14. 想象作文-寓言故事，假想，梦想 备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

备战2023年中考英语书面表达

（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

第六章 想象作文

寓言故事+梦想

想象作文和记叙文不同,记叙文是要记录现实中发生的事情,而想象作文则是以作者的想象作为文章的主要内容,按照一定的逻辑记录现实中不存在的事情,可以是幻想故事,自己的理想愿望,对未来的憧憬,或者寓言故事.以下是我们在写作时的几点小贴士：

1.表现方式

想象作文和记叙文类似,但是想象作文一般都是按照事情发生的先后顺序进行描写,又或者是记录自己未来的生活状态等,而且在文章的最后我们要回到现实,表明自己的感悟.

2.人称

想象作文的人称比较灵活,如果题目没有明确规定,我们则要分情况讨论：如果写的是寓言故事,或者是第三者主人公之间发生的故事,我们要用第三人称；表达自己感悟时则要使用第一人称；如果写的是自己未来的状态,通常使用第一人称.

3.时态

想象作文的时态和写作要求有很大联系.如果是纯粹的寓言故事,我们可以使用一般现在时或一般过去时；如果是对未来的憧憬,则使用一般将来时.

Part 1寓言故事.

写法点拨

在写寓言故事的时候,我们可以通过以下三部分来写作：

1.简单概述故事背景

在文章的开头要先引出说的是什么样的寓言故事,指出故事的主人公,可以是动物,可以是人,等等,为下文的展开做铺垫.

2.具体描述故事发展的过程

为了使故事圆满,我们要具体详细地把故事的过程讲出来,比如主人公遇到了怎样的事情,他是怎么做,怎么想的,最后结果怎样等.叙述的过程中要注意时态、人称的使用.

3. 自己的感悟、总结

在文章的最后要写出自己的感受或启示,这个故事教导我们应该怎么做,不应该怎

么做,或者我们要向故事中的谁学习等等.

必备词汇

1 描述故事

2其他

必备句型

1引出故事

(1) I want to tell you a story about a man who lives on a farm.

我想给你讲一个关于一个住在农场的男人的故事.

(2)The story that I am going to tell you is about pigs.

我要给你讲的故事是有关猪的.

(3) I am sure you will like the story that I am going to tell.

我肯定你会喜欢我将要讲的故事.

(4) This is a simple story.

这是一个简单的故事.

(5) Please allow me to share the story with you.

请容许我和你们分享这个故事.

(6) You will be impressed by the story.

你会对这个故事印象深刻的.

2 用于故事开头

(1) Once upon a time, there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields.

很久以前,有一个在田野间辛苦劳作的农民.

(2) There once was a boy who cried loudly.曾经有一个男孩,他哭得很大声.

(3) He had very little school education, but he knows that...他没怎么上过学,但是他知道··....

(4) A long time ago, there lived a farmer who...

很久以前,那里住着一个农民,他··...

(5) One day, the farmer heard something odd when he was...

有一天,当农民在·······的时候,他听到了奇怪的声音.

(6) There used to be...曾经有···.··

(7) At that time...在那时候··....

3 从故事中学到的教训

(1) The story tells us that if you want to get something, you must work hard for it.

这个故事告诉我们,如果你想得到某物,你就要为之付出努力.

(2)From the story, we learn that only by working hard can we get what we want.

从这个故事我们可以学到,只有努力工作,我们才能得到我们想得到的东西.

(3) The story suggests that everyone needs to work hard to achieve success.

这个故事表明我们每个人都要努力学习,才能取得成功.

(4)The lesson in this story is that we should be kind to others.

这个故事教育我们应该善良地对待他人.

(5) It can be learned from the story that a man shouldn't be too greedy, or he will lose everything.

从故事中可以学到,人不能太贪婪,不然会失去一切.

美文引路

题目:根据以下内容提示,展开想象,写一则寓言故事,要求不少于80词.

1.猫和狗是一对好朋友；

2.有一天他们同时看到了一个钱包；

3.他们为争夺钱包打起来了；

4.钱包不见了,他们也不再是好朋友了；

5.你的感悟.

注意：可适当添加细节,使短文完整连贯.

思路导航

第1步：例文审题

第2步：列提纲

(1)用简单的一两句话引出故事；

(2)具体叙述故事经过；

(3)表达个人感悟等.

第3步：参考词句

(1)tell; story; cat; dog...

(2) friends; live; happily; purse; at the same time; money; had a fight; be gone...

(3) greedy; get nothing...

第4步：连句成篇

I am going to tell you a story about a cat and a dog.

The cat and the dog used to be good friends and lived happily. But one day, when they were playing in the street, they saw a purse at the same time. There is a lot of money in the purse and they both wanted the purse. Then the cat and the dog had a terrible fight and they were not friends anymore. Suddenly ,the purse was gone. They lost friendship and money.

The story tells us that we shouldn't be greedy or we will get nothing.

参考译文

我想给你讲一个关于一只猫和一只狗的故事.

猫和狗曾经是好朋友,它们幸福地生活在一起.但是有一天,当它们在街上玩的时候,它们同时看到了一个钱包.钱包里面有很多钱,它们都想得到这个钱包.然后猫和狗就打了起来,也不再是朋友了.突然,钱包消失了.猫和狗失去了友谊和钱包.

这个故事告诉我们不能贪婪,不然我们什么都得不到.

范文1

Have you ever heard the story about The Fox with His Tail? If not, I will tell you the story.

There lived a fox in the forest. He was very proud of his tail because he thought it was very beautiful. One day, the fox's tail was caught in a trap. He tried every means to get his tail out of the trap, but it didn't work. Many other animals passed by and they persuaded the fox to cut off his tail so that he could be saved. But the fox thought he would become ugly without his tail. At last, the fox was caught by people.

If the fox cut off his tail, he would be saved. Appearance is less important than our lives.

参考译文

你有没有听说过狐狸和他的尾巴的故事?如果没有,让我告诉你吧.

在森林里住着一只狐狸.他很为他的尾巴骄傲,因为他觉得他的尾巴很美.一天,狐狸的尾巴困在了陷阱里.他尝试各种办法把尾巴弄出陷阱,但都不成功.很多其他的动物经过,劝他把尾巴切断才能得救.但是狐狸觉得要是没有尾巴他会变丑的.最后,狐狸被人类抓住了.

如果狐狸切掉他的尾巴,他就得救了.外貌远没有我们的生命重要.

亮点词汇

1 tail /n.尾巴；踪迹；辫子；燕尾服

2 be proud of...为·····而自豪

3 trap /v.诱捕；使···受限制；使···陷入困境 n.陷阱；圈套

4 pass by经过

5 persuade /v.说服；劝说；使某人相信；劝某人做(不做)某事

6 cut off 切断

7 ugly /adj.丑陋的；邪恶的；令人厌恶的

8 appearance /n.外貌；外观；出现；露面

出彩句型

1 Have you ever heard the story about...? 你听过关于······的故事吗?

2 There lived a fox in the forest.在森林里住着一只狐狸.

3 One day, the fox's tail was caught in a trap.一天,狐狸的尾巴困在了陷阱里.

4 He tried every means to..., but it didn't work.他尝试了各种办法来······,但都不成功.

5 Appearance is less important than our lives.外貌远没有我们的生命重要.

高分点评

这篇文章主要讲了狐狸和它尾巴的故事,简短却很深刻,全文自然流畅,读起来很舒服.另外,作者适度地运用高级词汇“trap, appearance, persuade, ugly”等,为文章增色了不少,使文章的词语表达更加丰富多彩.

范文2

Everybody has heard the story about the Cry Wolf. But today I will tell you a different version of the Cry Wolf.

Once there was a boy who lived on the farm. He had to take the sheep to the hill every day. One day, he came across a wolf. The wolf said that he wouldn't eat the boy and wanted to make friends with him because he wanted a friend. The boy believed it and he gave something to the wolf to eat. They became good friends finally and played happily.

If we are kind to others, we will be treated by others in the same way, too.

参考译文

每个人可能都听过《狼来了》的故事.但是今天我要讲一个不同版本的《狼来了》.

曾经有个小男孩,他住在农场里.他每天都要把羊带到山坡上.有一天,他遇到了一只狼.狼说他不会吃小男孩的,因为他想和小男孩做朋友.小男孩相信了,并给了他一些东西吃.最后他们成了好朋友,快乐地玩耍.

如果我们友善待人,别人也会用同样的方式对待我们.

亮点词汇

1 version /n.版本；译文；倒转术

2 sheep /n.羊；绵羊；胆小鬼

3 come across 遇到

4 make friends with 和······做朋友

5 treat /v.治疗；对待n.请客；款待

6 in the same way 用同样的方式

出彩句型

1 But today I will tell you a different version of...但是今天我要和你说另一个版本的··....

2 Once there was a boy who...曾经,有一个··...·的男孩.

3 One day, he came across a wolf.有一天,他遇到了一只狼.

4 They became good friends finally and played happily.最后他们成了好朋友,快乐地玩耍.

5 If we are kind to others, we will be treated by others in the same way, too.

如果我们友善待人,别人也会用同样的方式对待我们.

高分点评

这是改编的《狼来了》的故事,作者用浅显的语言,简单的句子,以故事发展的顺序为线索,生动形象地为我们描写了这个故事.整体上来说,文章衔接自然,句法结构很好,长短句结合使用.是不错的文章,值得学习.

Part 2 假想、梦想

写法点拨

在假想我们的梦想的时候,我们可以通过以下三部分来写作：

1.简单介绍自己的愿望

大体上介绍一下自己的梦想是有关哪方面的,是未来的生活,还是环境的变化等,为下文做铺垫,引出下文.

2.具体描述自己的假想

为了让想象更具体,我们要从各个方面描述,可能是描写未来人们的生活是怎样的,或者描写想象中的自己是怎样的,或者是假想的环境是怎样的.在写作时,我们要注意人称的用法和时态的运用.

3.总结文章

在文章的最后要回归现实,表达自己的感受或感悟,可以是下定决心要好好学习使梦想成真,也可以是对未来的憧憬等.

必备词汇

make effort 努力想象作文

必备句型

1 引出梦想或假想

(1)I had a dream last night.我昨晚做了一个梦.

(2) The dream I made several days ago was fantastic.我几天前做的梦很精彩.

(3) Everybody has his dream.每个人都有梦想.

(4)What is your dream?你的梦想是什么?

(5)Have you ever dreamed about the life in the future?你有没有想过未来的生活是怎样的?

(6) I have a dream of...我有一个······的梦想

(7)My dream is that...我的梦想是···..·

(8) Can you imagine what the world will be like in 100 years?你能想象100年后的世界会是什么样子吗?

(9) I have been always dreaming about...我一直都幻想着······

(10) I have been always curious about what I will be like after 30 years.我一直很好奇30年后我会是什么样子的.

2进一步描写梦想或假想

(1) In 30 years, I will be a man who...30年后,我会是一个·.····的人.

(2) There will be more tall buildings in the world.世界上会有更多的高楼.

(3) In the future, we will be able to travel in the moon.在未来,我们可以到月球旅行.

(4) The world in the future will be much more...未来的世界会更加··....

(5) We will make many things that seemingly impossible into a fact.我们会让很多看似不可能的事情变成现实.

(6)Everything is possible in the future,未来一切皆有可能.

(7) You can see there will be...in the future.在未来,你会看到··....

3 表达自己的感悟

(1) To make my dream a reality, I have to...为了让我的梦想成为现实,我一定要．．．．．·

(2) I am convinced that if we work together, it is not a dream anymore.我相信,只要我们一起努力,这就不再是梦.

(3) Suddenly, I woke up from my dream.突然,我从梦中醒来.

(4) This is a wonderful dream.这是一个美妙的梦.

(5) In a word, we should work hard to realize dreams.总之,我们要努力工作来实现梦想.

(6) Everything is possible if we put our heart into it.如果我们用心,一切皆有可能.

(7) I make up my mind that I will try my best to turn my dream into a fact.

我下定决心,我会尽最大的努力把我的梦想变成现实.

(8) From now on, I have to work hard and make continuous progress in order to achieve

my goal.从现在开始,我要努力学习,不断进步来实现我的目标.

(9) Whatever difficulties and failures I will meet, I will never give up my dream.

无论我将面临怎样的困难和失败,我都不会放弃我的梦想.

美文引路

题目：根据以下内容提示,以“Our Future Life”为题,展开想象,写一篇不少于80词的短文,想象一下未来的生活状态.

1.有人住在海底；

2.可以到月球度假；

3.在家里通过电脑上课,购物等；

4.机器人帮忙做家务,照看老人和小孩.

注意：可适当添加细节,使短文完整连贯.

思路导航

第1步：例文审题

第2步：列提纲

(1)简单说明自己要描述的未来生活；

(2)进一步介绍未来生活的方方面面等；

(3)表达个人的感受、想法等.

第3步：参考词句

(1) dream about; future; life; be like...

(2) in the future; live; under the sea; the moon; spend our holiday; go to school; have class; on the computer; shop; robot; housework; take care of; the old; the young...

(3)What a wonderful life in the future!

第4步：连句成篇

Our Future Life

I often dream about the life in the future. What will it be like?

In the future, we may live under the sea and we can go to the moon to spend our holiday. We won't need to go to school anymore because we can have classes at home on the computer. We can use computer to shop,too. Moreover, each family will have a robot. The robot will do the housework and take care of the old and the young.

What a wonderful life in the future!

参考译文

我们未来的生活

我经常幻想未来的生活.那会是什么样子呢?

在未来,我们可能会住在海底,我们也可以去月球上度假.我们不用再去学校了,因为我们可以在家里通过电脑上课.我们也可以用电脑购物.还有,每家每户都会有一个机器人.机器人会做家务,会照看老人和小孩.

多美好的未来生活啊！

范文1

What will I be like when I am 30 years old? It is a funny and exciting question.

When I am 30 years old, I will get married but I may have no babies. I will work hard to earn a lot of money so that l can travel all over the world with my partner. We will go to visit many beautiful places and meet a lot of people. And then I will have my own company so that l won't work for someone else.

This is what I will be like in my 30s. It is great.

参考译文

我三十岁的时候会是什么样子呢?这是一个有趣又激动人心的问题.

当我30岁时,我会结婚,但没有小孩.我会努力工作挣很多很多的钱,这样子我就可以和我的爱人去世界各地旅游.我们会去游览很多美丽的地方,遇到很多人.然后我会有自己的公司,这样子我就不用为别人打工了.

这就是我30岁的样子.真是太棒了.

亮点词汇

1 exciting /adj.令人兴奋的；使人激动的

2 get married 结婚

3 earn money挣钱

4 partner /n.配偶；伴侣；情人

5 company /n.公司；陪伴；同伴；连队

6 work for...为······工作

出彩句型

1 What will I be like when I am 30 years old?我30岁的时候会是什么样子呢?

2 When I am 30 years old, I will...当我30岁时,我会··...·

3 I will work hard to earn a lot of money so that...我会努力工作,挣很多钱,这样就可以·.....

4 We will go to visit many beautiful places and meet a lot of people.我们会去游览很多美丽的地方,遇到很多人.

5 This is how I will be like in my 30s.这就是我30岁的样子.

高分点评

文章主要描述“我”30岁时的生活状态,层次清晰,结构分明.作者从生活到工作,面面俱到,恰当使用时态,活灵活现地为我们展示了“我”未来的样子.另外,作者的句法结构用得很好,适度使用问句加强了文章语气.

范文2

My Life in the Future

I have been always curious about my life in the future. Is it wonderful, or mysterious?

I will work in a computer company and you may use one of the products made by my teammates and me. Everyone will be marvelous at my job. And I will have a nice wife and a cute daughter. We will go to the park every day to enjoy our family time. And we will have a robot at home, too. The robot will do the laundry, make dishes and do other things for us.

Isn't my life in the future wonderful? I will become the man that I want to be.

参考译文

我未来的生活

我一直很好奇我以后的生活会是怎样的.是精彩的,还是神秘的呢?

我会在一家电脑公司上班,你可能会使用我和我同伴制造的产品中的一款.每个人都惊叹于我的工作.然后我会有一位漂亮的妻子和一个可爱的女儿.我们每天都会去公园享受家庭时光.而且我们家里会有一个机器人.机器人会帮我们洗衣、做饭,还做其他事.

我未来的生活是不是很精彩呢?我会成为我想成为的人的.

亮点词汇

1 be curious about 对······感到好奇

2 mysterious /adj.神秘的；不可思议的；难解的

3 computer company 电脑公司

4 product/n.产品；结果；【数】乘积；作品

5 teammate /n.队友；同队队员

6 marvelous/adj.了不起的；非凡的；令人惊异的

7 cute /adj.可爱的；漂亮的；聪明的；伶俐的

8 family time 家庭时光

9 dish /n.盘；餐具；外貌有吸引力的人

出彩句型

1 I have been always curious about my life in the future.我一直对我以后的生活感到好奇.

2 Is it wonderful, or mysterious?是精彩的,还是神秘的呢?

3 Everyone will be marvelous at my job.每个人都惊叹我的工作.

4 We will go to the park every day to enjoy our family time.我们每天都会去公园享受我们的家庭时光.

5 Isn't my life in the future wonderful?我未来的生活是不是很精彩呢?

高分点评

文章用现在完成时引出主题,表达作者内心的期待,随后用选择疑问句给读者留下悬念,在结尾处用反问句,形成前后呼应,使全文的联系更加紧凑,逻辑结构更加清晰.另外,作者适度使用高级词汇“mysterious, curious, teammate”等,为文章增色不少.