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书面表达 “六步走”“六步走”指的是：一审、二列、三扩、四连、五美、六抄。 一审  审文体、要求、人称、时态、内容(主题二列  列提纲,确定文章框架,列全要点三扩 扩写句子在主的基础上添枝加叶四连  连句成文,句子与段落之间适当加入连接词五美  美化文章,使用修饰词、复合句、谚语、俗语等六抄  书写工整，卷面整洁注意：1．仔细审题，切忌急于下笔。对于所提供的材料要认真分析，反复推敲，抓住要点，掌握大意。在审题过程中应大概确定写作目标、文章格式、体裁等。2．考生应综合分析所提供的语言信息和语言材料，找出其内在联系，把它们有机地组织起来，编拟出要点提纲。3．尽量使用自己最熟悉、最有把握的句型和短语表达，但也要尽量灵活变通，使用多种句型句式，避免重复、单调。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。4．用英语思维和表达，切忌汉语式英语。5．行文要连贯，语句要通顺，层次要清楚。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则，因此考生应尽量使用一些表示并列、递进、转折、总结等的过渡词进行加工整理，使文章连贯、自然、流畅。6．通读文章，检查改错。作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，考试时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：(1)查格式。特别是应用文的格式，如书信、通知等，注意检查各要素是否齐全。(2)查时态。检查通篇文章时态是否正确，特别是从句中的时态一致问题。(3)查句式。看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确等(如宾语从句的语序)；看语言表达是否流畅，切忌将题目要求中的内容逐句译成英语。(4)查动词。看谓语动词时态是否使用得当、主谓是否一致等。(5)查习语、搭配。看作文中使用的习语、搭配是否符合英语表达习惯等。(6)查单词拼写、标点符号和大小写。尤其要注意检查动词的过去分词拼写形式、名词的单复数形式，检查书写是否规范，有无拼写、标点等笔误。 例1随着生活水平的提高，人们越来越关注健康。下周你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Living a Healthy Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如李芳要参加演讲比赛，请你以“李芳”的名义写一篇演讲稿。参考要点：1. 饮食（好的饮食习惯、多吃蔬菜水果……）；2.运动（骑自行车、打球……）；3.……要求：1. 从不同的角度谈论；2.100 词左右，不计入总词数；3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：本文就“健康生活”写一篇演讲稿，故文体为应用文； 以“李芳”的名义谈谈对健康生活方式的认识，人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时；100 词左右，文中不能出现真实姓名和校名。【写作指导】开头：引出话题健康生活很重要（It’s important to）正文：阐述学英语的好方法1.  养成良好的饮食习惯，多吃蔬菜水果（vegetables and fruit）2. 作息：保证足够的睡眠，合理安排时间，早睡早起（enough sleep， go to bed early and get upearly）3. 卫生：勤洗手，不随意丢垃圾，勤打扫房间，保持空气清新（wash hands， litter，keep the air fresh）。结尾：总结话题我们生活得越健康，我们就会感到越开心（thehealthier...the happier...） 【参考范文】Living a Healthy LifeHello, everyone. I’m Li Fang. It’s nice to give a speech about living a healthy life.It’s important to live a healthy life.First of all, we need to form good eating habits. We’d better eat more vegetables and fruit. We shouldn’t have too much meat or sugar.Second, it’s important for us to have enough sleep. So we should plan our time carefully so that we can go to bed early and get up early.Last, keeping clean is also important. We must wash our hands often so that we can prevent some diseases from spreading. We shouldn’t drop litter everywhere. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to clean our rooms every day. We can open the windows to keep the air fresh.In a word, the healthier life we live, the happier we will feel.记叙说明类写作记叙说明类写作常用句型How time flies！时光飞逝！I really had a good time today.我今天过得很愉快。I've learned a lot from it.我从中学到了很多。I will remember it forever.我永远不会忘记的。Today, I went to...今天，我去……Although we were tired, we were still very happy.虽然我们很累，但是我们很高兴。例2天气经常影响着我们的心情，有时候我们会因为下雨或者起风而觉得心情低落，或者因为阳光明媚、万里无云而开心。请以“My Favorite Weather”为题，用英语写一篇 90 词左右的短文。写作要点：1. 介绍你最喜欢的天气；2.你喜欢这种天气的原因；3.你在这种天气里喜欢做的事。要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；2.书写工整、规范；3.根据所给内容和参考词汇，可适当发挥；注意：1. 词数 90 词左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。2.文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；参考词汇： 新鲜的 fresh；户外活动 outdoor sports；享受自然之美 enjoy the beauty of nature；骑车ride bike【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息： 写出自己最喜欢的天气及原因，并介绍在这种天气里能做的事，因此文体为说明文；介绍自己喜欢的天气，因此时态为一般现在时，人称用第一人称；开头已给出，不计入总词数，词数 90 左右；文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。【写作指导】 要点提示素材串联    开头：说明最喜欢的天气我最喜欢晴天（sunny day）    正文：介绍喜欢的原因1. 空气清新使人舒适（ fresh air, make me comfortable）     2.可以进行户外活动：登山、骑自行车、踢足  球等（ play soccer, climb the mountains, ride  bikes） 结尾：总结全文晴天使我感到开心（feel happy）   【参考范文】 My Favorite WeatherMy favorite weather is the sunny day.The blue sky and white clouds are quite beautiful. Besides, the fresh air makes me comfortable. The most exciting thing on sunny days is to go out to do some outdoor sports.I can play soccer with my good friends on the grass. This is one of the best sports for us to relax ourselves. Sometimes we get together to climb the mountains to enjoy the beauty of nature. Riding bike is also another sport I can do on sunny days.I feel happy on sunny days. So I like sunny days best. How about you? 专题训练一Julian所在班级将进行以"学会学习"为主题的英语演讲比赛．假如你是Julian，请根据下表所提示的要点和内容，写一份英文演讲稿．要点内容增强动力（strengthen motivation）明确目标；相信自己；培养兴趣（或自拟内容）优化习惯（make habits better）勤于动脑；自主先学；劳逸结合（或自拟内容）讲究方法（pay attention to methods）主动发问；…（请考生自拟两点内容）注意：1．演讲稿中必须包含所给要点，具体内容可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译．2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数．3．演讲稿中请勿提及真实校名及姓名．【参考范文】Hello，everyone！I'm glad to be here to share my ideas of"Learn how to learn"．First，I think you should strengthen motivation and believe yourself．You also should have a great interest in learning．Second，you should  make habits of studying better．It's important for you to learn quickly and better．You should use your head as often as you can．It will make you clever．And them you should learn by yourself．Finally，you should pay attention to methods．Remember when you are tired，you should have a good rest．As the saying goes"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"Last but not least，you should ask your teachers when you have any questions．Don't be shy，just tryI hope everyone will enjoy learning．Thanks for listening．二今年年初，你们学校组织同学们学习“八礼四仪”，并开展了一个“争做文明市民”的活动。同学们在人际交往，社会公德方面都比以前有了很大进步。请你根据下表所提示的要点，以To be a civilized citizen为题，用写一篇英语短文，介绍同学们现在的表现，并谈谈你对这个活动的看法。 表现人际交往尊敬他人  诚信友善乐于助人  礼貌待人社会公德遵守交规  爱护环境宽容礼让  (自拟一点)感受你对这个活动的看法（请考生自拟一点内容） 注意：1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2. 词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。【参考范文】To be a civilized citizenOur school organized an educational activity called “To be a civilized citizen” at the beginning of the year. All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways. It’s really nice to see the students being polite now. They know it’s important to respect the old and care for the young. They also realize they should have good manners and be honest. As a result, they are always friendly to others. Moreover, they are willing to help people any time. When they are on the bus, they always give their seats to people in need. They are always patient enough to listen to others about their joy and worries.Now the students don’t just care about themselves. They tell others it’s very necessary to follow the traffic rules. They also protect the environment. They show great respect to others and treat people politely.I’m so happy that the students have learnt a lot from this activity!三临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是Moonlight小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员Tommy进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告。 NameTommyCharacteristics聪明、大方（各举1例）Hobbies喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举2个好处）Honour他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举1例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student）Problems面临考试时，感到压力很大。他没有充足的睡眠。Your suggestions (根据实际情况提2点建议)…要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥，但不得出现真实班级、姓名等；      3、词数：90词左右。【参考范文】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and to learn more about the world by reading./ And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year.However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.四根据提示,以“How to keep safe”为题写一篇英语作文,介绍日常生活中如何注意人身安全。要求:1.词数902.文中不能出现真实校名和人名,否则不得分;3.题目和开头已给出,不计入总词数。【参考范文】How to keep safeSafety is important.As a middle school student,we should learn to protect ourselves and keep safe.But how can we keep safe?Here are some of my suggestions.                First,we must pay attention to the traffic rules.Everyone should think traffic safety is everybody’s business.Second,if we are in danger,we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Also,We need to eat healthily and safely.Eating junk food will do harm to our health,so we should stop eating it.Next,the summer is coming,and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river alone.Besides,we shouldn’t crowd or push each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.Last but not least,we should be careful when we make friends,especially online.               All in all,we need to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.  五“世界上最远的距离是我在你身边，你却忙着抢红包”“盯得眼花，戳得手疼，抢得心跳”......这些都是春节抢红包火爆场面的生动写照。这两年，春节抢红包，全民狂欢，乐此不疲。抢红包为何如此热？火热的背后该如何冷静思考？假如你叫李华，你校英文周报最近就此开展了一个调查，请你用英文介绍此次调查的结果并谈谈你的观点。今年春节70% 的学生参加了抢红包活动一些学生认为1.带来更多乐趣；2.更易与人相处；3.传统中国文化和现代技术相结合；一些学生认为1.浪费时间和金钱；2.用时太多，以至于影响学习；你的观点......注意：1. 文章须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；      2. 表格中“你的观点”须用2~3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；      3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；【参考范文】  Recently we've made a survey on the activity of " Grabbing red packets" in our school.     During this spring festival,70% of the students took part in the activity. Some of them think grabbing red packets can bring them more fun. It can make it easier for them to get along well with others. The activity brings traditional Chinese culture and modern technology together. However, other students think it's a waste of time and money to grab red packets. Moreover, some students spend so much time grabbing red packets that their schoolwork is influenced.     I think this activity is really exciting, but we shouldn't spend too much time on it. Schoolwork should come first.六临近期末，学校在学习小组内开展了年终自评和组评活动，假设你是Moonlight小组的组长，请根据下面的表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员Tommy 进行综合的素质的评价，写一份素质报告。NameTommyHobbies不仅喜欢即兴编曲而且喜欢看体育新闻的电视节目Study这学期成绩优秀得到高度的赞扬Honour荣誉通过网站，帮助三位无家可归的儿童找到父母，被学校授予最助人为乐奖（The Most Helpful Student Award）Problems每天作业太多，没时间锻炼Your suggestion…….要求：1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下连贯，不得出现真实班级，姓名等；2、省略部分发挥2—3句。3、词数：90词左右。【参考范文】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight, he not only likes making up music but also likes watching TV programme of sports news. Tommy won high praise because of excellent grades of this term. Through the internet, he helped three homeless children find their parents and he was presented “The Most Helpful Student Award” by school. But there were so much homework every day that he has little time for doing exercises. I suggest that he should make a list for all his homework. He also needs to achieve a balance between work and exercises. 七还记得发生在你身上最难忘的一次经历吗？某英文报纸正在以“An unforgettable experience” 为题进行征文活动。请你写一篇短文，描述一次难忘的经历, 并谈谈你的感想。字数不少于80词。 参考词语：remember, help,  wonderful,  feel,   thinkAn Unforgettable ExperienceEveryone has some unforgettable experiences.                                                                                                      【参考范文】An Unforgettable ExperienceEveryone has some unforgettable experiences. I will never forget my first volunteer work.Last summer, our class went to a country primary school to help the students there. First, we gave away some books and pencils to them. Then we talked about school life. I was quite shy before, but to my surprise, I kept talking with some students for almost an hour. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.By doing the volunteer work, I not only got happiness, but also became more confident. It made me know that giving is receiving.八请以“My life in ten years”为题，根据以下提示，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文。提示 (短文须包含下列要点)：1．What do you want to be in ten years? And why?2．Where will you live in ten years? And why?3．Say something about your family or your free time activities in ten years.4．What should you do to achieve your dreams? 注意：短文中不得出现任何与考生本人有关的真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。My life in ten years       【参考范文】My life in ten yearsIn ten years，I think I’ll be an engineer because I like planes．I want to make the best planes in the world when I grow up．I’ll live in Shanghai，because there will be more jobs in that city．In the future, people will work more so they’ll probably have fewer vacations．But I think I’ll travel around the world in my own plane on vacation．On weekends, I’ll play sports with my friends．In my opinion，it’s a good way to relax．To achieve my dreams，I know I should study science hard now．Of course, it’s necessary to read more books．If I try my best，I’m sure my dreams will come true in ten years．