高中英语高考北京专用2020届高考英语一轮复习专题八书面表达课件

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高考英语 (北京市专用)
A组  自主命题·北京卷题组考点一　应用文Writing 1(2019北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游,发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.交通出行;2.必备衣物。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,                              Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本题要求给英国好友回复邮件。主体人称为第一、二人称;主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。写作要点:1.交通出行; 2.必备衣物。One possible version:Dear Jim,I'm pleased that you're coming to tour in China.I suggest that you begin from Beijing, and I'll show you around. Tianjin will be your next stop. After that, you can go to Shanghai, where you can stay for a week. You can take high-speed trains to both cities.Summer in these cities is hot and rainy, so take summer wear plus an umbrella with you.Looking forward to your arrival.Yours,Li Hua
Writing 2 (2018北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.仔细审题,注意交际用语;2.要点齐全,合理添加细节;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version:Dear Jim,I'm happy to hear from you. Welcome to Beijing for your study!Since you have long been interested in Chinese culture, I think Beijing Language and Culture Uni-versity is an ideal place for you. The university is known for its language and culture courses in-tended for international students. I believe you will have a rewarding experience there.To be frank, studying for a degree in a different culture is never easy. You'd better learn some ba-sic Chinese before you come. That way, you may adjust yourself to the life here in Beijing soon.If you have any other questions, do let me know.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.ideal adj.理想的2.rewarding adj.值得做的出彩结构The university is known for its language and culture courses intended for international students.(过去分词短语作定语)
Writing 3 (2017北京)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.你建议的线路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为提纲类作文。体裁为应用文中的书信。时态以一般现在时为主。2.先介绍建议的旅游线路,再陈述理由,最后表达祝愿。One possible version:Dear Jim,I'm happy to receive your letter and know you're coming to China.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai, both are highly recommended. Personally, I prefer the tour along the Yangtze, the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civi-lization. You can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people. Moreover, the scenery along the river is amazing, with many well-known sightseeing spots. That's why I think the trip a-long the Yangtze will be a better choice.Hope you'll have a good time in China.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.recommend v.推荐2.civilization n.文明出彩结构That's why I think the trip along the Yangtze will be a better choice.(表语从句)
Writing 4 (2016北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:1.该人物是谁;2.该人物的主要贡献;3.该人物对你的影响。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                         Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.本文属书信体文章,向对方介绍自己喜欢的中国历史人物,时态用一般过去时和一般现在时。2.文章要点包括对自己喜欢的中国历史人物的简介、该人物的主要贡献及该人物对自己的影响。(1)第一段:按照书信的格式礼貌地回应对方;(2)第二段:应对方要求介绍自己喜欢的历史人物、该人物的主要贡献及其对自己的影响;(3)第三段:结尾,希望给对方提供更多的帮助。One possible version:Dear Jim,It's great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favorite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern tech-
nologies and ideas to China. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college, to be a bridge between China and the world.Interested in knowing more?I can find you some books! Just let me know.Cheers!Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇inspire v. 激励,启发出彩结构He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi(Maps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to China. (插入语)
Writing 5 (2015北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件,告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加。邮件的内容包括:1.介绍训练营的相关内容(例如:时间、地点、参加者等);2.说明你打算参加的原因;3.询问对方的意向。注意: 1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。提示词:龙舟训练营　Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文为提纲类作文,在写作时应主要使用第一人称和第二人称,时态包括一般将来时、一般现在时和现在进行时。One possible version:Dear Jim,I'm writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday.I intend to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp.I wonder if you'd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th.It offers teenagers,like you and me,a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture.If you are interested in it,let me know and I'll send you more informa-tion.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇intend to 打算,想要出彩结构It offers teenagers, like you and me, a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. (插入语,对teenagers进行举例说明)
Writing 6(2014北京)你给英国朋友Chris写一封信,内容包括:1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;2.由于脚部受伤,你无法按原计划前往;3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意:1.词数不少于50。2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Chris,                    Yours,Joe
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点: (1)原计划7月份一同去云南;(2)由于脚伤无法前往;(3)表达歉意并提出建议。2.人称:以第一人称为主。3.时态:以一般过去时、一般现在时为主。One possible version:Dear Chris,How is it going?I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July.But now,because my left foot was injured,I cannot go with you as planned.
I'm sorry about it.Can I suggest that we put it off until early August?I wish you could understand.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Joe
精彩语句    精美词汇put off 推迟出彩结构Can I suggest that we put it off until early August? (that 引导宾语从句)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]本文是一篇关于高三学生社会实践的周记。其主题为“劳动最光荣”。主体人称为第一人称;主体时态为一般过去时。写作要点:1.宣传动员;2.准备行李;3.体验劳动;4.回家分享。分段内容:第一段点题;第二段介绍班级宣传动员;第三段为社会实践做准备;第四段体验劳动;第五段回家分享。One possible version:Last week I took part in a farmwork programme in the suburbs.At the class meeting, our teacher told us about the programme with the theme “Working is most beautiful”. And he stressed the importance of working with our own hands.When I got home, I packed up my luggage for the trip.On the farm, we helped pick watermelons. While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.When I came back home, I shared my experiences with my parents. And they were very proud of me.
精彩语句    出彩结构While working, I realised how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun.(While working为时间状语从句的省略;how引导宾语从句)
Writing 2 (2018北京)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录你们上周接待外国学生,带领他们体验中国茶文化的全过程。注意:词数不少于60。
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.介绍、参观;2.演示、观看;3.指导、体验;4.合影。One possible version:Last week, a group of international students visited our school. To help them better understand our tea-drinking culture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea and so on. All the international students were quite interested in my introduction.Then I showed them how to make tea. I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process while making tea. All of them were amazed. They couldn't wait to have a try for themselves.Soon the tea room became lively with every international student trying to make their own tea. We had a lot of fun, practicing, and enjoying the tea.In the end, we took a group photo, with cups or tea in our hands, to record this unforgettable expe-rience.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.tea-drinking culture饮茶文化2.have a try尝试一下,试试看3.lively adj.生气勃勃的;活跃热情的出彩结构1.To help them better understand our tea-drinking culture, we took them to the tea room in our school, where I introduced the history of tea-making and different kinds of tea and so on.(where引导定语从句)2.I sat at a table, explaining every step of the process while making tea.(现在分词短语作状语)3.In the end, we took a group photo, with cups or tea in our hands, to record this unforgettable ex-perience.(with cups or tea in our hands为插入语)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.本文应以第一人称为主,时态以一般过去时为主。2.制作毕业纪念视频的全过程应该包括讨论分工、收集素材、编辑制作以及放映视频四个方面。One possible version:　　Graduation finally came. My classmates and I decided to do something. After a heated discus-sion, we agreed on making a video to record our experiences at school.Material collecting took us a whole week, during which we interviewed our teachers and took pic-tures of every aspect of school life. The editing part after that was tough. We debated over what to put into the video. Some compromises were unavoidable, but the video turned out perfect. Several days later, when the video was played on the graduation ceremony, it was well received. The stu-dents and teachers shared a great time. That surely gave us a great sense of achievement.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.experience n.经历2.aspect n.方面出彩结构We debated over what to put into the video.(疑问词+不定式结构)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.本文属于图表类作文,主体时态应为一般过去时。2.文章要点是对同学们参加学校“地球日”系列活动的介绍。(1)第一段:获知活动信息;(2)第二段:介绍整个活动过程,即具体所做的事情。主要是对废旧物品进行再利用,并把物品赠送给了老人和孩子们;(3)第三段:总结。One possible version:A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the ac-tions for a greener earth.Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, hand-bags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave
them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.
精彩语句    精美词汇come up with 想出,提出出彩结构A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the ac-tions for a greener earth. (现在分词短语作状语)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为图画类作文,在写作时应使用第一人称和第三人称,时态以一般过去时为主。2.内容要点:(1)欢迎;(2)示范;(3)实践;(4)拍照。One possible version:Last Tuesday,our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines.When the craftsman came into the classroom,we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box.First,he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines.We stood around him and watched attentively.Then we started to have a try ourselves.The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally,we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman.Looking at the figurines,we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!
精彩语句    精美词汇attentively adv.聚精会神地,专心地出彩结构...to teach us how to make dough figurines.(how引导名词性从句作teach的直接宾语)
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.                              
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:(1)点明问题;(2)讨论问题;(3)提交建议;(4)看到变化。2.人称:以第一人称为主。3.时态:以一般过去时为主。One possible version:There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked.So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report.Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him.He accepted our sugges-tions.Soon afterwards,a second entrance was opened to the parking place.Now it is easy for us to park our bikes there.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.block v. 堵塞;堵住2.entrance n. 入口,通道出彩结构Now it is easy for us to park our bikes there. (it作形式主语)

Last Monday,                                   
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①告别;②生病;③照顾;④夸奖。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主。One possible version:Last Monday,my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip.He would be away for three days.Just the next morning,I found my mother wasn't feeling well.She had a cold.I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her.With my special care,my mother recovered quickly.When my father came back home,my mother told him what had happened.He praised me for what I had done.I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.
精彩语句    出彩结构With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. (with短语作状语)
Saturday,June 2 FineThis morning,                                   
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为记叙文,主要人称为第一人称和第三人称,基本时态为一般过去时态。2.内容要点:①发现两个游客找不到路;②主动上前询问游客需要什么帮助;③告诉游客线路;④游客上车时互相道别。3.参考词汇:be lost/get lost迷路;go up to...走向……;the Temple of Heaven天坛;appreciate感激;wave挥手。One possible version:Saturday,June 2FineThis morning,when I was walking on the street,I saw that two travelers were reading a map,look-ing puzzled.It seemed that they were lost.I went up to them and asked how I could help.They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven.I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20, which could take them there directly.They appreciated my help greatly.Before long,the bus came.We waved goodbye to each other.Seeing them on the bus,I felt a kind of Satisfaction.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.before long不久,很快2.satisfaction n.满足出彩结构This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, look-ing puzzled. (when引导时间状语从句,saw后面跟着that引导的宾语从句,宾语从句中的looking puzzled为现在分词短语作伴随状语)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为记叙文,记叙自己班上所发生的一个故事,主要人称为第一人称,基本时态为一般过去时态。2.内容要点:①老师上课摔倒;②学生背老师去医务室;③学生探望老师;④学生欢迎老师回到教室上课。文章应以事件发生的先后顺序为线索。3.参考词汇及句型:slip滑倒;clinic诊所,医务室;bandage绷带;It turned out that... 结果……One possible version:Last Monday,we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell.We were all worried about her.One of the boys carried her on the back,with the help of some others,to the clinic immediately.It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in hospital.The following day,we went to visit her with flowers and fruit.Seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages,we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon.This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons.We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.immediately adv.立即2.wrap v.用……包扎出彩结构Seeing her lying in bed with her leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. (现在分词短语作状语)
　　Last weekend,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.                       
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为记叙文,用第一人称,基础时态为一般过去时。2.内容要点:①帮助祖父母上网查询火车票、宾馆、天气等相关信息;②去售票处买票;③帮助祖父母收拾行李,带好必备的东西,如衣服、地图等;④到火车站送祖父母上火车。One possible version:Last weekend,I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.On Saturday morning,together with my grandparents,I searched the Internet for the train schedule,the weather in Beidaihe,and some hotel information.In the afternoon,I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue.After dinner,I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents would need,such as clothes,glasses,an umbrel-la,and a map.The next morning,I went to the station to see them off.Waving goodbye to them on the platform,I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.schedule n.时刻表2.manage to do sth. 设法做到了某事3.see sb. off 给某人送行4.wave goodbye to sb. 挥手道别出彩结构In the afternoon,I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents al-though there was a long queue. (although引导让步状语从句)
B组  统一命题、省(区、市)卷题组Writing 1(2019课标全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir,                                   Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是应用文中的申请信。主要人称为第一人称,主体时态为一般现在时。写作要点:1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。分段内容:第一段介绍写信目的;第二段介绍个人优势及能做的事情,可根据需要做适当发挥;第三段给出适当的结尾。One possible version:Dear Sir,I am Li Hua, a student studying in London, who is more than thrilled to be informed of the mes-sage that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery.I am writing to apply for being a volunteer.As a student from China, I have been keen on Chinese paintings. As you know, China has a grow-ing influence on today's world. In the meanwhile, more attention is paid to the study of the tradi-tional culture in Chinese high schools. So I have got the hang of the knowledge of Chinese paint-
ings. By the way, I can also do well in communicating with others in oral English.I would extremely appreciate it if I have a chance to receive your approval.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.more than thrilled 非常激动　2.get the hang of 掌握……;得知……的窍门出彩结构1.I am Li Hua, a student studying in London, who is more than thrilled to be informed of the mes-sage that there will be a Chinese painting exhibition in your local art gallery.(who引导非限制性定语从句;that引导同位语从句)2.In the meanwhile, more attention is paid to the study of the traditional culture in Chinese high schools.(本句使用了被动语态)
Writing 2(2019课标全国Ⅱ)假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛,内容包括:1.比赛信息;2.赛前准备;3.表达期待。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                         
答案    [写作提示]1.本文是应用文。主要内容是告知队友比赛信息。2.文章的主体时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主。3.文章可以分为三段。第一段是比赛信息;第二段是赛前准备;第三段表达期待。One possible version:Dear Chris,I am very pleased to inform you that we will have a friendly match with the volleyball team of Guangming Middle School next Monday. It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where about 1,000 students from the two schools will come to watch. In order to provide the students with a fantastic match, we need to have enough training. So we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm to 6 pm. I would appreciate it much if you could participate in it on time.This is a friendly game, so we should keep in mind the principle of friendship first. Of course, we are looking forward to winning the game. I am sure we can realize it with our effort together. Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精彩词汇1.in order to为了　2.appreciate v.感激　3.keep in mind记住出彩结构1.It will fall at 2 pm in our gymnasium, where about 1,000 students from the two schools will come to watch. (where引导非限制性定语从句)2.So we plan to practice together in the gym this Wednesday and Thursday, lasting from 4 pm to 6 pm.(本句使用了现在分词短语作伴随状语)
Writing 3(2019课标全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                         
答案    [写作提示]1.本文是应用文中的邀请信,邀请你的英国朋友Allen来参加学校举办的音乐节。主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.写作要点:(1)活动时间;(2)活动安排;(3)欢迎 Allen参加音乐节并表演节目。3.分段内容:第一段介绍写作背景,发出邀请。第二段介绍学校音乐节的时间、安排和相关细节,并适当拓展。第三段欢迎Allen参加音乐节并表演节目。One possible version:Dear Allen, Long time no see! I am glad to invite you to a music festival, which will take place in our school-yard. It is well-known that more attention has been paid to the inquiry of traditional culture in high schools lately. Accordingly, a music festival will be scheduled, which will motivate more adoles-cents to gain all-around development. Furthermore, it is suggested that the participants be seated in
the playground at 8 a.m. next Saturday, when the opening ceremony will be conducted. What a thrilling opportunity! Is it a good idea for you to register to show your talent? Waiting for your early reply.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.take place 举行　2.inquiry n.探究　2.show one's talent 展示某人的才艺出彩结构1.I am glad to invite you to a music festival, which will take place in our schoolyard. (be glad to do sth.; which引导非限制性定语从句)2.Accordingly, a music festival will be scheduled,which will motivate more adolescents to gain all-around development. (which引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 4 (2018课标全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                              
答案    [写作提示]1.本文是回复一封邮件,主要人称为第二人称,写作主体时态为一般现在时。2.文章要点:①到达时间;②合适的礼物;③餐桌礼仪。One possible version:Dear Terry,I am delighted when receiving your letter, asking what customs you should pay attention to when visiting a friend. Here are my tips for you. First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the ap-pointed time, which is of great significance to show your politeness. Additionally, to be respectful, you might as well bring an appropriate gift, like some fruits. Most importantly, it's vital that you should mind your table manners. For instance, never speak with your mouth full of food, which may be similar to your own custom.In brief, do as the Chinese do when in China. I do hope you will have great fun at your friend's home.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.punctually adv.准时地2.be of great significance 很重要3.appropriate adj.合适的出彩结构First of all, bear in mind that you had better arrive punctually or some time earlier than the ap-pointed time,which is of great significance to show your politeness.(that引导宾语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 5 (2018课标全国Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing To-gether,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                              
答案    [写作提示]本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的书面通知。可采用三段三步写作法写作。第一步　审题立意,布局谋篇——“启”:审题确定主题、体裁、主要人称和主体时态。主题:在学校宣传栏“英语天地”发布邀请大家观看短片的书面通知;体裁:书面通知;人称和时态:以第一、二人称为主要人称,以一般现在时和一般将来时为主体时态。第二步　确定、提炼和理顺要点,顺势承上启下,巧妙转折过渡——巧“承”妙“转”,即注意段落之间、句子之间的衔接与过渡。结合要点文章可分三段来写。第一段:介绍短片内容——学校的发展;第二段:说明放映的时间和地点;第三段:表达愿望——希望大家对短片提意见。第三步　紧扣主题,遣词造句——“合”:照应开头和主题的完美的结尾,是画龙点睛之笔。紧扣主题组词成句,做到语言得体、准确无误,避免重复;遣词造句时,注意高级词汇、短语或句式的使用。
One possible version:NoticeDear schoolmates,It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that we'll invite you to see an Eng-lish short film named Growing Together,which is about the development of our school.We have arranged that the short film will be on show from 16:00 to 17:00 at our school theater to-morrow. Don't miss the chance of taking part in this collective activity.I do hope you can give us some valuable suggestions about the short film. Please give your feed-back in time and contact us at your convenience.Students' Union
精彩语句    精美词汇1.on behalf of代表2.take part in参加;参与3.feedback n.反馈4.at one's convenience在某人方便的时候出彩结构It is a great honor to be on behalf of our school to inform you that we'll invite you to see an Eng-lish short film named Growing Together,which is about the development of our school.(that引导宾语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句)
Writing 6 (2018课标全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.学校的体育场馆;2.主要的运动项目;3.你喜欢的项目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                              
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为书信形式的说明文;以第一人称的口吻介绍学校的体育场馆和主要的运动项目;时态以一般现在时为主。2.可采用三段式结构。第一段:介绍背景,引出写作目的;第二段:具体介绍试题给出的三个要点,其中第二个要点可采取列举的方式,第三个要点除了写自己喜欢的体育运动,还要阐述喜欢这项体育运动的原因;第三段:总结并发出邀请。One possible version:Dear Peter,I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong and football, as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I'm
intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.exceedingly adv.非常,极其2.give sb. a rough sketch向某人做简单的陈述3.enjoy great popularity受到了热烈欢迎出彩结构Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong and football, as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity.(with的复合结构作状语,of which引导定语从句)
Writing 7 (2017课标全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容:学习唐诗;3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                              
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为电子邮件,属于书信类。人称为第一人称,写作时态以一般将来时为主体时态。2.内容要点:①上课的时间和地点;②上课的内容:学习唐诗;③课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。One possible version:Dear Leslie,I am writing to inform you of our course schedule of our next class, which is about poetry of the Tang dynasty. We will have it this Friday, in Classroom 602, Building 6. In order to learn it better, you need to do the following things before the next class.At first, please read some materials about poetry of the Tang dynasty, which plays an extremely significant role in our literature. You can find some original poems of famous poets, such as Li Bai and Du Fu. Besides, knowing the history of the Tang dynasty will be of great benefit for you to understand the background of the poems.
You are so diligent and I am glad to teach you. I sincerely look forward to our next class and your reply.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.inform sb. of sth. 通知某人某事2.significant adj.重要的3.original adj. 原始的,最初的4.be of great benefit有很大好处出彩结构Besides, knowing the history of the Tang dynasty will be of great benefit for you to understand the background of the poems. (动名词作主语)
Writing 8 (2017课标全国Ⅱ)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                              
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一般将来时为主体时态。2.文章要点:1)展览时间、地点;2)展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术的历史和作品。One possible version:Dear Henry,I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to invite you to visit the paper-cutting exhibition. Paper-cutting is one of Chinese traditions and I'm sure you will like it.The exhibition will be held in the local museum next Saturday. Some famous Chinese artists will perform on that day. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be exhibited there. It will be a feast. If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting. I'
m sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.exhibition n.展览2.unforgettable adj.难忘的出彩结构1.Meanwhile, some beautiful paper-cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be ex-hibited there.(过去分词短语作定语)2.If you like, you can also join in paper-cutting.(if引导条件状语从句)
C组  教师专用题组考点一　应用文Writing 1(2011课标)假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learn-ing Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:1.本人简介;2.求助内容;3.约定时间;4.你的联系方式(Email:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。
                                             　　Look forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.本文属于书信类题型,建议使用第一、二人称,基本时态为一般现在时。2.内容要点:①本人简介:介绍自己的个人信息。②求助内容:说明在一所英国学校学习暑期课程时遇到的困难;希望得到帮助。③约定时间:具体说明星期几,上午或下午,要有选择性。④联系方式:Email:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678。One possible version:Dear Sir/Madam,I'm Li Hua,a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university.I'm writing to ask for help.I came here last month and found my courses interesting.But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea how to use the library.I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I'm anxious to get help from you.I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons.Please let me know which day is OK with you.You may email or phone me.Here are my email address and phone number:lihua@1236.com;12345678.Look forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
Writing 2(2012天津)假设你是李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他热爱中国文化,特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2:00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》。请你根据以下提示,用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起观看演出。◇提出邀请并简述原因;◇提出观剧后活动建议(如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等);◇请求对方回复。注意:1.请使用规范英语,词数不少于100;2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:越剧Shaoxing Opera《梁山伯与祝英台》Butterfly Lovers天津大剧院Tianjin Grand TheaterDear Chris,I have good news to tell you.                         Yours,Li Jin
答案    [写作提示]1.本文属于书信体文章(邀请信)。建议主要使用第一人称,时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。2.写作要点:提出邀请并简述原因;提出观剧后活动建议(如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等);请求对方回复。One possible version:Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you.A Shaoxing Opera named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in Tianjin Grand Theater,which was just completed,at 2:00 p.m.on August 5th.It is because I know you like the culture of China,especially the drama,that I would like to invite you to admire it.As we all know,Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama,telling about two young persons' moving love story.After watching it,shall we visit some places nearby,such as the art museum,in which lots of rich art will appeal to you enormously?I will be very glad if you can come.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Jin
Writing 3(2012课标全国)假定你是李华,从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,                                        Regards,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为应用文,人称为第一人称,主体时态为一般现在时态。2.文章应先进行自我介绍,然后指出参加意图并希望得到批准,语气应诚恳。3.参考词汇:announcement n.通告,宣告;summer camp n.夏令营;fluent adj.流利的 One possible version:Dear Sir or Madam,I'm Li Hua,a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years,and I speak fluent English.What is more,I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!Regards,Li Hua
Writing 4(2013天津)假设你是某大学的学生李津。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。◇个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等);◇组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、英语晚会等);◇组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等);◇表达当选的愿望。注意:1.词数不少于100;2.请勿提及真实学校名称;3.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;4.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:副主席　vice president竞选　run forGood afternoon,my dear friends.My name is Li Jin.                                   Thank you.
答案    [写作提示]    1.本文可分三段。第一段开门见山,指出自己要竞选副主席一职;第二段根据提示介绍自己的个人优势及工作设想;第三段介绍当选愿望。2.人称需用第一人称,时态以现在时、过去时为主。3.参考短语:have strengths in,hold lectures。One possible version:Good afternoon,my dear friends.My name is Li Jin.It's I who would like to run for the position,vice president of our school English club.As is known to everyone,I once served as monitor in high school and won the top monitor in Se-nior 2,so I have strengths in management.In order to make our school life more abundant and col-orful,I can manage to hold some interesting lectures and English parties.What's more,I shall hold some competitions,such as a debate on how to study efficiently,and an English speech contest to improve our ability to communicate with each other.I'd appreciate it if I could be chosen;I will do whatever I can to lend a hand to others.Thank you.
Dear Sir or Madam,I'm a student from Chongqing,China.                                             Yours sincerely,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.本文属提纲类作文,在写作时要注意要点齐全、层次分明、语气委婉,基本时态为一般现在时。2.内容要点:①说明写信目的;②简述江豚现状;③希望获得的帮助;④表示感谢,期待回复。One possible version:Dear Sir or Madam,I'm a student from Chongqing,China.I am writing to keep you informed of something about the severe situation that finless porpoises,a kind of rare and lovely animals,are faced with presently. It's because of human activities that finless porpoises are endangered.It's amazing that there are
merely less than 1,000 finless porpoises living in China.Thus,it's high time that immediate mea-sures should be taken.Don't you think so?If possible,I hope you can help us by funding our project aimed at protecting finless porpoises.With your financial aid,I am convinced more finless porpois-es will survive.I would appreciate it greatly if you considered my application. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua
Writing 6(2013山东)假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:1.未及时回信的原因;2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。注意:1.词数:120—150;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                         
答案    [写作提示]1.本文可分三段,第一段介绍未及时回信的原因,第二段介绍假期计划,第三段介绍自己的希望。2.本文时态以现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主。3.运用适当的连接词。One possible version:Dear Tom,The final exam is coming and I have been busy preparing for it,which is why I delayed answering your email.I think you will forgive me.After the final exam,the summer holiday will come.My hol-iday plans are as follows.
I have been working hard at my lessons for several months and now I need a break.I decide to go to Beijing.You know,Beijing is the capital of our country and there are many places of interest there,such as the Forbidden City,the Great Wall,the Summer Palace,etc.As is well known,the Great Wall is the longest wall in the world and it is also one of the seven wonders in the world.One who doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a real hero.So I want to climb up the top of it and become a re-al hero.Looking forward to your coming to China.Let's climb the Great Wall together.Yours,Li Hua
Writing 7(2013课标Ⅰ)假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信,告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会,带去他想要的那幅中国画,同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明:李明:高个子,戴眼镜航班号:CA985到达:8月6日上午11:30注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。Dear Peter,How are you doing?               Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.本文属提纲类作文,在写作时主要使用第二和第三人称,基本时态为一般将来时。2.内容要点:①说明写信目的;②请求Peter接机;③介绍李明的外貌特征;④说明航班号、飞机到达时间。One possible version:Dear Peter,How are you doing?I'm writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference,and I've asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you've asked for before.Also,I'd like you to do me a favor.Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to
his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.?Thank you in advance!His flight number is CA985,and it will arrive at 11:30 am,August 6.My uncle is tall and he is wear-ing glasses.And he will be in a blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
Writing 8(2013课标Ⅱ)假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括:1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料)2.象征意义3.价格注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Tom,How are you doing?                    Li Hua
答案    One possible version:Dear Tom,How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with red silk threads,cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond,about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.In China,these knots stand for friendship,love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only 12.99 US dollars each.If anyone wants to know more about the knots,let them write to me.Also,do let me know if you need further information.Thank you!Li Hua
Writing 9(2014陕西)假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。写作要点:1.表示对客人的欢迎;2.介绍此项活动(如活动目的、内容等);3.表达对客人的祝愿。写作要求:1.词数不少于100;2.称呼已经给出,请写欢迎词正文;3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear American guests,                    
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为一篇欢迎词,体裁属于应用文,人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主,在介绍活动时应用一般将来时。2.内容要点:(1)表示对客人的欢迎;(2)介绍此项活动;(3)表达对客人的祝愿。
One possible version:Dear American guests,On behalf of our school,I would like to express our warm welcome to you.We are lucky to have you here in the middle of our English Week activities.As scheduled,we have English Talent Show today.The purpose of this programme is to develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and speaking.The programme consists of the following activities:recitation,singing,word spelling,story-telling and so on.The Show will begin at two o'clock this afternoon at the Student Centre.Dear guests,you are welcome to take part in some activities.I hope we students will benefit from your presence.I sincerely wish you a pleasant time with us.Thank you.
Writing 10(2014重庆)青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的“最好礼物”。她认为,礼物贵在心意,应为之付出时间和精力。假设你是李华,请用英文发帖,内容应包括:·赞同Susan的看法·你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么·该礼物的意义·期待大家回复注意:(1)词数不少于80;(2)符合语言规范;(3)开头已给出(不计入总词数)。I am a high school student from China.                    
答案    One possible version:I am a high school student from China.Recently I have read an article written by Susan Beacham,who thinks whether a gift is suitable lies not in its value but in the giver's heart,and that the giver should devote time and energy to the gift.I agree with Susan,whose article reminds me of my best gift,a pen,given by my father,who was a worker.When I was in junior middle school,my father bought me a nice pen with his low salary,wishing me to study hard.From then on,the pen has been my best companion,encouraging me to study hard.I am looking forward to everyone's reply.
Writing 11 (2015陕西)假定你是李华,在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。写作要点:1.表达写信意图;2.陈述应征目的;3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。写作要求:1.邮件词数不少于100;
Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival,which will be held on June 15—17,2015,is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English Debate.If you are interested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯;4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear Ms Chen,I'm Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.                         Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为提纲类作文,在写作时主要使用第一人称,时态主要包括一般现在时和一般将来时。2.内容要点:(1)表达写信意图;(2)陈述应征目的;(3)说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。One possible version:Dear Ms Chen,I'm Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.I'm writing to apply for the position as a student vol-unteer.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,I will be able to improve my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking Eng-lish in public.
As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides,I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by both teachers and my classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua
Writing 12(2015课标Ⅰ)假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍;2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400词;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。Dear Peter,I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.               
答案    [写作提示]本文为书信体提纲式作文。写作时以一般现在时为基本时态,以第一人称为主体人称;注意要点要齐全,包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日期;写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡词,以使文章行文连贯、流畅,这一点是高考英语高分作文所必须具备的要素。One possible version:Dear Peter,I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries ar-ticles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?I'm looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua
Dear Harry,How are things going?Last Monday,                    Best wishes.Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.要点要全面,本文包括四个要点:(1)演讲;(2)投票;(3)结果;(4)祝贺;2.尽可能在准确使用简单句的基础上使用一些较高级的语法结构和词汇,以增加文章的亮点。One possible version:Dear Harry,How are things going?Last Monday,our class held a monitor election.This was our first election,so everyone was excited.Two of my classmates took part in the race:Liu Dong and Wang Hong.They each gave a speech telling us what they would do when they were elected.Then we voted for the monitor.The result was 28 to 15 in Wang Hong's favor.Wang Hong became our new monitor.The whole class cheered for her,and she promised to do the best she could for us all.Best wishes.Li Hua
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.本文应使用第一人称,时态应该以一般过去时为主;2.我们开班会讨论去哪里春游(have a discussion/discuss where to go for our spring outing);3.大家提出(come up with)几种建议,最后决定去爬山;4.爬山时,我们玩得很高兴,但到达山顶时看到到处都是垃圾(see litter here and there/every-where);5.大家开始捡垃圾;6.自己的感想。
One possible version:Our Spring OutingLast Thursday,we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choices such as going boating,climbing a mountain,or going to an amusement park.Finally,we decided to go mountain climbing.The next day,we set off early in the morning.While climbing the mountain,we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However,when we reached the top,we were shocked to see litter here and there,such as bottles and banana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.We were tired but happy.
                                        
答案    [写作提示]本文为记叙文,主要用第一人称,基本时态为一般过去时。1.早晨骑车去郊区植树;2.植树过程;3.竖立“爱护树木”的警示牌;4.合影留念;5.植树感受。One possible version:Green Action in Our ClassApril 12th is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day.In the morn-ing,we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,talking and laughing all the way.Upon arrival,we be-gan to work immediately.Some were digging holes.Some were carrying and planting trees.Others were watering them.After getting the work done,we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees.Before leaving,we took some photos to record our green action.Seeing the lines of trees,we all had a sense of achievement.We all think it's our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
A组  2017—2019年高考模拟·考点基础题组考点　应用文Writing 1 (2019北京西城一模)你的英国朋友Jim对你们学校的学生课外活动非常感兴趣。他来信希望你介绍这方面的有关情况。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.学校有哪些课外活动;2.你最喜欢哪一类活动;3.喜欢的原因。注意: 1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。提示词:课外活动 extracurricular activity
Dear Jim,                              Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,向对方介绍学校的课外活动并给出自己最喜欢的一类活动及原因,时态一般现在时为主,所用人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。One possible version:Dear Jim,I'm happy to hear that you're interested in the extracurricular activities organized by our school. Now, I'd like to give you more details.A variety of activities have been organized, such as visiting the Capital Museum, taking a field trip to Qufu, Shandong, home of Confucius, planting trees in Mangshan National Forest Park and learning to bake a cake in a pastry shop, just to name a few.The activities mentioned above are quite popular with students. My favorite kind of activity is field trips. I went to Qufu in Senior One and Hangzhou in Senior Two. Both trips deeply impressed me. The reasons why I like field trips are as follows. First, field trips offer me a good chance to broad-
en my horizons. As the Chinese saying goes: “It is better to travel ten thousand miles than to read ten thousand books.” Not only can I learn from locals and my own experiences, but also I can see our beautiful country and splendid culture with my own eyes. Second, field trips improve my re-search skills. Before we take field trips, we are always asked to prepare by searching online or in the library for useful information. Third, field trips help strengthen friendships. Since many of the field trips last several days, it is a good opportunity to bond with classmates better outside the classroom.I really hope that you can go on a field trip with us in the future.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.broaden one's horizons 拓宽某人的视野2.a field trip 实地考察出彩结构Not only can I learn from locals and my own experiences, but also I can see our beautiful country and splendid culture with my own eyes. (not only...but also...句式,not only位于句首,其后面的句子用部分倒装)
Writing 2 (2019北京海淀一模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他暑假将来北京参加“外国人唱中国歌大赛”,希望你为他推荐一首中文歌曲。请给他回邮件,内容包括:1.推荐曲目;2.推荐理由;3.你的祝愿。注意: 1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,向对方推荐一首中文歌曲并给出理由,祝对方在比赛中取得好成绩,时态以一般现在时为主,所用人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。One possible version:Dear Jim,How is it going? I'm so glad to hear you will come to Beijing and participate in the Chinese Singing Competition for Foreigners this summer vacation. For the song to choose, I highly rec-ommend Mo Li Hua, called Jasmine Flower in English, which is representative of Chinese folk music.My recommendation is based on the following reasons. First of all, it enjoys wide popularity, so there's no doubt that it will attract the audience's attention once you start to sing. Moreover, this song has a beautiful melody and simple lyrics, which are relatively easy for you to learn in a short time. At the same time, the soothing tunes will make your learning process pleasant and comfort-
able. I bet you are bound to stand out among all the competitors.I sincerely hope my recommendation can be helpful and wish you a wonderful performance. When you come to Beijing, remember to let me know, since I'd like to be there to cheer for you.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.participate in 参加2.be based on 以……为基础3.be bound to 一定……4.stand out 突出;出色出彩结构For the song to choose, I highly recommend Mo Li Hua, called Jasmine Flower in English,which is representative of Chinese folk music. (which引导非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词Mo Li Hua)
Writing 3 (2019北京东城一模)假设你是红星中学学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他想了解北京近几年发生了怎样的变化。请给他回复邮件,内容包括:1.变化;2.原因;3.感受。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,向对方介绍北京发生的变化及其原因,以及自己的感受。时态以一般现在时为主,所用人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。One possible version:Dear Jim,I'm very glad to know that you are interested in the changes in Beijing. Let me tell you some of the development during the past few years.I have witnessed many great changes in my city. The most impressive one is the rapid development of transportation. In the past, people travelled mainly by bus. Nowadays, with more and more subway lines built, it is much faster and more convenient for people to go almost everywhere. Ad-ditionally, the spread of public bikes helps people travel any distance more easily. All these couldn't have happened without the measures taken by the government and applications of new technol-ogy.
I enjoy these conveniences every day and feel proud of my city. I am confident that Beijing will become more liveable in the future. Just come and have a look yourself!Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇take measures 采取措施出彩结构All these couldn't have happened without the measures taken by the government and applications of new technology. (双重否定表示肯定)
Writing 4 (2019北京朝阳一模)假设你是红星中学高三的学生李华。你班交换生Jim将要参加“学在中国”留学生汉语演讲比赛,来信向你咨询。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.推荐一个演讲话题;2.说明推荐的理由;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,向对方推荐演讲话题并给出理由,以及建议对方应该做哪些准备工作。时态以一般现在时为主,所用人称主要为第一人称和第二人称。One possible version:Dear Jim,I'm glad to know that you'll take part in the “Studying in China” Chinese Speech Contest for overseas students. I'd like to give you some suggestions.I recommend that you talk about the courses on Chinese traditional culture you've attended. The major reason is that they introduce the real treasure in human history. Besides, since you've taken the courses systematically, you're sure to have a deep understanding of them.To do it well, I think you should choose impressive examples to gain the recognition of the judges. Moreover, you have to practice your spoken Chinese to express yourself more clearly and fluently. Speaking skills are also needed, for they can help maximize the effectiveness of your speech.I really hope my advice will be helpful. Wish you a great success.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.take part in 参加2.attend courses 修读课程3.be sure to do sth. 一定会做某事出彩结构Besides, since you've taken the courses systematically, you're sure to have a deep understanding of them. (since引导原因状语从句)
Writing 5 (2019北京西城二模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim来信说他在英国学校参加了中国书法俱乐部。擅长书法的你决定写一幅书法作品寄给他,并附上一封信。信的内容包括:1.该作品的内容;2.送该作品的原因;3.表示愿意提供帮助。注意: 1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。提示词:书法calligraphyDear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,向朋友介绍自己赠送给他的书法作品以及送该作品的原因,并告诉对方自己愿意帮助对方。所用人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。One possible version:Dear Jim,I am glad to know that you have joined your school's Chinese calligraphy club. The calligraphy piece I sent to you was written by myself. I really hope you will like it.The Chinese characters on the piece are “天道酬勤” (Tian Dao Chou Qin), meaning “Hard work pays off.” It is a well-known Chinese idiom, widely adopted as a motto by Chinese people. There is a similar calligraphy piece hanging in the study at my home, which was written by my grandfather. He gave it to me when I started to learn calligraphy at age six in the hope that I would practise it often and learn it well. You see now my efforts have paid off. I hope it can serve as an encouragement to you at all times. I wrote this piece in the calligraphic style of my favorite callig-
rapher, Yan Zhenqing, a renowned master of the Tang dynasty. His style is Kaishu, a standard script, suitable for beginners. I guess maybe it is the style that you are practising.I know it is not easy to learn Chinese calligraphy. If you have any problems during your study, I would be happy to help you. I sincerely hope you enjoy learning Chinese calligraphy!Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.pay off取得成功2.be suitable for 适合出彩结构It is a well-known Chinese idiom, widely adopted as a motto by Chinese people. (非谓语动词作定语)
Dear Sir/Madam,                                        Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,向组委会申请成为志愿者,给出理由并表明自己的优势和期待。所用人称主要为第一人称。One possible version:Dear Sir/Madam,I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student in Hongxing Middle School. Learning that you are recruiting vol-unteers for the coming 18th World Middle School Games in Jinjiang, Fujian, in 2020, I am writing to apply for this position.As a super fan of sports, I am eager to expose myself in various sports-related activities. World Middle School Games are such a golden opportunity to meet the outstanding teenagers worldwide that I really don't want to miss it. In addition, the voluntary service will offer a precious chance to contribute to our society, which appeals to me very much.I believe I am a qualified candidate. A good command of English ensures that I can communicate
with the foreign athletes effectively. Moreover, with my love and knowledge of sports as well as Chinese history and culture, I can fulfill my role not only as a successful coordinator but also a cul-tural ambassador to spread the splendid Chinese culture.I am longing to join you and I would be grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your consideration.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.apply for 申请2.long to do sth. 渴望做某事出彩结构In addition, the voluntary service will offer a precious chance to contribute to our society, which appeals to me very much. (which引导非限制性定语从句,修饰前面一整句话)
Writing 7 (2019北京海淀第一学期期末)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友 Jim 希望了解你在过去一年中的最大收获。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.简述你的最大收获;2.谈谈该收获对你的影响;3.表达对新一年的期待。注意:1.词数不少于 50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,               Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,向对方介绍自己在过去一年中的收获和该收获对你的影响,以及对新一年的展望。时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主。One possible version:Dear Jim,How is it going? In your email, you mentioned you wanted to know my greatest harvest in the past year, so now I'm very delighted to share it with you.Last October, I celebrated my 18th birthday with my classmates, symbolizing that I have grown up. Learning to take responsibility as an adult is the biggest reward for me and it has many positive influences on my life. Firstly, I am much clearer about my goal in life and I feel highly motivated to achieve it. More importantly, I learn to appreciate what I have already had. The love and dedica-tion of my teachers and parents keep me going, and all I need to do now is to play my part.When it comes to the coming year, I do hope I can achieve my dream and be admitted to my ideal
university. Meanwhile, I sincerely hope all your best dreams can come true!Looking forward to your good news.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.take responsibility 承担责任2.achieve one's dream 实现某人的梦想3.be admitted to 被录取4.come true 实现出彩结构Last October, I celebrated my 18th birthday with my classmates, symbolizing that I have grown up. (非谓语动词作状语)
Writing 8 (2019北京西城第一学期期末)春节将至,你校英国交换生Jim接受了去你家共度除夕的邀请,请你就他关心的问题写一封邮件。内容包括:1.很高兴他接受了邀请;2.介绍你家除夕的安排;3.答复他的问题(如:是否带礼物……)。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,回答对方提问的关于共度除夕的相关问题。时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主,所用人称主要为第一人称和第二人称。One possible version:Dear Jim,I'm glad to hear you will spend the New Year's Eve with my family! Now I'm going to tell you our arrangements.To celebrate the special occasion, we have many activities. In the morning, my father, a calligra-phy lover, will write some copies of the Chinese character “Fu”, meaning good luck, which is a tradition in my family. You may join me in giving them to our neighbours, an act of spreading
happiness and joy. Preparations for the big evening feast usually start in the afternoon. My mum will cook varieties of delicious food, including your favourite Jiaozi. We can help her. In the evening, watching the Spring Festival Gala is part of the celebration.As for your questions, I suggest you come early to experience more of the festival. How about 10:00 a.m.? There is no dress code for the New Year's Eve, but some Chinese prefer to wear red, which stands for happiness and good fortune. Gifts are not necessary. If you really want to bring something, candies, nuts or fruit will do.Join us and let's have fun together!Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.varieties of 多种多样的2.dress code 着装规定3.stand for 代表出彩结构In the morning, my father, a calligraphy lover, will write some copies of the Chinese character “Fu”, meaning good luck, which is a tradition in my family. (a calligraphy lover为同位语,补充说明我爸爸是个书法爱好者;meaning good luck是非谓语动词作状语;which is a tradition in my family为非限制性定语从句)
Writing 9 (2019北京东城第一学期期末)假设你是红星中学学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在邮件中提到他对北京的胡同很感兴趣,请你给他回复邮件,介绍一个你喜欢或你熟悉的胡同。内容包括:1.该胡同的名称;2.该胡同的特点;3.发出来京邀请。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,向对方介绍北京的胡同并发出让对方来参观的邀请,时态以一般现在时为主。One possible version:Dear Jim,Nice to hear from you. I'm glad to know from your e-mail that you're interested in hutongs in Bei-jing. As for me, my favourite is Nanluoguxiang.Nanluoguxiang is one of the oldest hutongs in an old part of the city center. It's not very long, only about 700 meters, but lined with many traditional buildings and gift shops. There, you can not on-ly have a taste of Chinese architecture, but also enjoy local snacks. In addition, many famous Chi-nese writers used to live there, which makes the place a special one.I have been to Nanluoguxiang many times, but every time I visit it, I always find something fresh. So welcome to Beijing to experience its magic. I am sure you will love it too. I am looking forward to your visit.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.be lined with 排列着2.used to 曾经出彩结构There, you can not only have a taste of Chinese architecture, but also enjoy local snacks.(not on-ly...but also...结构)
Writing 10 (2019北京朝阳第一学期期末)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你班交换生 Jim 假期要回国,打算为父母带件礼物,写信向你征求建议。请你给他回封电子邮件,内容包括:1.推荐一份礼物;2.说明推荐理由;3.建议如何购买。注意:1.词数不少于 50;2.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]本文是书信体文章,给出推荐给对方的礼物并说明理由和购买方式。时态以一般现在时为主,所用人称主要为第一人称和第三人称。One possible version:Dear Jim,I hear that you'll go back home and want to buy your parents a gift. Here is my suggestion.I think Chinese stamps would be a nice choice. Stamps are considered works of art of mini-type, which hold commemorative value and can be a permanent collection. What's more, stamps cover natural landscapes, major events and so on. Your parents can get to know about China from them. Besides, taking up little space, stamps are easy to carry. It is convenient to go to any post office or the website of China National Philatelic Corporation to choose your favorite stamps.I'm sure your parents will like the gift. Hope my advice can be of some help.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.take up 占据2.be of some help 有一些用出彩结构Stamps are considered works of art of mini-type, which hold commemorative value and can be a permanent collection. (which引导非限制性定语从句,修饰stamps)
Writing 11(2018北京西城一模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你写信建议你的美国朋友George 参加《中国日报》(China Daily)专门为外国人举办的2018“最美中国”(Amazing China)手机摄影大赛。信的内容包括:1.作品内容要求;2.提交时间和方式;3.表示愿意提供帮助。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear George,                    Yours, Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.注意交际用语,创建真实语境;2.将大赛内容交代清楚,不仅要要点齐全,还要注意适当扩展;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version:Dear George, How is everything going?I have some exciting news for you! China Daily will hold a mobile pho-to contest whose theme is “Amazing China”, only open to foreigners. I know you love photog-raphy, so why not give it a try?The contest welcomes submissions about natural scenery, places of historical interest, local cus-toms, and so forth. And every photo should be accompanied by an explanation:the time, place, name of the work, and story behind it.Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted.Each participant can turn in three photos at most to liuying@chinadaily.com. The
deadline for entries is Oct. 15, 2018. For more information, you can refer to China Daily's official website. Well, I have to go now, for I have tons of homework to do. If you are interested, I'm more than happy to be your photography companion.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.submission n. 提交(物)2.and so forth等等出彩结构1.China Daily will hold a mobile photo contest whose theme is “Amazing China”, only open to foreigners. (定语从句)2.Photos edited with Photoshop or any other software will not be accepted.(非谓语动词短语作定语)
Writing 12(2018北京海淀一模)下面是你的美国朋友Jim给你的一封邮件。请给他回一封邮件。Feb. 16, 2018Dear Li Hua, Happy Chinese New Year!According to the Chinese zodiac, a baby born this year is a “Dog”. So amazing! How many zo-diac signs are there in Chinese culture?You know, I was born in the summer of 2000. Could you please tell me what my zodiac sign is?And what does my zodiac mean?Thank you and look forward to your reply.Yours,Jim                    
答案    [写作提示]1.仔细阅读信件,理解来信者的要求;2.注意交际用语,创建真实语境;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version: Dear Jim,Thank you for your New Year greetings, and I'm very happy that you're interested in the Chinese zodiac.Actually, there are altogether twelve zodiac signs in Chinese culture. As you were born in 2000, the year of the Dragon, your zodiac sign is the “Dragon”. The “Dragon” in Chinese culture mainly conveys two meanings. First, it is a symbol of power and strength. Second, a Chinese dragon delivers the meaning of being outstanding and extraordi-nary. Parents often put Chinese character “Long”, which means dragon, in kids' name to show
their higher expectations. That's all about my brief introduction. Hoping it'll help you have a better understanding of China.If you have any further question, please let me know. Yours, Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇the Chinese zodiac生肖出彩结构Parents often put Chinese character “Long”, which means dragon, in kids' name to show their higher expectations. (非限制性定语从句)
Writing 13(2018北京东城一模)你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文,感觉有些难,来信希望你能给他一些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.中文难学的原因;2.你的建议及理由;3.你的祝愿。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.注意交际用语,创建真实语境;2.不仅要要点齐全,还要注意适当扩展;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version:Dear Jim, It's great to know that you have begun to learn Chinese! You say you find Chinese difficult to learn. I quite understand your problem. Different from your language, most Chinese characters are from images. For English, most of the time, you'll know how to pronounce a word when you see it. But it is impossible in Chinese. In addition, Chinese grammar is totally different from English grammar. That definitely brings you more trouble.However, any learning takes time. Don't worry. I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help
you know how to read Chinese characters. Besides, listening to Chinese songs or watching Chinese movies will also help. The more you are exposed to the language, the more familiar you will get with it. I wish you every success in learning the language. If you have any further questions, feel free to ask. Good luck! Yours, Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇be exposed to接触出彩结构1.I suggest you start with Pinyin, which will help you know how to read Chinese characters. (非限制性定语从句,修饰Pinyin)2.Besides, listening to Chinese songs or watching Chinese movies will also help. (动名词短语作主语)
Writing 14 (2018北京朝阳一模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国笔友Jim对中华传统文化很感兴趣,经常与你讨论这方面的话题。最近你参加了一次相关活动,请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.介绍这次活动;2.说明参加的理由;3.表达参加后的感受。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.注意交际用语,创建真实语境;2.不仅要要点齐全,还要注意适当扩展;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version:Dear Jim,How's everything going?I know you're interested in traditional Chinese culture, so I'm writing to tell you one of my recent experiences.I visited the Capital Museum during the winter vacation and explored Chinese history and culture. I chose it as my destination because it houses a variety of exhibits, like paintings, antiques, handi-crafts and so on. Besides, the architecture of the museum features the combination of tradition and modernity. The visit is indeed worthwhile. I'm amazed at the wisdom of Chinese people and im-pressed by the brilliance of Chinese civilization.Have an itch for the visit?I'd like to show you around the museum. Waiting for your coming!Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.a variety of各种各样的2.be amazed at 对……感到惊讶3.be impressed by 对……印象深刻
Writing 15(2018北京海淀二模)你班英语课上以“I Have a Dream”为题进行“说”的练习,请写一份讲稿,内容包括:1.你的梦想是什么;2.你为何有此梦想;3.你如何实现梦想。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。　　Hello, everybody!                          Thank you.
答案    [写作提示]1.注意演讲用语,语言具有感染力;2.不仅要要点齐全,还要注意适当扩展;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version:Hello, everybody! I'm very glad to share my dream with you. I have a dream that one day I could be a pianist. I dream of playing a sweet tune for those who need music, bringing happiness to sorrowful souls and enthusiasm to weary spirits. I love music, and I love the feeling of playing music in front of the audience. Of all the instru-ments, the delicate yet powerful sound a piano makes impresses me most. It's clear that I have a long way to go before I realize my dream. Therefore, I will practise every day as long as time permits and learn as many songs as I can. I will put my heart into my pursuit of music and never give up. I am confident that one day my dream will come true. Thank you.
精彩语句    精美词汇pursuit n.追求出彩结构1.I have a dream that one day I could be a pianist.(同位语从句)2.I dream of playing a sweet tune for those who need music, bringing happiness to sorrowful souls and enthusiasm to weary spirits. (现在分词短语作状语)
Writing 16(2018北京海淀第一学期期末)假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华。来自美国姊妹校的部分学生将于下周五访问你校,请你用英文准备一份欢迎词,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.说明当天的安排:1)观摩并体验太极拳(Tai chi);2)游览一处北京名胜。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear friends,                     
答案    [写作提示]1.注意稿件形式,具备欢迎词的特点;2.不仅要要点齐全,还要注意适当扩展;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version:Dear friends, We are very excited to have you here and on behalf of my school, I extend our most sincere wel-come to you. Here is today's arrangement, which, I hope, would make your day both delightful and rewarding.As scheduled, you will first watch a Tai chi show by some teachers of our school. Later, if you're interested, you can try learning to play Tai chi, which enjoys great popularity across China.
In the afternoon, the school bus will drive you to the Forbidden City, a must-see attraction espe-cially for those who come to Beijing for the first time. You'll be amazed at the architectural style and the masterpieces and treasures well preserved there. Once again, I hope that you will enjoy your day! Thank you very much!
精彩语句    精美词汇on behalf of代表出彩结构Here is today's arrangement, which, I hope, would make your day both delightful and rewarding. (插入语)
Writing 17(2018北京东城第一学期期末)你的美国笔友Jim来信询问中国教师节的情况。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.教师节的时间;2.学生向教师表达祝福的方式;3.庆祝教师节的意义。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.注意交际用语,创建真实语境;2.不仅要要点齐全,还要注意适当扩展;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version:Dear Jim,I am very glad to know that you are interested in Teachers' Day in China.We celebrate Teachers' Day every September 10th. On that day, we will send our best wishes and express our thanks to our dear teachers for their hard work. Some students write thank-you cards to our teachers;others would like to send them beautiful flowers. Sometimes we prepare perfor-mances or give them handmade gifts. In our school, we also have a tradition of serving tea to each teacher in the morning.
I think Teachers' Day is a meaningful celebration. It gives us a chance to show our respect and love to our teachers. What's more, respecting teachers is also a tradition for us Chinese.Do you have a similar celebration for teachers?Looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.celebration n.庆祝2.look forward to 期盼出彩结构What's more, respecting teachers is also a tradition for us Chinese. (动名词作主语)
Writing 18 (2018北京海淀第一学期期中)你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣,并请你向他推荐一部优秀的中国文学作品。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.书的题目和作者;2.书的主要内容;3.你的推荐理由。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                     Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.注意交际用语,创建真实语境;2.不仅要要点齐全,还要注意适当扩展;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。One possible version:Dear Jim,Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am a litera-ture lover myself. I recommend a well-known Chinese book titled Ordinary World to you.The book was written by a famous Chinese writer, Lu Yao. It centers on the life and destinies of three families of Sun, Tian and Jin in a village. It portrays the tough process of building up a better and wealthier life during
the very beginning of the Chinese economic reform.Reading the book, you will be greatly affected by the courage and spirit of the main characters. That's why I make this recommendation.I am looking forward to your view of this book.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    出彩结构Knowing that you are interested in Chinese literature, I am more than excited because I am a litera-ture lover myself. (现在分词短语作状语)
Writing 19(2017北京海淀一模)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你的职业规划,请你给Jim回信,内容包括:1.你希望从事的职业;2.你选择该职业的原因;3.你打算为之做何准备。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                     Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.注意交际用语,创建真实语境;2.合理说明写信原因,从看信者角度去思考什么样的原因会更具有吸引力;3.请有条理地陈述选择的原因和要做的准备,符合实际情况。One possible version:Dear Jim,How is everything going?I am glad to receive your e-mail, in which you asked me about my career plan for the future. Now I am writing to share it with you in detail.I made up my mind to be a journalist when I visited the Xinhua News Agency, the top one in Chi-na, last year. Based on the following two reasons, I chose it as my career. First, it is a job that can get me exposed to new things every day and thus keep me energetic and passionate all the time since I really hate to follow the same routine every day. Second, working as a journalist can help
realize my childhood dream of being a hero by fighting against evil and spreading justice. To achieve this goal, I plan to apply for the Communication University of China, whose major, Journalism, has been ranked the first for many years in a row across the whole country. After get-ting my Bachelor's degree of Journalism, I will continue my study in a world-famous university to broaden my horizons to better fit my future post.That is all about my career plan. What do you think of it?I am looking forward to knowing some-thing about yours if you have got one.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    精美词汇1.make up one's mind下定决心2.get...exposed to...使……接触……出彩结构1.I am glad to receive your e-mail, in which you asked me about my career plan for the future.(定语从句修饰e-mail,用in which比用where更正式)2.Based on the following two reasons, I chose it as my career.(过去分词短语作状语)3.First, it is a job that can get me exposed to new things every day and thus keep me energetic and passionate all the time since I really hate to follow the same routine every day.(定语从句)
Writing 20(2017北京东城一模)假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李华,你的美国笔友Jim在邮件中提到他作为交换生要来中国学习,他将住在中国接待外国留学生的家庭,他询问住在中国家庭是否会有文化差异。请你给Jim回信,内容包括:1.表示祝贺;2.说明可能会遇到的文化差异;3.提出建议。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,                    Yours,Li Hua
答案    [写作提示]1.注意交际用语,创建真实语境;2.要点齐全,尤其体现要点的句子需要表达清楚、准确;3.可能会遇到的文化差异要符合实际的生活,切忌扩展过度、跑题的现象发生。One possible version:Dear Jim,I'm happy to know that you will come to China to study and stay with a host family. Congratula-tions! It will be a great chance to learn Chinese culture.However, I would like to remind you that some cultural shocks do exist. Take greeting people as an example. When you first meet someone in your country, you might hug and kiss him or her. But in China it is not a common practice. I think the best way of greeting is to shake hands. Shaking hands is a friendly greeting in Chinese situation.
If you are unsure what to do, it is wise to remember the saying “When in Rome, do as the Ro-mans do.” and you'll be quite well accepted by Chinese.Hope you have a pleasant stay in China.Yours,Li Hua
精彩语句    出彩结构However, I would like to remind you that some cultural shocks do exist.(表强调,加强语气)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①网上预约;②到达故宫,收听讲解;③VR体验;④欣赏或购买文创产品。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。One possible version:　　Last weekend, my friend Jim and I tried a new way to explore the Forbidden City, which left me a deep impression.To avoid wasting time on the spot for the tickets, we tried making reservations online. The whole process just took us several minutes before the message that the tickets had been successfully booked popped up.The next day's visit amazed both of us. On arriving, impressed by the magnificent architecture, we couldn't wait to start our exploration. While wandering around the galleries, we were attracted by the delicate chinaware. To our excitement, we could scan the QR code to listen to the introduction,
which gave us a deeper insight into their history.In the afternoon, we had a unique experience in the VR theatre. With the VR goggles on, we found ourselves back to the time when the palace was being constructed. As we “built” the wall brick by brick, we realized how much effort was put into accomplishing the grand work of architectural art.Before we left, I led Jim to the souvenir center for cultural and creative products. All the cups, notebooks and other products there bear certain elements of royal life. Jim was satisfied with his final choice of a Chinese fan. After this visit, I found the Forbidden City both traditional and mod-ern because our rich and profound history was made alive here!
精彩语句    精美词汇1.pop up 弹出2.put effort into doing sth. 努力做某事出彩结构With the VR goggles on, we found ourselves back to the time when the palace was being con-structed.(with的复合结构表伴随,when引导定语从句)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①接受培训;②协助挂号;③提供帮助;④发朋友圈。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。One possible version:　　Last winter vacation, my classmates and I worked as volunteers in a hospital.On our first morning, a doctor gave us a lecture, informing us of our roles as volunteers. It was the first time for me to know the daily routines in a hospital.The next morning, fully prepared, we went to different posts and started our job. Together with my classmates, I assisted some patients when they didn't know how to use the self-service registra-tion machine. For senior citizens, we helped them register to save them the trouble.Besides, I showed people the way to different consulting rooms. For those elderly patients, we ac-companied them all the way until it was their appointment time. They really appreciated our help.
Later I shared my picture in the hospital on WeChat Moments. In no time, I received lots of likes from my friends. Some even expressed their great interest in the voluntary work. Actually, I had the most amazing experience by doing very simple things for others.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.inform sb. of sth. 通知某人某事2.save sb. the trouble 省去某人的麻烦3.in no time 立刻,马上出彩结构The next morning, fully prepared, we went to different posts and started our job. (形容词作伴随状语)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①思考选题;②谈论过去;③参观展览;④制作小报。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。One possible version:　　Last week I participated in a school activity about making a poster entitled “40 Years of China's Reform and Opening-up in My Eyes”.On Friday evening, I was wondering what topic to choose for my poster. Many ideas popped into my head like transportation, environment, but I finally decided on the topic—great changes in my home. Immediately I turned to my parents for help. Hearing that, they took out some photo albums and began their talk. Mom told me about what our home looked like twenty years ago while Dad showed me some photos taken at that time. It was the first time I had seen an old-fashioned tape recorder. Seeing my curious expression, my parents suggested a visit the next day to the exhibition
commemorating the 40th anniversary of China's reform and opening-up.At the exhibition, we were amazed by the brilliant achievements made in the past four decades. In the daily life area, what attracted me most was the evolution of electric appliances, especially TV sets, from the clumsy small ones to the modern high-tech ones. Dad pointed at one TV, saying his family had a similar one when he was a kid. Considering these TVs could be used on my poster, I took some photos. With all the material collected, I got down to my poster, on which I wrote about the great changes in my home and also included some pictures.My home is just one example. I am sure lots of Chinese families resemble mine, benefiting from China's reform and opening-up. How proud I feel about the great changes!
精彩语句    精美词汇1.participate in 参加2.turn to sb. for help向某人求助3.get down to sth. 开始做某事出彩结构Seeing my curious expression, my parents suggested a visit the next day to the exhibition com-memorating the 40th anniversary of China's reform and opening-up. (现在分词短语作状语)
Green Travel in My Family                                                  
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①看到通知;②全家商议;③骑车上学/乘车上班;④分享交流。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。One possible version:Green Travel in My FamilyLast month, our school organized an activity named “Green Travel, Start with Me”, which has played an educative role.Seeing the proposal on the bulletin board, my classmates and I were deeply interested and had a heated discussion. Everyone expressed their willingness to participate. After getting home, I talked to my parents about my ideas. They were very supportive, saying they wouldn't drive to work from the next day. In the following weeks, as we promised, I went to school by bike every day, while my parents went to work by bus. Tired as we were, we all felt happy. Last Friday, a class
meeting was held as scheduled. Some parents were invited, including my father and mother. We shared our experiences and thoughts during the activity. All of us held the same view that envi-ronmental protection is so important to our life.Through the activity, we find it our duty to protect the environment. I hope more and more people will join us in green travel.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.bulletin board公告牌;布告栏2.have a heated discussion 进行了热烈的讨论出彩结构1.Seeing the proposal on the bulletin board, my classmates and I were deeply interested and had a heated discussion. (现在分词短语作状语)2.In the following weeks, as we promised, I went to school by bike every day, while my parents went to work by bus. (while连接两个并列分句)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①建议/讨论;②写感谢信;③定制礼物;④赠送礼物。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。One possible version:　　Before graduation, in order to express our sincere gratitude to our beloved teachers and the hard-working staff, we prepared special gifts and thank-you notes.Last Monday after class, our monitor came up with an idea to show our appreciation of the school faculty. After much thought, we decided to present them with cups featuring our class picture as well as write them thank-you notes.Soon afterwards, we began our project. In the following two days, some of us wrote the notes con-
veying our heartfelt appreciation while others carefully folded the finished notes into the shape of a heart. We also logged on to a self-customization cup website in the school's computer room, chose our best class photos to customize the cups and made the purchases.Last Friday, we received the delivery. With excitement, we got into small groups and presented our special gifts to all the dedicated teachers and staff. Holding the gifts, they all expressed their thanks and best wishes to us. For the past three years, we have enjoyed interesting lessons, deli-cious meals, and a clean and safe campus. It is their hard work and devotion that has helped us be-come responsible people.Graduation will come and go, but the love of our school will last a lifetime.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.show our appreciation表达我们的谢意2.log on登录出彩结构It is their hard work and devotion that has helped us become responsible people. (It is...that...为强调句式,强调部分为主语their hard work and devotion)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①看到通知;②参观展览;③动手实践;④合影留念。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。One possible version:Last week, our class participated in an extracurricular activity on paper culture, which was really an unforgettable experience.On Monday morning, some classmates and I noticed an announcement on the school bulletin board, saying an activity on paper culture would be held in the Capital Museum. Attracted by it, we signed up without any hesitation.The activity started on Friday with a visit to the exhibition in the museum. Following the guide, we learned about the origin and development of paper and the detailed process of papermaking. What
especially impressed us was how paper contributed to the preservation and spread of human civi-lization.After that, we had some hands-on experience in making paper handicrafts. Divided into different groups, we learned with great enthusiasm. With the help of a master working there, the group of boys managed to create some paper cuts and lanterns while the girls tried different folding patterns, such as hearts, stars and birds. Not until then did we fully realize that paper can be made into so many objects in our life, either decorative or functional.Before we left, we took a group photo to record the day. With the little pieces of work in our hands, we smiled heartily to the camera. At that moment, I came to know that the wisdom of our ancestors shown in paper culture should definitely be honored, recorded and passed down.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.hands-on experience 实践经验2.pass down 使世代相传出彩结构What especially impressed us was how paper contributed to the preservation and spread of human civilization. (画线部分分别为主语从句和表语从句)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①了解活动;②种植花草;③观看宣传;④坚持照料。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。One possible version:One afternoon in early spring, I caught sight of a poster in my community which read “Green Ac-tion, Beautiful Home”. Having listened to the social workers' introduction, I found the activity quite meaningful and decided to take part.That Sunday, most of my neighbours gathered for the start of the activity. Since my mom was fond of flowers, we chose Chinese roses. Together with my parents, I carefully planted the flower seedlings and gently watered them.A few days later, I was surprised to see our photos of planting flowers on the bulletin board in our
community. My neighbours and I recalled the activity and talked a lot about how to take care of the plants.Now looking after the plants has become part of my life. This way, I can feel the simple pleasure of life and harvest a sense of achievement. Seeing the seedlings growing little by little, I can't help picturing how beautiful our neighbourhood will be when all the flowers come out.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.catch sight of 看见,发现2.come out盛开出彩结构Seeing the seedlings growing little by little, I can't help picturing how beautiful our neighbour-hood will be when all the flowers come out. (画线部分为宾语从句)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①看到通知;②拍摄秋景;③挑选照片;④观看影展。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。One possible version:　　This term, we participated in a photography exhibition in our school entitled “The Most Beautiful Autumn”.On a Monday morning in early October, the moment I walked into our school, a notice about a photography exhibition caught my eye. Each class should submit one autumn-themed photo taken by themselves. I told the good news to my classmates and we decided to enter the exhibition.In the following two weeks, well equipped, we started taking photos. I began with our picturesque
campus, while my classmates took photos of the breathtaking autumn scenery in the park. One day, during the lunch break, noticing our red classroom building against the clear blue sky, surrounded by trees with colorful leaves, I quickly pressed the shutter to freeze this lovely scene forever.After all the photos were developed, my classmates and I chose the best photo to submit. We dis-cussed heatedly in our classroom, comparing the content and composition of the pictures that we had taken. Eventually, my photo was selected. You can imagine how excited I felt at that time. Last month, all the submitted photos were displayed. A crowd of students soon gathered, talking about their favourite ones. Hearing their comments, a sense of achievement welled up in me.Autumn comes only once a year. What we need is the ability to capture the beauty that autumn holds. It is the photography exhibition that gave me the opportunity.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.participate in 参加2.a sense of achievement成就感出彩结构We discussed heatedly in our classroom, comparing the content and composition of the pictures that we had taken. (画线部分是现在分词短语作伴随状语,其中包含定语从句that we had taken,修饰the pictures)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为记叙文,主要人称为第一人称和第三人称,基本时态为一般过去时。2.内容要点:①复习功课;②公园散步;③体验攀岩;④返回学校。One possible version:　　Last Friday night, faced with overwhelming academic tasks, I found myself on the verge of breaking down. With Gaokao approaching day by day, I was under great pressure. Having noticed all this, Mom suggested I relax a little bit during the weekend.The next morning, my parents and I went to the park for a walk. The pavement there was covered with fallen leaves in yellow and orange, creating a unique scenery for this season. Holding a leaf in hand, I casually exchanged anecdotes with my parents, feeling the relaxation that I had been miss-ing for a long time.After lunch, we went rock climbing. Though the wall was high and steep, I was determined to con-quer it. With my parents' encouragement, I eventually managed to reach the top. At that moment,
my confidence was restored.On Monday morning, my parents saw me off at the school gate. Their warm smiles and raised thumbs filled me with energy. I waved them goodbye and promised to devote myself to the prepa-ration for Gaokao. This weekend would go a long way with me as it was a new starting point, from which I believe I could go far.
精彩语句     精美词汇1.under great pressure 在巨大的压力下2.be determined to do sth. 下定决心做某事3.manage to do sth. 设法完成某事出彩结构1.With Gaokao approaching day by day, I was under great pressure. (with复合结构作状语)2.Having noticed all this, Mom suggested I relax a little bit during the weekend. (非谓语动词作状语,妈妈先意识到“我”的紧张,随后建议“我”周末放松一下,故用现在分词的完成式;句式suggest that sb. should do sth. 中的that和should都可以省略)
Intangible Cultural Heritage Entering Campus                                                  
答案    [写作提示]1.内容要点:①看通知;②观看京剧/观看书法展;③体验剪纸制作;④介绍活动。2.时态:以一般过去时为主。3.人称:以第一人称为主。One possible version:Intangible Cultural Heritage Entering CampusLast weekend, my classmates and I took part in an activity featuring Chinese intangible cultural heritage, which gave me a deep impression.Early on Saturday morning, we arrived at school excitedly. Reading the notice giving the detailed information about the activity, we couldn't wait to explore more about the intangible cultural her-itage. I went to the performance of Beijing Opera first. It was so amazing that I couldn't take my eyes off the delicate facial makeup and costumes. At the Chinese calligraphy show, I really appre-ciated the charm of our traditional handwriting. Then I came to the art room to experience paper-
cutting. Under the instruction of the artist, I successfully finished my works and was fascinated by the elegant patterns. We completed the activity with full harvest. On the way home we couldn't stop sharing what we had seen and learned. Everyone was excited.This activity helps us have a better understanding of Chinese intangible cultural heritage. It entered our campus and stays in our hearts.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.take part in 参加2.take one's eyes off 把某人的视线移开出彩结构Reading the notice giving the detailed information about the activity, we couldn't wait to explore more about the intangible cultural heritage. (画线部分是现在分词短语作状语)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.入住酒店2.游览歌剧院并拍照留念3.参观大学并观看书法展4.分享照片One possible version:This Spring Festival, I went to Australia for a trip with my beloved grandma. We appreciated the beauty of Sydney and witnessed Chinese elements everywhere.The instant we stepped into the hotel lobby to check in, we were surprised to find it decorated with red Chinese lanterns. And we were greeted with “Happy Chinese New Year”.Our first destination was the world-famous Sydney Opera House, in front of which stood a giant lantern of zodiac dog, reminding visitors of the Chinese New Year. Delighted and excited, Grand-
ma had a photo taken with it. Afterwards, we headed for the University of Sydney. When we were touring the amazing campus, a Chinese calligraphy exhibition caught our attention. How amazing it was to see “Fu” so far away from home!Surprised at the festive atmosphere, I shared some pictures on WeChat with the words “Chinese Style Everywhere”. Immediately, I got 60 Likes! We were proud of the increasing influence of China.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.witness v.见证2.catch one's attention吸引某人的注意出彩结构1.The instant we stepped into the hotel lobby to check in, we were surprised to find it decorated with red Chinese lanterns. (the instant引导时间状语从句;过去分词短语作宾补)2.Our first destination was the world-famous Sydney Opera House, in front of which stood a giant lantern of zodiac dog, reminding visitors of the Chinese New Year. (介词+which引导定语从句;现在分词短语作状语)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.看到通知2.参加初赛3.参加决赛4.获奖受访One possible version:This week, I took part in the knowledge competition on the Silk Road held in our school, which brought me a great sense of achievement.On Monday, a poster which announced the competition attracted my attention. I immediately de-cided to sign up for it because I am always interested in history.A few days later, I took part in the first round of the competition, a written test. Though there were many candidates, I succeeded in entering the final with another student from my class.
The final was held this morning. It was a competition among the four classes of the grade. On the stage in the hall, my classmate and I answered most of the questions accurately.Finally, we won out! We were so happy because we brought honor to our class.When interviewed by the school TV station after the award ceremony, I expressed my excitement and the pride in our splendid culture. The competition broadened my knowledge on the Silk Road and encouraged me to learn more about our own culture in the future.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.a great sense of achievement巨大的成就感2.win out 胜出出彩结构When interviewed by the school TV station after the award ceremony, I expressed my excitement and the pride in our splendid culture. (状语从句的省略)
A Memorable Experience                         
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.得知消息2.听讲解/查资料3.观看月全食4.分享交流One possible version:A Memorable ExperienceI was really lucky to witness a total lunar eclipse in January, a rare occurrence and natural wonder. More importantly, I've developed an interest in astronomy ever since.One day, I was watching TV with my parents when I learned a total lunar eclipse would occur the next week. The photos of previous occasions in the news report fueled my curiosity. To have a bet-ter understanding, I attended a professional lecture about the eclipse at the weekend in the commu-
nity library, listening to an explicit introduction. Back at home, I searched online for more relevant information. Finally came the big moment. Excited and amazed, I watched the eclipse with my parents and neighbors. We took photos with cellphones or cameras to record this breathtaking scene. The next day, my classmates and I shared our photos shot from different angles, having a lot of fun.What a wonderful experience! I admired the magical beauty and accumulated astronomical knowl-edge.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.accumulate v.积累2.astronomical adj.天文(学)的出彩结构To have a better understanding, I attended a professional lecture about the eclipse at the weekend in the community library, listening to an explicit introduction. (不定式短语作目的状语;现在分词短语作伴随状语)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.欲购买糖葫芦2.现金付款未果3.微信支付成功4.解释微信支付One possible version:It seems that everything in China is new to my British friend, Jim.Last weekend, when Jim and I were wandering on the streets, enjoying the beautiful scenery and fresh air of spring, a sugar-coated haws stand caught his attention. Having never tasted sugar-coat-ed haws, he immediately went up to buy one.However, the vendor shook her head when seeing the 100-yuan note Jim handed over to her. She had no change. How disappointed Jim was! He was about to quit when I took out my cellphone,
scanned the QR code on the stand and paid the vendor 5 yuan. Jim was surprised at what I had done. Then I explained to him that nowadays in China QR codes were everywhere, and we could pay with a cellphone for almost everything. “Wow!” Jim said. “The sugar-coated haws taste great, and the payment method seems even greater!”
精彩语句    精美词汇hand...over to把……交给……出彩结构Having never tasted sugar-coated haws, he immediately went up to buy one. (现在分词短语作状语)
A Special Present                              
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.讨论　　2.买树苗　　3.种树　　4.留念One possible version:A Special PresentLast week, my classmates and I did something significant to express our gratitude to our school.Earlier the week we had a discussion on what to give to our school for our graduation. Numerous choices were offered, including a beautiful gift and a memorable tree. Finally we agreed to plant a tree on campus. Having made the decision, we searched online and ordered a seedling after the careful selection. On a sunny day our seedling arrived and we got down to planting it immediately. Everyone participated actively. Some placed the seedling in the hole, some covered the root with soil and others stood a board next to it reading “Class 1 Senior 3, 2018”. Sweaty as we were, everyone was excited. We posed for photographs to mark this precious occasion.We were all delighted to give our school a special present. We expect that this seedling will grow into an enormous leafy tree some day!
精彩语句    精美词汇gratitude n.感激出彩结构1.Having made the decision, we searched online and ordered a seedling after the careful selection. (现在分词短语作状语)2.Sweaty as we were, everyone was excited.(倒装句,as表示“尽管”)
Stop Phubbing                                                  
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.低头玩手机2.险些被撞3.接受批评4.讲述经历One possible version:Stop PhubbingLast Friday morning, on my way to school, I was playing with my phone as usual. Even when I was about to cross the street at the traffic light, I did not bother to look up to check whether it was safe. Therefore, I failed to notice a car coming towards me until it stopped just half a meter away, braking sharply. Luckily, I was pulled aside by a lady who happened to be walking beside me. The shocked driver was mad at me and began shouting loudly, while the woman warned me that I
should never look at my phone while walking. After hearing her words, I realized that my stupidity could have led to tragedy. After arriving at school, I told my classmates about my experience and we all agreed that we should get rid of the phubbing habit.Smartphones are just tools that serve us, and by no means should we let them disturb our life. Let's get out of the bad habit once and for all.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.happen to do sth. 碰巧做某事2.once and for all彻底地出彩结构Therefore, I failed to notice a car coming towards me until it stopped just half a meter away, brak-ing sharply. (现在分词短语作定语和状语)
Last month, we went to the exhibition displaying China's outstanding achievements over the past five years.                                         
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.听讲解　　2.看展览　　3.准备班会　　4.举行班会One possible version:Last month, we went to the exhibition displaying China's outstanding achievements over the past five years. As soon as we arrived, a guide gave us an introduction to the exhibition. While listen-ing, we made some notes carefully. We felt excited and couldn't wait to start the visit. Later, we looked around in the exhibition hall. We were all inspired by the various exhibits, including the models of the high-speed railway. We took a lot of photos and were proud of the achievements of our country.The next day, we had a discussion at school about how to present what we had seen. We finally decided on a class meeting. Immediately we devoted ourselves to preparing the presentations.
At the class meeting, we delivered speeches in turn, sharing the most impressive parts of the exhi-bition. Both the exhibition and the class meeting are memorable experiences, which will encourage us forever.
精彩语句    精美词汇devote oneself to 致力于出彩结构At the class meeting, we delivered speeches in turn, sharing the most impressive parts of the exhi-bition. (现在分词短语作状语)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.仪式开始;2.家长发言;3.集体宣誓;4.过成人门。One possible version:A Memorable Adulthood CeremonyYesterday our school held a memorable adulthood ceremony whose theme was“growth, gratitude and responsibility”. I was honoured to be the host of the ceremony, together with a girl. In the beginning, on behalf of all the students, we expressed our gratitude to our parents and teachers. Then a parent representa-tive made a speech, expressing the best wishes and expectations to us, which made us feel the love and care from our teachers and parents. Afterwards, we took an oath facing the national flag, show-ing our determination to be a qualified citizen and work hard for our country. Finally, hand in hand, we went through a so-called “Adulthood Gate”, which symbolized the fact that we are all
grown-up! After the ceremony, I know more about the meaning of the word “adult”, which attaches a re-sponsibility to myself, to my family and to the society.
精彩语句    出彩结构1.Yesterday our school held a memorable adulthood ceremony whose theme was“growth, grati-tude and responsibility”.(定语从句)2.Then a parent representative made a speech, expressing the best wishes and expectations to us, which made us feel the love and care from our teachers and parents.(which引导非限制性定语从句)
                                        
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.发现杰克生病;2.带杰克看中医;3.杰克喝中药;4.杰克分享对中医的认识。One possible version:Last month, we took Jack, an American exchange student who fell ill to a traditional Chinese doc-tor, which turned out to be an unusual experience for him. It was in a math class that I noticed Jack coughing with a runny nose. Everyone looked at him with concern. Seeing this, one classmate and I offered to take him to the TCM department. He hesitated but followed. At the clinic, the doctor first looked at Jack for a while before feeling his pulse and checking his tongue. The doctor then asked if the cough had been on and off for a long time. In great surprise, Jack nodded his head. The doctor then wrote a prescription with instructions on how to take the medicine. After boiling the herb medicine at home, I brought it to him in his dormitory. The first taste almost
made him throw up. It was really too hard even for me. I comforted him with an old saying “Good medicine for health tastes bitter to the mouth”. Jack managed to swallow the medicine with a frown. But after a week, when he recovered, he felt amazed at the effect of the Chinese medicine. At a class meeting about the deepest impressions about China, Jack chose “TCM in My Eyes” as the topic. He shared his experience of TCM, from doubt at first to belief in the end. We all felt inspired and proud hearing a foreigner introducing the TCM. I have every reason to be-lieve that with more and more international communication, TCM will be accepted globally and benefit more people in the future.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.turn out to结果是,证明是,原来是2.with a frown皱着眉头3.have every reason to believe有充分的理由相信
                                        
答案    [写作提示]内容要点:1.问题　2.讨论　3.行动　4.宣传One possible version:Recently, the increasing popularity of shared bikes has made our lives more convenient. However, my classmates and I often noticed some shared bikes placed messily everywhere. We felt upset and decided to make a change to the uncivilized behavior. First, we had a heated discussion about the problem at our class meeting. We shared our ideas and came up with a great plan. After making full preparations, we started to take action. On Saturday morning, we gathered outside the subway station near our school. Firstly, we began with those messy shared bikes there and tried to put them in order. People passing by all praised us for what we did. Seeing the bikes in rows on the pavement, we really felt excited. Then, in order to encourage people's civilized behavior, we put up a poster saying “PLEASE BE CIVILIZED
WHILE USING A SHARED BIKE”. Meanwhile, some of us helped to give out leaflets. Of course, we drew much attention from the passers-by. Hopefully our action would make a differ-ence.This experience actually inspires me a lot. The idea of sharing requires people's awareness of civi-lization. When the uncivilized behavior occurs, it is our duty to do our best to stop it. I strongly be-lieve that in this way our society will become better and better.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.uncivilized behavior不文明行为2.have a heated discussion about对于……展开了激烈的讨论3.draw much attention from吸引……的注意力
C组  2017—2019年高考模拟·应用创新题组Writing 1 (2019 5·3原创预测卷九)假定你是李华,是学校学生会主席,为弘扬中华文化,学校将于11月10日举行诗歌朗诵比赛,请你写一份口头通知。要点如下:1.报名截止日期:11月1日;2.参加对象:本校学生;3.比赛时间:11月10日上午8:30—11:30;4.本次比赛将设一、二、三等奖各10名。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My dear fellow students,May I have your attention please?                                                       
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为通知类提纲式作文,写作时以第三人称和一般现在时为主。2.注意要点齐全,包括比赛时间、报名截止时间、参赛对象和奖项的设置。3.注意运用适当的衔接词和过渡词。4.注意使用高级结构(强调、倒装、非谓语动词等)以增强句子感染力。One possible version:My dear fellow students,May I have your attention please?I'm Li Hua, president of the Students' Union.To carry forward Chinese culture, a Poetry Reciting Competition is scheduled to take place on Nov. 10 in our reporting hall. Here are some of the de-tails.To begin with, the deadline for signing up is Nov. 1. Don't miss it. Additionally, the competition will last three hours from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. It's a little long. You'd better take some drink-
ing water with you. More importantly, 30 prizes will be awarded to the winners. Any contestant is likely to win a prize. Anyone who shows interest in it can sign up for it. By the way, be there on time.It is your participation that counts.I'll be there waiting for you.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.carry forward推进2.sth. be awarded to sb. 某人获得某物3.show interest in...对……表现出兴趣4.sign up (for...)报名(参加……)出彩结构1.Any contestant is likely to win a prize.(sb./sth. be likely to do sth.为固定结构,表示“某人/某事可能做某事”)2.Anyone who shows interest in it can sign up for it. (who引导定语从句,修饰Anyone)3.It is your participation that counts.(It is +被强调部分+ that/who+... 为强调句型,此句是对主语进行强调)
Writing 2 (2019 5·3原创预测卷一)假设你是李华,你将代表学校参加美国中学生来校交流活动,讨论主题为“我理想中的职业”。请你准备一份发言稿,内容包括:1.如何选择职业;2.你的职业选择。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。                              
答案    [写作提示]1.本文为演讲稿。写作时以第一人称和一般现在时为主。2.注意要点齐全,包括如何选择职业、自己的职业选择及原因。3.注意表达口语化,运用恰当的衔接词和过渡词。One possible version: Good afternoon, everyone!I feel very honored to stand here and deliver a speech entitled “My Ideal Career”. Every student faces the problem of choosing an occupation when graduating from university. To make a sensible choice, a graduate is strongly suggested to take two aspects into consideration, namely personal interest and the demand of the society. Only when the two aspects are connected, can a man show his ability and talent to best advantage.As to my choice in the future, I want to work as an interpreter. I am keen on learning foreign lan-guages, English in particular. Moreover, in the contemporary society, international exchange and communication has been growing significantly. So I am determined to be a qualified interpreter.Thank you for listening.
精彩语句    精美词汇1.feel honored to do sth. 做某事感到很荣幸2.deliver a speech 发表演讲3.take...into consideration考虑4.as to 至于5.be keen on doing sth热衷做某事6.in the contemporary society 在当代社会出彩结构1.To make a sensible choice, a graduate is strongly suggested to take two aspects into considera-tion,namely personal interest and the demand of the society. (不定式作目的状语)2.Only when the two aspects are connected, can a man show his ability and talent to best advan-tage. (only+状语从句置于句首时,主句用部分倒装)