专题13+书面表达-2023年中考英语考试研究（南京专用）

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专题13 书面表达-2023年中考英语考试研究（南京专用）

南京市中考英语历年（2019-2022）真题展示
【2019南京中考】
六、书面表达（满分15分）
假如你是李华，在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议．请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件．
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing． The app is to help learners explore ideas， organize them and write them down． Your ideas are needed！
Here' s what to do：
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative！
Please let us know：
● What's the name of the app？
● What problem does the app solve？
● What does the app do？
Contact us at appdesign @Britech com
注意：
1．内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥．
2．词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）．
3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for designing an app for English writing．
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　 Yours Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for doing an APP for English writing． I'd like to share my ideas here． Could its name be "right made easy"？【APP的名字】
Many of us have difficulty in writing． 【高分句型一】We don't know how to organize ideas，use proper words，and so on． I hope it can solve these problems． 【APP要解决的问题】
Here is my advice on what the APP does． First， it should provide some reading materials． The more we read， the better we write． Second． The APP should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills． Third， there should be an e﹣ teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions． 【APP能做什么】
I hope my advice is worth taking． 【高分句型二】
【解析】
高分句型一：Many of us have difficulty in writing．我们中的许多人写作困难．
have difficulty doing干某事有困难．
高分句型二：I hope my advice is worth taking． 我希望我的建议值得采纳．
be worth doing 值得干某事．

【2020南京中考】
六、书面表达
76.假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到招募夏令营营员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。
FUNLAND
Hi! This summer holiday we will have different camps for kids. Here are three popular ones. Join us! Make a choice and explain why you choose it.
Reading Camp
●Chinese literature
●Western literature
●…
Culture Camp
●Western music
●Chinese art
●…
Sports Camp
●Ball games
●Water sports
●…
Come and have fun!
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点（理由不得少于两点），可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等.
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thanks for offering us such wonderful camps. I do expect to join one of them.
I like sports very much, especially basketball, so Sports Camp is my first choice. If I’m accepted, I think it’s a good chance to improve my basketball skills. I’ll have plenty of time to practice playing basketball and there must be many excellent coaches and players in this camp. Besides, I believe I’ll make some new friends who have common interests. That really sounds fantastic to me. I just can’t wait.
Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours
Li Hi
【解析】
1. 题干解读：文章是一篇书信作文。主要是看到校刊上招募夏令营营员的消息进行回信，可以选择其中比较感兴趣的一个夏令营活动进行具体的描述，要写明参加这个夏令营的原因以及自己通过这次活动要取得的成绩，要注意时态的应用。
2. 例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段感谢提供这么多精彩的夏令营活动；第二段写自己要参加的夏令营以及原因；第三段写期待尽早收到回复。整个文章结构完整，思路清晰，语言表达准确，意思明确易懂。
3. 高分亮点：
短语：plenty of；practice doing sth.；make friends；look forward to。
句型：if引导的条件状语从句；I believe+宾语从句；who引导的定语从句。

【2021南京中考】
六、书面表达（满分15分）
76. 某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。


This new global site is a place for students to share their ideas. We are looking for your beautiful school day to inspire（鼓舞）our readers. Did you help anyone at school? Did you enjoy a beautiful song in your art lesson? Did you have an amazing experience in the school lab?
Your school life is full of beauty. Choose a beautiful school day. Write a passage to tell us what you did that day and why you think it was beautiful.
Send your writing to us right now!
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点, 全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出文章开头, 不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息, 如校名、人名等。
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
My Beautiful School Day
My school life is full of beauty. I will never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful.
My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes together after school. One day, I waited a long time but didn’t see her. Then I searched for her in the corner of our school. She was crying at that time. She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test. I decided to help her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key points and notes. Two days later, she told me that she passed it. I felt that helping others who are in need was very meaningful.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我美丽的学校生活”写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。分为两段式，第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历，并发表自己的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。

【2022南京中考】
六、书面表达（满分15分）
为了迎接2022南京青奥会，你校在筹备一个丹麦文化角。假如你是南京青奥示范学校阳光中学的李明，请你用英语给丹麦的姊妹学校写一封电子邮件，内容必须包括：
1. 表达你对南京举办青奥会的喜悦心情；
2. 说明创办丹麦文化角的目的：介绍丹麦文化，增进友谊；
3. 请对方提供有关丹麦文化的信息并邀请他们来宁交流。
参考词汇：
2022 青奥会 the 2022 Youth Olympic Games ; 丹麦 Denmark
文化角 culture corner; 增进友谊 build up friendships
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3. 词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/ Madam
I am Li Ming from Sunshine Secondary School, a YOG demo school of Nanjing._________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam
I am Li Ming from Sunshine Secondary School, a YOG demo school of Nanjing. I am writing to ask for some information about your culture, as our school is preparing a Denmark culture corner to build up friendships between teens.
I’m very proud that our city will be the host of the 2022 Youth Olympic Games. We are planning to introduce your culture and your life. Would you please send some to us? We would be grateful for your help if you do.
At the same time, we are really happy to invite you and your students to come to Nanjing in the summer of 2022. Welcome to Nanjing!
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
【解析】1. 本文主要以第一人称书写； 2.本文主要使用一般将来时态； 3.使用正确的语句表达每一个要点； 4.适当发挥，展开想象，最少写一两句话； 5.词数为80词左右，不含给出的开头与结尾。

南京市历年考情解读
知识点名称
考察题型
具体的考察情况
根据表格内容写
书面表达
假如你是李华，在学校英文校刊KIDS MAG上看到招募夏令营营员的信息。请根据招募内容，用英语给校刊写一封信。
根据邮件里问的问题回信
书面表达
1.假如你是李华，在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议．请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。
2.某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据网站征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
根据列出来的要点写
书面表达
为了迎接2022南京青奥会，你校在筹备一个丹麦文化角。假如你是南京青奥示范学校阳光中学的李明，请你用英语给丹麦的姊妹学校写一封电子邮件。

考点分析
【写作技巧】
1.审题要清。看清题目要求，读懂材料内容，抓住要点，注意文体是什么，如果是描述故事或回忆的事件，宜用一般过去时态。一般情况下写作多采用一般现在时态。
2.列提纲。做题时，可逐步列好提纲，并运用所提供的词语。根据题目要求并结合自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避繁化简。遇到一时想不起来的词、句时，可用同义词或同义句代替。
3.连句成文。就是把第二步所写的句子，在规定的范围内稍加发挥，适当用上连词把它们串联起来整理成一篇短文。连句成文时应注意文中动词时态的应用，简单句和复合句的交替应用。
4.复核检查。按要求逐步写好句子后，认真通读写好的句子，一查所写句子是否准确表达出了所给材料要求写的内容，行文是否流畅;二查有没有遗漏要求，句子的时态、语态是否正确，所写句子是否符合英语的基本语序，即:主语+谓语+宾语十状语(地点、时间等);三查单词的拼写、大小写是否规范，标点符号的运用是否正确，主谓语是否一致。确定无误后，再誊写正稿。
检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
(1) 格式是否有错。
(2) 拼写有无错误。
(3) 语言是否用错。
(4) 时态、语态错误。
(5) 标点错误。
(6) 人称是否用错。
【注意】此时不宜在卷面上作较大的改动，以免顾此失彼，影响全局。

表格作文就是要学生将表格中所包含的信息用英语表达成意思连贯的文字。在命题形式上，除了表格的提示外，一般有英文单词提示或中文文字提示。有的文章开头已给出。要求书写的词数一般在80至100之间。
【写作技巧】
1.认真阅读表格中的文字说明，做到“四确定”。
首先，确定文章的体裁;其次，确定文章的结构;再次，确定文章的时态。动词是句子的核心，时态是句子的灵魂。时态错误是阅卷老师最易发现的，也是体现考生语言运用能力高低的显著标志;最后，确定文章的人称。通常介绍型短文一般使用第二、三人称皆可。
2.阅读表格后的要求，做到“五注意”。
(1)词数80~100左右:意味着行文不能多于100个单词，也不能少于80个单词，否则要扣分。同时词数决定着文章的详略和进行适当发挥的多少。
(2)开头和结尾已给:即考生首先不能另行开头或结尾;其次要细读所给语句的人称、时态、语言表达风格与口吻，力求前后一致。
(3)书写工整，卷面整洁:在新评分标准中有明确规定，“书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次”。可见卷面要达到美观，除了要做到书写清楚、大小写、标点符号正确及移行规范外，还要注意采用适当的行距、句距及词距。
(4)内容完整:即要点要齐全，对于表格型写作，要注意从表格前的文字说明中找出隐藏的要点—文章的开头语与结尾语。对于表格中的内容注意表达要详略得当和准确全面。
(5)参考词汇:一定要尽可能地应用到短文中。使用时，一定要注意提示词汇的词性，确保其在句中以正确形式出现，避免不必要的扣分。
3.阅读表格中的英语或汉语提示，确保“两避免”和“两适度”。
首先在浏览过程中应先确定正文部分的写作顺序，然后根据汉语提示内容的关系，进行适当的整合，确保“两避免”和“两适度”。
两避免:是指避免同一个词、同一个句子结构的频繁使用;避免按汉语提示直译或硬译，而应尽量做到一词多译、一词多表，灵活变通。所以在写好五个基本句式，力求语言表达正确的基础上，应注意句式的变换，确保语言表达的多样性。
两适度:指的是围绕内容主题进行1~2句的适当发挥，充实内容要点。常见的技巧有:简单句与复合句的交错使用;主动语态中穿插使用被动语态;适当调整句子中定语、状语的位置，使句子表达多样性。
总之，表格型写作要坚持“慢审快写”的原则，必须牢记:先读提示，弄清体裁与结构，时态、人称要注意，开头、结尾要呼应;再读表格，句子结构要搭配，语言习惯莫违背;文章写好要检查，点滴注意别忽视。

模拟预测（2022年南京市一模二模）
【南京师范大学附属中学集团2022年中考英语二模试卷】
六、书面表达（满分15分）
76.
There must be a hobby that gives you certain things, such as happiness, confidence, creativity, courage, strength, and the list can go on. Pick one to complete the title and write an article about 80 words.
注意:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥;
2. 词数80词左右(已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
________ Give(s) Me ________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Reading gives me happiness
Many students take study as task and they don’t have much passion about gaining the knowledge from books. As teenagers, they like to hang out for fun instead of sitting in the classroom. But I enjoy reading so much.
Nowadays, people always say they want to see the world as it is so big. Though I can’t travel around the world, for the lack of money and the age, I can see around the world through these books. I get to know different cultures and see the diversity of the world. It’s full of charm and inspires me to searching the amazing nature. Reading books brings me great happiness.
【解析】
1、题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，首先根据材料补充题目，然后介绍阅读带给自己的快乐，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍阅读带来的快乐时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。


【南京市鼓楼区2022年中考英语二模试卷】
六、书面表达(满分15分)
76. 假如你是Li Lei，曾在你校交流学习的Chris给你写了一封邮件。请你根据Chris的邮件内容，用英语回一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Lei,
How’s everything going? Recently I’ve just read a really good book The Old Man and the Sea. It is a novel by Hemingway and is one of his greatest books. The story tells how an old fisherman fights against a big fish. Although the fisherman fails again and again, he never gives up. What kind of books do you enjoy reading? Have you read anything interesting recently? Tell me something about a famous writer from your country and one of his/her works.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Chris
注意;
1.内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2.词数80左右(已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数)
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear from you and learn about such a great novel.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Lei
【答案】
Dear Chris.
I’m glad to hear from you and learn about such a great novel. I prefer to read works of literature. These days I’m reading a book called The Little Orange Lamp. I like reading it because the articles in it are full of love and the language is simple.
Speaking of famous Chinese writers, I’d like to recommend Bing Xin to you. She was born in 1900 and was given the name Xie Wanying. When she was a little girl, she fell in love with reading. Later, she began to publish articles with Bing Xin as her pen name.
Bing Xin is well-known as a writer of children’s literature. To Young Readers is her another famous book. If you read it, you’ll lose yourself in it.
I hope you’ll accept my recommendation.
Yours.
Li Lei
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求给Chris回一封电子邮件；要求包含邮件中提到的问题。
2. 写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时和一般过去时；采用第一人称和第三人称口吻；可分为4段来写，第一段：阐述最近正在读的一本书；第二段：介绍书的作者的个人信息；第三段：介绍该作家的其他书籍；第四段：希望对方接受自己的推荐。注意主谓一致，文中无单词和语法错误。

【南京市鼓楼区2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达（满分15 分）
76. 英语校刊TEENS 正在进行 “手机是否可以带入校园”的问卷调查。请根据下列调查表的内容做出自己的选择，并依据你的选择用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
A survey on mobile phones
Should we bring mobile phones to school?
Choice
YES £
NO £
Reasons
1contact with parents
2.…
1.use in a wrong way
2....
Advice
Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think …
Though mobile phones can’t be used in school, I hope ..
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出文章开头不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Should we bring mobile phones to school?
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Should we bring mobile phones to school?
A survey on teenage mobile phone use at school is carried out by TEENS. Are middle school students allowed to bring them to school?
Some students think we can bring mobile phones to school because it’s convenient for parents to contact us. When we have difficulty in study, mobile phones can be our teacher and help us with our problems.
Every coin has two sides. Some students use mobile phones in a wrong way. They spend a lot of time chatting online, as a result, they can’t focus on study. And too much time on screens does harm to our eyes. More and more students have poor eyesight.
In my opinion, I agree to bring smart phones to school. Though mobile phones can be used in school, I think I won’t turn it on until class is over. Since there are lots of useful websites for English learning, I will go there to practice my English.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇议论文。根据表格介绍支持和反对人的原因和建议。客观介绍人们对学生带手机这一现象的看法，并表达自己的观点。
2.写作指导：本文以第三人称和第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时为主。分成四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍支持者的看法；第三段介绍反对者的看法；第四段介绍自己的观点。不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观、注意行文的连贯性。

【南京市建邺区2022年中考英语二模试卷】
六、书面表达（满分15分）
76. “Kids’ Fun” 杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据征文要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。

Just as our magazine’s name, “Kids’ Fun”, we pay special attention to the fun kids have. Over your school days in junior high, you have experienced many school trips. Which one is the most unforgettable one? Write a passage to tell us why you always remember that trip.
Is it because of the place you went? Or the things you saw? Or the activities you enjoyed yourself? Or the feelings you would never forget? We are looking forward to your sharing.
注意：1.要点齐全，文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数80左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
What an unforgettable school trip!
I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
What an unforgettable school trip!
I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is visiting the Great Wall and the Fragrant Hills.
We met at the school gate at eight and then we set off by bus. First, we visited the Great Wall. When we got there, it was nine. We started to climb the great wonder of ancient China immediately. That was the first time that we had visited it, so we were very excited. We took many photos of the Great Wall. Then we had lunch there, after which we left for the Fragrant Hills. When we got there, we were amazed at the beautiful maple leaves, which made us not want to leave. We stayed at the top of the mountain for an hour and at five we returned by bus.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇投稿，写自己最难忘的一次旅行。写作时需要包含以下要点：（1）你最难忘的旅行是哪一次？（2）为什么你总是记得那次旅行。在写作时应承接短文开头，围绕主题展开。语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚。
2.写作指导：本文是讲述过去的一场旅行，故时态为一般过去时；主语为第一人称；描述旅行时，内容应描写细致；并且把旅行时的所见、所闻、所感都介绍清楚。

【南京市建邺区2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达（满分 15 分）
76. 初中生活即将结束，你将迎来新一阶段的学习生活。在新的阶段，是否寄宿成为很多学生面临的问题。请根据以下表格，谈谈你的选择及其优缺点。
Choice
Day student（走读学生）
Boarding student（寄宿学生）
Advantages
have more time with family
...
save more time to study
·…
Disadvantages
be influenced by the Internet
...
have less private space
·…
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数 80 左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
We are going to graduate from our middle school and we will make a choice between being a day student and a boarding student. In my opinion, I prefer to be____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
We are going to graduate from our middle school and we will make a choice between being a day student and a boarding student. In my opinion. I prefer to be a boarding student because its advantages overweight its disadvantages.
Although I may not have enough private space or enough time to stay with my parents. I can get more from living at school.
Firstly, if I choose to live at school, there is no need to spend time between my home and school so that I can save much time to study. Secondly, it can help me develop a good habit of study and living. Last but not the least, it is a good chance for me to learn how to behave properly and get along well with others.
In conclusion, whether to be a boarding student or a day student is a personal decision. However, considering the convenience, time saving and more chances of developing friendship, I insist on living at school.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格提供信息阐述自己是愿意成为一个走读学生，还是寄宿学生，并阐述优缺点。
2.写作指导：时态用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主；首先承接开头，点出自己的选择；其次阐述为什么选择做一个走读生/寄宿生，这样的选择有什么优点；最后进行总结。注意语意连贯，无拼写和语法错误。

【南京市金陵中学集团2022年中考英语一模试题】
七、书面表达（满分 15 分）
76. 疫情期间，同学们不得不在家上网课。针对网课，在学生调查中发现存在两种不同观点，请以 I Prefer to Study at School/at Home（选择你赞同的一方面）为题写一篇短文。
一些学生
认为不用去学校
理由：1. 既节省路上的时间又省了交通费用；
2. 有更多空余时间，可以在薄弱学科多下功夫
另一些学生
认为有必要去学校
理由：1.面对面交流学习效果更佳；
2.和同学相处，乐趣很多
我
……
理由：……（自拟至少 2 点）
提示词： 网课 online course 新冠疫情 coronavirus pandemic
注意：
1. 内容涵盖要点，可适当发挥，全文连贯通顺；
2. 词数 90 词左右；
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I Prefer to Study __________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I Prefer to Study at School
To be honest, I prefer to study at school.
I used to think how great it would be if we could study at home. We wouldn’t have to get up so early and we would have more free time to do our own things. However, the truth is not what I thought. Studying at home seems to be busier than at school.
Now, I enjoy studying at school. First, I think face-to-face communication is better for learning. Second, it’s good for us to study with classmates. We have lots of things in common and we can share things with each other and help each other.
In a word, I really hate studying online again. I guess my classmates would prefer to study at school like me.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目是一篇材料作文。根据“I Prefer to Study at School/at Home”来选择一个自己赞同的一方并以此为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主。第一段选择赞同的观点；第二段描述过去的想法；第三段讲述自己为什么选择这种观点的理由；第四段进行总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

【南京市联合体2022年中考英语二模试卷】
六、书面表达（满分15分）
76. 今秋开学起，劳动课（labor course）将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。你校英语校刊English Garden中Have Your Say栏目开展了一项关于家务活和学校劳动课的调查。请你根据调查表内容，用英语写一篇短文，表达你的想法。
Welcome to Have Your Say
We’re conducting a survey on housework and labor course in our school. We would like you to share your ideas about housework and labor course. We need your ideas.
● What housework do you often do at home?
●What is the advantages of doing housework?
● What advice can you offer on labor course in our school?
Looking forward to hearing from you
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
I am glad to share my ideas about housework and labor course. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I am glad to share my ideas about housework and labor course. Doing housework plays an important part in middle school students’ lives. So I often do housework, such as washing dishes, sweeping the floor, cooking and so on. I think middle school students should do housework. Here are three reasons. First of all, doing some housework can make us independent, because we can’t depend on others all our life. What’s more, it is a good way to keep us healthy and strong by doing housework. In order to make ourselves better men, it is necessary for us to do housework at home in our free time. As for how to run the course in our school, the school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，要求根据关于家务活和学校劳动课的调查内容，表达自己关于家务活和劳动课的想法。写作时承接短文开头，按照题目提示要点，依次逐一陈述。
2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称来写；时态以一般现在时为主；按照题目要点依次陈述，可采用一段式，先陈述在家里所做的家务活；再陈述做这些家务活的原因；最后再对学校劳动课程提出建议并结尾。

【南京市秦淮区2022年中考英语二模试卷】
六、书面表达（满分15分）
76. 为了促进学生健康成长，“双减”政策中明确了各年级作业总量。假如你是初三学生李华，请根据表格内容，用英文写一封信，向国外笔友Mike简要介绍作业量要求，并谈谈“双减”的好处及你的看法。
Written homework every day
Grades 1-2
none
Grades 3-6
less than 60 minutes
Grades 7-9
less than 90 minutes
Advantages
more relaxed,...
Your opinion(s)
...
注意：
1.内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.词数 80左右 (已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Mike,
I’d like to tell you something about the “double reduction” policy. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’d like to tell you something about the “double reduction” policy.
There is no written homework in Grade One and Grade Two of primary school. Grades three to six should have less than 60 minutes of homework every day. Junior high school students should have less than 90 minutes of homework every day. So now I feel more relaxed. I hope I can better plan my time and improve myself, so that I can have a better future.
In a word, I had too much pressure in the past, but now things are completely different and my daily life is colorful and meaningful. I enjoy the changes and will study harder. I hope the school can prepare more extracurricular activities for us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文要求以李华的名义给笔友“Mike”写一封信，介绍作业量要求、谈谈“双减”的好处以及自己的看法。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时；文章可分为三段式：第一段文章已给，引出话题“双减”。第二段介绍各年级作业量和“双减”的好处。最后一段就“双减”给出自己的看法。在写作时要做到无标点符号和语法错误，正确使用时态。

【南京市秦淮区2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达（满分15分）
76. 在英语阅读周，学校校园网开展了“英文名句赏析”的征文比赛。请你根据名句内容和比赛要求，用英语写一篇短文。
Study is like riding a bicycle. To keep our balance, we must keep moving. Life is like a race. We either take the lead or fall behind. Success won’t come to us until we try our best to run to it.
After reading the sentences above,
»what do you think of them?
»which person comes to your mind first and why?
»what can you do to make yourself better?
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
In my opinion, these sentences above tell us ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
In my opinion, these sentences above tell us the importance of moving forward. Only by sticking to your dreams and working hard, can you succeed. After reading these words, the first person appearing in my mind is the Winter Olympic skiing champion Gu ailing. Although she has made great achievements, she still continues to work hard and make breakthrough. This is worth learning for each of us. Her spirit greatly inspired me. If I meet difficulties, I will try to overcome them instead of avoiding them. I believe I will be a better person in the future!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文要求根据所给英文名句和提示内容写一篇短文参加征文比赛。包括对名句的赏析、想到的与之相关的人物和自我提升的方法。
2.写作指导：本文时态主要采用一般现在时，第一人称和第三人称相结合，写作时先赏析名句，再描述与之相关的人物，最后表达自我提升的想法和感悟。注意主谓一致等语法规则，保证无单词拼写错误。

【南京市玄武区2022年中考英语二模试卷】
六、书面表达 (满分 15 分)
76. Napoleon(拿破仑) once said, “He is a bad soldier who doesn’t dream of becoming a general(将军).” Would you rather be a leader or a common member in a certain group? Make your choice and give at least TWO reasons to support your idea.
注意：
内容涵盖所有要点，适当发挥，全文连贯通顺。
词数 80 左右（已给出文章开头，不计入总词数）。文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
To be a leader or a common member?
We all have different roles to play in a certain group.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
To be a leader or a common member?
We all have different roles to play in a certain group. As for me, I would rather be a leader. The reasons are as follows.
Firstly, a leader can encourage the common members to work well. In this way, I can make a greater contribution to the group. Secondly, a leader needs to take more responsibilities, which are good for my growth and can improve my ability to solve problems. Lastly, a leader will face many challenges, which can make my life more exciting. If I can conquer the difficulties, I’ll feel very satisfied.
Based on the above reasons, I choose to be a leader in a certain group.
To be a leader or a common member?
We all have different roles to play in a certain group. As for me, I would like to be a common member. Here are my reasons.
First of all, a common member is under less stress. I don’t have to face all the difficulties, which can help me lead a healthier life. In addition, it’s easier for a common member to make friends. I can get along with other members and cooperate well with them in different tasks. Last but not least, a common member has more freedom in daily work. I can do the work in my own way and still make a contribution to the group.
All in all, I would rather be a common member in a certain group.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文要求以“To be a leader or a common member?”为话题，阐述自己的选择并给出至少两个理由来支持你的想法。注意内容要涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可以分为三段，第一段引出话题，表明自己的立场；第二段阐述自己的理由；第三段进行总结。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

【南京市玄武区2022年中考英语一模试题】
六、书面表达（满分15分）
76. Now we have learned a lot about the role models（榜样）. It is their own core abilities（核心能力）that make them able to serve the country. What core abilities do you need in the future? Why? What will you do to improve these abilities? You will give a speech at the graduation ceremony. Please choose ONE core ability to write an English draft for it.

注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3．词数80左右。
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today. I think sports are the core abilities that we should have.
COVID-19 has taught us to pay more attention to our health. We should spend more time doing sports to keep healthy and improve our immunity.
We students should relax ourselves often. We need to make a plan of exercising and do sports for at least twenty minutes every day. On the weekend, it is better for us to go out and do some outdoor activities with our friends. It is good for our body and mind.
I think it is very important to do sports. I hope that everyone can keep doing sports and try his best to keep healthy.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本文是一篇应用文，图示给出了四种核心能力，包括：终身学习能力、时间管理能力、运动能力和沟通能力，还可以自由发挥，选择一种能力展开文章。需要指明哪种能力，如何做去改善这种能力。
2. 写作指导：本文以第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时。第一段点名要写的能力，第二段介绍重要性，第三段介绍如何改善能力，最后总结。文章多用建议类型的句型或者情态动词，注意观点明确，上下文连贯。