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一 书　信(2021·怀化中考) 　　假定你是李华, 2022年亚运会将在杭州举行, 你想成为一名志愿者, 请用英语给组委会写一封信, 内容包括: 　　1. 擅长英语, 口语很棒; 2. 性格外向, 乐于助人; 3. 爱好运动, 了解亚运会等。要求: 1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名; 2包含以上所有信息, 可适当发挥; 3. 词数: 80词左右, 文章开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。
参考词汇: be good at/do well in擅长　spoken English口语　outgoing外向的Dear Sir or Madam, 　　I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua
【高分范文】Dear Sir or Madam, 　　I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. 　　First of all, I am good at English. My spoken English is very good. I can communicate well with foreign friends. I can give them more happiness. Besides, I’m outgoing. I’m always ready to help people. I can help those who need help. What’s more, I love sports and understand the Asian Games. 　　I promise I’ll try to offer my best service during the race. I will be very happy if I can be chosen as a volunteer. Yours, Li Hua
【亮点分析】本文作者完全按照要求进行表达, 要点齐全, 连接自然, 用词恰当。如作者使用first of all, besides和what’s more进行连接, 使描写具有层次化, 鲜明、流畅; 句子I’m always ready to help people. 中的always和be ready to, 表达了作者的决心; 被动结构can be chosen使句式多样化。
二 日　记(2019·天津中考)假如你是晨光中学的学生李华, 平时坚持用英语写日记。请根据以下要点, 描述你星期三放学乘地铁回家路上看到的事情, 并表达自己的想法。(1)一个男孩不舒服, 开始呕吐, 一位穿着漂亮的女士帮着擦拭地面, 男孩表达感谢。(2)地铁到站, 有人挤向座位, 有人下不去车, 有人因此争吵。(3)你认为……
参考词汇: 开始呕吐 begin to vomit　挤向座位 push towards the seat　争吵 have a quarrel要求: (1)词数: 80～100个。(2)日记格式和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全, 行文连贯, 可适当发挥。WednesdayWhen I took the underground back home after school, I noticed ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【高分范文】Wednesday When I took the underground back home after school, I noticed a boy who didn’t seem to be well. ① Suddenly, he began to vomit. Most people around him tried to leave except a young woman in beautiful clothes. ② She helped clean the floor and offered hot water to the boy. The boy was thankful. When the train arrived, many people pushed towards the seat as soon as the train stopped. ③ As a result, some passengers couldn’t get off.   I was deeply impressed by what I saw on the train. ④ I think we should learn from the woman. If we can help each other, our world will become more beautiful.  
【亮点分析】本文作者能完全按照写作要求进行表达, 语句连贯, 过渡自然、流畅, 用词准确。含有定语从句、宾语从句、时间状语从句和条件状语从句等, 复合句运用合理。副词suddenly和短语as a result的使用, 使短文更加通顺。词汇offer, thankful, deeply, impressed等的使用, 为短文增加了美感。
三 调查报告(2020·重庆中考B卷)某中学对高一新生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查, 以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。假如你是该校高一新生, 请结合下图数据和自身口语情况, 给你的英语老师写一篇短文。
要求: 1. 80-120词, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数: 2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息: 1. 描述问卷调查结果(频率、方法); 2. 介绍自身口语情况(水平、打算……); 3. ……The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【高分范文】 The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English. There’s no doubt that they have poor ability in spoken English. About 38% of the students sometimes practise speaking English just in their free time. Most of the students usually practise oral English, which accounts for 45%. They have made it a good habit. From the survey, we know 67% of the students practise English by speaking more in class. And 39% talk with their friends in English. 58% of the students choose other ways to practise their spoken English.
As for me, I can speak spoken English fluently. I put much effort into it. I often listen to English songs and programmes. Watching English movies is also a helpful way. As long as I keep on working, I can achieve better grades and improve my spoken English.
【亮点分析】本文主题明确, 布局合理, 要点齐全, 层次分明, 让人一目了然。考生首先描述问卷调查结果(涉及的是练习说英语口语的频率和方法); 接着介绍自身口语情况(水平、打算等)。语言表达熟练、准确, 在句式上, 灵活多样, 尤其是并列句、同位语从句、定语从句、状语从句的运用, 为文章增色不少。同时, 高级词汇、短语effort, achieve, there’s no doubt that, accounts for等的运用凸显了考生语言的实际应用能力。过渡词as for me的使用, 使文章浑然一体。
四 演说稿(2021·湘潭中考) 　　榜样, 就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人, 他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中, 一定有很多值得你学习的榜样, 比如袁隆平、钟南山、老师、亲人、朋友……。假如你是李华, 学校英语社团将举办“The person I admire”的演讲比赛, 请你根据要点提示并适当发挥, 写一篇介绍自己榜样的演讲稿。要点提示: 　　What does he/she look like? 　　What is he/she like? 　　Why do you admire him/her?
参考词汇: 钦佩admire　鼓励encourage　挑战challenge　树立榜样set a good example实现我的梦想achieve my dream要求: 1. 词数在80词左右, 文章开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。2. 文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息。Hello, everyone! 　　I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________　　 That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【高分范文】Hello, everyone! 　　I’m Li Hua. The person I admire most is my cousin, Mike. He is short and kind of fat. He is popular with people around him. 　　He is helpful. He often helps his classmates with their homework, and also helps the old people cross the road. He is kind to others. He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is brave enough to challenge all kinds of difficulties. 　　He always encourages me to be a kind and helpful person. He sets a good example. I’ll learn from him to be brave enough to achieve my dream. 　　That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【亮点分析】本文层次分明, 句子短小精悍, 符合短文书写要求。另外, 作者在描写时使用了很多短语, 如be popular with; help sb. do sth. ; be kind to; be willing to; in need; learn from等, 更加突出了所描写人物的特点等。作者两次使用brave enough to结构, 彰显了被描写人的勇敢无畏, 值得学习。
五 倡议书(2021·广安中考)　　习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调, 中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人。某中学正在开展“做一名新时代的合格中学生”活动。假如你是学生会的李扬, 请根据以下要点, 向全校同学写一篇倡议书。要点提示: 1. 爱国, 爱家, 诚信, 友好; 2. 努力学习, 实现梦想; 3. 参加体育锻炼, 保持身心健康;
4. 热爱大自然, 保护环境, 与动物和谐相处; 5. 积极参加各种活动, 如打扫教室, 帮助父母做家务等。要求: 1. 字迹工整, 书写规范, 包含全部要点, 可适当发挥; 2. 文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称; 3. 80词左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。参考词汇: keep one’s promise(守信), nature (自然), environment (环境), get on well with (和谐相处), take an active part in(积极参加)Dear schoolmates,
　　I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【高分范文】Dear schoolmates, I am Li Yang from the Students’ Union. We’re having an activity of being a good student. First of all, we must love our country and home. We should be honest and keep our promise. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. Secondly, it’s our duty to study hard, and we should try our best to achieve our dreams. Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy. After that, we are supposed to show love to nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them. What’s more, we should get into the habit of taking an active part in all kinds of activities, such as tidying up the classroom and helping our parents with housework. 　　Come on! I believe we can make it.
【亮点分析】本文作者通过运用表顺序的first of all, secondly, next, after that和what’s more等清楚地将所有要点呈现出来, 使各要点更加明显。而且, 作者用词恰当, 如情态动词must, should等, 表达了我们的责任与担当。句式也多样化, 如动名词作主语; it’s +adj. + to do sth. ; be supposed to等, 提高了短文的档次。
六 记叙文(2019·青岛中考)人生中有很多第一次, 第一次学游泳, 第一次跟家人外出旅游, 第一次做家务, 第一次赢得比赛, 第一次……。请根据提示, 就你的第一次……写一篇短文。内容包括: 1. 第一次……的整个过程; 2. 你的感受。要求: 1. 词数: 80～100(开头已给出, 不计入总词数); 2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
　　As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【高分范文】As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I made fruit salad. 　　I remember it was on the morning of May 3rd. After finishing my homework, I told my mother that I decided to learn how to make fruit salad from her. My mother is good at making foods, so she was happy to teach me. I was serious about it. I followed all the steps carefully and enjoyed making it. First, she taught me how to cut up bananas, apples and watermelons. Second, she told me how much honey and cheese I should put. Then she told me how to mix them up. Finally, when I asked my mother to taste it, she was so excited. 　　I’m happy that I can make fruit salad now. Thanks for my mother’s help. 　
七 议论文(2020·山西中考)教育就是善意的干预。在我们的成长过程中时常会面对来自父母或老师的提醒与批评, 有的同学不理解, 有的甚至会有过激的反应。如何客观、冷静地对待这种问题, 需要我们认真、理性地思考, 并做出合理应对, 这正是教育要达到的目的。
请针对以上现象, 结合生活中的经历, 写一篇短文。内容包括: 　　● your opinion about this phenomenon (现象) 　　● an experience you had/heard/saw　　● what you have learned from it要求: 1. 词数不少于80; 2. 参考词汇仅供参考; 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【高分范文】 As far as I’m concerned, it is of great importance to stay calm and reasonable when our parents and teachers blame or criticize us, which is beneficial for our lifelong development. I still remember the day when I had an English class. Seeing Li Ming falling asleep, our teacher, Miss Hu, woke him up and reminded him to listen to her carefully. To my surprise, Li Ming rushed out of the classroom without permission. It was so impolite and rude to do so. Later, I talked with him and he realized that the teacher expected to help him develop a good habit and he wasn’t so calm at that time. Therefore, he picked up his courage and said sorry to Miss Hu in front of the whole class.
It’s a good idea for us to keep calm and think about it for a moment whenever being blamed or criticized. Sometimes a small change of yourself may lead to a big difference to your life.
【亮点分析】文章首先亮明观点, 即受到父母或老师的责备或批评时保持冷静、理智很重要, 其中非限制性定语从句的运用, 不仅进一步强调了自己的观点, 也展示了作者良好的语言应用能力。接着通过用课堂发生的实例, 说明理性对待责备和批评的重要性。观点鲜明, 思路清晰, 论据充分。从英语语言角度看, concerned, beneficial, permission等高级词汇和fall asleep, wake. . . up, to one’s surprise, expect to do sth. 等短语的使用, 充分展现了作者的语言功底。
八 说明文(2019·安徽中考)假定你是李华, 你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减弱感到不安, 请你用英文给他写封电子邮件, 谈谈你保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下: 1. 经常做户外活动; 2. 很少用电子产品; 3. 坚持做眼保健操; 4. ……注意: 1. 词数80-100; 2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯; 3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4. 开头和结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。Dear Mike,
　　I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours, Li Hua
【高分范文】Dear Mike, 　　I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. Because eyes are windows of our mind, I pay more attention to protecting my eyes in life. 　　First, I do outdoor activities regularly. I often play basketball or take part in other activities. When I’m free, I seldom play with the mobile phone or play computer games. I think they are bad for my eyes. And I don’t keep my eyes working for a long time. I often have a rest by looking in the long distance after having studied an hour or so. In addition, I do eye exercises every day.
　　All in all, it’s important to protect our eyes. Wish your eyesight better and better. Yours, Li Hua
【亮点分析】本文作者能按照要求进行书写, 要点齐全, 语言地道、规范, 句式丰富多样。作者以自己的经历为依据进行表达, 有一定的说服力。副词regularly, often, seldom和词组take part in, be bad for等运用恰当; 连词or和in addition等的运用, 使短文更加紧凑, 这些都是本文的提分点, 值得我们学习。
九 图画作文(2020·河北中考)李硕今年五岁, 他的妈妈疫情期间去武汉支援。请根据下面四幅图及文字提示写一篇短文。
注意: (1)短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息, 可适当发挥, 提示词语供参考; (2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名; (3)词数80左右。开头已给出, 不计入总词数。Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going to Wuhan to help the patients there. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【高分范文】Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going to Wuhan to help the patients there. 　　Li Shuo, together with his father, said goodbye to his mother at the airport. He missed his mother very much after she left. One day Li Shuo saw his mother on TV. He ran over at once and kissed her deeply. Two months later, his mother came back and received a warm welcome as a hero. When his mother finally got home, both Li Shuo and his father gave her a big hug. How happy they were to be together again!
【亮点分析】　　本文从送别、想念、欢迎、团聚四个方面写了一个动人的故事。文章通过say goodbye to his mother at the airport, kiss her, receive a warm welcome as a hero, give her a big hug等信息将故事的场面和感人的画面一一呈现出来, 感人至深。最后一句是感叹句, 寓意深刻。
十 提示作文(2021·扬州中考) 　　某英文报正在举行“家乡美”为主题的征文活动, 你打算以“Spring in my hometown”为题写一篇英语短文投稿, 请根据以下问题提示完成征文。提示: (1) What is spring like in your hometown? (2) What do people in your hometown usually do in spring? (three points) (3) How do you like your hometown in spring? (two points) 要求: (1)表达清楚, 语法正确, 上下文连贯; (2)必须包括提示中的所有信息, 并适当发挥; (3)词数: 100 词左右; (4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
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【高分范文】Spring in my hometown　　When spring comes, everything comes back to life and it becomes warm. 　　ople feel more comfortable than in winter. Everything is green. Most flowers start to come out as the weather becomes warm. All of these scenes draw a beautiful picture. 　　People begin to row boats, have a picnic near rivers. They also fly kites in the parks. They try their best to be close to nature and enjoy the beauty of it. Farmers start to work in the fields and wait for a good harvest. 　　Spring in my hometown is full of life and power. It gives us energy and hope. I love the spring in my hometown. Welcome to our hometown!
【亮点分析】本文作者能按照提示要点进行书写, 层次分明, 句子结构正确, 时态合理, 用词恰当、准确。比较级more comfortable的使用, 突出了人们对春天的喜爱; 形容词green, warm, beautiful描写了春天的美。对于人们活动的书写等也符合题目要求。
十一 命题作文(2021·株洲中考)校报英语版征文, 题目为“Follow and Grow (家规促成长)”, 你写一篇文章投稿, 包括以下内容: (1)两条家规; (2)对你的影响; (3)如何回报你家。注意: (1)词数90左右; (2)可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯; (3)文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
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【高分范文】Follow and Grow　　A country has its laws and a family has its rules, too. My family also has some rules. 　　My parents don’t allow me to play computer games in my free time. I am not allowed to stay up late because they think teenagers should have enough sleep to keep healthy. I can’t go out on school nights because they worry about my safety. 　　I think my parents are too strict with me. But I understand they really love me. I communicate with my parents as much as possible, sharing my happiness and sadness with them. And I often help them with housework. All in all, I love my family rules which make me grow.
【亮点分析】本文作者能很好地利用“三段谋篇”的写作模式进行表达, 内容完整, 条理清晰, 符合写作的要求。具体优点还有: 简单句和复合句的交叉使用, 使短文可读性增强; 被动语态的出现, 丰富了句式结构; 词组stay up late, keep healthy, go out, worry about, be strict with, communicate with, share. . . with, help. . . with, all in all等的使用合理; 连词and, but等使短文连接更紧凑。
十二 开放式作文(2020·北京中考) “不积跬步, 无以至千里。”积累, 有助于我们达成目标, 实现梦想。某英文网站正在开展以“积累”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华, 请用英语写一篇短文投稿, 谈谈你在积累知识方面做过什么, 有什么收获。提示词语: accumulate (积累), read, keep, make progress提示问题: ● What did you do to accumulate knowledge? ● What have you learned from doing so?
【高分范文】 Without accumulating, we can hardly achieve anything. Accumulating knowledge plays an important role in my life, which can improve my abilities as well as broaden my vision. In order to accumulate knowledge, I have made great efforts. At school, I tried my best to listen to the teacher carefully and take down the key points in class, which was of great benefit for me to fully absorb the knowledge. In my spare time, I developed the habit of reading. Since it is an excellent way to accumulate knowledge, I have read a lot of world-famous books and the latest English magazines.
From accumulating knowledge, I have gained a lot. I become more knowledgeable and have a better understanding of the world. Accumulating knowledge is a useful way to help me make a better preparation for my dream.
【亮点分析】首段开门见山引出话题, 吸引读者的兴趣。接下来考生从两个方面叙述自己在积累知识方面做过的事情, 即在学校如何积累知识, 以及空闲时间如何积累知识。最后, 考生又从两方面谈自己的收获。文章思路清晰, 内容详细充实, 过渡衔接自然。在语言表达方面, 多处运用优秀短语, 如play an important role in, as well as, in order to, make great efforts, try one’s best, in one’s spare time, make a better preparation for等, 显示出考生深厚的语言功底。which引导的非限制性定语从句的使用, 也展现了考生良好的语言应用能力和英语逻辑思维能力。