动他.我向四周看了看,但是没有人经过.就在那时,我发现手机在我的口袋中,我迅速拿出手机,马上拨打120.救护车很快就来了.他们感谢我帮助了这个老人.
我非常高兴自己帮助了这个老人,挽救了他的生命.当他人陷入困难的时候,我们都应该这样做.
亮点词汇
1 unexpected /adj.出人意料的
2 around the corner 在拐角处
3 pass by经过
4 ambulance /n.救护车
5 save one's life挽救某人的生命
出彩句型
1 There is sb. doing sth.有某人正在做某事.
2 I was the only one there to...我是那里唯一一个·.....
3 I found that...我发现·.....
4 .thanked...for.........为了··..··感谢··...
5 I was so happy that...我非常高兴·.....
6 We all should do this when others are in trouble.当他人陷入困难的时候,我们都应该这样做.
高分点评
本文描写的是帮助一个摔倒的老人的过程,条理清晰,叙述完整,突出了作者机智、热心的一面,是一篇较为成功的叙事文章.文章末尾还进行了点题,呼吁人们要对有困难的人施以援手,提升了文章的境界.文章的句子虽看似平淡,但其间点缀着精彩的短语,值得细细品读.

范文2
A Rubbish Accident
Last Saturday morning, I went to the park with my parents. When we were walking around, we saw a boy eating a banana. After a while, he just threw the skin of the banana on the ground. Just as we were going to pick it up, a man slipped on the banana skin. He was badly hurt and couldn't move. We called the hospital at once. Luckily, the man became better after the treatment of the doctors.
It was really bad of the boy to throw the rubbish everywhere. It not only does harm to the environment, but also might hurt others. Everyone must say no to this behavior, and works together to make our world a better place.
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垃圾事故
上个星期六早上,我和父母去了公园.我们正在四处逛着时,看见一个男孩正在吃香蕉.过了一会儿,他直接将香蕉皮扔到了地上.正当我们要过去捡起来时,有人踩在了香蕉皮上,滑倒了.他受伤很严重,躺在地上不能动了.我们马上打电话给医院.幸运的是,那个人在得到医生的治疗后好多了.
那个男孩到处扔垃圾的行为是非常恶劣的.这不仅会破坏环境,还可能伤害别人.每个人都要对这种行为说不,并且要共同努力,让我们的世界变得更好.
亮点词汇
1 walk around 四处走动
2 pick...up 把······捡起来
3 slip/slip/v.滑倒
4 treatment /n.治疗
5 throw the rubbish 扔垃圾
出彩句型
1 We saw sb. doing sth.我们看见某人正在做某事.
2 After a while...过了一会··....
3 Just as we were going to...正当我们要做··....
4 It was really... of sb. to do sth.某人做······是极···.··
5 Everyone must say no to...每个人都应对·····说不.
6 Everyone must say no to...每个人都应对······说不.
高分点评
本文展示了公园里一个男孩乱丢垃圾导致他人受伤的不文明行为,继而警醒人们要爱护环境,杜绝不文明行为.本文的主旨较为鲜明,贴合当今的社会风气,是一篇不错的启示性文章.值得一提的是,文章的短语运用相当丰富,如“walk around”“pick up”“throw the rubbish”等,为文章增添了色彩.