12 中国传统文化与礼仪 中考英语满分作文赏析

12 中国传统文化与礼仪

NO.1

（2022·安徽·中考真题）假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下：

1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱；

2.团队合作，历险克难；

3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。

注意：

1.词数80～100；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）

Dear Mike,

Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hui

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Mike,

Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.

The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book, the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally, they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up.

You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like.

Yours,

Li Hui

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，向Mike介绍《西游记》这本书。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍这本书的内容以及想表达的哲理；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

NO.2

（2022·四川遂宁·中考真题）向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封80词左右的自荐信。

要点提示：

1.个人信息：姓名、年龄、班级、性格等；

2.个人优势：

(1)读了很多关于中国历史的书，了解中国历史；

(2)知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们；

(3) ……

3. 个人感想：

(1)可以培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力；

(2)让更多的人了解中国历史和文化，并为之感到自豪。

注意：

1.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯。

3.不可逐词翻译，可适当发挥。

4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

Dear Mr. Yang,

I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it.

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I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Mr Yang,

I’ m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it.

It’s my great honor to introduce myself. I’m a boy from Class One, Grade Eight. My name is Li Hua and I’m 14 years old. I’m an outgoing boy. I have many hobbies, especially reading. I have read lots of classics on Chinese history so I’m familiar with Chinese history and culture. And I know plenty of traditional folk stories, like How Yi Shoots the Suns, Yu Gong Moves a Mountain and so on. I can even tell them in English. And I can get a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the look of joy on their faces while my classmates are listening to me.

In a word, this activity is meaningful. We can not only create an interest of learning English but also improve our spoken English through the activity. As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about our history and culture! I’m proud of it! Only in this way can I make it!

I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文主要是写一封自荐信，根据题干中的提示内容进行写作，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出；第二段主要介绍自己的个人信息和个人优势；第三段讲述自己的个人感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

NO.3

（2022·黑龙江黑龙江·中考真题）假如你是李华， 你的一位笔友约翰发来一封邮件， 说他下星期来中国，他向你询问中国的餐桌礼仪。请你至少用三种句式写五条中国的餐桌礼仪。

1. ______________________________________________________________________________

2. ______________________________________________________________________________

3. ______________________________________________________________________________

4. ______________________________________________________________________________

5. ______________________________________________________________________________

【满分作文赏析】

1. In China, you’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into the food.

2. In China, the youngest person isn’t expected to start eating first.

3. In China, it’s impolite to use your chopsticks to hit an empty bowl.

4. In China, it’s impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks.

5. In China, you shouldn’t reach across the table to pick certain foods. (合理即可)

【解析】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出中国的餐桌礼仪方面的建议，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2. 写作指导：写作时要用不同的句式介绍，应该用第二人称来介绍；时态采用一般现在时，提出建议可以多用情态动词；介绍时文字要简洁，内容要明确，无语法和单词错误。

NO.4

（2022·四川德阳·中考真题）假如你是李华。你校校刊征稿，请你以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题，用英语写一篇稿件，简单介绍中国的茶文化。

内容包括：1.茶是中国最受欢迎的饮料之一，有悠久的历史；

2.茶的种类多，许多地方产茶，如：四川、浙江；

3.茶有益身体健康；

4.一天中的任何时候都可以饮茶，朋友聚会时可以饮茶，一个人独处时也可以饮茶；

5.茶是中国传统文化，可以作为礼物送给亲朋好友。

注意：1.词数80词左右（标题已给出，不计入总词数）；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.不能出现自己的真实信息。

Chinese Tea Culture

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【满分作文赏析】

Chinese Tea Culture

Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. It has a long history. There are different kinds of tea, such as green tea, Pu’er and Tieguanyin. Tea is produced in many places, such as Sichuan, Zhejiang and Anhui. Tea is good for people’s health. People drink tea in any time of the day. You can drink tea with your friends in the party, or enjoy it on your own. Tea is a symbol of traditional Chinese culture. People often offer it as a gift to friends and relatives.

【解析】

1.题干解读：题目要求以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题，用英语写一篇稿件。在写作时应根据题目要求介绍中国的茶的种类，茶的好处，并讲述中国的茶文化等。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

NO.5

（2022·山东枣庄·中考真题）假如你是李华，你的笔友Mark将要来你家做客，向你寻问如何在中国举止得当。请根据下面的提示，给Mark写一封80~100词的回信。把答案写在答题卡上相应位置。（可能用到的单词：chopsticks筷子）

1. 见面礼仪。        2. 餐桌礼仪。          3. 外出礼仪。

   Dear Mark,

I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China.

When you come to my house, __________________________________________________________

When you are eating with us, __________________________________________________________

Before you go outside, __________________________________________________________

A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!

       Best wishes,

Li Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Mark,

I am glad to hear that you are coming to China soon. I’d like to give you some suggestions on how to behave properly in China.

When you come to my house, you need to buy some small gifts, such as some fruit. This is the basic etiquette for Chinese guests when they visit others.

When you are eating with us, you should let the elders move their chopsticks first before we eat. Don’t make too much noise while eating. It’s impolite to point at others with your chopsticks or stick your chopsticks into the food.

Before you go outside, you need to say goodbye to others. It’s polite.

A safe trip to you and I hope to meet you soon!

Best wishes,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据提示内容，给Mark一封信，告诉他如何在中国举止得当。

2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第二人称为主。写作时需包含三个要点：见面礼仪；餐桌礼仪；外出礼仪。承接作文每段开头，展开叙述，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

NO.6

（2022·北京·中考真题）从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据所给提示，完成一篇不少于50词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris对中国文化很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，如待人接物、餐桌礼仪等。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关礼仪。

提示词语：manners, shake hands, polite, gift, chopsticks

提示问题：· What do we do when we meet people for the first time?

· How do we behave properly at table?

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Chris,

I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese social manners. China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here. Let me tell you some of them.

Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup.

I hope the above is helpful. Please feel free to ask for more information.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示问题，给Chris介绍中国人日常生活中的基本社交礼仪，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第二人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段从待人接物、餐桌礼仪方面给出建议；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

NO.7

（2022·广西柳州·中考真题）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack来信说对“中国红”很感兴趣，想了解“中国红”在中国人日常生活中的体现。请你根据以下表格信息写一封回信介绍“中国红”。

注意：

（1）词数70左右；

（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

（3）短文的开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数；

（4）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。

参考词汇：

受欢迎的popular       代表stand for       幸福happiness       好运good luck

春节the Spring Festival             剪纸 paper-cuts       灯笼lanterns       红包red packets

Dear Jack, It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red. I’m writing to tell you something about it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.

Yours,

Li Hua

【满分作文赏析】

Dear Jack,

It’s great to receive your letter. Knowing that you’re interested in Chinese red. I’m writing to tell you something about it. Chinese red, considered as the symbolic color of China, is extremely popular with Chinese people. It usually represents happiness, and we believe that it can bring us good luck.

People in our country attach such great importance to Chinese red that they use many red objects in some important events. For instance, in a wedding, you can see that the bride is in a red wedding dress and the wedding room is decorated with red. What’s more, the houses are also filled with red paper-cuts, lanterns and Chinese Knots during the Spring Festival. Children will get red packets for best wishes as well. Obviously, Chinese red plays a significant role and enjoys the highest popularity in China.

I truly hope my letter will help you understand Chinese red better.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

1.题干解读：本文是一封书信。针对“中国红”进行写作。具体的内容要包含所给的提示，从地位、代表、节日和形式方面进行叙述。

2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。第一段开头已给出，可以接着从地位和代表两个方面介绍“中国红”；第二段可以从节日和形式方面进行介绍；最后一段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。

NO.8

（2022·四川广安·中考真题）坚定文化自信，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，做中华文明的传播者是新时代中国青少年的责任与使命。假如你是李华，近期，一批外国朋友要到你所在的学校参观访问，你将作为学生代表向他们介绍中华优秀传统文化。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。

要求：1.字迹工整，书写规范，不逐字翻译，包含全部要点，可适当发挥；

2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称；

3.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

4.请将书面表达内容写在答题卡上的相应位置。

参考词汇：traditional Chinese culture中华传统文化       influence影响

china瓷器       Beijing Opera京剧       national treasure国粹       technology技术

Dear friends,Welcome to our school. Today, I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.

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Thanks for your listening.

【满分作文赏析】

Dear friends,

Welcome to our school. Today. I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.

There are many kinds of traditional Chinese culture. Some of them have a long history. They have influenced many people.

Beijing Opera comes first. As one of Chinese national treasures, Beijing Opera comes from “Huiban” and it has three parts, including singing, dancing, and speaking. It’s full of famous stories, and it is loved by Chinese people of all ages.

Next, let’s talk about tea. In China there are many different kinds of tea in different areas, such as green tea and black tea. It is good for our health.

The last one is about china. China is the hometown of china. Our china technology is the earliest in the world, and it’s famous all over the world.

Thanks for your listening.

【解析】

1.题干解读：该题目属于讲稿写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述中国传统文化，讲述京剧、茶文化和瓷器。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主，根据提示内容，讲述中国的京剧、茶文化和瓷器，要叙述完整，条理清晰。