15. 画图+图表类作文 备战2023年中考英语书面表达（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

备战2023年中考英语书面表达

（写作步骤+满分范文+词句积累）

图画+图表作文

第七章 图画作文

图画作文是根据一幅或多幅图画以及汉语提示展开合理想象,写出几句话或一篇短文.看图作文多以记叙文或说明文为主,一般要求考生根据所给的图示介绍一个地方或一件物品,或者叙述过去或将来发生的故事.

图画类作文的书面表达具有生动、直观、具体的特点.与其他类型作文的不同之处在于,它除了考查学生将图画内容转化为文字信息的能力以外,还考查学生的观察能力、分析能力和想象能力.

写法点拨

1.认真读图,把握要点.

一般说来,所给的几幅图通常是一个小故事或小事件,这个小故事或小事件就是这组图画所要表达的主要内容.除此之外,还要考虑各图之间的关系,以及图画表达的人物、事件、地点、时间等.

2.初步构思,拟定提纲.

把握了文章的要点后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用哪种体裁来进行写作,并确定人称、时态等细节.

3.连词成句,连句成文.

根据内容要点用恰当的词汇表达各图的意思,然后扩展成句子,再将这些句子串联成文.串连时,要注意使用过渡词或过渡句,使上下文更为紧凑、自然.

参考模板

The cartoon/picture is sending a message about__________ (图画内容)It reveals. __________ (稍作评价)Apparently,(将个人观点和图片内容相结合,得出观点)For one thing, __________.(原因一)For another thing,

.(原因二)For example, __________ Last but not least, __________.(原因三)Therefore, it is necessary for us to__________.(建议或措施)Only in this way can we__________.(展望结果)

In conclusion, __________.(再次表明观点或态度)We should__________.(进一步说明个人的观点)

必备词汇

必备句型

1描述图画内容

(1) As we can see in the picture,...正如我们可以从图片中看到的那样·.....

(2) As is shown in the picture,... 如图所示··...

(3) We can see/find that...in the picture.我们可以从图中发现··...·

(4) What we can learn from the picture is that...我们可以从图中知道·.....

(5) It can be seen/found/noticed in the picture that...由图画可以看到／发现／注意到···...

(6) As can be seen from the picture, it is clear that...如图片所示,很明显·...·

2论述图画反映的现象以及对这一现象的看法

(1) After seeing the picture, I was greatly shocked by the phenomenon. In today's society,...

看到这幅图以后,我对这种现象非常震惊.在今天的社会里,

(2) What the picture reflects makes me think a lot.图片所反映的东西让我思考了很多.

(3) Apparently, the cartoon reflects a major social problem.很明显,这幅漫画反映了一个主要的社会问题.

(4) The picture reminds me of something in my daily life.这张图片让我想起了我生活中的一些事情.

(5)All of these cause some serious problems.所有这些造成了一些严重的问题.

(6) So I hope something must be done to avoid...所以我希望我们必须做一些事情,以避免···.··

3 对事件、观点的总结

(1) We can come to the conclusion that...我们可以得出这样一个结论···...

(2) As far as I am concerned, what we have to do is... 就我看来,我们必须做的是·....·

(3) Consequently, it is high time...所以,是时候··...

(4) In my opinion, we should...就我看来,我们应该．．．

(5) Only in this way can we... 只有这样我们才能··..·

(6) Spare more time to...and you will...花多点时间···,你将会··.··

(7)Therefore, we should realize the importance of...因此我们应该意识到······的重要性.

(8) Such behavior left me in deep thought.这样的行为使我陷入了沉思.

(9) In a word, if every one of us can do our part, we can make a difference to the world.

总之,如果我们每个人都能从自身做起的话,我们就可以对世界产生影响.

范例1

题目:初中生活即将结束,6月6日下午,你班的班长方华组织了一次毕业聚会,内容是话友谊,忆过去,签名留言,拍照纪念,请根据图片的先后顺序描述此次聚会的过程.

注意：

1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称.

2.至少用两句话描写每幅图画的内容,可以适当发挥.

3.首句已给出,不计入总词数.词数80以上.

4.参考词汇：签名sign one's name,班长 monitor,心形的heart-shaped

As the junior life is to end, our class decided to have a party to celebrate it._____________________________

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范文

As the junior life is to end, our class decided to have a party to celebrate it. The party was organized by Fang Hua who is the monitor of our class and it consisted of three parts. ①

Firstly, each person shared one story happened in the past three years. Some of the stories even made us cry. Then our photos were pasted on a heart-shaped board. ②The shape of heart, of course, stood for our lifelong friendship. After that, we signed our names and left some messages on T-shirts. At the end of the party, we took a photo together.

Every one of us left with a happy smile on our faces and we would remember the day forever.③

译文

因为初中生活即将结束,我们班决定办一场毕业聚会来庆祝.聚会由我们班的班长方华组织,本次聚会共分为三部分.

首先,每个人都分享一件发生在过去三年中的事.有些故事甚至催人泪下.接着,我们把我们的照片粘贴到一块心形的木板上.当然,心形代表着我们终生不渝的友谊.然后我们在T恤衫上签下我们的名字,并写下一些留言.聚会结束之际,我们一起拍了张合照.

我们每个人都面带微笑地离开了,我们将会永远记住这一天.

满分点评

本文结构清晰严谨,行文流畅自然.采用“总一分一总”结构,符合英语行文的习惯；过渡词的使用也为文章增色不少.其中：

①使用who引导的定语从句用来说明方华的身份.

②此句采用被动语态句式,使句子富于变化而非平铺直叙.

③采用with复合结构作伴随状语,使人眼前一亮.

范例2

题目:文明社会,从我做起.请就下图的不文明行为和所产生的后果用英语写一篇短文,向校刊 English Garden 投稿,倡导做文明人.

注意：

(1)短文必须包括所给图片的信息,合理想象并补全第3幅图片的内容.

(2)必须谈谈你对此事的看法.

(3)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息.

(4)词数：80-100.短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数.

参考词汇：果皮skin,踩在·····上摔倒slip on(slipped, slipped),救护车 ambulance

Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin._________________________________________

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范文

Last Sunday afternoon, I went to the park with my cousin. A man who was eating a banana walked in front of us. "①What annoyed us was that he threw the banana skin on the ground instead of putting it into the dustbin.② Suddenly an old woman slipped on the banana skin and got hurt. We called 120 immediately, and then the ambulance came and took the woman to the hospital.

It's terrible to drop litter around. ③ As a member of the society, we should keep a good habit and think about others no matter what we are doing, instead of bringing troubles to others.

译文

上个星期天下午,我和表哥一起去公园.走在我们前面的那个人在吃香蕉.令我们恼怒的是他竟然将香蕉皮扔到地上,而不是扔到垃圾桶里.突然,一个老奶奶踩到香蕉皮滑倒了,并且受了伤.我们立即拨打了120,之后救护车来了,把老奶奶送去医院.

到处乱扔垃圾的行为非常糟糕.作为社会中的一员,我们应该养成良好的习惯,不管我们在做什么,都要为他人着想,而不是给他人带来麻烦.

满分点评

本文成功运用了一般过去时、一般现在时,并使用了过渡词,使短文过渡自然,逻辑清晰.其中：

①who引导定语从句,修饰先行词a man.

②此句使用了what引导主语从句和that引导表语从句,使人眼前一亮.

③采用it作形式主语,不定式to drop litter around 是真正的主语.

范例3

题目：假如你是刘洪.周末就要到了,你已经安排好了周六一天的活动,请你结合图片内容,发挥合理想象,写一篇不少于80词的文章.

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范文

The weekend comes. After a week's hard work, I really want to have a good relaxation.①

On Saturday, I am going to run in the park after breakfast. After that, I will do my homework at home because I have got a lot of homework to do.② Then after lunch, I will go out to fly a kite. ③It will be wonderful. Then in the evening, l will go swimming. Finally at night, I am sure to have a good sleep.

That is all about my Saturday.

译文

周末就要来了,在一周的努力学习之后,我真的想要好好放松一下.

星期六,吃完早餐后我要去公园跑步.之后,我将在家里做作业,因为我有很多作业要做.午饭后,我将去外面放风筝.这是很美好的.傍晚的时候,我会去游泳.最后,晚上我一定可以睡个好觉.

这就是我星期六的全部安排了.

满分点评

文章围绕图片内容有条理、有层次地展开,语句通顺、准确,衔接连贯.

①这一句暗示了作者打算在周末好好放松,为下文的活动做铺垫.

②本句是because引导的原因状语从句,使用恰当.

③作者适度运用“then, after”等词语连接上下文.

第八章 图表作文

图表作文通常要求同学们根据题目所提供的图表、数据等进行分析、研究,通过一定的文字说明,弄清信息之间的关系,提炼要点,然后组织语言进行写作,有时候还要加入作者自己的观点.这是考试中较为常见的题型之一,也是难度较大的一种写作题型.

这类作文形式多样,可综合提供题目、数据、图像、提纲等,但同学们在写作时一般是从五个方面入手,即描述图表、说明寓意、分析原因、联系实际、提出建议等,考试会从这五个方面中选出两到三个方面.主要考查学生把图表信息转换成文字的能力,数据分析和材料归纳的能力以及写作能力,想象能力等.

写法点拨

1.认真读取信息,弄清信息间的关系.一般情况下,题目会提供多个信息或者多组数据等,我们要认真分析每一个信息和每一组数据,找准信息间的逻辑关系,把握信息的要点,点明主题.有时候,我们可以借助题目的文字说明来帮助我们理清信息.

2.初步构思,拟定提纲.把握了信息间的关系和要点之后,我们要在脑海中形成一个基本的框架,确定文章的体裁,是说明文还是议论文,或者是记叙文等.

3.连词成句,连句成文.根据内容要点使用恰当的单词表达文章信息,同时要突出信息之间的关系,然后拓展成句子.通过适当的过渡词或过渡句,把这些句子串联成文,使文章连贯、自然.

参考模板

According to the chart, we clearly learn that.__________ (图表要点)

The number of those who__________ (信息一) has increased, and furthermore,. __________ (信息二)There are two factors responsible for the changes. In the first place, __________.(原因一)Moreover, __________.(原因二)

From the analysis, we can safely draw the conclusion that__________ (发表个人观点或看法或总结)

必备词汇

1 泛指图表

2表示数据变化的词

3 其他会用到的词

必备句型

1 导入图表内容

(1)The chart shows that...图表显示··....

(2) It can be seen from the chart that...

从图表中可以看出··....

(3) It is obvious from the table that...

图表中很明显发现··...·

(4) We can see from the data that...

从数据中我们可以看到···...

(5) We can learn from the diagram that...

我们可以从图中知道．．．．．．

(6) The chart illustrates that...

图表阐述了····.·

2表达数据变化的句子

(1) The number of... has increased sharply from...to...·

...··的数量已经从······急剧增长到···..·

(2) The number of... remains the same in recent years.

·····的数量近年来保持不变.

(3) There is a sharp rise in the number of...·...··的数量增长很快.

(4) There is a sudden decrease in the number of... from... to...

······的数量急速下降,从······降到······

(5) In contrast, there is a dramatic increase in the number of...

相反,·····的数量的增长速度很快.

3 对事件、观点的总结

(1) It can be concluded that...可以总结出······

(2) We can reach a conclusion that...我们可以得出结论······

(3) In conclusion, it can be said that...总之,我们可以说······

(4) To conclude, more attention should be paid to...总之,要更关注·····.

范例1

题目:现在的中学生每月都有一定数量的零花钱.某校对九年级(1)班的30名学生进行了零花钱用途的调查.结果如图.任选两项调查结果,谈谈你是怎么用零花钱的,并说明理由.

注意：

1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校的名称.

2.语句通顺,词数80以上.

范文

As the chart shows, most students spend their pocket money on snacks and just a few save their money. ①However, things are quite different when. comes to me.

②Usually, I spend most of my money buying books because l like reading very much. I seldom spend my money on snacks because I think they are bad for my health. In addition, I will save some of my money in case of accidents.

③It is true that we should make good use of our pocket money and spend it on something useful.

译文

正如表格所示,大多数学生会把钱花在零食上,只有少数同学会存钱.然而,当谈到我时,事情就不一样了.

通常,我会把大多数的零花钱花在买书上,因为我非常喜欢看书.我很少会把钱花在零食上,因为我觉得这对健康不好.另外,我会把我的一部分钱存起来,以防意外.

我们的确要充分利用零花钱,并把它花在有用的地方上.

满分点评

本文的逻辑清晰,段落层次分明.作者使用适当逻辑词使文章更加连贯、紧凑.

①用 however表示转折,承上启下,突出“我”是怎么使用的零花钱.

②把状语usually置于句首,起到了强调的作用.

③使用it作形式主语,从句作真正的主语.

范例2

题目:近年来,学生考试作弊的现象越来越严重,引起了学校和社会的关注.最近有学校就学生作弊的理由做了一个调查.现要求你根据表格内容,写一篇有关学生考试作弊的文章.

注意：

1.文章必须包括表格里的所有内容,且要补充自己的看法.

2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数.

参考词汇：cheat 作弊 school rules 校规 please 取悦

In recent years, more and more attention is paid to students' cheating in the exam._______________________

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范文

In recent years, more and more attention is paid to students' cheating in the exam.

The reasons why students cheat in the exam are various. ①Firstly, many students think that they have too many exams which are too hard. Moreover, some students are too lazy to work hard at their lessons. ②Furthermore, they sometimes cheat in order to please their teachers and parents.

In my opinion, it is wrong to cheat, ③ which is against the school rules. As a student, we should be honest and study hard. What's more, we should improve our study methods so as to get good grades. ④

译文

近年来,学生在考试中作弊的问题越来越受到关注.

学生考试作弊的理由是各种各样的.首先,很多学生认为考试太多,而且这些考试也很难.其次,有些学生太懒而不努力学习.还有,学生有时候是为了取悦父母和老师而作弊.

在我看来,作弊是错误的,这也是违反校规的.作为学生,我们要诚实,努力学习.还有,我们要改善我们的学习方法来提高成绩.

满分点评

本文要点齐全,表达很顺畅,作者也融入了自己的看法,大量使用过渡词,使文章紧凑,自然.

①用why引导定语从句,修饰先行词 the reasons.

②这个句子使用了too...to...句型,表示“太······而不能··..·”.

③用it作形式主语,不定式to do作真正的主语.

④使用短语 so as to作目的状语,表明改善学习方法的目的.

范例3

题目：最近你们学校做了一个调查,有关现在中学生都爱读哪一类型的外国书籍.现要求你写一篇文章,汇报调查结果,并提出自己的建议.

注意：

1.要包含所有表格的信息,并提出自己的建议.

2.语句通顺,词数不少于80词.

参考词汇：foreign books 外国书籍

范文

To find out what kind of foreign books the middle school students like, our school did a survey.①

As the survey's result shows, more than half of the students like to read newspapers.② 26% of the students say that they like to read foreign stories most, while 7% of the students express that they like to read books about learning methods. ③In addition, the percentage of students who like to read science books is 14%.

In a word, I agree that students should learn more knowledge about the foreign countries.

译文

为了了解中学生都爱阅读哪一类的外国书籍,我们学校做了一项调查.

调查结果显示,超过一半的学生喜欢阅读报纸.26%的学生说他们最喜欢阅读外国故事,然而只有7%的学生表示说喜欢阅读关于学习方法的书籍.另外,喜欢阅读科普书的学生比例是14%.

总的来说,我同意学生应该多学习有关外国的知识.

满分点评

本文围绕调查的主题有条理地展开调查的结果,运用多种句式表达类似的信息.全文连接顺畅、自然.

①用不定式to do作目的状语,解释了调查的目的.

②使用“more than half of the students”而不是直接使用数据53%,表达灵活.

③while表示前后形成对比,使上下文关系更连贯、紧凑.