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专题36 读后续写07 助人型（解析版）

目录
专题36 读后续写07 助人型（解析版） 1
Part 1命题解读 2
Part 2思维导图 2
Part 3 第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境） 2
（1）消极情绪 2
（2）进一步细节描写 3
Part 4 第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链） 3
（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法 3
（2）动作链 3
Part 5第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华） 4
（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折 4
（2）有了结果 4
（3）感谢 4
（4）感动 4
（5）升华 5
Part 6模拟演练 5
1． （2022·广东天河·二模） 5
2． （2022·福建泉州·三模） 8
3． （2022·海南·模拟预测） 10
4． （2022·福建莆田·二模） 12
5． （2022·福建福建·一模） 15
6． （2022·重庆·一模） 17
7． 读后续写模拟专练01 19
8． 读后续写模拟专练02 24
9． 读后续写模拟专练03 28
Part 7名师精讲 33
01---开车半路救人 33
02---马戏团购票 35

Part 1命题解读
主要分为：“我”帮助别人：别人帮助“我”。主题主要是：帮助helpful；奉献devotion；友善kind；爱心love。

Part 2思维导图


Part 3 第一步：困难描写（消极情绪+困难处境）
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）
1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵...
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb
 
因...颤抖
tremble//shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
 
（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred one's eyes.     
2. One's eyes got misty.  
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (roll down one's eyes/cheeks/face)泪水落下
 
 困难处境
1. As the economy was in decline(经济衰退), some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet (使收支平衡). （2020.7高考山东卷）
2. There was a man sick in bed(卧病在床), his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. （2020.7高考山东卷）
3. But one day, a hurricane hit the area (台风袭击当地) where he lived, completely destroying his home (完全摧毁他的家) . （2021广州2月联考）

Part 4 第二步：助人过程呈现（想到办法+动作链）
（1）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...; 有了主意
1. It suddenly occurred to sb that 从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
2. (idea, thought...) occurred/came to sb.=...came/flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind
3. One's mind began to race

（2）动作链
Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.然后他从卡车上拿到了一把锯子（锯子），从路边的一根大木头上砍了一段。我们把它翻过来，把他的杰克顶放在上面，我们开始做生意。【八省联考】

Part 5第三步：皆大欢喜结局（感激+感动+升华）
（1）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before 从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...     
2. for an instant/moment一瞬间
 
（2）有了结果
1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that 从句
2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic. 接下来发生的非常奇妙

（3）感谢
1. Now, I was definitely grateful to her for extending a helping hand(伸出援手).（2021届湖南长沙市一中高三月考三）
2. Molly and Shawn met on Tuesday, and she says she couldn’t thank him enough (非常感谢他)and everyone involved in for what they did for her. （2020届山东省泰安市高三第二轮复习质量检测（二模）英语试题）

（4）感动
1. Needless to say, they were deeply moved (他们被深深地感动了), especially Bernard who finally found a way to make money for his family. （2020.7高考山东卷）
2. He was touched that I, a complete stranger, cared so much about him (如此关心他) and said he was willing to work.（2021广州2月联考）
3. In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words (感动得说不出话来). I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest. （2021年1月八省联考）
4. I nodded in gratitude, eyes glistening with held-back tears(眼睛因为强忍的泪水而闪耀). （2021年1月八省联考）
5. Stunned and moved(惊讶又感动), I stared at the note, feeling a pang of guilt about my previous thought that all people were indifferent.（2021年1月八省联考）

（5）升华
1. It is love that makes the world go round（是爱让世界运转）and Bernard felt it deep in his little heart.（2020.7高考山东卷）
2. Everyone was happy and sweet, exposing their sets of white teeth（露出他们洁白的牙齿）.（2020.7高考山东卷）
3. I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others（传递爱给其他人）. Just as a saying goes : “ Roses given, fragrance in hand（赠人玫瑰，手有余香）. ”（2021年1月八省联考）
4. From that day on, every time I meet someone who needs help, I always reach out to them, hoping to pass on the kindness （希望传递善意）that Mexican family offered me.（2021年1月八省联考）
5. Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference（会有很大不同）.



Part 6模拟演练
1． （2022·广东天河·二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
How exciting! Today is my basketball Grand-final! My team of six enthusiastic boys led by our coach, Jack, has worked extremely hard just to make the finals. My heart was pounding a hundred kilometres an hour as I walked into our home ground. As I hurried to our team bench, our opponents caught my attention. They seemed a lot taller and “meaner” looking.
Whistle blew. Five of us started on the court. Our opponent got hold of the ball first. They were unbelievably fast. They kept breaking our defences and kept scoring goals. Excited parents were cheering so much that their faces were as red as beetroots. Even our best, Bryce, could not stop our opponents from scoring, which annoyed him a lot. By half time, both teams were extremely exhausted and our opponents were ten goals ahead, which presented us with an enormous but achievable challenge.
Jack was awfully anxious as we were not playing anywhere near our best. He told us that we could still win if we made our transitions much quicker so that penalty shots came our way.He also directed us to rebound (抢断篮板) and position ourselves better to receive and score goals. Most important, he reminded us to play as a team.
Our team was all fired up. The second half started in our favour. We were as quick as lightning on the court. We were dribbling (运球), passing, shooting and rebounding without any mistakes. We caught our opponents by surprise. The scores were almost level. We were trailing only by one point. The crowd was growing wild with excitement, fuelling our confidence. At the same time, our opponents switched back to attention and started playing like what they did in the first half, making it harder for us to score.
One minute left! Our opponent threw in the ball but I managed to steal it! Our team was bursting with happiness! More opponents were heading my way and I had to pass the ball to Bryce. Instead of passing on the ball, he did the most unexpected thing. He tried to score from half court! He missed by miles!
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then I noticed Jack signaled to the referee for a pause.
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Whistle blew again and we came back to the court.
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参考答案：
Then I noticed Jack signaled to the referee for a pause. So we headed towards Jack and gathered around him. Somehow one of teammates began complaining about Bryce. Feeling frustrated and aggrieved, Bryce argued that he just tried to get scores. Jack looked into our eyes,saying, “It is easy to blame someone for mistake, but remember that basketball game is a team effort. We win together or lose together!” So ashamed was Bryce that he promised to keep calm and cooperate.
Whistle blew again and we came back to the court. Though our opponents had possession of the ball, I stole it once again and passed it to Bryce. Finding he got double teamed, Bryce managed to pass the ball to one of us. He shot. Yes! We made it! The final buzzer rang! We screamed with excitement and hugged together. Since this memorable basketball match, we have been ready for every battle. There is no limit to what we can accomplish as long as we play a team.
【解析】
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者和他们的队友在一场篮球赛中，上半场处于劣势，对方速度特别快，负了十个球。中场休息时间，在Bryce和教练的指导下调整战略，总结教训，准备下半场挽回局面。下半场我们奋力拼搏，只差一份持平比分。在最后一分钟里，球到了Bryce手中，他是我们球队最棒的，却失误错失一个机会。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后我注意到杰克示意裁判暂停一下。”可知，第一段可描写接下来团队聚在一起，和教练交流。
②由第二段首句内容“哨声又响了，我们回到了球场。”可知，第二段可描写最后一分钟的拼搏在场上团队协作，取得成功。
2.续写线索：申请暂停——和队友教练交流——策略——上场——团队合作——进球
3.词汇激活
行为类
①向……走去：walk towards/head towards
②牢记：remember/memorize/keep in mind
③完成，实现：accomplish/achieve/fulfil
情绪类
①沮丧：sad/frustrated/depressed/discouraged
②难忘的：memorable/unforgettable
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Feeling frustrated and aggrieved, Bryce argued that he just tried to get scores.（运用了现在分词做状语，及宾语从句）
[高分句型2]So ashamed was Bryce that he promised to keep calm and cooperate.（运用了so…that…句型及部分倒装）
[高分句型3]There is no limit to what we can accomplish as long as we play a team.（运用了what引导的宾语从句及as long as引导的条件状语从句）

2． （2022·福建泉州·三模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
What It Means to Serve
I didn’t continue college after graduation. I moved out of my family. With little work experience, I served as a waitress. But during the five years’ labor, I found myself burning calories running about only for a tip.
I had had enough so I moved to a smaller town hoping to pursue a college degree. I promised I would never serve people again - at least not in such way. It was time to serve myself. Luckily, I received a position as an afterschool program tutor at a local middle school, with the added benefit of completing English education degree. I had the opportunity to go big! The kid would need me - a role model and a trustworthy friend, I believed.
But my first day was welcomed by the students’ indifference (冷漠). The desks were messy and the whole room smelled of dirty gym socks. My excitement began to die down. I doubted whether the new job was a mistake. The playground activity was deafening while homework time was not much better. After my repeated persistence, they finally turned off the playground mode. But just a few minutes passed when I noticed two kids quarreling in the corner.
I supposed it was another little incident but one kid named Jeremy bothered me. He shouted at me for coming at him. And when I asked them to return to their seats, he slammed (用力摔) his backpack and grew mad as I tried to urge him to take the right attitude. “I don’t like you, homework and this afterschool program! All you guys do is yell at me. I’m never coming back.” he walked out of the classroom, slamming the door.
Naturally, I was so frustrated (挫败的). I wondered why I am here. Most kids disrespected me! I paused to take a deep breath. Then suddenly I thought to myself, “You said you would never serve people again, but you don’t understand what these kids really need.” At that moment, I remembered my middle-school life. I always had a poor attitude, never did my schoolwork, repeatedly got into fights, and disrespected my elders.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life.
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Realizing I was not different, I walked out into the hall and caught up with Jeremy. “I’m sorry, Jeremy. Could I have a talk with you?” I said, trying to be calm and sincere. He turned around, looked at me for a moment and nodded, “OK”. “Jeremy, could you tell me what have happened to you?” I asked. Hesitantly, Jeremy began to share with me about his story. From what he said, I knew his mother was killed in a car accident three months before. Worse still, his father, who was in deep sorrow, lost his job at the same time. After that, his father became bad-tempered and often shouted at him, ignoring all his requests. As he told me what was happening, he began to cry.
At that moment, my heart broke for this boy and his family life. I gently hugged him and patted him on the back. Then I walked him home and encouraged him to face life in a positive way. After that, I often chatted with Jeremy and helped him deal with his troubles. I even paid a visit to his father several times. As time went by, Jeremy behaved better and better and smiles often appeared on his face. At the end of the program, Jeremy hugged me tightly and thanked me again and again. At that moment, I suddenly realized what it meant to serve --- Get to know a person from the bottom of your heart and give what he needs.
【解析】
【导语】
本文以作者的经历为线索展开。作者高中毕业后，去做了一名服务员。五年之后，作者去一所中学担当了一个课外活动的老师。在第一堂课上，作者遇见了一个非常暴躁的学生—Jeremy。作者和Jeremy了解他的情况，了解了他悲惨的家庭生活。之后作者一直帮助Jeremy，并取得了成功。通过自己的经历，作者明白了为他人服务的真谛。
【详解】
1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“意识到我没有什么不一样，我走出去进入大厅，赶上了Jeremy。”可知，第一段可描写作者和Jeremy聊天，了解他的情况的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“在那一刻，我为这个男孩和他的家庭生活心碎了。”可知，第二段可描写作者帮助Jeremy，鼓励他，并且最终获得成功的故事。
2. 续写线索：询问情况——Jeremy讲述家庭情况——了解情况——鼓励帮助——Jeremy转变——感悟
3.词汇激活：
行为类①一谈话：talk with sb. / chat with sb. / have a conversation   ②同意：nod/agree     
情绪类① 感谢：showing his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful   ② 积极：positive attitude/act positively
【点睛】
[高分句型1]I said, trying to be calm and sincere.（现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] Worse still, his father, who was in deep sorrow, lost his job at the same time.（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3] I suddenly realized what it meant to serve.（what引导的宾语从句）

3． （2022·海南·模拟预测）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短义。
My knees started shaking, yet my body froze. It felt as though my soul departed my body and I had no control over it. Anxiously, I looked through the roster (名单) posted on the wall of the locker room. My heart was beating harder and harder as I slowly saw all my friends’ names on that list but could not find mine. At that moment, I froze. I just could not accept that all my friends were on the basketball team while I was not.
I was so convinced there was a mistake that I went and found the coach. “Hey coach, are you sure that the roster you posted is correct?” I asked anxiously, dreading (担心) his answer.
“Yes, the names on the list are finalized. Sorry if you did not make it this year, there is always next year,” the coach replied.
I could feel the hot, bitter tears filling my eyes, and I ran out of the room as fast as I could. Trying to forget about the situation, I headed over to the cafeteria to buy some food. I felt dead inside, like nothing mattered. Walking was such a burden that it felt as if I had a 100-pound weight tied to my backpack. My mind was also blank for the rest of the school day. Everything my teachers said went in one ear and out the other.
After school, as I walked to the parking lot to get picked up, I saw all my friends gathered near the rear of the lot, celebrating and joking around. I detoured (绕道) around the side of the school to avoid them, trying not to think about being the only one in our friend group failing to make the team.
I saw my father’s car pull up near the school lot, and I walked up to the car and got in. He smiled at me, played the radio, and started driving home.
注意∶1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Noticing my bad mood, he asked me what was wrong.
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Inspired by what my father said, I decided to work toward my goal.
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参考答案：
Noticing my bad mood, he asked me what was wrong. Full of sorrow, I told him tearfully, “I wanted to join our school basketball team so much and I practiced hard. But I didn’t make it.” Hearing what I said, my father comforted me, “I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down. Success is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. I believe you can make it.”
Inspired by what my father said, I decided to work toward my goal. I made a much tighter schedule from then on. I practiced hard for an hour every day to improve the basic skills and strength. To my delight, I was finally recognized by the coach, who said that I showed great talent in sports.
【解析】
【导语】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者满怀信心却没能进入校篮球队，作者感觉非常难过，心不在焉地熬到放学后爸爸开车来接作者的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“注意到我情绪不好，他问我怎么了。”可知，第一段可描写作者向爸爸讲述事情的经过及爸爸鼓励作者。
②由第二段首句内容“我被爸爸说的话所鼓舞，决定朝着我的目标努力。”可知，第二段可描写作者努力训练最终入选球队。
2.续写线索：
告诉爸爸为什么难过——爸爸安慰鼓励——努力训练——被教练认可
3.词汇激活
行为类
①告诉：tell/inform sb. of sth.
②训练：practice/train
③认可：recognize/accept
情绪类
①悲伤：sorrow/grief
②高兴：delight/happiness
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Hearing what I said, my father comforted me, “I hope that the unexpected failure will not let you down. （由连接词what和that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. To my delight, I was finally recognized by the coach, who said that I showed great talent in sports.（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）

4． （2022·福建莆田·二模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A long time ago, when I worked in Ahmedabad, we would often drive to Mount Abu for short trips—it took us anywhere between seven to eight hours to drive up. That year, my close relatives were visiting from Lucknow during the holidays, and we made a plan to visit Abu for three days. Since there were seven of us, including my brother’s family who also lived in Ahmedabad, we hired two cabs. We picked ourselves into the vehicles, stacked (堆放) our luggage on the carriers on top and started out.
A good time was bad by all, and soon it was time to return. During the journey back, we stopped at a Dhaba for tea and snacks near the Mehana district. That’s when I noticed suddenly that the rope with which the luggage was tied on and of the carriers had come loose and one of the suitcases was missing. It must have fallen off somewhere along the way.
Although it didn’t contain any valuables—just clothes and some cash, we decided to retrace our steps, drawing back four kilometres, looking for the bag. But luck wasn’t our friend: we could not locate it and returned to Ahmedabad depressed.
After about a month, one day, while in my office, I got a call from my assistant that a certain Mr. Shah wanted to see me. I was in the middle of a meeting so he was asked to wait. After I got done, I called him into my office.
I was looking after the development of small industries in the state at the time, so my immediate query was. “How can we help you? Do you want to set up an industry or are you facing any issues in your enterprise?”
To which he said, “No, sir. I have not come for any official help. It is a personal matter. Did you lose something recently?”
Of course, it all came back to me and I told him about the lost suitcase from the cab back from Mount Abu a month ago.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Then Shah told his side of the story.
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But the gentleman insisted on delivering the suitcase to me.
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参考答案：
 Then Shah told his side of the story. While driving home, he noticed a suitcase lying by the side of the road. He left a message at the Lost and Found, but no one approached him for the suitcase. About a month passed, he could do nothing but break open the lock and found my name and address inside. Words failed me to convey my thanks for his kindness and generosity. Of course, I mentioned that I would visit his residence in the evening and collect my bag.
But the gentleman insisted on delivering the suitcase to me. In the evening he and his wife came to my house with the suitcase. We chatted over tea. I thanked them again. It was not for the belongings but for the efforts they spared to find me. We remained in touch for quite some time afterwards, but somehow we lost touch with each other. Hats off to him, the man who makes me realize that kindness still rules the world.
【解析】
【导语】
本文讲述了很久以前，作者和亲人开车去旅行，把行李堆放在行李架上。旅行结束后，返程途中休息时，作者发现因为系着行李的绳子松了，导致一个行李箱不见了，作者沿途寻找，但并没有找到。大约一个月后的一天，当作者在公司时，一位先生请求见他，这位先生问作者最近是否丢了什么东西，作者想到了丢行李的事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后，沙阿讲述了自己的故事。”可知，第一段可描写沙阿是如何捡到作者的行李及找到作者的。
②由第二段首句内容“但这位先生坚持要把手提箱交给我。”可知，第二段可描写沙阿亲自把手提箱交给作者及作者对他的感谢，并描写通过这件事作者的感悟。
2.续写线索：沙阿发现手提箱——沙阿找到作者——沙阿把手提箱还给作者——作者表示感谢——作者的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.除了做……外，别无选择：could do nothing but do/have no choice but to do
②.保持联系：remain in touch/keep in touch
③.与某人失去联系：lose touch with sb./lose contact with sb.
情绪类
①.表达某人的感谢：convey one’s thanks/express one’s thanks
②.向某人致敬：hats off to sb./pay one’s respect to sb.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I mentioned that I would visit his residence in the evening and collect my bag.（由that引导的宾语从句作mentioned的宾语）
[高分句型2]. Hats off to him, the man who makes me realize that kindness still rules the world.（由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的宾语从句作realize的宾语）

5． （2022·福建福建·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A New Addition to the Family
For the initial ten years of his life, Victor was the prince of the household. As he was an only child, his parents petted him and showered all their love and attention on him. Whatever toys his parents bought, they were always meant for him. Whatever food was in the refrigerator, there was no one to compete with him to polish it off first. Victor could leave his toys or books around the house with complete ease of mind, knowing that there was no one who would get their hands on his belongings and cause any damage.
However, all that was to change overnight when Victor’s parents brought back his new baby sister, Lina, from the hospital. With her rosy cheeks, wide open eyes and angelic smile, Lina caught the hearts of her parents, grandparents and relatives. Everyone focused their attention on the cute bunch of joy. Whenever she cried, her mother or father would rush to her bed. She simply cried because she wanted to be carried. There was little time left for Victor.
Now that Victor’s mother had his baby sister to take care of, she expected Victor himself to do most of the chores he can do. Victor was asked to clean his own room, iron his own school uniform and clean his own shoes. Before Lina’s arrival, he had never lifted a finger to help out with these tasks. The whole family also went out less because it was unhealthy to expose Lina to the bacteria(细菌) being in the outside world too often.
Victor felt neglected by his parents. He felt that they loved Lina more than him. As a result, he tried to attract his parents’ attention by becoming resistant. One evening, Victor’s parents were called up by his teacher because Victor had got into a fight at school. His teacher had noticed Victor’s behaviour and work attitude changing downwards in the past two months. Before that, he had been a model student.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Upon hearing the teacher’s feedback, Victor’s parents got lost in thought.
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Victor realized that his parents still cared for him.
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参考答案：
Upon hearing the teacher’s feedback, Victor’s parents got lost in thought. Since their second child Linda was born, they have devoted all their attention to her. To some degree, they neglected victor’s feelings. After all, he wanted to share the love from parents with Linda. So they made a decision that they should treat the two children equally. Gradually, something changed in the family. After school Victor often found some delicious food and new toys on his desk. When he did his homework, his father came to his room and sat beside him, reading a book quietly, which made him comfortable and warm. At that time, his mother was taking care of his sister Linda. After he finished his homework, his mother asked him to play with Linda. Seeing her sweet smile, he felt so happy.
               Victor realized that his parents still cared for him.So he was determined to help his parents take good care of his sister. Having finished his homework, he learned to clean their rooms and do all the chores that he could. While his mother was cooking, he played with his sister happily. He came to realize that he should take responsibility for the family because he grew up.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以一个小男孩Victor的感受为线索展开，讲述了在Victor的妹妹Linda出生以后，父母将全部的注意力集中到她身上，这让他感到被忽略，因此他用对抗来引起父母的注意。最后父母也意识到这一点，就做出改变，让Victor重新感受到父母的爱。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“听到老师的反馈，父母陷入沉思”可知，第一段可描写父母对自己行为的反省。
②由第二段首句内容“Victor意识到父母仍旧关爱他”可知，第二段可描写Victor感受到父母仍旧爱他后的积极行动。
2.续写线索：沉思——反省——改变——陪孩子——感受到爱——回报
3.词汇激活
行为类
①全身心投入：devote all one’s attention to / put one’s heart into
②决定：make a decision/ make up one’s mind
③.照看：take care of / look after
情绪类
①感到高兴：feel happy/ feel pleased
②幸福地：happily / merrily
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. So they made a decision that they should treat the two children equally.(运用同位语从句）
[高分句型2]. Having finished his homework, he learned to clean their rooms and do all the chores that he could. (运用现在分词作状语以及定语从句）

6． （2022·重庆·一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My father is a practical man. He can’t explain calculus(微积分)，but he can tell you how much pressure a boiler needs. He can’t draw an architect’s plan, but he can tell you if the pipes and wiring will sustain the structure. He put himself through night school to become an engineer, but that was only after he worked a slumber, an electrician, and a mechanic.
One day we walked by a toy store window. Sitting in the comer was the most unusual doll-house I’d ever seen. It was shaped liked an upturned log（原木）. Little oval windows decorated with nice curtains and framed by tiny balconies were cut into it.
“Oh, Daddy,” I said, “isn’t it beautiful? Do you think Santa Claus will bring it to me?”
Dad looked at the $100 price tag, silent — that’s a rather big figure in those days. “I think even Santa couldn’t afford this house,” he joked, lifting up his belt as he often does when he’s nervous. “Maybe one day, sweetheart.”
On Christmas morning, I awoke early and raced downstairs. In the dim light, I made out a lot of wrapped boxes under the tree — but none large enough to contain my dollhouse. Dad could see my disappointment He pulled me onto his lap and gently told me how, as a boy, he had wanted a red wagon, but his father couldn’t afford one. He said he made his own from wood and old wheels he found. “I’ll make one for you,” Dad assured me.
And right after Christmas, despite all the unfinished projects at home, he started it. I naively（幼稚地）thought it was an easy toy to make, but every step of the long process was considerably more complex than I had anticipated. Night after night, Dad would come home from his job dead tired, yet he’d always find time to work on the log house. In the dark yellow electric light, Dad was always busy creating my dollhouse.
要求：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I hesitated, wondering if I should help my father.
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In all, it took us one month of hard work.
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参考答案：
I hesitated, wondering if I should help my father. “Then we’ll make one together,” he told me. First, Dad cut leftover board into strips and nailed them in a circle on a wood base, showing me how to make the rough edges smooth. Then he sawed the base in half and attached hinges to one side so the “log” would swing open and shut. He gathered pieces of wallpaper, matching patterns as carefully. He painted the outside with shades of brown, and added a tiny path to the front door--made from real concrete.
In all, it took us one month of hard work. But the log house was the greatest gift a child could ask for. Long after I gave up playing with dolls, I would still sometimes bring it down from the upper floor just to admire it and remember those months I watched Dad bring my dream to life. Dad has spent his life creating, mending and improving the most valued parts of mine. He’s given me the greatest treasure a father can give.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，作者讲述了父亲亲自动手为自己制作玩具屋，给了作者一个父亲所能给予的东西。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“我犹豫了一下，想知道我是否应该帮助我的父亲。”可知，第一段可描写作者和父亲一起制作玩具屋的经过。
由第二段首句内容“总共，我们花了一个月，努力工作。”可知，第二段可描写作者非常珍惜玩具屋以及感受到的浓浓的父爱。
2.续写线索：一起制作玩具屋——父亲精心制作——珍爱玩具屋——感受父爱
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.把……系在……：attach…to…/tie…to
②.收集：gather/ collect sth. together 
③.匹配：match/go with
情绪类
①.喜欢：admire
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. First, Dad cut leftover board into strips and nailed them in a circle on a wood base, showing me how to make the rough edges smooth.（运用了现在分词作状语和“疑问词+不定式”作宾语）
[高分句型2]. But the log house was the greatest gift a child could ask for.（运用了省略了关系词的定语从句）
[高分句型3]. Long after I gave up playing with dolls, I would still sometimes bring it down from the upper floor just to admire it and remember those months I watched Dad bring my dream to life.（运用了after引导的状语从句，不定式作状语，省略了关系词的定语从句）

7． 读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Dawn came slowly. A shaft of sunlight reached into the 4-meter-deep crater（弹坑），making the metal of the bomb shine. The boys were numb and tight, and hungry. They tried not to look at the huge shape of the bomb that appeared over them.
Harry suddenly opened his eyes and seized Jack's arm. "Listen!" he whispered. Jack's eye widened instantly, and both boys strained their ears. They could hear a man talking softly. The voice seemed a long way off. Jack went to shout, but Harry clamped his hand over Jack's mouth. "Don't shout/' he hissed（发出嘘声），"We'll be blown into pieces."
The soft voice came nearer and nearer. Suddenly, an army captain appeared at the top of crater. He was talking to a mouthpiece（话筒）around his neck. He stopped talking when he saw the boys. "What the..." he said, “Who are you?" Hairy found his voice, "Jack and Harry Brown." "Is that dog dead?" asked the captain. “No： he’s sleeping," said Harry.
The captain spoke into the mouthpiece again, “Sergeant（中士）," he said, stopped and took a breath before he went on. “There are two kids and a dog down here." Then the captain crouched down and stared closely at the bomb. “Don't move and don't speak," he said, "or we'll all go up." He began talking quietly to his sergeant.
Jack and Harry were too stiff to move. They held Raf, the dog, tightly and waited. Another man appeared at the top of the crater. "I thought so," he said, "It's them all right?"
"It’s Old Tin Hat!" whispered Jack. Old Tin Hat was carrying a ladder. He and the captain lowered the ladder into the loose earth next to the two boys. "Keep still," the captain warned them. As the captain held on at the top. Old Tin Hat started to come down the ladder very slowly, very gently, step by step. At last, he reached the bottom, and with one movement, he lifted Jack on his back. Harry watched as Jack was carried up. It seemed to take an age.
 
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With a sudden fall of earth, Old Tin Hat froze halfway up. 
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Old Tin Hat pulled Harry onto his back, carrying Raf under his arm.  
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翻译小练习：
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
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2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。
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3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了，温柔而谨慎。
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4. 最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
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5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。
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6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
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7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
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8. 经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。
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9. 所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
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10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
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11. 在那儿，“妈妈！”Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，炸弹已安全运走。
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参考答案：
1. 哈利吓得喘不过气来，但幸运的是那家伙很稳定。
Harry gasped with terror but luckily the ladder was steady.

2. Old Tin Hat又起来了。他一到山顶，手就伸出来，杰克就不见了。
Old Tin Hat started up again. No sooner had he got to the top than hands reached out and Jack disappeared.

3. Old Tin Hat又从梯子上下来了，温柔而谨慎。
Again down the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiously.

4. 最终，他加入了哈里和英国皇家空军。
Eventually, he joined Harry and Raf.

5. 尽管哈利暗示那只狗是走在最后，但他坚持说他们会在一起。
Though he suggested that dog went last, Harry insisted that they would be together.

6. Old Tin Hat第二次开始爬梯子。
Old Tin Hat started to climb the ladder for the second time.

7. 男孩和狗的重量使他喘不过气来。
The weight of the boy and the dog made him gasp.

8. 经过巨大的努力，他们到达了火山口的顶部。
With great efforts, they came to the top of the crater.

9. 所有人都获救了！远处传来微弱的欢呼声。
Everybody was rescued! A faint cheer rose from a long way off.

10. 一群人挤在栅栏后面。
A group of people crowded behind the barrier.

11. 在那儿，“妈妈！”Hurry冲过去，紧紧地抱着妈妈。后来，消息传来，炸弹已安全运走。
And there was, “Mom!” Hurry rushed over, hugging his mom tightly. Later, news came that the bomb was taken away, safe.

参考范文：
With a sudden fall of earth, Old Tin Hat froze halfway up. 
Harry gasped with terror but luckily the ladder was steady. Old Tin Hat started up again. No sooner had he got to the top than hands reached out and Jack disappeared. Again down the ladder came Old Tin Hat, gently and cautiously. Eventually, he joined Harry and Raf. Though he suggested that dog went last, Harry insisted that they would be together.

Old Tin Hat pulled Harry onto his back, carrying Raf under his arm.
Old Tin Hat started to climb the ladder for the second time. The weight of the boy and the dog made him gasp. With great efforts, they came to the top of the crater. Everybody was rescued! A faint cheer rose from a long way off. A group of people crowded behind the barrier. And there was, “Mom! Hurry rushed over, hugging his mom tightly. Later, news came that the bomb was taken away, safe.


8． 读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a Saturday afternoon. The color of the sky was changing, first light gray, then dark gray, and finally dark and dense. The wind was blowing heavily, and the trees were swaying in the strong wind. It began to rain cats and dogs. Soon, the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
 In such a stormy afternoon, My mother took my five-year-old brother, Christopher, and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper. "So many toys,“ the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color, “ that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”
 Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited. We ran across the parking lot, through the cold and biting rain, as fast as our little legs could carry us. We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella, which never worked when she wanted it to. "Christine! Take care of your young brother!“ Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
 “Christine! I'm going to find the Lego section(乐高积木区）！There's a new pirate ship I want, and I have four dollars! Maybe I can buy it!“ Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly. I only half heard him. I took a right turn and, to my wide-eyed delight, found myself in the midst of the Barbie(芭比）World.
 I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside. I jumped at the noise, dropping the doll to the floor. The lights flickered(闪烁）once and died, covering everything in a blanket of blackness. Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds, casting frightening shadows on my mind.
 Paragraph 1：
“Oh no,” I thought, “Where’s Christopher?”  
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“Christine, I’m here.” 
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翻译小练习：
1. 我当场被吓呆了，我觉得有必要看看，拥抱我的弟弟，确保他没事。
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2. 我的胃扭曲了。我在黑暗中在过道上跑来跑去，惊慌失措地填满了我的小胸膛，使我呼吸困难。
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3. 我撞到了糖果，被玩具绊倒了，还疯狂地叫着我弟弟的名字。
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4. 虽然我很着急，但还是找不到他。沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的脸上滑落，但我继续奔跑。
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5. 激动得我喘不过气来——在乐高过道里，我找到了克里斯托弗。
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6. 他独自站在海盗船旁，一动不动。
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7. 我松了一口气哭了起来，搂着他，紧紧地拥抱着他。
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8. 他拥抱着我说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克莉丝汀，你会找到我的。”
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9. 然后，我拉着他的手，我们去寻找我们的母亲，她一定在商店里拼命地找我们。
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参考答案：
1. 我当场被吓呆了，我觉得有必要看看，拥抱我的弟弟，确保他没事。
Scared and frozen on the spot, I felt the need to see, hug my brother and make sure he was all right.

2. 我的胃扭曲了。我在黑暗中在过道上跑来跑去，惊慌失措地填满了我的小胸膛，使我呼吸困难。
My stomach twisted. I ran up and down the aisles in the dark, panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.

3. 我撞到了糖果，被玩具绊倒了，还疯狂地叫着我弟弟的名字。
I knocked into displays of candies and tripped over toys, while calling my brother's name like crazy.

4. 虽然我很着急，但还是找不到他。沮丧和恐惧的泪水从我的脸上滑落，但我继续奔跑。
Anxious as I was, I could not find him. Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face, but I continued to run.

5. 激动得我喘不过气来——在乐高过道里，我找到了克里斯托弗。
Excitement took my breath away — there in the Lego aisle I found Christopher.

6. 他独自站在海盗船旁，一动不动。
He was standing alone, perfectly still, next to the pirate ship set.

7. 我松了一口气哭了起来，搂着他，紧紧地拥抱着他。
I began to cry in relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.

8. 他拥抱着我说：“我知道如果我在这里等着，克莉丝汀，你会找到我的。”
He hugged me back, saying, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be able to find me.”

9. 然后，我拉着他的手，我们去寻找我们的母亲，她一定在商店里拼命地找我们。
Then, I took his hand in mine and we went to look for our mother, who must be desperately searching the store for us.

参考范文：
Paragraph 1：
“Oh no，” I thought, “Where's Christopher？” Scared and frozen on the spot, I felt the need to see, hug my brother and make sure he was all right. My stomach twisted. I ran up and down the aisles in the dark, panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe. I knocked into displays of candies and tripped over toys, while calling my brother's name like crazy. Anxious as I was, I could not find him. Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face, but I continued to run.
Paragraph 2：
“Christine, I'm here.” Excitement took my breath away — there in the Lego aisle I found Christopher. He was standing alone, perfectly still, next to the pirate ship set. I began to cry in relief, throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly. He hugged me back, saying, “I knew if I waited here, Christine, you would be able to find me.” Then, I took his hand in mine and we went to look for our mother, who must be desperately searching the store for us.

9． 读后续写模拟专练03
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
There was a thick forest on the sides of a mountain. Many kinds of animals lived in the forest. A deer was eating grass and leaves with her two young ones. The young ones wandered happily here and there. The deer followed her fawns （幼鹿）into a cave. The deer was frightened because it was a tiger's cave. There were bones of dead animals all over the cave. Fortunately, the tiger was not inside the cave at the time.
The deer was trying to lead her young ones out of the cave when she heard a loud roar. She saw the tiger at a distance coming towards the cave. It was dangerous to go out of the cave now. She thought of a plan. The deer raised her voice and shouted, "My deer young children do not weep. I shall capture （捕捉）a tiger for you to eat. You can have a good dinner."
The tiger heard these words and became frightened. He thought, "Whose is that strange voice from the cave? A dangerous animal is staying inside to capture me. I shall run away to escape death." The tiger began to run away from there as fast as possible.
A jackal （胡狼）saw the running tiger. “Why are you running in great fear?" the jackal asked. The tiger said, "My friend, a powerful and fierce animal is in my cave. The young ones are crying for a tiger to eat. The mother is promising to capture a tiger for them. So, I am running away."
The cunning jackal was now sure the tiger was a coward （懦夫）.It said, "Don't be afraid. No animal is fiercer or stronger than a tiger Let us go together to find out.”
But the tiger said, "I do not want to take a chance. You may run away. I will be left alone to die. So, I will not come with you."
The jackal said, "Trust me. Let us knot （打结）our tails together. Then I will not be able to leave you." The tiger agreed unwillingly to this proposal. So the jackal tied their tails in a knot. Now they walked towards the cave together.
注意：
所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
应使用至少5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词；
续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
Para. 1
The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together. 
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The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him. 
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翻译小练习：
1. 她对着站在山洞里的孩子们喊道。
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2.我亲爱的孩子们。我请求我的朋友。聪明的豺狼，为我们捉到一只老虎。
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3. 看那豺狼为我们捉到了一只老虎。
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4. 他把老虎的尾巴绑在尾巴上。这是为了防止老虎逃跑。你很快就会把老虎当晚餐了。
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5. 所以，老虎决定从站在洞穴里的可怕的动物身上逃脱。
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6. 他开始跑。他忘了那只豺狼。他把豺狼拖过岩石和荆棘。
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7. 在疯狂的逃跑中，豺狼被夹在两块岩石之间。老虎使劲地拉。
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8. 他的尾巴被切断了。豺狼在这次事故中丧生。
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9. 没有尾巴的老虎跑向森林的另一部分。鹿和她的幼鹿离开了老虎洞。
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10. 他们安全地加入了牛群。头脑和智慧的存在可以使人免于危险。
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参考答案：
1. 她对着站在山洞里的孩子们喊道。
She shouted towards her children standing inside the cave.

2.我亲爱的孩子们。我请求我的朋友。聪明的豺狼，为我们捉到一只老虎。
My dear children. I requested my friend. The clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us.

3. 看那豺狼为我们捉到了一只老虎。
Now look the jackal has captured a tiger for us.

4. 他把老虎的尾巴绑在尾巴上。这是为了防止老虎逃跑。你很快就会把老虎当晚餐了。
He has tied the tiger’s tad to his tail. This is to prevent the tiger from escaping. You will soon have the tiger for dinner.

5. 所以，老虎决定从站在洞穴里的可怕的动物身上逃脱。
So, the tiger decided to escape from the terrible animal standing inside his cave.

6. 他开始跑。他忘了那只豺狼。他把豺狼拖过岩石和荆棘。
He started running. He forgot about the jackal. He dragged the jackal over rocks and thorns.

7. 在疯狂的逃跑中，豺狼被夹在两块岩石之间。老虎使劲地拉。
In the mad escape the jackal was caught between two rocks. The tiger pulled with all his might.

8. 他的尾巴被切断了。豺狼在这次事故中丧生。
His tail got cut. The jackal was killed in this accident.

9. 没有尾巴的老虎跑向森林的另一部分。鹿和她的幼鹿离开了老虎洞。
The tail-less tiger ran away to another part of the forest. The deer and her young ones left the tiger’s cave.

10. 他们安全地加入了牛群。头脑和智慧的存在可以使人免于危险。
They joined their herd safely. Presence of mind and intelligence can save one from dangerous situations.

参考范文：
 Para.l
The deer saw the jackal and the tiger coming together. She again raised her voice. She shouted towards her children standing inside the cave. “My dear children. I requested my friend. The clever jackal, to capture a tiger for us. Now look the jackal has captured a tiger for us. He has tied the tiger’s tad to his tail. This is to prevent the tiger from escaping. You will soon have the tiger for dinner.
Para.2
The tiger was shocked to hear this and he was sure now the jackal cheated him. So, the tiger decided to escape from the terrible animal standing inside his cave. He started running. He forgot about the jackal. He dragged the jackal over rocks and thorns. In the mad escape the jackal was caught between two rocks. The tiger pulled with all his might. His tail got cut. The jackal was killed in this accident. The tail-less tiger ran away to another part of the forest. The deer and her young ones left the tiger’s cave. They joined their herd safely. Presence of mind and intelligence can save one from dangerous situations.


Part 7名师精讲
01---开车半路救人
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文
A young and successful manager had a new Jaguar, whose side* door was dented （凹陷的）. The damage was very noticeable, but the manager never bothered to repair it. He kept the dent there to remind him of one afternoon as well as this message：Don't go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!
The manager was traveling down a neighborhood street, going a bit too fast in his new. Jaguar. He was watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars and slowed down when he thought he saw something. As his car passed, no children appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the Jag's side door! He braked sharply and drove the Jag backward to the spot where the brick had been thrown. The angry driver then jumped out of the car, grabbed the nearest kid and pushed him up against a parked car, shouting, “What was that all about and who are you?”
The young boy apologized. "Please mister ... please, I’m sorry. . . I didn't know what else to do," he begged.
“I threw the brick because no one else would stop. . ." With tears coming down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.
“My elder brother fell out of his wheelchair and I can't lift him up. he said.
Still crying, the boy asked the astonished manager, "Would you please help me get him back into his wheelchair? He's hurt and he's too heavy for me. ”
Moved beyond words, he hurried to the spot with the boy. Another boy was lying on the ground bleeding. He took out his clean handkerchief and touched lightly at the fresh scrapes （擦 伤）and cuts. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car.
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In fifteen minutes, they arrived at the nearest hospital.
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【写作特训】
1. Don't go through life so fast that ______________________________(必须有人向你扔砖头才能引起你的注意)！
2. ______________________________(他泪流满面), the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.
3. ______________________________(他感动得说不出话来), he hurried to the spot with the boy.
4. _____________________________(他看了一眼就知道了) that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.
5. ______________________________(慢慢地，他把残疾人扶上汽车后座), while the younger brother sating beside to take care of him.
6. Starting the car quickly again, ______________________________(他冲向最近的医院).
7. The manager got out the wheelchair and ______________________________(把伤残者抱进车里，急忙把他推到急救中心).
8. At this time, the younger boy and his parents came to him and _____________________________(向他表示衷心的感谢) .

【范文赏析】
Paragraph 1:
Luckily, he had a first-aid kit in the car. Immediately, he took out a bandage from the kit, and lied it lightly around the wound. Slowly, he got the disabled into the back seat of the car, while the younger brother sating beside to take care of him. Then the manager folded the wheelchair and put it into the trunk. Starting the car quickly again, he rushed toward the nearest hospital. On the way, he handed his smart phone to the younger brother to call their parents, and constantly comforted the two brothers to take it easy.
Paragraph 2:
In fifteen minute, they arrived at the nearest hospital. The manager got out the wheelchair and lifted the disabled into it and hurriedly pushed him to the emergency center. When giving the injured boy to the medical workers, he got released. At this time, the younger boy and his parents came to him and gave him heartfelt thanks. Finally he drove his car to work, with the side door still dented.
【写作特训答案】
1. Don't go through life so fast that someone has to throw a brick at you to get your attention!
2. With tears coming down his face, the little boy pointed to a spot just around a parked car.
3. Moved beyond words, he hurried to the spot with the boy.
4. A quick look told him that the wound was serious, the disabled must be taken to the hospital at once.
5. Slowly, he got the disabled into the back seat of the car, while the younger brother sating beside to take care of him.
6. Starting the car quickly again, he rushed toward the nearest hospital.
7. The manager got out the wheelchair and lifted the disabled into it and hurriedly pushed him to the emergency center.
8. At this time, the younger boy and his parents came to him and gave him heartfelt thanks.

02---马戏团购票
读后续写  阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
  Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter.
     This family made a big impression on me. There were eight children, all probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn't have a lot of money.
     Their clothes were not expensive, but they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of them standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, holding hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants, and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice.
     One could sense they had never been to the circus before. It promised to be highlight of their young lives. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be. The mother was holding her husband’s hand, looking up at him as if to say, “You are my knight in shining armor.”
     He was smiling and responding in pride, looking back at her as if to say, “You got that right.” The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted. He proudly responded, “Please let me buy eight children's tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus.”
     The ticket lady gave the price. The man's wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lips began to shake. The father leaned a little closer and asked, “How much did you say?”
     The ticket lady again quoted the price. The man didn't have enough money.
     How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn't have enough money to take them to the circus?
     Actually we were not wealthy in any sense. So I understand how the kids would feel. I felt sorry for them.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
Paragraph 1
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground.
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Paragraph 2
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets.
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【写作特训】
1. Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I ______________________________(我们排队买马戏团的票).
2. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, ______________________________(尽可能骄傲地站着).
3. The man's wife let go of his hand, ______________________________(她低下头，他的嘴唇开始颤抖).
4. ______________________________(父亲靠得更近一点问道), while the younger brother sating beside to take care of him.
5. Then ______________________________(他捡起它，拍了拍那人的肩膀说), “Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket.’
6. He knew what was going on, ______________________________(他直视着我爸爸的眼睛，双手握住我爸爸的手) and squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill..
7. ______________________________(他的嘴唇颤抖着，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来), he replied, “Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.”
8. _____________________________(他停顿了一会儿), as if wandering in his memory.

参考范文： 
Paragraph 1:
Seeing what was going on, my dad put his hand in his pocket, pulled out a $20 bill and dropped it on the ground. Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said, “Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket.’ The man turned around and saw the money. He knew what was going on, he looked straight into my dad’s eyes, took my dad’s hand in both of his, squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill, and with his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied, “Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.”
Paragraph 2:
That day my father and I went back to our car and drove home without any tickets. We didn’t go to the circus that night, when I asked dad why he did so, Dad said, “My child, it was a desperate, heartbreaking and embarrassing situation for a father. Surely he wasn’t begging for a handout, but he reminded me of my father, when I was young.” He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory. “We should appreciate what we have obtained from life and seize every opportunity to help others. We didn’t go to the circus tonight, but we didn’t go without. Now, who wants an ice cream?”

【写作特训答案】
1. Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus.
2. The father and mother were at the head of the pack, standing proud as could be.
3. The man's wife let go of his hand, her head dropped, and his lips began to shake.
4. The father leaned a little closer and asked, “How much did you say?”
5. Then he picked it up and tapped the man on the shoulder and said, “Excuse me, sir, this fell out of your pocket.’
6. He knew what was going on, he looked straight into my dad’s eyes, took my dad’s hand in both of his, and squeezed tightly onto the $20 bill.
7. With his lip shaking and a tear running down his cheek, he replied, “Thank you, thank you, sir. This really means a lot to me and my family.”
8. He paused for a while, as if wandering in his memory.






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