中考英语一轮复习【讲通练透】考点44 书面表达之观点看法类
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中考英语考点一遍过为了帮助考生更好的冲刺中考英语,从命题趋势、易错警示、方法技巧、跟踪训练、真题再现等几个方面帮孩子更准、更快、更有效的复习。
中考总复习一般分为三轮:
1、第一轮复习为基础知识的单元、章节复习。
通过第一轮的复习,使学生系统掌握基础知识、基本技能和方法,形成明晰的知识网络和稳定的知识框架。我们从双基入手,紧扣中考知识点来组织单元过关。
2、第二轮复习打破章节界限实行大单元、小综合、专题式复习。
第二轮复习绝不是第一轮复习的压缩文档,而是一个知识点综合、巩固、完善、提高的过程。复习的主要任务及目标是:完成各部分知识的条 理,归纳,糅合,使各部分知识成为一个有机的整体,力求实现基础知识重点化,重点知识网络化,网络知识题型化,题型设计生活化。
3、第三轮复习是知识、能力深化巩固的阶段。
复习资料的组织以中考题及模拟题为主,回扣教材,查缺补漏,进行强化训练。同时,要教给学生一些必备的应试技巧和方法,使学生有足够的自信从容地面对中考。
【讲通练透】考点44 书面表达之观点看法类
一般来说,观点看法类文章的内在逻辑关系十分清晰,它除了考查考生的英文基础,还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体来说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性的词和短语来完成,在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头,"承"就是承接,"转"是转折,"合"是综合或总结。
1. 用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。此类过渡性的词和短语有first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately等。
2. 用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what’s more, what’s worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt等。
3. 用于表示"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。此类过渡性的词和短语有but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of等。
4. 用于"合"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语有in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, in summary等。
总之,要做好书面表达,需要大家把握以下几个原则:细读提示,抓要点:选择句型,准表达;确定线索,巧组合;适当发挥,保完整;规范书写,争高分;细查全文,除笔误。
一、写作方法——十句作文法
第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,提出问题并通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句,进一步说明和支持主题句。另外,也可调整两句的顺序,由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文,共七句。第一句为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词,以使行文流畅。
第三段为结尾,简化为一句,是对全文的总结,并说明作者自己的观点。
三段之间的衔接要灵活运用"启、承、转、合"的过渡手段。
二、应急百宝箱
遇到要点不会表达怎么办?词数不达标怎么办?不要急,"一代,五加,一扩"帮你轻松解决问题。"一代,五加,一扩"具体说来就是:
1. 以实代虚——写实
2. 增加限定语——定语、状语等
3. 增加例子——for example, such as
4. 增加原因——进一步说明
5. 加套语(词块)
6. 加格言、谚语等——进一步说明
7. 扩充建议——自主发挥,点到即可
三、注意事项
1. 观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点——主题。
2. 层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,层次要分明,过渡要自然。
3. 最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。
4. 通常采用一般现在时。
5. 语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。
一、开头句型
As far as ...is concerned
It goes without saying that...
It can be said with certainty that...
As the proverb says ...
It has to be noticed that...
It’s generally recognized that...
It’s likely that ...
It’s hardly too much to say that...
What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是
There’s no denying the fact that... 毫无疑问,无可否认
Nothing is more important than the fact that...
What’s far more important is that...
二、衔接句型
A case in point is ... As is often the case...
As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述
But the problem is not so simple. Therefore... 然而问题并非如此简单,所以……
But it’s a pity that...
For all that...In spite of the fact that... Further, we hold opinion that...
However, the difficulties in...
Similarly, we should pay attention to... not (that)...but (that)... 不是……而是……
In view of the present station... 鉴于目前形势
As has been mentioned above... 综上所述
In this respect, we many as well (say)... 从这个角度上我们可以说……
However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is... 然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面,即……
三、结尾句型
I will conclude by saying... Therefore, we have the reason to believe that... All things considered 总而言之
It may be safely said that...
Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...
It can be concluded from the discussion that... 从中我们可以得出这样的结论
From my point of view, it would be better if... 在我看来……也许更好
四、万能句型
Let’s take...to illustrate this. 试举例以兹证明
Let’s take the above chart as an example to illustrate this.
It remains to be further studied... There’s question is how...
观点看法类作文的整体结构有一定的模式可循,可以先写对比的一方面,再写另外一方面;也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点——比较着写。
对比观点看法类作文的写作摸板
The topic of 主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What’s more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides), 理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 .
From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (later) is surely a wise choice.
A
你就“Can Grade 9 students use mobile phones freely at weekends?”这一问题在同学中开展一次调查,下表是调查结果:
观点
原因
35%的同学
反对
1. 九年级学习压力(pressure) 较大,需要花更多的时间在学习上。
2. 很多同学玩手机上瘾(become addicted to),浪费了时间和精力。
65%的同学
赞成
1. 手机已经成为生活的一部分,可以利用手机帮助学习。
2. 可以帮助与同学、朋友保持联系,建立良好的关系。
你的看法
?
?
请根据以上调查数据,写一份调查报告,要求包括表格的所有内容。80词以上。Can we use mobile phones freely?
Nowadays, more and more students begin to get used to living without a mobile phone. I did a survey among students in Grade 9 about their views on whether students can use mobile phones freely at weekends.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Can we use mobile phones freely?
Nowadays, more and more students begin to get used to living without a mobile phone. I did a survey among students in Grade 9 about their views on whether students can use mobile phones freely at weekends.
On the one hand, 35% of students think that students in Grade 9 are stressful and they need to spend more time on study. At the same time, many students are addicted to playing mobile phones, wasting time and energy. On the other hand, 65% of students think mobile phones have become a part of life and can be used to help with study. And it can help to keep in touch with classmates and friends and establish a good relationship.
In my opinion, mobile phones have both advantages and disadvantages for us. We should use mobile phones correctly and not be addicted to them.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据表格内容,写一篇作文关于“九年级学生周末可以自由使用手机吗?”这一问题的调查报告。
2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称以第三人称为主。写作时需要把对这一问题的反对和赞成的原因解释清楚,最后要给出你自己的观点,注意语句要通顺,逻辑清晰,无单词语法错误。
B
学校校刊正在征集“家有家规”的征文。假如你是李华,请你以“My Family Rules”为题写一篇稿件,介绍父母为你制定的家规并发表自己的看法。
内容要点如下:
1. 诚实友善,尊重他人;
2. 分担家务,与父母沟通;
3. 每天锻炼半小时;
4. 允许安排周末时间;
5. 补充一两点个人看法。
注意:
1. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数:60-80;
3. 内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
4. 标题和开头已给出,不计人总词数。
参考词汇:respect v. 尊重communicate v. 沟通allow v. 允许
My Family Rules
As the saying goes, “As a country has its laws, a family also needs rules.” ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My Family Rules
As the saying goes, “As a country has its laws, a family also needs rules.”My parents make rules for me, too. They expect me to be honest and kind. And I should respect others. At home, I need to share the housework. When I have problems, I’m supposed to communicate well with them for advice. What’s more, I have to exercise 30 minutes every day. I’m allowed to plan my weekend. Sometimes, I’m trying to make my own choices and decisions, that’s great!
In a word, family rules help me grow up happily.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求讲述父母制定的家规,讲述在为人处世、与人交往、家务活、身体锻炼、周末安排等方面的具体要求。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,从至少五个方面进行讲述家规的具体要求,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
C
烦恼伴随着青少年的成长,精神压力是主要体现形式。为了让学生快乐学习,健康成长,我校英文报刊将开展以“How to Lower Stress”为题的征文比赛。请根据提示内容,用英语表达自己的观点。
要点提示:
1.描述青少年有哪些压力(如:学业、人际交往……);
2.你对减轻压力的建议(如:运动、听音乐,看电影、向他人倾诉……),至少三点;
3.……
写作要求:
1.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名。
How to Lower Stress
We teenagers have a lot of stress while growing
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【答案】例文
How to Lower Stress
We teenagers have more and more stress while growing up. The main reason for stress is schoolwork and getting along with others. Students have been competing with each other since they were very young, which brings them too much stress. Some students don’t know how to get along well with others. They feel lonely. This can also bring them stress and worries. I’ll give you some ways to relieve stress.
First of all, you need to take part in all kinds of class activities, such as sports meetings, football games and singing competitions. In addition, you should be active in group work in class and be brave enough to express your ideas. Try to communicate with your classmates as often as possible.
In my opinion, stress is not a bad thing. Proper stress is beneficial to our growth and development. If a person doesn’t have stress, he will become lazy easily. We should learn to face stress in our life.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求以“How to Lower Stress”为题,结合提示内容写文章谈一谈如何减轻压力。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第二、三人称为主,时态采用一般现在时。可分为三段式写作:第一段讲青少年面临的压力;第二段给出减轻压力的建议;第三段发表自己的观点。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
D
假如你是李明,你校英文报将征集以“摄影”为主题的征文。请选择你最喜欢的一张照片,分享照片背后的故事。
要点:
1. 描述照片;
2. 分享故事;
3. ……
注意:
1. 词数80-100;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 短文题目已给出,不计入总词数。
I’m Li Ming and I’d like to introduce a photo that is very special. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I’m Li Ming and I’d like to introduce a photo that is very special.
During last summer vacation, I visited the Great Wall with my parents. My father took this photo of me. In the photo, I was sitting in front of a huge rock. On the rock, there is a famous saying: “One who fails to reach the Great Wall is not a hero.”
The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders in the world. As a Chinese, I’m very proud of it. I felt very excited when I stood on it.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示问题,介绍自己最喜欢的照片,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二、三两段描述最喜欢的照片,分享照片背后的故事和自己的感受。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
E
你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题,提出你的建议并陈述理由。
注意:1.回信应包括所有要点;
2.(信的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息, 否则不予评分。
Ben’s problems
Your advice and reasons
朋友少, 感觉孤单
1.参加学校社团(club)—结识更多朋友
2.?(请你补充)
英语单词难记
1.多阅读英语故事、新闻—在运用中学单词
2.?(请你补充)
Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. You’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You also found it difficult to learn English and hard to memorize the English vocabularies. Reading more English stories and news can help you increase your vocabularies. In addition, you can watch English movies. In this way, it will be easier for you to remember more words.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Good luck with everything!
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求针对朋友少感到孤独的问题和英语学习困难的问题给出自己的建议并说明理由。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主,讲述如何解决朋友少感到孤独的问题和英语学习困难的问题,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
F
你是英语校报纸编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信,他提出了所面临的两个问题。请你根据以下提示写一封回信,说明Ben的问题的解决办法。
Ben’s problems
Your advice and reasons
朋友少,感觉孤单
(1)参加学校社团(club)—结识更多朋友
(2)?(请你补充)
英语难学
(1)多阅读英语故事、新闻—增加词汇量
(2)?(请你补充)
注意:
(1)回信应包括所有要点;
(2)词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Dear Ben, I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school.In your letter you said that
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】例文
Dear Ben,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school.In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. You’d better be friendly to others.Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. You also found it difficult to learn English. Reading more English stories and news can help you increase your vocabularies. In addition, you can watch English movies. In this way, it will be easier for you to remember more words.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作,根据题目要求针对朋友少感到孤独的问题和英语学习困难的问题给出自己的建议并说明理由。
2.写作指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主,讲述如何解决朋友少感到孤独的问题和英语学习困难的问题,要叙述完整,条理清晰。
G
假如你是李华,临近中考,你将要在课上分享如何提高学习效率的做法。请根据表格中提供的内容写篇短文。
要点
具体措施
1)合理安排时间
制定学习计划
2)养成健康的习惯
早睡早起,锻炼身体
3)你的补充
你的补充
注意:
1)短文内容必须包含表格中的要点,也可适当拓展;
2)文中不能出现真实人名和校名;
3)词数80-100。It’s my honor to be here to make a speech._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
It’s my honor to be here to make a speech. We should learn to be self-disciplined. To make us review our lessons effectively, I’ve made a list of things I need to do. I’d like to share my ideas with you.
The first thing for me is to make a good learning plan for myself. Secondly, I think forming a good living habit will benefit me a lot in both my study and health. As we know, early to bed and early to rise make me healthy, wealthy and wise. Also I need to eat healthily and say no to junk food. Besides, to make myself active and strong, I plan to do an hour’s exercise at least a day. I will manage to have a positive attitude towards the stress and face difficulty bravely. If I am happy, I can study better.
In all, I believe being self-disciplined will bring me enjoyment and success. I hope more and more students can join the group of being self-disciplined like me.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文要求以李华的身份在课上分享如何提高学习效率。包括:合理安排时间;养成健康的习惯等,并陈述具体的措施。可根据实际情况做适当的补充。
2.写作指导:本文是讲稿,用第一人称写作,分享自己提高学习效率的做法。书写时要围绕题干提示要点展开叙述,做到中心突出,内容完整连贯。可使用表顺序的副词分点阐述,使上下文之间逻辑清楚。
H
根据要求完成短文写作,请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置。
“友善(kindness)”是社会主义核心价值观对每个公民个人层面的基本要求。在学习、生活和工作中,我们应学会友善待人。请你根据下面的提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。内容包括:
1. 简要介绍你所遇到的一位善人及其所做的一件善事;
2. 友善对我们的影响以及如何做一个友善的人;
3. 呼吁大家友善待人。
作文要求
1. 不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称、老师和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数 80 个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,不必抄写在题卡上。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today I’m very happy to share something about kindness with you here.
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That’s all. Thank you.
【答案】例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
Today I’m very happy to share something about kindness with you here.
In this wonderful word, kindness is of great importance for us students. We should learn to be friendly to who we love and even to someone we don’t know. Last summer, I with my father climbed the mountain. Unluckily, it suddenly rained in the halfway and we didn’t bring any umbrellas. When we were about to get wet, a man gave us an umbrella and walked away. From then on, I became kind and friendly to everyone I meet even though he was a stranger. For example, When others are in trouble, we should always give them a hand and we can think about others more than ourselves before dealing with something.
All in all, I hope everyone can be a kind and loving man. Then our world will become better and better. That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】
题干解读:题目要求以“友善(kindness)”为主题,写一篇演讲稿;要求包含所有提示内容。
写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式,第一段:开门见山,引出“友善(kindness)”话题;第二段:阐述你遇到的一位友善的人以及如何成为一名友善的人;第三段:呼吁大家友善待人。
A A
(2021·广西中考真题)
正值中国共产党(the Communist Party of China)建党100周年,“感党恩、学史力行”。作为中学生,我们应该怎么做呢?请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。
内容要点:
1. 学习党史,了解红色文化,弘扬(carry forward) 共产党精神;
2. 尊敬师长、团结同学、刻苦学习;
3. 积极参加各项有意义的活动:唱红歌,讲红色故事等;
4.你的感想。
参考词汇:(仅供参考)
要求:
1.内容完整,语法正确,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
2.80词左右。(开头已给出,不计入总词数)
3.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在学校的名称。
It is the 100th anniversary(周年纪念) of the founding of the Communist Party of China this year. We must give thanks to the Party and practice what you have learned from history.________________________________
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It is the 100th anniversary(周年纪念)of the founding of the Communist Party of China this year. We must give thanks to the Party and practice what you have learned from history.
We should start from the following aspects. First of all, we should study the history of the Party to understand the red culture, and then carry forward the spirit of the Communist Party. Second, we should respect teachers. We should get on well with our classmates and study hard. Finally, we should take an active part in all kinds of meaningful activities, such as singing red songs, telling red stories and so on. Under the leadership of the Communist Party of China, people’s life is getting better and better. We must love our motherland and our party even more. We should make contributions to the country!
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作,在写作时应承接短文开头,根据汉语提示的内容,介绍作为中学生,我们应该做的事情:学习党史,了解红色文化,弘扬共产党精神;尊敬师长、团结同学、刻苦学习;积极参加各项有意义的活动:唱红歌,讲红色故事等,最后表达自己的感想等。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时为主;在介绍内容时,力求语句通顺,内容全面,保证条理清晰,行文连贯。
B
(2021·辽宁中考真题)
根据有关部门调查,我国部分青少年每天劳动时间过少。假如你是李华,请根据表格的内容提示,说一说你平时参加劳动的情况,谈一谈对养成良好劳动习惯的看法。
提示词:社区志愿者服务community voluntary services;生活技能life skills;责任感a sense of responsibility
要求:
1.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息;
2.根据中文和英文提示,可以适当发挥;
3.内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐;
4.词数:80-100词。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
李华参加劳动的情况
养成良好劳动习惯的重要性
在校
打扫教室……
✧提高基本的生活技能
✧学会照顾自己
✧拥有责任感
在家
清洗餐具,洗衣服,做饭……
社区
做社区志愿者服务,如去养老院看望老人……
I’m Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It’s good for my development.
At school,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
I’m Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It’s good for my development.
At school, I clean my classroom regularly and keep our classroom clean and tidy. At home, I do the dishes and wash my own clothes. I also help my parents cook and do the housework. Because I am a member of this family and they are my duty. At community, I often do community voluntary services at weekends, like visiting old people in the old people’s house.
It is important for us to improve our basic life skills and we need to learn to look after ourselves. What’s more, we should have a sense of responsibility.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格提示内容,介绍平时参加劳动的情况以及谈一谈对养成良好劳动习惯的看法。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍自己平时参加劳动的情况;第三段介绍养成良好劳动习惯的重要性。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
C
(2021·辽宁中考真题)
同学们的健康成长是每个家庭最大的愿望和期盼,也关乎国家和民族的未来。健康的生活是成长、成才的前提和保障。
请根据内容提示,以“Healthy Living”为题写一篇英语作文,谈谈你的看法。
内容提示:
1.加强锻炼
2.健康饮食
3.保证睡眠
4.保持乐观心态
要求:
1.词数:80 词左右。
2.文中应包含所给提示,可适当发挥。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Healthy Living
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【答案】
Healthy Living
Good living habits are important to our lives. Having a good rest is the basic, so that we can have enough energy in the whole day. Besides, healthy eating also plays an important role in our daily life. Food can give us energy and help us build up our body. Moreover, doing exercises is necessary for everyone. It is good for our health and makes our mind more active. Finally, keep positive attitude towards life. A positive attitude towards life can be helpful in cheering you up. In short, healthy living habits bring us many benefits, although sometimes you even do not realize.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本题为材料作文,要求根据题目所给要点提示,写一篇关于健康生活的作文。所给要点要全部包括,并可进行适当拓展。
2.写作指导:写作时应用第一人称,时态应用现在时。写作时要包含全部要点,切忌不要遗漏。文章应做到思路清晰,层次分明,在列要点时可使用besides … what’s more等衔接词,使作文衔接过渡自然、流畅。
D
(2021·黑龙江)
2021年大庆初中升学体育考试已经过去,但却给你留下了深刻的印象。你决定向你校英文广播站投稿,分享你的备考经历与收获。
写作提示:1. 测试前准备(例如:项目选择,练习过程等等);2. 测试结果;3. 收获及感受。
参考词汇: the solid ball (实心球) jump rope (跳绳) long jump (跳远)
写作要求:
1. 词数80词左右(开头已写好,不计入总词数);
2. 写作过程中注意书写的规范和标点的正确使用;
3. 文章中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
4. 可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
Though the physical test in Daqing entrance examination for senior middle school was over, it left me a deep impression.__________________________________________________________________________________
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Though the physical test in Daqing entrance examination for senior middle school was over, it left me a deep impression.
I did a lot of pre-test preparations to choose the most proper sports event for me. At last, I chose the solid ball, jump rope and long jump. At first, I didn’t do well in jumping rope. But I didn’t give up. I stuck to doing it for three minutes downstairs after school every day. It was very difficult at first, but after half a month, I made a little progress each time. Finally, I could reach the standard of excellence. I did well in the solid ball and long jump as well.
I not only got full marks in the middle school physical education examination, but also learned the spirit of never giving up.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容,介绍自己初中升学体育考试的经历;注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来介绍,时态用一般过去时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍测试前的准备和测试结果;第三段介绍自己的收获和感受。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
E
(2021·广西崇左·中考真题)
校园处处都是美,校刊的英文专栏Sharing Beauty以“校园最美之地”为主题征稿,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
写作要点:
1. 你认为校园的哪一个地方最美?
2. 这个地方在校园的哪个位置?
3. 你觉得这个地方很美的两个理由。
写作要求:
1. 内容必须积极向上,并包含所有要点;
2. 结构完整,语句流畅,意思清楚、连贯;
3. 使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构,书写规范;
4. 文中不得透露个人信息,否则不予评分;
5. 词数80左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Most Beautiful Place in My School
My school looks beautiful everywhere._________________________________________________________
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【答案】
The Most Beautiful Place in My School
My school looks beautiful everywhere. Among all the places, I like the library best. The library lies in the eastern part of our school. It is between the teaching building and the playground. It is in front of our laboratory building. There are a variety of books and most of my classmates like to go there to relax. We can learn a lot from books and we enjoy the quietness and peace in the library. Reading usually makes me relaxed and knowledgeable.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以The Most Beautiful Place in My School为题,根据提示内容进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍校园的哪一个地方最美,它在什么位置以及喜欢这个地方的理由。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
F
(2021·广西中考真题)
做家务是学生应尽的义务。假设你是李雷,是建华中学一名九年级学生,请以“My Experience of Doing Housework”为题写一篇英语小短文,介绍你平时做的家务及其感受。
内容要点:
1. 你做家务的原因;
2. 你平时做的家务(至少举一个例子);
3.你对做家务的感受。
写作要求:
1. 包含上述三个要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范,卷面整洁;
3.文中不能出现“李雷”和“建华中学”以外的人名、校名或地名;4.词数80左右。
My Experience of Doing Housework
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【答案】
My Experience of Doing Housework
As a family member, it’s our duty to help our parents do housework.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping to buy food for lunch, I began to clean my house. First, I swept the floor and wiped the table. Then, I collected all the books and other things and put them in place. Finally, I took all the rubbish out. When my parents came back, they were surprised and praised me. I felt so happy at that time. So I keep doing housework, such as sweeping the floor or tidying the room.
Sharing the housework with our parents means showing love to them. So I suggest all of us should take action from now on.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。围绕做家务的经历写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式:第一段说明自己做家务的原因;第二段介绍自己曾经做家务的经历以及自己常做哪些家务;最后一段发表自己对做家务的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
G
(2021·湖北中考真题)
“谁知盘中餐,粒粒皆辛苦。”有数据显示,中国餐饮业人均食物浪费量为每餐93克,浪费率为11.7%。减少餐饮浪费,是践行绿色发展理念的必然要求。倡导餐桌上的文明新风,需要我们共同努力。请你依据下列三个要点提示,用英语写一篇短文。
1. 要点提示:
(1)你和身边的人平时就餐是否节约;
(2)叙述一次你经历过的与节约或者浪费有关的就餐过程;
(3)简单表述你对这次就餐的看法。
2. 注意事项:
(1)用词在90个左右:
(2)行文应连贯流畅;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名或校名。
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【答案】
Food waste is a big problem. There are still a lot of people who are hungry. It is also harmful to the environment. My family don’t like to waste food. When we go out for dinner, we always order no more food than we need, and we will take the left food home.
One day, my friend Lucy and I went out for lunch. She ordered a lot of food to celebrate passing the exam. In the end, much food was left. I told her that we should take it home, because wasting food is not right. She felt ashamed and promised not to waste food next time.
I think when you throw away food, you are not just wasting the food itself. Resources are also wanted while growing, transporting and cooking the food. These things all take energy, time and water. So let’s avoid wasting food from now on.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“食物浪费”这一现象写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式:第一段引出主题;第二段描述曾经历过的与浪费有关的就餐过程;第三段发表自己的看法。写作时保持主谓一致,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
H
(2021·广东中考真题)
校园广播节目是同学们获取校园资讯的途径之一,假设你是李明你所在学校的英语广播节目,拟开设听众来信专栏,请你给该专栏投稿内容包括:
(1)你喜欢该节目的哪一位主持人,请就其工作谈两点原因;
(2)你对英语节目的两点建议;
(3)你对节目的祝愿。
参考词汇:host男主持,hostess女主持
作文要求:
(1)不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
(2)语句连贯,字数80个左右,作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上.
Dear editors,
I’m a big fan of the English programs of our school radio stations.___________________________________
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear editors,
I’m a big fan of the English programs of our school radio stations. I like the host named Jack best. His English pronunciation is very good, and his advice about how to learn English well is helpful to me.
I want to talk about my suggestions about the English program. First, I hope you can recommend some English newspapers so that we can practice our reading skills. Next, I hope this program can be held twice a week.
In the end, I hope this program will become more and more popular.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。向学校英语广播节目投稿,描述自己对于这个节目的相关建议。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时。分为三段式;第一段介绍自己最喜欢的主持人;第二段提出自己对于这个节目的建议;最后一段表达自己对这个节目的祝愿。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
A (2021·广东·广州市育才中学二模)
假设你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tony 给你发来邮件抱怨他的周末时间都被父母给他安排的培训占据了,他向你了解你及其他中国孩子是否面临同样的问题。
写作要点:
1、中国孩子周末的普遍情况。
2、你的周末安排。
3、你对父母安排周末培训的看法。
写作要求:
1、80词以上,开头结尾己给出,不计入总词数;
2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Dear Tony,
I am sorry to know that you have to attend lots of classes at weekends.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I do hope you can have the freedom to choose what you like to do and enjoy your weekends.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
I am sorry to know that you have to attend lots of classes at weekends. We Chinese children also have many after-school clubs on weekends, such as Chinese art clubs, English clubs and basketball clubs. Of course, I’m also very busy every weekend. I take part in English clubs and many different music clubs. I think parents spend a lot of money to let us go to various clubs so that we can have a better future. The most important thing is that we can learn from many knowledge from them. So I take every class seriously.
I do hope you can have the freedom to choose what you like to do and enjoy your weekends.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。围绕课后培训写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时。分为两段式:第一段开头和第二段已给出,第一段再加上描述自己在周末参加培训的情况以及自己对此的看法。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
B(2021·江苏淮安·二模)
现如今线上学习已经成为了一个热门话题,但大家对这件事褒贬不一。假如你是星光中学九年级一班的学生李明,你班最近开设了一节主题班会课,同学们就围绕“中学生线上学习的优缺点”这个话题展开了热烈讨论。请根据下面表格中要点提示,写一篇英语短文。
优点
缺点
节省时间,能学到更多知识
使学习变得更加方便
上网课不需要太多费用
部分学生律己不严,会玩游戏
长时间看手机、电脑对眼睛有害
当学生遇到学习困难时,不能及时获得同伴的帮助
1. 你的观点:……。
2. 理由:……(不少于2点)。
要求:1. 不要逐句翻译,可适当添加细节使文章内容完整连贯,词数80-100;
2. 文章中的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名。Our class have a discussion about whether it’s good for students to study online at home.
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【答案】例文
Our class have a discussion about whether it’s good for students to study online at home. Here are two different ideas about it.
Some students think it can save time and can learn more knowledge. Online classes don’t cost much. It makes learning more convenient. However, its disadvantages are also quite clearly. When we have problems, we can’t communicate with our teachers or classmates as much as we do in the classroom. Some of us also spend too much time on games and on line movies. If you watch mobile phones and computers for a long time, it’s harmful to your eyes.
I suggest that in order to protect our eyes, we should have a good rest. I think if we can learn to better control ourselves, we will enjoy the good service from online study and make great progress in our study.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作;在写作时应承接短文开头;内容是根据表格中所给的要点,围绕“中学生线上学习的优缺点”这个话题写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述作文内容;时态采用一般现在时为主;第一段承接短文开头,提出两个观点;其次详细的介绍网上学习的优缺点;最后陈述自己的观点和理由。
C(2021·江苏沭阳·一模)
目前,许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班,对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下面内容写一篇短文。
赞成者的观点
1.能够学得更好,考试考得更好,上更好的高中;
2.避免花太多时间看电视、玩游戏。
反对者的观点学生
需要时间休息;压力过大不利于 身体健康。
你的观点
1.课堂上好好学就足够了,补课不必要;
2.课后可以自己……
注意: 1.表达清楚,语法通顺,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括提示的所有信息,并适当发挥,至少两点;
3.词数:100 词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that taking after-school classes can help students learn better and get higher marks in the entrance examination. Then they can get into a good high school. What’s more, students can avoid spending too much time watching TV or playing computer games.
However, others think students need time to rest. After-school classes can cause a lot of stress for students and it is not good for their health,
In my opinion, it is enough for us to study hard in class. There is no need to take after-school classes. We can learn by ourselves. We’d better spend more time on our weak subjects.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。对于“中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班”这一做法,不同人发表了不同的观点。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般现在时。分为四段式:文章开头已给出;第二段根据提示材料介绍赞成者的观点;第三段根据提示材料介绍反对者的观点;最后一段发表自己的观点。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
D(2021·四川贡井·一模)
去年,中共中央、国务院印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。据此,某报社将举行题为“We Should Help Parents Do Housework”的中学生英语演讲比赛。假如你是光明中学的学生李华,你将代表你校参加此次演讲比赛。请你根据下面提示写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿,号召同学们尽力承担起家庭的责任。
要点提示:
1.目前在中学生中存在的普通现象;
2.你经常做的家务(至少三点);
3.你的体会和看法(至少两点)。
写作要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2.必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
3.不得使用真实姓名和校名等;
4.文章开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
We Should Help Parents Do Housework
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua from Guangming Middle School.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua from Guangming Middle School. Today my speech topic is that we should help parents do housework.
Nowadays, more and more students are so lazy that they refuse to help their parents do housework. As for me, I often make the bed every morning and water the flowers. Sometimes, I’m willing to clean their rooms and take out the rubbish in my spare time, though they don’t ask me to do these things. It’s true that we are very tired because of hard work. However, we have grown up, so it is our duty to care for our family. Not only can doing housework improve our life skills, but it is a good way to lessen our parents’ burden. Besides, it can help build up our bodies like doing sports. Let’s take action now! Helping parents is helping ourselves.
【解析】
【详解】
1、题干解读:题目要求你代表你校参加以“We Should Help Parents Do Housework”为题的中学生英语演讲比赛,根据下面的提示写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿,号召同学们尽力承担起家庭的责任,包括目前在中学生中存在的普通现象、你经常做的家务以及你的体会和看法等,可适当发挥。
2、写作指导:本文应该以第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时为主;号召同学们尽力承担起家庭的责任时,应详细具体,语句通顺,逻辑性强,保证条理清晰。
E(2021·河北·石家庄市第二十八中学模拟预测)
“谁知盘中餐,粒粒皆辛苦。”节约粮食是中华民族的传统美德,即使如今人们生活富足,我们也应当提倡节俭,避免浪费食物。某英文网站正在开展以“拒绝食物浪费”为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿,谈谈你的看法。
提示:
1. Why should we avoid wasting food?
2. What do we usually do in order to save food?
3. How have we benefited from doing so?
注意:
(1)短文须包括提示中的三个要点,可适当发挥,提示词语供参考;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
提示词:cut down, cherish(珍惜)
Food waste has become a big problem these days. It_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Food waste has become a big problem these days. It not only causes environmental pollution, but also destroys the fruit of farms’ hard work. And there are still many people around the world who don’t have enough food to eat.
Knowing the importance of avoiding wasting food, I always try my best to do it. For example, I order just enough food when I’m eating at a restaurant and I often take the leftovers home if I can’t finish the dishes. I always clear my plate every time I eat at home and school as well.
By doing my part to save food, I get a sense of achievement and satisfaction. I also realize that we can all make a difference as long as we take action. We should cut down waste and cherish food.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目以“拒绝食物浪费”为主题,写一篇英语短语。在写作时应承接短文开头,叙述我们为什么要避免浪费食物;第二段叙述为了避免浪费,我们要做些什么;第三段叙述我们节约食物,我们会得到什么。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称为主来叙述;时态采用一般现在时,写作内容要包括提干提及的所有要求;叙述要完整,条理清晰,注意使用连词和固定句型,使上下文语意连贯、富有逻辑性,确保单词拼写、语法、标点使用正确。
F(2021·内蒙古·鄂温克族自治旗教学研究室一模)
为了培养学生对阅读的兴趣,你们班将要开展主题为“I like reading best”的英语主题班会。假如你是李华,请你写一篇英语短文,发表你的看法。短文需包括下图所有提示内容:
喜欢阅读的原因
增长知识,提高解决问题的能力,增强记忆力
你的阅读习惯
……(请你补充)
你的阅读计划
观看《朗读者》节目,阅读其推荐书籍
注意:1.参考词汇:《朗读者》(The Readers);2.词数:90词左右(短文的开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数);
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Everyone has a hobby. And I like reading best. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Reading can make a full man. Let’s read together!
【答案】例文:
Everyone has a hobby. And I like reading best. Reading can increase my knowledge and improve the ability of solving problems. Besides, it helps me develop my memory.
For these reasons, I have a habit of reading. I spend at least twenty minutes reading after class every day. And I try to take notes of good sentences while I am reading.
In fact, I plan to watch The Readers. The programme recommends some good books and I will read them. What’s more, it’s good for me to go to the library to read books every weekend.
Reading can make a full man. Let’s read together!
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:题目要求以“I like reading best”为主题,根据提示内容写短文发表自己的看法,要包括喜欢阅读的原因、阅读习惯、阅读计划几方面。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称为主,时态采用一般现在时。可分为四段式写作:第一段写自己喜欢阅读的原因;第二段写自己的阅读习惯;第三段写自己的阅读计划;最后一段收尾,呼吁大家一起阅读。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
G(2021·四川五通桥·二模)
假设你的好友李华上周给你写了一封信,信中分享了他上周科学课后对于人工智能(AI)的一些观点,并表达了他对人工智能即将代替人类的担忧。请根据以下提示写一封回信,并谈谈自己的看法。
1、不必过分担忧。
2、AI会按照人的指令进行工作。
3、AI帮助我们从事危险的工作。
4、AI可以为我们节省时间和劳动力。
注意:
1.词数:80词左右
2.应覆盖所有要点;可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
3.文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:劳动力:labour
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
【答案】One Possible Version:
Dear Li Hua,
I’m glad to receive your letter and get a chance to discuss AI with you. I don’t think you need to be too worried about it. AI will never completely take the place of human beings. Instead, it has more advantages than disadvantages.
First of all, AI can work by following orders of human beings. If people don’t want to do some dangerous jobs, they can use AI to keep workers safe. It will save us much time and labour to work with AI. As a result, people can free themselves form work and spend more time on what they are interested in. AI plays an important role in the fields of science and technology in China.
In my opinion, AI is a double-edged sword. Instead of worrying about its negative effects, you should learn more about how to use it properly. Do you agree? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Mike
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读:该题目属于应用文写作,但写作时要按书信格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头,亮出你的观点(你现在是Mike),告诉李华不必过分担忧,人工智能永远不会完全取代人类,它利大于弊;第二段叙述人工智能的优点;第三段概括,告诉李华人工智能是一把双刃剑。与其担心它的负面影响,不如多了解如何正确使用它,并结尾。
2.写作指导:本文应该以第一、三人称为主来叙述,注意人称的转换,主谓一致;时态采用一般将来时和一般现在时为主,注意表达的顺序,适当使用连词、介词和从句,内容包括所有提示要点,适当增加细节。需要叙述完整、连贯,语言通顺,保证条理清晰。写完以后,注意检查,确保语法、单词拼写、标点符号使用正确。
H(2021·浙江浙江·模拟预测)
假如你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack对中国目前正在流行的短视频 (short video) 很感兴趣,写信向你询问此事。请你给他回信,向他介绍短视频的特点,并谈谈你对短视频流行的看法。
注意:
1. 短文需包括表中所有信息,并做适当补充。
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。词数: 80-100.
Features: (特点)
★short★different contents (内容)
Your opinion:
★share life★...
★have poor eyesight★...
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your last letter. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your last letter. I’m glad to introduce short videos to you. As the name suggests, most short videos are short. So it is possible to enjoy several videos in a short time. Besides, they always cover different contents like cooking, singing, traveling, or just the funny moments in life.
Making short videos is a good way to share life. Through short videos, people can relax as well. However, every coin has two sides. Some people have poor eyesight by watching short videos for a long time without relaxing. And some videos may mislead them in some way. So I think we should make sure to make good use of short videos. Never follow the trends blindly.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读:这篇作文要求考生根据表格提示的内容,给Jack写一封回信介绍短视频的特点,并谈谈自己对短视频流行的看法,属于书信作文,要注意格式正确。
2. 写作指导:审题可知,这篇短文应以第三人称和一般现在时为主,以第一人称展开陈述。写作时紧扣提示的要点,先介绍短视频的特点和不同内容,然后谈一谈自己对短视频流行的看法。行文注意主谓一致和上下文的过渡,符合逻辑关系,保证无语法和单词拼写错误。
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