UNIT 5 Part IV Writing(同步练习含答案)
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Part IV Writing
妙笔生花
请结合自己的冒险经历,以My Adventure Experience为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,介绍自己冒险时的所见、所闻、所想。
步骤一:审题构思——分析透彻是前提
1.审题
(1)确定语篇类型:本文为________________;
(2)确定人称:本文的主要人称为________________人称;
(3)确定时态:以________________为主。
2.构思
第一段:入题;
第二段:详细介绍冒险经历;
第三段:小结冒险体会。
步骤二:精挑细选——核心词汇想周全
1.飞行____________________
2.风暴 ____________________
3.颠簸____________________
4.害怕的____________________
5.平静地____________________
6.惊奇;意外____________________
7.想知道____________________
8.安全的____________________
9.思考____________________
步骤三:遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现
1. 我和家人去度假。(go on holiday)
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2. 我们正在享受这次飞行。(enjoy the flight)
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3. 我们遭遇了风暴,飞机开始颠簸。(hit)
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4. 每个人都很恐慌和害怕。(frightened)
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5. 我旁边的那个小女孩在平静地看书。(calmly)
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6. 我不敢相信自己的眼睛。(believe one’s eyes)
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7. 风暴过后,我们平安无恙。(safe and sound)
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8. 我忍不住问那个小女孩她为什么不害怕。(can’t help doing)
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9. 回答使我陷入深思。(reflection)
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步骤四:斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点
将2、3句合并为复合句
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步骤五:连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇
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Part IV Writing
参考答案
步骤一
记叙文,第一,一般过去时
步骤二
1. flight 2. storm 3. toss 4. frightened 5. calmly
6. surprise 7. wonder 8. safe 9. reflection
步骤三
1. My family and I went on holiday.
2. We were enjoying the flight.
3. A storm hit us and the plane began tossing.
4. Everybody was panicked and frightened.
5. The little girl next to me was reading a book calmly.
6. I couldn’t believe my eyes.
7. The storm was over and we were safe and sound.
8. I couldn’t help asking the little girl why she had not been afraid.
9. The reply threw me into reflection.
步骤四
We were enjoying the flight when suddenly a storm hit us and the plane began tossing.
步骤五
My Adventure Experience
Last summer my family and I went on holiday.
We were enjoying the flight when suddenly a storm hit us and the plane began tossing. Looking around,I found nearly everybody on board was panicked and frightened. The future seemed terrible and many were wondering whether they would make it through the storm. Much to my surprise,I saw the little girl next to me reading a book calmly,with no worry or fear in her eyes. I couldn’t believe my eyes!
Fortunately,the storm was over and we were safe and sound. I couldn’t help asking the little girl why she had not been afraid. She said,“My daddy is the pilot,and he is taking me home.”The reply threw me into reflection.