题型强化训练08 书面表达之谋篇布局-江苏中考英语二轮复习语法专题讲解与题型强化训练（牛津译林版）

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题型强化训练08 书面表达之谋篇布局

☞【考点介绍】
考点
分值
出题方向
话题作文
15/20/25分
按照题目给出的话题和要求进行书写
半命题作文
15/20/25分
题目给出一部分，留出的横线上自己填上合适的内容进行写作
征文活动、演讲稿
15/20/25分
根据所给提示写一篇“.............”为题的短文进行投稿或者演讲稿

☞【应试技巧】
一、认真审题，确定时态人称，同时关注题材格式
时态：故事性文章一般用过去时，其中表达感受时可用现在时。
说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时，举例时可用过去时。
根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用，如过去和现在的对比等。
人称：注意在句子中人称的统一。
例如：Thanks to the teachers， we have improved our English。其中we和our就是人称的统一。

二、找全信息点，紧扣主题，突出重点
　　切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。别注意文章要有开头和结尾。

三、成文时表述正确，文字流畅
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。
首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。

四、文章结构清晰，重点句型出彩，可使文章在得分上提高一个档次
　考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。

五、认真检查
检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
(1) 格式是否有错。 (2) 拼写有无错误。 (3) 语言是否用错。
(4) 时态、语态错误。 (5) 标点错误。 (6) 人称是否用错。
写主题句应注意以下几点： 
 ①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点   
②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 
③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。   

（二）巧用连接词 
 要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词   
  
（三）掌握常用句型：   
下面只列举比较常用的：   
1.in  order  to   
为了实现他的梦想，他学习非常努力。   
He worked very hard in order to realize his dream.     
2.so…that   
他们太累了，除了伸懒腰什么都做不了。
They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.     
3.would  rather…than   
他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。
He would rather listen to others than talk himself.    
4.not only…but also 
在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程，而且还获得了博士学位。
  In just three years, she had not only finished all the lessons , but also received her doctor’s degree.  
 5.either…or   
如果考试过关，你可以买一个MP3或去云南玩一趟。 
You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.   
6.as well as  
他善良又乐于助人。   
He was kind as well as helpful.   
7.…as well   
这个小孩活泼又可爱。 
  The child is active and funny as well.   
8.find it adj  to do…   
我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。 
I find it necessary to take down notes while listening.

☞【真题回顾】
2022年淮安市中考英语书面表达真题
Ⅶ. 书面表达（满分20分）
71. 梦想引领人生，奋斗成就未来。“感动中国”年度人物江梦南，幼年失聪，生活、求学之路充满艰辛，但学医救人一直是她的梦想，她通过读唇语，学会“听”和“说”，凭借刻苦学习、不懈努力，成为一名药学博士。请以“梦想”为话题，写一篇英语短文，内容须包括以下所有要点：
1. 描述江梦南的成长经历（练习读唇语，努力学习，克服困难，实现梦想）；
2. 谈谈你的梦想（教师/志愿者……）、原因及如何实现。
参考词汇：读唇语read lips
注意：
1. 词数80~100，已给出部分不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A common girl Jiang Mengnan was presented with Touching China Award. She became deaf at an early age. However, she kept fighting against the fate（命运）.
Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child. The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people. So she read lips and studied hard to realize her dream of becoming a Doctor of pharmacy.
I also have a dream. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. It’s been my dream since I was a kid. Because I like playing with children, and I also like to teach my knowledge to others. In order to realize my dream, I must study hard and stick to my dream.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据“要点” 描述江梦南的成长经历以及谈谈自己的梦想。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍江梦南的成长经历；
第二步，介绍自己的梦想；
第三步，介绍为什么有这个梦想以及如何实现它。
[亮点词汇]
①be full of充满
②grow up长大
③in order to为了
④stick to坚持
[高分句型]
①Jiang Mengnan has been deaf since she was a child.（since引导的时间状语从句）
②The road to life and study is full of hardships, but it has always been her dream to study medicine to save people.（并列连词and以及转折连词but的使用）

2022年南通市中考英语书面表达真题
八、书面表达（本题满分20分）
81. 华夏大地，人杰地灵；中华文明，源远流长。假如你是李华，你国外的朋友Andy想了解中国，请根据下图提示，选择或自拟至少两个要点进行介绍。

注意：1.词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Learning that you are interested in China, I feel honored to introduce my country to you.
First, there are many great men in our country, such as Yuan Longping. Yuan Longping is known as the “father of hybrid rice”. He made a great contribution to the world food supply. Second, there are many famous places of interest in China, such as the Great Wall. It is known as one of the seven Wonders of the World. Third, China also has many traditional festivals, such as Spring Festival, Dragon Boat Festival, Mid-Autumn Festival and so on. Chinese people attach the most importance to the Spring Festival.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给图示提示，选择至少两个要点，向Andy介绍中国的人物、名胜、节日等。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。本文介绍时可以根据所给的人物、景点、节日描述，也可以自拟要点介绍。行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

2022年盐城市中考英语书面表达真题
六、书面表达（满分20分）
76. 学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“One Thing I will Do for ________”的征文比赛。请根据提示，写一篇短文参赛，分享你将为朋友、家人、学校或社会做的一件事。
1. What will you do?
2. How will you do it?
3. Why do you choose to do it?
…
注意事项：
（1）补全题目，如“my friend, my parents, our school”等；
（2）文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：100左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
One Thing I will Do for ________
I have made great progress in the past three years. Now I want to do one thing for_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
One Thing I will Do for My Parents
I have made great progress in the past three years. Now I want to do one thing for my parents.
I want to make a breakfast for my parents. I’m going to the supermarket on Saturday afternoon to buy what I need for breakfast. Then, the next morning I will get up early so as not to wake my parents. I will make my mother’s favorite sandwiches and coffee. My father likes to eat tomato beef noodles for breakfast, I will learn how to cook on my phone. Make sure they can have a delicious breakfast after getting up.
I have had this idea in my heart for many years, but I never get the chance to do it. In the past few years, my parents always got up early to prepare breakfast for me. It is their love and support that make me better, so I want to return them with the same love. I love them.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：根据情景综合运用各种时态，注意主谓保持一致性；
③提示：文章写作要点已给出，注意将作文标题补充完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己想为谁做一件事；
第二步，具体阐述自己想做什么事，以及怎样做这件事；
第三步，阐述自己为什么想做这件事。
[亮点词汇]
①want to do sth.想要做某事
②get up起床
③make sure确保
④prepare sth. for sb.为某人准备某物
[高分句型]
①I’m going to the supermarket on Saturday afternoon to buy what I need for breakfast. （what引导的宾语从句）
②It is their love and support that make me better（It is+被强调部分+that+其他）

2022年苏州市中考英语书面表达真题
第七部分书面表达（共1题；满分25分）
57. 《苏州日报》英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你对该谚语的理解；
2. 你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）；
3. 你的感悟，
注意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Practice makes perfect
Have you heard of the saying “practice makes perfect”? I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again. We’ll be able to perform it perfectly.
The practice of learning English is a good example. We are not living in an English speaking country. So, in order to learn it well, we need extra practice, such as reading English books, going to English corners, or communicating with foreigners. You can’t master English just by sitting at your desk. As another example, if we want to be skilled in using the computer, we also need to practice using it.
Some children become little experts in computer, just because they play with it everyday. On the contrary, if we just stick to books, we will still feel confused when using computers. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that practice makes perfect.
【解析】
本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

2022年扬州市中考英语书面表达真题
B. 写作（计20分）
76. 最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。
Why you made it
help enjoy reading your favourite book（name, type of book, what you like most）
How you made it
Materials & Tools
● card
● scissors, glue…
Steps

● cut the card into…
● draw a picture of…
● write（your favourite sentence from the book or a famous saying or…）
● …
How you felt
…
要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favorite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying “Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.” on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.
【解析】
本文以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，并结合表格中的内容，描述制作书签的目的和过程，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的，以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方；第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程；第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

2022年宿迁市中考英语书面表达真题
六、书面表达（满分15分）
71. 实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业”，我们同学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完成一篇题为“Enjoy study, enjoy life”的英语短文。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
校园
1.参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等；
2.多做运动，有益健康；
3.……（补充一点）
家庭
1.畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼；
2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能；
3.……（补充一点）
注意事项：
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【答案】
Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
In school, we should actively participate in various activities, such as painting, dancing, football, etc. Through these sports, we can make our bodies healthier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also actively help them.
At home, we should live in peace with our parents. We should talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and learn some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like.
In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind.
【解析】
本文以“Enjoy study, enjoy life”为题介绍如何合理安排课余生活，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍在学校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

2022年连云港市中考英语书面表达真题
七、书面表达(共1小题;满分25分)
76.“双减”之后,如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义?请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以“Happy Summer Vacation" 为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。

注意:
(1)词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计人总词数;
(2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Happy Summer Vacation
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time, how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The summer vacation is coming. With more free time,how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation? Here is my advice.
First, we can do some sports. We can go running every morning. It can help us keep healthy. Besides, we can do some housework at home. It is necessary for us to learn some life skills and look after ourselves. What’s more, we need to read some books. Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new weold to us. We can also join some clubs, such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club. It can help us develop hobbies.
I hope you can have a colourful vacation.
【解析】
本文以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题介绍如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义，文章可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍假期可以如何度过的方式以及各自的理由；第三段表达期待大家都能有一个愉快的假期。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

2022年无锡市中考英语书面表达真题
八、书面表达（本大题共20分）
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank” 的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、 朋友……), 请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。
Influence
(...)
Experience
(example/story)
Introduction
(looks; personalities;...)



注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
The Person I Want to Thank
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
The Person I Want to Thank
In my life, many people have helped me a lot, but Miss Wang is one of the most important
persons in my life. I want to thank her most.
Miss Wang is my English teacher. She is beautiful with long hair. She’s very kind and outgoing. She likes to help with others. She has helped me a lot in learning English. She is so energetic that her classes are very interesting and funny. Sometimes she’s too strict with us. I couldn’t do well in English before. With her help I started to take much interest in learning English. I’m good at English now. Not only did she helped me with my English, she also taught me how to face the trouble.
Thank her for giving me so much help. I will study harder and harder.
【解析】
文章属于比较开放的话题作文写作；文章主题是“我想感谢的人”，写作时要紧扣主题；第一段指明我最想感谢的人是谁，并且要对他或她的容貌、性格进行介绍；第二段举出我和他或她之间发生的具体值得感恩的事例；第三段叙述他或她对我的影响。文章采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时；叙述情感要真切。

2022年泰州市中考英语书面表达真题
八、书面表达（满分20分）
78. 我们在变化中成长，成长让我们的人生充满意义。回首三年初中时光，我们在学习、思想、性格、生活等方面发生了很多变化。你所在学校公众号的英语写作栏目正在开展“我的成长”征文活动，请分享你初中三年中的成长故事，具体讲述其中一个变化。
要点如下：
1.变化是什么？
2.变化过程是什么？
3.你从中得到了什么启发？
要求：
1.必须含有所有要点，并适当拓展；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
We grow up in change. Growth makes our life full of meaning. Looking back on the three years of junior high school, I have experienced many changes in my study, thoughts, personality, life and so on. The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually, I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to enjoy my free time.
Books are my friends. And they will benefit me a lot.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题，分享自己初中生活以来的一个变化，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。作文可分为三段，第一段介绍变化是什么；第二段介绍变化过程是什么；第三段介绍从中得到了什么启发。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

2022年徐州市中考英语书面表达真题
六、书面表达（满分20分）
71. 你校在课后服务活动中，根据学生的需求开设了丰富多彩的课程（见下表）。你选修了其中的一门，收获颇丰。你校英文报正在组织题为“Me and my after-class course”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 你选修的课程；
2. 你学习该课程的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
①运动（Sports） ②阅读（Reading） ③手工（DIY）
④绘画（Painting） ⑤声乐（Singing） ⑥……（自拟）
注意：
1. 词数90左右；
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3. 请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Me and my after-class course
In my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Me and my after-class course
In my school, there are many kinds of after-class courses. I choose the course of DIY. DIY literally means making things by hand.
My first assignment was to use the colored bubble mud commonly used by primary school students now, paste a colored blessing on the small board, and then make a frame with colored wool. Because I think everyone has a different understanding of happiness. I made a word Fu into color. It’s quite a test of a person’s patience to do some simple handicrafts, such as cross stitch, folding thousand paper crane...
Through this study, I learned that we can make handmade in many ways. Waste beverage bottles, wool, ice cream sticks and so on can become raw materials for handmade. We can create our own satisfactory works through our own imagination.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。以“Me and my after-class course”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。本文时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时先从表格里选择一个课外课程，之后再根据三个要点展开叙述。文章要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

2022年镇江市中考英语书面表达真题
七、书面表达(共1题;满分15分)
66. 假如你是李华，看到某英语报社将要组织的劳动体验和体育锻炼夏令营活动的宣传。请用英语给编辑写一封信，谈一谈你更想参与的一种活动及理由，并对你选择的活动提出建议。

要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种活动的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2.对你所选择的活动说明理由，并对其提出建议;
3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
Thanks for offering such meaningful camps. I prefer living skills training because all the living skills I will get during the process will be of great value to my later life.
The living skills training will be on a farm. There, I can live with local people who will help me learn more about their customs and lifestyles. Moreover, what makes me interested is that I can cook by myself. In the summer camp, I can take part in activities on the farm such as feeding animals and picking fruit.
I also have some advice for you. I hope there will be more activities like growing plants and vegetables. I hope I will enjoy myself on the farm.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于书信作文写作，要求根据提示要点内容给报社编辑写一封信，谈谈你会选择的夏令营活动项目及选择的理由，并对活动提出建议。
本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅。写作时承接短文开头，即直接说明选择的活动项目以及总体原因，作为信件的第一段；第二段根据提示要点依次说明选择此项目的具体原因；第三段对此项目提出一两个建议并结尾。具体原因的阐述为本文重点，写作时应巧妙运用衔接语言，使列举原因更有条理，更清晰易懂。

2022年常州市中考英语书面表达真题
七、书面表达(共1题;满分15分)
57. 某中学生英文报Your Voice栏目中有如下征文通知，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的想法。
It’s not very easy for teenagers to make true friends. Some of them make friends by following suit (随大流). That means they do the same as their friends, such as playing online games or saying bad words behind others, although they’re not willing to.
Share your ideas about the topic.
1. Is it wise to follow suit in order to make friends?
2. How can teenagers make true friends?
Don’t forget to support your ideas with your experience as an example.
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
I want to share my ideas about the topic._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I want to share my ideas about the topic.
In my opinion, making friends by following suit is not wise. Because everyone is an individual, with his own interests and personality. So don’t follow the crowd and just do what other people like to do.
We should make friends with those who can give us help and share our happiness and sadness. To make true friends, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you will get a smile in return. You can make friends with those who share the same interest with you or those who are totally different from you. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“交友”为话题，结合提示内容进行写作。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。写作时要以第一、第二人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己认为为了交朋友而跟风是否是明智的；第三段介绍青少年怎样才能交到真正的朋友。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

☞【模拟训练】
五、书面表达（共1题, 计20分）
81. 你校举办了“中学生安全教育日”英语征文活动，请根据所给提示，以“Live a Safe Life”为题，写一篇短文参赛。

注意事项：1.词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Live a safe life
As middle school students, we should always keep safety in mind. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Live a safe life
As middle school students, we should always keep safety in mind. Here are some of my suggestions.
Firstly, we should eat healthy food such as fruit and vegetables every day. It’s wise to stay away from too cold food in summer.
Secondly, it’s necessary to follow traffic rules when crossing the road. Don’t ride side by side. It’s wrong to touch mobiles on the way.
Besides, be careful when we make friends online. We’d better not tell others our telephone number, address or passwords, especially strangers.
Finally, we ought not to run after each other at school. Moreover, when having sports, remember to protect ourselves from danger.
In a word, safety must come first.
【解析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Live a Safe Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给出安全的生活的建议”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“饮食、道路安全、交友，校园安全”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，安全必须是第一位的。
[亮点词汇]
①keep...in mind记住
②stay away from远离
③had better最好
④run after追赶
[高分句型]
①Secondly, it’s necessary to follow traffic rules when crossing the road.（It固定句型）
②Besides, be careful when we make friends online.（when引导的时间状语从句）

VII. 书面表达（20分）
71. 公众健康日（7月7日），旨在倡导“全民健康，快乐为本”的理念。随着生活水平的提高，健康越来越受到重视。你们准备组织一个关于“健康”主题的演讲活动，请你根据下面内容，准备一篇题为How to live a healthy and happy life的演讲稿。
How to live a healthy and happy life
健康包括身体（physical）健康和心理（mental）健康。
身体健康
1. 健康饮食；
2. 适当锻炼；
3. 充足睡眠。
心理健康
1. 积极乐观；
2. 与人为善；
3.……（至少一点）
希望
……（至少一点）
注意事项：
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】
How to live a healthy and happy life
Hi, my dear and classmates,
With the improvement of living conditions, we are paying more and more attention to our health, which includes both physical and mental health. Then how can we students live a healthy and happy life?
Firstly, we should keep our bodies healthy. Not only do we need to eat healthy food, but we also need to exercise in a proper way every day. For example, we can run for 30 minutes every morning or play sports after school. Meanwhile, we still need enough sleep every day.
Secondly, mental health is also very important. We need to love our life and try to be active. We need to get along well with others as well. When we’re sad, we can communicate with our parents, teachers and friends frankly.
In a word, I hope everyone can have a healthy body and mind, and then we can have a healthy and happy life every day.
That’s all. Thank you!
【解析】
1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以How to live a healthy and happy life为题写一篇文章，发表一下自己对“健康”这一话题的看法。题目中用表格列出了文章应包括的内容：首先介绍健康的分类；然后分别介绍如何保持身体健康和心理健康；最后提出自己的希望。学生们可以联系自己的日常生活，根据表格中的提示，再增加一些细节信息，用正确的英语进行表达。
2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称为主叙述。写作时应主语：首先文章要点全面，应包括题目中列出的所有要点，并对心理健康和希望进行补充。其次应注意英语句式结构的特点以及与汉语表达方式的不同，使用正确的词汇和句型，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句和其他句式的使用，提升文章档次。最后应注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

七、书面表达（共1小题；满分25分）
76. 新冠肺炎疫情的爆发，让我们感受到生命健康的重要，更加意识到文明生活（Civilized Life）与健康素养（Health Literacy）的重要。请你以健康文明生活方式为主题，写一篇英语短文向校英文报投稿，内容如下：

（1）短文应包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（2）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
（4）参考词汇：积极的态度positive attitude
How To Have A Healthy And Civilized Life?
The outbreak of novel coronavirus makes us feel the importance of life and health.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】

How To Have A Healthy And Civilized Life?
The outbreak of novel coronavirus makes us feel the importance of life and health. Civilized Life and Health Literacy are also important to us. Here are some tips for civilized and healthy lifestyle.
First, good eating habits should be formed. We should eat more vegetables and less meat. Eat a balanced diet every day. Then we should stay a positive attitude which can make us happy and relaxed. Don’t worry about small things. At the same time we had better do some sports. Such as swimming and running. It is a good way to build up a strong body. Besides, if we use public chopsticks, the chance of getting ill will be greatly reduced. Last but not least, we can open our windows more often so that the air is fresh.
Let’s develop a civilized, hygienic, scientific and healthy way of life consciously.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文属于给材料作文，要求结合当前新冠肺炎疫情现状以健康文明生活方式为主题，写一篇短文。文章可以分为三段来写：第一段开头已给出，直接叙述健康文明生活方式的重要性，点出主题；第二段结合要求所给内容，详细表述健康文明生活方式包括哪些，应如何保持；第三段呼吁大家行动起来，共同创建健康的文明的生活方式。
2.写作指导：本文应用一般现在时，内容以第一人称展开叙述；表达内容时注意条理清晰，结构完整，无语法和单词拼写错误。

七、书面表达（25分）
76. “同心筑梦，一起向未来！”作为中学生，应携手共进、守望相助、共创美好未来。某校英语角就“如何实现一起向未来的梦想？”举行一次演讲活动。请你根据以下图表，以“How to realize the dream — Together for a Shared Future?”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿。

要求：（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
How to realize the dream — Together for a Shared Future
Dear friends,
We all live in the same world and “Together for a Shared Future” is our common dream. Today, I’d like to talk about how to realize it.
As students, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all, thank you!
【答案】
How to realize the dream — Together for a Shared Future
Dear friends,
We all live in the same world and “Together for a Shared Future” is our common dream. Today, I’d like to talk about how to realize it.
As students, it’s our duty to protect our environment. We can pick up the rubbish and plant more trees. When people are in trouble, we can give a helping hand, such as giving our seats to people in need on the bus. Besides, it’s meaningful to take part in volunteer work. We can visit an old people’s home to buy things for them. Besides, we can learn our traditional culture through reading more to spread our culture around the world,
I believe if we work together, we will realize our dream.
That’s all, thank you!
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述在环境保护、公益以及举止文明方面实现一起向未来的梦想。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主，讲述实现一起向未来的梦想的建议，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

七、书面表达（共1小题；满分25分）
76. 为了彻底地战胜新型冠状病毒(COVID-19)，我们学校开展了“为抗疫而战”(Fight Against COVID-19)的征文活动，号召大家从身边的小事做起，尽自己最大的努力，为抗疫贡献自己的力量。请你写一篇文章参赛。

疫情的概述
1. 疫情的蔓延阻碍了社会的发展；影响了我们的生活和学习；
2. 很多的医务工作者们奋力工作，努力帮助病人康复。
我们的行动
1. 遵守公共场所规则，如，不聚集，主动出示健康码；
2. 养成良好的卫生习惯，如，勤洗手，戴口罩；
3. ……
参加意义
1. 尊重生命，善待自然，健康生活；
2. 提升自我，乐于助人，……
要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
词汇：健康码 green health codes
At the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out and spread rapidly around the world. It has brought us a great disaster and is challenging us completely._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
At the beginning of 2020, COVID-19 broke out and spread rapidly around the world. It has brought us a great disaster and is challenging us completely.
The spread of the epidemic has hindered the development of society. It affects our life and study. Many medical workers are working hard to help the patients recover. In order to fight against it, we need to observe rules in public places, such as showing green health codes and not gathering. We should develop good hygiene habits, such as washing hands frequently and wearing masks. We have online classes at home in order not to gather.
To respect life, to treat nature well and to live a healthy life are what I have learned in this fight. We should improve ourselves and be willing to help others.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，号召大家从身边的小事做起，尽自己最大的努力，为抗疫贡献自己的力量。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段概述疫情、介绍自己的行动；第三段描述参加的意义。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

七、书面表达（25分）
76. “双减”政策落实以后，同学们的课余生活有了很大变化。某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇“Our wonderful spare time”为题的短文投稿。
（1）过去：作业多，考试难，压力大。
（2）现在：有更多时间，帮助父母表达爱心，亲近自然放松自己……（另举两个活动及益处）
（3）评价或感受：……至少两条。
注意：
1．短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2．词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Our wonderful spare time
On July 24, 2021, the Double Reduction policy came out. Since then, our life has changed a lot and been greatly improved. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】

Our wonderful spare time
On July 24, 2021, the Double Reduction policy came out. Since then, our life has changed a lot and been greatly improved. Next let me talk about it. I used to have a lot of homework every day. So I had to stay up late at night. In the past, I found it difficult to take many exams. I was under great pressure to study. I didn’t have time for other sports. Now everything is better. I have little homework every day, so I can finish it at school. In addition, I don’t have to get up so early, so I can get enough sleep every night.
In my spare time, I can do what I like. I have more rest time. I help my parents do housework to express my love. I have more time to get close to nature and relax myself. I join the art club to learn my favorite piano. This helps to cultivate my hobbies. I often play basketball and football with my friends. I not only exercise now, but also have a good relationship with my classmates. Now I’m very happy. I think “double reduction” policy is very good, which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.
【解析】
1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍“双减”政策带来的一些变化，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

六、书面表达（满分15分）
71. 随着“双减”政策的实施，中学生的书面作业总量减少了，自由支配的时间增多了。为此，某英文杂志社开展以“My colorful school life”为题的征文活动。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文参赛。
课 堂
老师提出问题，学生相互讨论；
学会与他人合作，从而找出解决问题的方法……
课 后
丰富多彩的课外活动，如……
个人感受
……(至少两点）
要求：
1.必须包含表格中所有信息，并适当发挥。
2.文章90词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
3.不得出现真实姓名、校名等。
My colourful school life
My school life is becoming more and more colourful
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【答案】
My colourful school life
My school life is becoming more and more colourful.
In class, our teachers always give us enough time to discuss questions with each other. We can speak, listen, and think. In this way, we have learned how to work with others and find out the ways to solve problems. So our learning abilities have improved.
After class, we have different kinds of activities, such as Buddy Club and English Corner. We can choose one and join it to have fun.
It is really good to have such colourful school life. I’m sure I’ll learn more, and enjoy more in my school life.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文主要描述双减后多彩的校园生活。在写作时应承接短文开头，可适当增加细节
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；叙述校园生活要细致，根据要点适当发挥想象，适当运用连词和固定句型，叙述要完整，注意表达的顺序，保证条理清晰、语言通顺，确保单词拼写、语法和标点使用正确。

六、书面表达（满分20分）
71. 4月23日是第26个世界读书日。读书使我快乐，读书使我明智，读书使我……请根据以下提示信息，以“Reading Makes Me ________”为题，写一篇英文小短文谈谈你的做法和感受。
What do you usually read?
What good reading habits do you have?
How do you feel about reading?
How have you changed after reading?
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息；(姓名、校名和地名等)
4.词数不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Reading Makes Me ________
Reading is a lifelong journey and plays an important role in our life. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Reading Makes Me Live a Meaningful Life
Reading is a lifelong journey and plays an important role in our life. It can not only open our minds, but also make us get more useful knowledge that we can’t learn from school books. I often read books about history and some interesting novels in my free time. The more I read, the more thoughtful I will be. I didn’t use to read before. I spent much time in listening to music, watching TV or playing games. Finally I realized it was bad for me, so I took up reading. Reading has made my life colorful and meaningful. I read books at least three times a week now.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目是写一篇记叙文，讲述自己在阅读中的做法和感受，要求要参考提示内容，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：本文要采用第一人称来叙述；时态上用一般现在时。写作时要适当使用一些副词和连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，结构清晰，表达具有条理性。