上海静安区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题-03作文

上海静安区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题-03作文

一、话题作文

1．（2020·上海静安·统考二模）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My view on online lessons this March”(请以“今年三月的网课之我见”为题，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)  

(注意：文中不得出现姓名、校名及其他相关信息。

The following is for reference only.（以下内容仅供参考）

What is your view?

Show us an example or give your reason(s.)   to support your view.

Give at least one suggestion you would like to make to your teacher(s).   

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2．（2021·上海静安·统考二模）美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室项目，在活动中收获了很多。你在校内外参加过什么有趣有益的项目，并给你留下了深刻的印象。请以“Making learning fun （乐中学）”为题，分享你的经历或感想。

注意：

1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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3．（2022·上海静安·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “The moving moment in my life”（请以“生活中让我感动的瞬间”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

在你的生活中一定有许多令人感动的记忆，请结合自己的个人经历，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。

（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

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参考答案：

1．例文：

My view on online lessons this March

In order to stop coronavirus from spreading this March, students in China are expected to study at home and have online lessons. I like this pattern of learning.

I think I can plan my own time and subjects and it’s very convenient for me because I can study my lessons on computers or phones at any time or any place. I can watch the videos more than once. Also if I can’t understand some problems, I can find answers online. However, I had to read and do exercises on a computer screen, which hurts my eyes.

In my opinion, both online lessons and traditional lessons are necessary. They can be combined together to make our study more effective. I suggest teachers should remind students to do eye exercises and offer psychological guidance. They should communicate with students much more to solve their confusion and problems online.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题写作。在写作时根据题目要求发表对于三月份网课学习的看法，给出论据来证明自己的观点同时给老师一些建议。

2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍网课的优势及列举论据讲述细致且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：in order to；stop from；are expected to；at any time ; do exercises ;in my opinion; be combined together; communicate with。

句型：because引导的原因状语从句; if引导的条件状语从句；and表示并列的句子,which引导的定语从句。

2．例文

Making learning fun

I’ve joined in various after-class meaningful activities, of which the volunteer one in the local nursing house is the most impressive.

 Several classmates and I volunteered there every weekend last year. We did some cleaning, chatted with the old and read newspapers to them. After finishing the whole activity, I benefited a lot because I got meaningful lessons and fun. First, cleaning the nursing house develops my ability of doing chores, which prepares me for living independently in future. Second, talking with the old and reading newspapers to them improve my communication skills and bring me much fun.

Therefore, this activity offers me so many benefits that it’s really impressive and unforgettable.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，话题作文。写作内容紧扣主题，本文可以分三段叙述，第一段总写这次活动；第二段具体描述这次活动，以及做了什么及收获；第三段概括并结尾。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，用一般过去时描述过去的经历，谈论感受及现在情况使用一般现在时，注意时态的变换。使用连词和副词，这样能够保证文章的连贯性，条理性，富有逻辑，语句表达要通顺、清晰，确保无语法、单词拼写及标点错误。

3．例文：

The moving moment in my life

Here is a moving moment in my life that I will never forget.

I still remember that was a rainy day. I failed an exam, and I felt very upset. What was worse, I didn’t bring an umbrella. Countless raindrops beat against my body, which seemed that they were laughing at me. Suddenly, the raindrops disappeared. At first, I thought the rain finally stopped. But when I looked up, I saw a big umbrella and the smiling face of my deskmate, Mike. He looked into my eyes sincerely and said, “An exam can’t stand for everything. I believe you can get good grades next time.” His words really touched my heart and cheered me up. After that, I studied harder and made great progress.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“The moving moment in my life”为题，介绍生活中让自己感动的事情。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主行文；人称以第一人称为主。写作时围绕主题展开适当的叙述，谈谈发生了哪件事，并具体讲述为何这个瞬间最能触动你的心灵。确保语句通顺，逻辑清晰，无单词语法错误。