中考二轮英语专项练 专题32 书面表达之咨询建议类

中考英语总复习方法指导

中考英语考点一遍过为了帮助考生更好的冲刺中考英语，从命题趋势、易错警示、方法技巧、跟踪训练、真题再现等几个方面帮孩子更准、更快、更有效的复习。

中考总复习一般分为三轮：

1、第一轮复习为基础知识的单元、章节复习。

通过第一轮的复习，使学生系统掌握基础知识、基本技能和方法，形成明晰的知识网络和稳定的知识框架。我们从双基入手，紧扣中考知识点来组织单元过关。

2、第二轮复习打破章节界限实行大单元、小综合、专题式复习。

第二轮复习绝不是第一轮复习的压缩文档，而是一个知识点综合、巩固、完善、提高的过程。复习的主要任务及目标是：完成各部分知识的条 理，归纳，糅合，使各部分知识成为一个有机的整体，力求实现基础知识重点化，重点知识网络化，网络知识题型化，题型设计生活化。

3、第三轮复习是知识、能力深化巩固的阶段。

复习资料的组织以中考题及模拟题为主，回扣教材，查缺补漏，进行强化训练。同时，要教给学生一些必备的应试技巧和方法，使学生有足够的自信从容地面对中考。

专题32 书面表达之咨询建议类

【要点提炼】

考点扫描

英语书面表达试题属综合性运用试题，是考查学生运用各项语法知识、正确进行书面表达的能力以及善于理解情景提示的内容，抓住要点和中心思想的能力，是“压轴题”，属中考英语重大题型。能否把书面表达题型做好对于英语成绩总成绩能否考好非常重要。

做题技巧与策略

建议、推荐类作文属于议论文文体，题型为提示性作文。提示性作文通常给出具体的内容并规定作文的字数。这类作文限定了文章的思想内容，便于同学们把注意力集中在英文表达上，突出了英语作文的测试要点。

要想写好提示性作文，必须注意以下四点:

1. 确定题目，明确中心。要善于从所提示的情景中确定中心思想，明确写作意图，并在把我主题内容的基础上，确定文章的主题句，写作方法以及分配段落的方式。2.依据提示，进行构思。在写作过程中，必须按照提示的范围和要求未撰写文章。提示的内容是文章的总体框架，应该在提示内容的范围内进行分析、构思。在此基础之上可以进行适当发挥

3. 扩展语句，升华思想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一 定的逻辑关系来展开段落，句与句、段与段志坚衔接要自然怡当。切忌把中文提示的情景逐词逐句地翻译，而应当根据所提示的内容用自己熟悉的英文词语、句型、句式来表达。

4. 语法准确，句意连贯。应根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态，力求句型、句式丰富多样。

变式: How to study well. How to get along well with others. How to solve problems. How to learn English well. How to lead a healthy life. How to sleep well .How to eat a balanced diet. How to be a good sportsman. How to shop on line. How to make good friends with others. How to make a milkshake. How to study fora test....

常用词汇

注意连接词和过渡词等词语的使用，以增强文章的条理性和逻辑性。常用的过渡词和连接词包括:

一.表观点: I think in my opinion.. .

二.表顺序: first, second, third, finally, later on, next, to start/begin with, also, what's more

三.表因果: because, so, so that, therefore

四.表转折: but, however, although, though, even if, even though, instead

五表选择: either. . o.... neither.. nor... not..but.

六表比较: compare with/to.

表总结:总之in a word,all in all简而言之in short

常用句式

提建议常用句型:

句型一: What/How about doing..?做..怎么样?

句型二: Let's (not) do ...让我们(不要)做..吧

句型三: You'd/We'd better (not) do ...最好(不要)做...

句型四: Why not do .. Why don't you do..?为什么不做......?

句型五: If I were you, I would do.....如果我是你，我会......

句型六: You should (not) do ..你(不)应该做...

三段式写作指导

第一段:提出中心论点(要开门见山，不要拖泥带水):

Nowadays, there are more and more.

第二段:讨论问题，并提出建议(多使用过渡词和连接词，逻辑要清晰)，比如:Firstly... Secondly,... Thirdly.. Finally,

第三段:总结和归纳(首位呼应，突出中心)

All in all, if all of us can do so,

咨询建议类作文参考模板

In recent days, we have to face a problem          A, which is becoming more and more serious. First,  （说明A的现状）.Second,               （举例进一步说明现状）.

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing,    （解决方法一）.For another                （解决方法二） .Finally,               （解决方法三）.

Personally, I believe that       （我的解决方法）•

Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future Is waiting us because           （帯来的好 处）.

【专题真题训练】

（一）【贵阳市】

假定你是李华，请你以初三毕业生的身份给学弟学妹们写一封电子邮件。要求如下：

1. 重点分享你在处理学习困难方面的经验以及你下一步学习或生活的打算；

2. 邮件不少于80词，开头与结尾已给出，不计入字数；

3. 不得出现真实的个人信息。

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【思路】

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【范文】

I'm going to graduate from junior high school. Looking back on three years of junior high school life, there are many gains and difficulties. I have many difficulties in learning English. At the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it. I am about to start high school life, I will continue to work hard, I hope you bravely face junior high school life, have a happy junior high school life.

【点评】

这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,如:So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.，这些文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

（二）【山东省烟台市】

假设你某英语报社的编辑Rina, 收到Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei 回信。

要求：1. 须包括所有要点提示并适当补充，语句通顺，意思连贯；

      2. 词数：100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

      3. 文中不得出现个人真实姓名和校名。

参考词汇：laugh at; care about; high- fat food; the more... , the healthier...

Dear Li Wei,

I’ve received your letter and I can understand you. _______________________________________________

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Yours,

Rina

【思路】

假设你某英语报社的编辑Rina, 收到Li Wei 同学的来信，诉说了因为肥胖常遭到同学嘲笑的苦恼，并向你寻求建议。请你根据以下提示给Li Wei 回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

【范文】

Dear Li Wei,

I have received your letter and I can understand you. You must feel bad when being laughed at use of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you.

Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to be confident, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble.

Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.

Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You'd better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be.

I hope my advice will be helpful to you.

Yours,

Rina

【点评】

这是一篇很好的文章，文中用到了一些好的句型：Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you.；Secondly, try to eat healthily keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.这些给文章增色不少。

（三）【广西省贵港市】

假如你是林涛，你的笔友Sam在学校和同学发生了一些矛盾．现在他来信，请你给他一些关于怎样与他人相处和自我保护的建议．请根据下面表格提示，用英文给他写一封回信

写作要求：1．短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥

          2．语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范

          3．文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；

          4. 词数80左右．开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．

参考词汇： respect尊重

Dear Sam，

How is it going？ I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves．

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Best wishes!

Yours，

Lin Tao

【范文】

Dear Sam，

How's it going？ I'm happy to tell you how to get on well with others and protect ourselves．（开篇点明题意）

First，We should study how to listen to others．We could be quiet when others are talking with you．Just listen carefully，then you can describe your opinions．Second，We also should be ready to help each other（高分句型一）．Helping others will improve the relationships with your friends．Third，Please don't make friends via the Internet．It's not truthful and you can't judge the truth by yourself．Therefore，we can protect ourselves via communicating with classmates．Meanwhile，We can ask teachers and parents for help．（从如何与人相处和保护自己方面提出建议）

I understand why you are worried，since the friendship also plays an important role in studying， even sometimes in your daily life．Please take above advice，Hope you will deal with it soon．（高分句型二）（对学习，生活的影响以及给出期待）

Best wishes!

Yours，

Lin Tao

（四）【广西河池市】

"人生没有彩排，生命没有重来"，你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿．今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以" Keep away from the danger!"为主题的英文演讲比赛．假如你是王雷同学，大家推选你参加这次比赛．请根据以下思维导图提示，写一篇英文演讲稿．

写作提示：

写作要求：1．不得使用真实姓名和学校名；

          2．所有的提示词都须用上，包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

          3．字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清楚；

          4．词数100词左右。（演讲稿的开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。）

Hello! Everyone．I'm Wang Lei．The danger is around us． So we must learn how to keep away from the danger． First， we mustn't go swimming without our parents' or teachers' permission. ______________________

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In a word， we must try our best to keep away from the danger!

That's all． Thank you for listening!

【范文】

Keep away from the danger！

Hello! Everyone．I'm Wang Lei．The danger is around us．So we must learn how to keep away from the danger． First， we mustn't go swimming without our parents' or teachers' permission．When we swim in the water，we must wear life jackets．（游泳安全） Second， it's important for us to follow the traffic rules．【高分句型一】We mustn't go across the street when the traffic light is red．While crossing the street， never use mobile phones．We must walk on the pavement．（交通安全）Third，we have to be careful when we make friends， especially online．We mustn't meet net friends alone．（交友安全）Fourth，we are supposed to eat healthily and safely． Eating the food that goes bad will do harm to out health．【高分句型二】Remember to wash hands before meals．（饮食安全）What's more，we have to follow the school rules．Don't run in the hallways，or we'll be hurt easily．We should get on well with our classmates．Don't fight with them．If we are threatened， we should call the police for help in time．（校园安全）Last but not least，we must say no to the drugs．Never try them．When you see someone sell drugs，remember to call 110．（远离毒品）

In a word， we must try our best to keep away from the danger!

That's all． Thank you for listening!

（五）【贵州省黔南州】

每年的6月6日是我国的"爱眼日"，可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要，为此，学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场"爱眼日"英语演讲比赛．请你写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议．

内容：1．保护视力的重要性（请写1点）

2．对保护视力的建议：

（1）阅读时注意用眼卫生；

（2）少用电子产品；

（3）常看绿色植物；

（4）做眼保健操；

（5）多做户外运动．

要求：1．结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；

      2．文中不得出现任何真实的人名，学校名等信息；

      3．词数80左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．

参考词汇：

Sight Day"爱眼日"； electronic products电子产品； eye﹣protecting exercises眼保健操

Dear friends．

June 6 is our country's Sight Day _____________________________________________________________

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Thank you！

【范文】

Dear friends．

June 6 is our country's Sight Day．As we know，"Eyes are the windows of the soul"． Everyone understands the importance of the eyes．（保护视力的重要性）But now more and more students are getting near﹣sighted．So how can we  protect our eyes ？Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes．

First，we should be cautious on the health of using eyes．We should not keep your eyes working for a long time． While reading ，we should keep the book about a foot away from us．After reading for an hour or two，we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance．Second，using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes．【高分句型一】 Besides，we should see green plants as often as possible．Finally， remember to do eye﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports， which will help us keep good eyesight．【高分句型二】 （对保护视力的几条建议）

（六）【海南省】

据悉，我国青少年的近视率居全球第一，70%的学生有视力方面的问题．为引起广大青少年的重视，某英语报刊正在开展以" Saving Our Eyesight"为题的征文活动．请根据以下

提示写一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议．

要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范．

      2．所有提示须全部用上，并作适当发挥．

      3．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名．

      4. 80词左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）．

Saving Our Eyesight

As the saying goes， "Eyes are the window to the soul（心灵 ） "However， 70% of us have poor eyesight． What has caused this problem？ _______________________________________________________

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In a word， lets take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future．

【范文】

Saving Our Eyesight

As the saying goes， "Eyes are the window to the soul（心灵 ） "However， 70% of us have poor eyesight． What has caused this problem？ The main reason is the bad habits of using eyes．For example， many of us read in wrong positions，such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the book．Besides，taking less exercise can also cause poor eyesight． What's more， some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV． It's bad for our eyes． So how can we  protect our eyes ？Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes．（造成青少年近视的原因）

First，we should be cautious on the health of using eyes．We should not keep our eyes working for a long time． While reading ，we should keep the book about a foot away from us．After reading for an hour or two，we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distance．Second，using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes．【高分句型一】 Besides，we should see green plants as often as possible．Finally， remember to do eye﹣protecting exercises or do more outdoor sports， which will help us keep good eyesight．【高分句型二】 （对保护视力的几条建议）

In a word， let's take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future．

（七）【湖南省邵阳市】

每年三月的最后一个星期一是"全国中小学生安全教育日"．为了提高同学们的安全意识，学校决定在毕业前再举行一次以安全教育为主题的班会．请根据所给提示，就日常生活中需要注意的安全写一篇英语发言稿．

提示：1．上学、放学途中的安全；

      2．校园里的安全；

      3．家里的安全．

要求：1． 80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

      2．语法正确，语句通顺、流畅；

      3．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名．

Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should _____________________________________

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Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．

Thank you!

【范文】

Hello， everyone! The last Monday in March every year is National Safety Education Day of Primary and Middle School Students． As middle school students， we should pay more attention to safety．To be safe，we must follow rules．

When we go to school or go home from school，we must follow the traffic rules．For example，we must walk on walk-side．When we cross zebra﹣crossing，stop and look right and left，then go across the road fast．【高分句型一】We mustn't run through red lights when crossing the road．Don't play football on the road．（上学、放学途中的安全）

At school，don't push when we go upstairs or downstairs，or we may hurt ourselves or others．Never use sharp things like the knife when we play with our classmates．We should get on well with our classmates．Don't fight with them，or we'll be hurt．（上学、放学途中的安全）

At home，we should be careful when we use electricity．If there is a fire or a thief，we should call the police for help in time．（家里的安全．）Also，food satety is important．Never eat the food that goes bad．【高分句型二】

Safety is very important． We should always keep it in mind．

Thank you!

（八）【青海省】

假如你是小明，你的笔友Sam给你发了电子邮件，请根据邮件内容进行回复．

要求：1．逻辑清晰，内容完整，书写规范．

      2．词数80左右．邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数．

chairman：主席 unique：特别的

Dear Sam，

It's a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school．_______________________________________

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Yours，

Xiao Ming

【范文】

Dear Sam，

It's a good idea to have such a Culture Week in your school．It's a good opportunity for you to learn more about culture．（开篇点题）First ，a paper﹣cutting exhibition is a good choice for you． As a traditional Chinese art， paper﹣cutting includes different themes like plants， animals， stories and so on． （剪纸展览）Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people's interest， which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture．【高分句型一】（书法比赛） What's more， lectures about Chinese history， poems， traditional festivals，or even food， are surely welcome．（历史，诗歌，传统节日，食物等讲座） And a Chinese painting show is always attractive．（中国画展览）I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you．【高分句型二】

Yours，

Xiao Ming

【点评】

高分句型一：

Second， holding a Chinese calligraphy competition can also arouse people's interest， which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture．

第二，举办中国书法比赛也能激发人们的兴趣，这对学习中国文化很有帮助．arouse one's interest激发某人的兴趣，which is very helpful in learning Chinese culture本句使用了非限制性定语从句

高分句型二：

I hope my suggestions will be of great help to you．

我希望我的建议对你有很大帮助．be of great help 有很大帮助