上海市普陀区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：话题作文

上海市普陀区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编

话题作文

2022年上海市普陀区中考二模英语试题

X. Writing (作文)  (共20分)

80. Write at least 60 words on the topic “I learned a lot from...”（以“我从……学到了很多”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）

提示：每个人都能通过不同的方式学到有益于成长的东西，请结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感悟。

(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分)

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2021年上海市普陀区中考二模英语试题

X. Writing（作文）（共20分）

84. Write at least 60 words on the topic “_______ has won my respect”. （以“……赢得了我的尊敬”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）

提示：Aunt Sandy 用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的人关心着你的成长？请先补全标题，再结合体事例谈谈自己的感受。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分）

2020年上海市普陀区中考二模英语试题

X.Writing (作文)

69.Write at least 60 words on the topic “My harvest in spring” 【以“春天的收获”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格】

    提示：前段时间，大家在家学习，不少同学在这段时间内不仅培养了自主学习能力还学习了不少其他本领，收获颇丰。请结合具体事例谈谈自己某方面的收获以及从中获得的感悟。

(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)

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答案：

2022年上海市普陀区中考二模英语试题

【答案】例文：

I learned a lot from my teacher

Recently, I’ve learned something helpful from my English teacher Mr. Li for my future life. I’ve had a change in my life. It makes me realize that how important it is for me to be confident.

I was poor at English and my English score was so disappointing that I became mad at myself. But my teacher Mr. Li told me that I could have done much better if I believed in myself. Every time I met with some English problems, I told myself “You should be confident and you can do it.” And out of my expectation, I got an “A” in my English exam a month later. Not until then did I realize I had a gift for English.

There is nothing that I can’t do if I am confident enough.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。以“我从……学到了很多”为题进行写作，在写作时应根据题目要求讲述自己学到有益于成长的东西，需要结合具体实例叙述自己的感悟，可以适当发挥。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主，结合具体事例讲述自己学到有益于成长的东西和自己的感受，要叙述完整，条理清晰。

2021年上海市普陀区中考二模英语试题

【参考范文】

My father has won my respect

The people I respect the most is my father.　　

He is a doctor. He always busy with work. Since I could remember, he has never spent a whole weekend to stay with me. He goes to the hospital very early before I get up, and comes back home after I sleep. But I doesn’t matter at all. He is a hero to me. He devotes almost all the time to his patients, and many lives are saved.　　

He always said, a man should have dignity, integrity, honor, and most of all, be helpful to others. This affected me deeply, so I work hard so that someday I can be the man like my father.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于记叙文写作，要求以“has won my respect"为题写一篇短文谈谈我最尊敬的人，举出一些事例来说明。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，第一段指出谁赢得了我的尊敬；第二段阐述具体事例，第三段总结这我很尊敬这个人。逻辑性要强，保证条理清晰。

2020年上海市普陀区中考二模英语试题

【答案】例文：

My harvest in spring

A period of time ago, each student learnt at home because of the disease. Many of students not only developed the ability to learn alone but also learnt other skills.

As for me, I often spent some time learning to cook food after I finished my homework. In this way, I can offer help to my parents, which allows them to have more time to relax. I think that the skills I have learnt will help me improve myself.

【解析】

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目是话题类书面表达，根据提示内容谈谈自己收获以及自己的感悟。

2.例文点评：例文采用两段式结构，第一段叙述了同学们在家学习，不少同学还学到了其他本领；第二段介绍了作者学到的技能和收获，同时提出了自己的感悟。整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第一人称和第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。

3.高分亮点：

短语：because of；not only…but also…；spend time doing sth.；allow sb. to do sth.；help sb. do sth.。

句型：In this way, I can offer help to my parents, which allows them to have more time to relax. which引导的非限制性定语从句；I think that the skills I have learnt will help me improve myself. that引导的宾语从句。