人教版 (2019)选择性必修 第三册Unit 2 Healthy Lifestyle优秀课后复习题

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Part IV Writing

妙笔生花

 假设你是李华，你的笔友王强最近沉迷于电脑游戏，这对他造成了很多危害。请你给他写一封信，劝说他改掉这个不良习惯，并提出建议。内容包括：

  1.浪费了本该学习的时间；

  2.对身心造成危害；

  3.你的建议。

注意：1. 词数80左右；

    2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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  步骤一：审题构思——分析透彻很关键

  一、审题

  1. 确定体裁：本次写作是应用文（建议信），内容为劝说对方改掉玩电脑游戏的习惯；

  2. 确定人称：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主；

  3. 确定时态：时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。

  二、构思

  第一段：表明写信的目的，这里可以简单叙述；

  第二段：说明玩电脑游戏的危害并给出建议，可以借助题目给出的两个要点：浪费时间、危害身心；

  第三段：表达祝愿。

  步骤二：精挑细选——核心词汇想周全

  1.__________________________对……着迷；沉溺于……

  2. __________________________首先

  3. __________________________花费……在……上

  4. __________________________损害

  5. __________________________充满

  6. __________________________对……有害

  7. __________________________摆脱；脱离

  8. __________________________参加

  步骤三：遣词造句——由词扩句雏形现

  1. 你沉溺于电脑游戏。（主系表）

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  2. 玩电脑游戏会浪费许多宝贵的时间。（主谓宾）

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  3. 你应该把时间花费在学习或其他更有意义的事情上。（主谓宾）

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  4. 长时间玩电脑游戏会对你的健康和眼睛有害。（主谓宾）

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  5. 有些游戏充满着暴力。（主系表）

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  6. 它会对你的心理健康有害。（主系表）

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  7. 你可以多读好书、多做运动或参加一些社会活动来开阔你的眼界。（主谓宾状）

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  步骤四：斟酌打磨——句式升级造亮点

  1. 把第1句升级为含有when引导的时间状语从句的复合句

________________________________________________________________________________2. 把第2、3句升级为含有限制性定语从句的复合句

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  3. 第4句用especially强调eyes

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  4. 把第5、6句升级为含有非限制性定语从句的复合句

________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 用in order to丰富第7句

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  步骤五：连句成文——逻辑衔接连成篇 

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Part IV Writing

参考答案

步骤二

1. be addicted to   2. to begin with   3. spend...on...   4. do harm to  5. be full of   6. be harmful to

7. break away from    8. participate in

步骤三

1. You are addicted to computer games.

2.Playing computer games will waste much valuable time.

3. You should spend the time on your study or other more meaningful things.

4.Playing computer games for a long time will do harm to your health and eyes.

5. Some games are full of violence.

6.It will be harmful to your mental health.

7. You can read more good books，take more exercise or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons.

步骤四

1. I feel very worried when I hear that you are addicted to computer games.

2.Playing computer games will waste much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other more meaningful things.

3. Playing computer games for a long time will do harm to your health，especially to your eyes.

4.Some games are full of violence，which will be harmful to your mental health.

5.In order to live a meaningful life，you can read more good books，take more exercise or participate in some social activities to expand your horizon.

步骤五

Dear Wang Qiang，

  I feel very worried when I hear that you are addicted to computer games.

  To begin with，playing computer games will waste much valuable time which should be spent on your study or other more meaningful things. In addition，playing computer games for a long time will do harm to your health，especially to your eyes. Worse still，some games are full of violence，which will be harmful to your mental health. Therefore，I strongly hope that you can break away from it. The earlier，the better. In order to live a meaningful life，you can read more good books，take more exercise or participate in some social activities to expand your horizons.

  Looking forward to your good news.

    Yours，

Li Hua