人教新目标中考英语复习--话题写作--饮食与健康（课件）

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·第一步 细审题 定要点
·第二步 分段落 列要点
·第三步 扩句子 润加工
·第四步 连句子 成短文
·第五步 查全文 得高分
［2022 郴州改编］近段时间，某中学不少学生① 因感冒不能正常上课，影响了学习。为此，学生会主席李华准备利用“English Bradcast”时间建议② 学生养成良好的生活习惯和加强体育锻炼④ ，以提高身体素质。请你根据下面表格提示，为他准备一份英语发言稿③ 。词数:80 左右。
第一步 细审题 定要点
⑤定要点：学生因感冒出现缺课的现象；李华的建议；李华的期望。
1. 文中须包含要点提示中的所有信息，可适当发挥;2. 文中开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数;3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。Bys and girls,Welcme t ur “English Bradcast”! I’m Li Hua, the chairman f the Students’ Unin. ______________________That’s all! Thanks fr yur listening!
第二步 分段落 列要点
首段：提出问题，不少学生因感冒不能上学，影响学习(affect)。中间段：提出要有好的生活习惯和加强锻炼等建议(habit, exercise)。结尾：期望同学们心情愉快和身体安康(happy, healthy)
学生因感冒出现缺课的现象。【易错句】 Many students cannt cme t schl because they have cld.【一般句子】Many students culdn’t cme t schl because they had a cld.
第三步 扩句子 润加工
【美化句子 】 1. __________________________________________________________________________________________________
Quite a few students in ur schl culdn't have lessns as usual because they had a cld.
【建议一】Li Hua 的建议：早睡早起【易错句】 G t bed early is gd fr ur health, s dn’t stay up late.【一般句子】 Ging t bed early is gd fr ur health, s dn’t stay up late.【美化句子】 2. _________________________________________________________________________
Yu'd better g t bed early and nt stay up late.
【建议二】Li Hua 的建议：锻炼健身【易错句】 Yu shuld d mre exercises, fr example, run r walk.【一般句子】 Yu shuld d mre exercise, such as running r walking.【美化句子】3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
D sprts, such as running r walking, fr half an hur every day s that yu can keep fit.
【建议三】Li Hua 的建议：保持一个好心情【易错句】 Yu shuld stay a gd md. It’s gd fr yur healthy.【一般句子】 Yu shuld stay in a gd md. It’s gd fr yur health.【美化句子】4. ___________________________________ ____________________________________
Staying in a gd md is als gd fr yur health.
李华的期望【易错句】I hpe yu t be happier and healthier frm nw n.【一般句子】I wish yu t be happier and healthier frm nw n.【美化句子】5. _______________________________________ _______________________________________
I'm lking frward t seeing yu be happier and healthier!
在单词拼写和语法正确的前提下，把适合自己水平的句子连成完整的短文。
第四步 连句子 成短文
Bys and girls,Welcme t ur “English Bradcast”! I’m Li Hua, the chairman f the Students’ Unin.
Recently quite a few students in ur schl culdn’t have lessns as usual because they had a cld. In rder t make yu strnger, I’ll give yu sme useful advice. ①Firstly ② , it’s imprtant t have a healthy eating habit. Yu shuld eat mre vegetables and fruit but less junk fd. Secndly ③ , yu’d better g t bed early and nt stay up late.
Besides ④ , d sprts, such as running r walking, fr half an hur every day s that yu can keep fit. Lastly ⑤ , staying in a gd md is als gd fr yur health.I’m lking frward t seeing yu be happier and healthier!That’s all! Thanks fr yur listening!
亮点点评 ①过渡句，为前后文内容的连接，起到承上启下的作用。②③④⑤正文的主体部分，用Firstly, Secndly, Besides 和Lastly 给出四条建议，使文章条理清晰。
依次检查：人称、时态、文体、主题是否正确，要点是否齐全；然后检查句型、单词拼写、标点是否正确。
第五步 查全文 得高分
［2021 宁德质检］你校英语俱乐部拟举办以“Hw t Be a Healthy Student” 为题的演讲活动。假如你是李华，请你从身体健康、心理健康两方面写一篇英语演讲稿。词数80 左右。
1. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。Hw t Be a Healthy StudentHell, everyne! It’s a great hnr t give a speech here. Health is imprtant fr students. Here is my advice abut hw t be a healthy student.
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Hw t Be a Healthy StudentHell，everyne！It's a great hnr t give a speech here. Health is imprtant fr students. Here is my advice abut hw t be a healthy student. We need t have healthy eating habits. Fruit and vegetables are gd fr ur health. S eat the right fd t keep urselves healthy. Having a gd sleep als makes us active. D sprts fr an hur every day s that we can keep fit.