上海市静安区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：话题作文

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2022年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题
十四、话题作文
64．Write at least 60 wrds n the tpic “The mving mment in my life”（请以“生活中让我感动的瞬间”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
在你的生活中一定有许多令人感动的记忆，请结合自己的个人经历，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。
（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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2021年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题
VII. Writing（作文）（共20分）
84.Write at least 60 wrds n the given situatin.(根据所给情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室项目，在活动中收获了很多。你在校内外参加过什么有趣有益的项目，并给你留下了深刻的映像。
请以“Making learning fun(乐中学)”为题，分享你的经历或感想。
(注意: 1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不子评分。
2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
2020年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题
十四、话题作文
69．Write at least 60 wrds abut the tpic “My view n nline lessns this March”(请以“今年三月的网课之我见”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
The fllwing is fr reference nly.（以下内容仅供参考）
What is yur view?
Shw us an example r give yur reasn(s.) t supprt yur view.
Give at least ne suggestin yu wuld like t make t yur teacher(s).
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2022年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题
64．例文：
The mving mment in my life
Here is a mving mment in my life that I will never frget.
I still remember that was a rainy day. I failed an exam, and I felt very upset. What was wrse, I didn’t bring an umbrella. Cuntless raindrps beat against my bdy, which seemed that they were laughing at me. Suddenly, the raindrps disappeared. At first, I thught the rain finally stpped. But when I lked up, I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face f my deskmate, Mike. He lked int my eyes sincerely and said, “An exam can’t stand fr everything. I believe yu can get gd grades next time.” His wrds really tuched my heart and cheered me up. After that, I studied harder and made great prgress.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“The mving mment in my life”为题，介绍生活中让自己感动的事情。
2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕主题展开适当的叙述，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。确保语句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。
2021年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题
【答案】
Making learning fun
I’ve jined in varius after-class meaningful activities, f which the vlunteer ne in the lcal nursing huse is the mst impressive. Several classmates and I vlunteered there every weekend last year. We did sme cleaning, chatted with the ld and read newspapers t them. After finishing the whle activity, I benefited a lt because I gt meaningful lessns and fun. First, cleaning the nursing huse develps my ability f ding chre, which prepares me fr living independently in future. Secnd, talking with the ld and reading newspapers t them imprve my cmmunicatin skills and bring me much fun. Therefre, this activity ffers me s many benefits that it’s really impressive and unfrgettable.
2020年上海市静安区中考二模英语试题
69．例文：
My view n nline lessns this March
In rder t stp crnavirus frm spreading this March, students in China are expected t study at hme and have nline lessns. I like this pattern f learning.
I think I can plan my wn time and subjects and it’s very cnvenient fr me because I can study my lessns n cmputers r phnes at any time r any place. I can watch the vides mre than nce. Als if I can’t understand sme prblems, I can find answers nline. Hwever, I had t read and d exercises n a cmputer screen, which hurts my eyes.
In my pinin, bth nline lessns and traditinal lessns are necessary. They can be cmbined tgether t make ur study mre effective. I suggest teachers shuld remind students t d eye exercises and ffer psychlgical guidance. They shuld cmmunicate with students much mre t slve their cnfusin and prblems nline.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题写作。在写作时根据题目要求发表对于三月份网课学习的看法，给出论据来证明自己的观点同时给老师一些建议。
2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍网课的优势及列举论据讲述细致且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：in rder t；stp frm；are expected t；at any time ; d exercises ;in my pinin; be cmbined tgether; cmmunicate with。
句型：because引导的原因状语从句; if引导的条件状语从句；and表示并列的句子,which引导的定语从句。
乐中学习
要点提示
好词好句
开头：引出哪次活动对自己的深刻影响
I have jined in varius ... activities, f which the ... is the mst impressive.我已经参加了各种各样...的活动, 其中...的活动让我刻骨铭心。
正文：举出实例以及得到的收获
after ding sth.= after +句子 之后做某事。
benefit a lt. 收益许多
get meaningful lessns and fun. 得到有意义的课程和乐趣
develp the ability f ding chre 提升做家务的能力
live independently 独立生活
imprve cmmunicatin skills 提升沟通技巧
ffer sb s many benefits 提供许多好处
结尾：点明主旨
Therefre, this activity ffers me s many benefits that it’s really impressive and unfrgettable.
总结连词和s that结果状语从句