高中英语高考2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（六）含答案解析

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2022高考英语读后续写精读精炼（六）一：原文重现That night, I quarreled with my mother, and then stormed out of the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket, I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home．At the same time, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for a bowl of noodles, but I had no money!The seller saw me standing before the counter and asked, “Hey little girl, you want to eat a bowl？” “But …but I do not carry money …” I shyly replied．“Okay, I’ll treat you．” the seller said, “come in, I will cook you a bowl．”A few minutes later the owner brought me a steaming bowl of noodles. After eating some pieces, I cried．“What is it？” He asked．“Nothing. I am just touched by your kindness!” I said as I wiped my tears. “Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles, and my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out of the house. She is cruel （残忍的）!”The seller sighed, “Girl, why did you think so? Think again. I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little, why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom? You should say sorry to your mom.”I was really surprised after hearing that．Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little．注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2. 续写部分为两段，开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1：Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2：Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me___________________________________________________________________________________________________________二：文本解析【分析】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了作者和妈妈吵了一架，然后冲出了房子,也没有给家里打电话。作者走过一家面馆，突然觉得很饿，想要一碗面条，但是没有钱，面馆老板免费请作者吃了一碗面。作者感悟到一个陌生人一碗面条都能让他心怀感激，从小妈妈就把他养大，但却从来没有这样的感觉，作者对此进行反思。【详解】1.段落续写：由续写段落的首句“Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．(就在那一刻，许多回忆涌上了我的脑海。)”及前文“Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little.( 我以前怎么从来没有感受到呢?一个陌生人给我的一碗面条让我心怀感激，从小妈妈就把我养大，我从来没有这样的感觉，一点也没有。)”可知，本段续写内容主要写作者经过反思，意识到母亲对自己的好，然后回家以及回家后母亲对他的宽容态度。2.续写线索：反思——回忆——生活细节——回家——款待——感动、羞愧3.词汇激活行为类①.到达：arrive/get to/reach②.回家：go back home/return home情绪类①.感谢：be grateful/show my appreciation/show my gratitude②.羞愧：ashamed / blush for[高分句型1. When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.（此句运用了状语从句中的省略，从句的主语与主句一致，且从句中含有be动词时，从句中可将主语与be动词省略。）2. Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re back! I have prepared your favorite noodles.”（本句中运用了before引导的时间状语从句。）三：续写单句训练就在这时，我又想起了许多记忆。 当我生病的时候，她总是照顾我。 当我回到家时，她总是准备我最喜欢的食物。 她所有的善良都回到了我身上。 我应该感激她为我所做的一切，我意识到我应该立即回家，向她说对不起。 回到家，我看到母亲坐在餐桌旁，担心又累。 我还没来得及道歉，妈妈就看见了我，冲向我说：“哦，亲爱的，你回来了！” 我准备好了你最喜欢的面条。 听到这话，我忍不住倒在她的怀里。 “对不起，妈妈，请原谅我，”我低声对她说，眼泪流下来，为自己感到羞愧。 四：佳作展现Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________    五：课后练笔It was one of the hottest days of the dry season.We had not seen rain in almost a month.The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk.The streams were long gone back into the earth.If we didn’t see some rain soon we would lose everything.I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six-year-old son,Billy,walking toward the woods.I could only see his back.He wasn’t walking in his usual way.He was obviously walking with a great effort,trying to be as still as possible.Minutes after he disappeared into the woods,he came running out again,toward the house.Moments later,however,he was once again walking in that slow purposeful long step toward the woods.This activity went on for over an hour—walking cautiously to the woods,then running back to the house.Finally,my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked; being very careful not to spill the water he carried.Branches and thorns slapped(拍打) his little face but he did not try to avoid them.He had a much greater purpose.As I leaned in to spy on him,I saw the most amazing site.Several large deer appeared threatening in front of him.But Billy walked right up to them.I almost screamed for him to get away.And I saw a baby deer laying on the ground,obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion,lifte its head with great effort to lap(舔)up the water in my beautiful boy’s hand.Paragraph 1:When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.  __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2:And later I knew what was going on.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 六：单句训练1．水没了后，比利跳起来跑回屋里。 2．我的好奇心再次驱使我跟着他回来。 3．他到达厨房后，打开了水龙头。 4．当他努力用双手喝水来接水时，水还在通过他的手指跑开。 5．他也很难把手关掉水龙头。 6．他似乎为浪费水而感到难过，自判有罪。 7．他脸上带着一种不安的表情，小心翼翼地把它朝树林走去。 8．后来我知道了发生了什么。 9．我开始明白他为什么不按照他平常的方式走路。 10．我站在树林边，看着这颗最美丽的心如此努力地努力拯救生命。 11．当我的眼泪开始落在地上，他们突然加入了其他多滴。 12．我抬头看着天空。就好像上帝自己也被我儿子的巨大努力感动了，开始骄傲地哭泣。                      参考答案三：单句训练1)         Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind. 2)         When I was ill, she always took care of me .3)         When I arrived home, she always prepared my favorite food. 4)         All her kindness came back to me. 5)         I should be grateful for all she had done for me, I realized I should go back home immediately and say sorry to her. 6)         When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired. 7)         Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re back!8)         I have prepared your favorite noodles.” 9)         Hearing this，I couldn’t help throwing myself into her arms. 10)     “Sorry, Mom, please forgive me, ” I whispered to her with tears streaming down my cheeks, ashamed of myself.六：单句训练1．When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.2．My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back.3．After he reached the kitchen,he turned on the tap.4．As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water,it was still running away through his fingers.5．And he also had great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied.6．He seemed to be so sorry and self-condemned for his wasting of water.Wearing a note of upset on his face,he carried it carefully towards the woods.7．And later I knew what was going on.8．And it began to make sense to me why he wasn’t walking in his usual way.9．I stood on the edge of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life.10．As my tears began to hit the ground,they were suddenly joined by other drops...and more drops.11．I looked up into the sky.12．It was as if God himself was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.四：佳作展现（一）Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind. When I was ill, she always took care of me .When I arrived home, she always prepared my favorite food. All her kindness came back to me. I should be grateful for all she had done for me, I realized I should go back home immediately and say sorry to her. When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired. Before I could apologize, my mother saw me and rushed to me “Oh, honey, you’re back! I have prepared your favorite noodles.” Hearing this，I couldn’t help throwing myself into her arms. “Sorry, Mom, please forgive me, ” I whispered to her with tears streaming down my cheeks, ashamed of myself.（二）When the water was gone,Billy jumped up to run back to the house.My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back.After he reached the kitchen,he turned on the tap.As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water,it was still running away through his fingers.And he also had great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied.He seemed to be so sorry and self-condemned for his wasting of water.Wearing a note of upset on his face,he carried it carefully towards the woods.And later I knew what was going on.And it began to make sense to me why he wasn’t walking in his usual way.I stood on the edge of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life.As my tears began to hit the ground,they were suddenly joined by other drops...and more drops.I looked up into the sky.It was as if God himself was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.