1上海奉贤区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题-作文

上海奉贤区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题-作文

一、话题作文

1．（2020·上海奉贤·统考二模）Please write at least 60 words on the topic "Give a like to School In the Air". (请以"为空中课堂点赞"为题, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格)。

提示：

1.空中课堂一个无墙的课堂；

2.空中课堂一个别样的课堂；

3.空中课堂一个难忘的课堂……

经历了将近2个月空中课堂的你们, 请从自身的感受给空中课堂点赞并给出理由.

(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息, 否则不予评分。)

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2．（2022·上海奉贤·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “I’d like to pass________on”补全题目，以“我愿传递________”为题，写一篇不少于 60 词的短文，标点符号不占格。

传递一种精神、一种品质、一种态度、一种情感、一种能量……。请结合自身经历， 谈谈你在家庭、学校或社会中所愿传递的东西。

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二、书信作文

3．（2021·上海奉贤·统考二模）Write at least 60 words on the given situation.(根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

王老师是你们学校的一名退休教师。他非常期待收到学生们的来信。请你写一封信给他，你可以告诉他学校发生的变化、开展的活动、或者任何关于校园生活的点点滴滴。

(注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

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参考答案：

1．例文

Give a like to School In the Air

I want to give a like to school in the air because it is a classroom without walls. We can study at home instead of going to school.It's a special class. We can use a mobile phone or a computer to communicate and study. We can also share educational resources. What's more, it was an unforgettable class because we got to know more teachers and classmates from all over the country.We encourage each other and work together.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇提纲作文。请以"为空中课堂点赞"为题, 写一篇不少于60个词的短文, 标点符号不占格。注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点：

短语：in the air；at home；instead of going to school.；share educational resources；got to know；all over the country；each other等。

句型：1. We can study at home instead of going to school.It's a special class．2.We can use a mobile phone or a computer to communicate and study．3. What's more， it was an unforgettable class because we got to know more teachers and classmates from all over the country．4. We encourage each other and work together．

2．例文：

I’d like to pass the helpful spirit on

We face many difficulties at school. For example, when I played football, I fell down and hurt my leg. My classmates helped me to go to the school hospital. When I met some difficult math questions, my classmates helped me to work them out. These things made me happy and comfortable. I want to pass the helpful spirit on. I think helping others is to help ourselves.

【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作，写作时应先补全题目，然后介绍传递乐于助人的精神，可适当发挥。

2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一般过去时，介绍传递乐于助人的精神时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。

3．参考范文：

Dear Wang,

I’m a senior high school student named Li Hua. It is a great honor to tell you about the changes in our school.

There are lots of changes that have happened in our school. One of them is sports changing. For example, now we can have more time to do some sports after class to relax ourselves. To be more concrete, time we have sports compared with past days that were added for about one hour. Now we have ping pong, soccer and baseball games. That really made our students healthier and study better than before. It made our school spirited. And the relationship between students and teachers becomes better and better.

We are all looking forward to seeing you.

Best wishes to you!

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按书信格式写。在写作时应分为三段，第一段总写，介绍你叫什么，告诉他变化。第二段叙述具体的变化；第三段抒发感情，可以告诉王老师我们都期待着见到他，结束本文。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在描写具体变化时，会与过去的事情进行对比，描述过去的事情使用一般过去时；叙述要完整，保证条理清晰，语言通顺，语法、标点、拼写正确。