中考英语建议类写作讲解

中考英语建议类写作讲解

Writing （作文）

Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A suggestion to my dear school!” (以“给学校的一个建议！”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

Questions for reference only(以下问题仅供参考)

What aren’t you satisfied with in your school? Your reasons?

What is your suggestion?

Would you give your possible solution(s)?

写作思路：

1. 审题：此篇作文是观点类作文，“给学校的一个建议”。

第一步，首先要说明自己对学校的什么感到不满意。与此同时说明自己对这些方面感到不满意的原因，原因至少给出2至3条。

第二步，针对提出的不满或不足之处给出自己的建议，建议至少给出2至3条。

第三步，总结全文，给出针对这些问题的解决方案。

2.一、 beginning：

毫无疑问，每个学校都有自己的问题，例如。。。

There is no doubt that each school has his own problems, such as ...

就如我所说的，我提出这些问题的原因如下：

As far as I am concerned, I am not satisfied with these problems because of the following reasons.

 二、opinions

在我看来，要做到以下几点。

As far as I am concerned, we should do as following tips.

首先，。。。

At first, ...

其次，。。。

In addition, ...

最后，。。。

Last but not least, ...

三、Conclusion:

总而言之，。。。

All in all, ...

范文：

I am a second year student of your middle school,waiting to tell you about my humble opinions of the learning environment in our school. Although we are enjoying the modernized buildings equipped with advanced computers, sufficient lights and well-installed desks and chairs, we do find it hard for us to concentrate on study when we are in the classrooms. For one thing, the annoying noise made by vans and cars disturbs our studies. For another, the classrooms, which are supposed to be used for self-study, are unavailable, for they are usually occupied for meetings by various kinds of associations. Faced with such a hard nut, we should find ways crack it. I suggest that our school should construct some special lanes for the traffic and provide associations with specific rooms to have their meetings in order to provide a letter learning environment for us. I appreciate your sincere consideration of my suggestions and hope that our school will be ideal for academic studies. 

范文分析：

1. 文章的第一句就表明了自己的观点，提出了问题“he learning environment in our school”。
2. 接下来说明了提出这个问题的原因。“ For one thing, the annoying noise made by vans and cars disturbs our studies. ”和“For another, the classrooms, which are supposed to be used for self-study, are unavailable, for they are usually occupied for meetings by various kinds of associations.”
3. 第三部分针对问题提出的建议和解决方法。“I suggest that our school should construct some special lanes for the traffic and provide associations with specific rooms to have their meetings in order to provide a letter learning environment for us.”最后总结全文，重申自己的观点，并表达了希望问题能被解决的心愿。