专题09 家庭生活-备战高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练(高考模拟+名校真题)

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备战高考英语读后续写热点话题+体裁分类训练
(高考模拟+名校真题)
专题09 家庭生活
1．（2022·福建宁德·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
A New Addition to the Family
For the initial ten years of his life, Victor was the prince of the household. As he was an only child, his parents petted him and showered all their love and attention on him. Whatever toys his parents bought, they were always meant for him. Whatever food was in the refrigerator, there was no one to compete with him to polish it off first. Victor could leave his toys or books around the house with complete ease of mind, knowing that there was no one who would get their hands on his belongings and cause any damage.
However, all that was to change overnight when Victor’s parents brought back his new baby sister, Lina, from the hospital. With her rosy cheeks, wide open eyes and angelic smile, Lina caught the hearts of her parents, grandparents and relatives. Everyone focused their attention on the cute bunch of joy. Whenever she cried, her mother or father would rush to her bed. She simply cried because she wanted to be carried. There was little time left for Victor.
Now that Victor’s mother had his baby sister to take care of, she expected Victor himself to do most of the chores he can do. Victor was asked to clean his own room, iron his own school uniform and clean his own shoes. Before Lina’s arrival, he had never lifted a finger to help out with these tasks. The whole family also went out less because it was unhealthy to expose Lina to the bacteria(细菌) being in the outside world too often.
Victor felt neglected by his parents. He felt that they loved Lina more than him. As a result, he tried to attract his parents’ attention by becoming resistant. One evening, Victor’s parents were called up by his teacher because Victor had got into a fight at school. His teacher had noticed Victor’s behaviour and work attitude changing downwards in the past two months. Before that, he had been a model student.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。
Upon hearing the teacher’s feedback, Victor’s parents got lost in thought.
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Victor realized that his parents still cared for him.
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2．（2021·江苏·海安高级中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad doesn’t write me letters. And he doesn’t always remember my birthday or wedding anniversary -- or even how old I am sometimes.
But I only need to look around me to be reminded of his love. He restored a 100-year-old rocking chair after I told him how much I wanted one. When I moved into my first apartment, he spent his weekends in a small space replacing pipes. And when I lost a blue stone from a favorite necklace, he worked his magic with common stuff
The four greatest words I know are “Dad will build it”.
I could never forget when I was seven, one day we walked by a toy store window. There in the corner was the most unusual doll house had ever seen. It was shaped like an upturned log. Little oval windows were cut into it decorated with white curtains and framed by tiny balconies.
“Oh, Daddy,” I said, “isn’t it beautiful? Do you think Santa Clause will bring it to me?”
Dad looked at the $100 price tag -- too high a figure in those days. “I think even Santa couldn't afford this house,” he joked, hiking up his belt, as he often does when he’s nervous. “Maybe one day, sweetheart, ”Dad probably hoped I’d forget about the doll house, but I kept talking about it.
On Christmas morning, I awoke early and raced downstairs. In the faint light, I made out some wrapped boxes under the tree-- but none large enough to contain my doll house.
Dad could see my disappointment.
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Four months later, a beautiful doll house was in front of me.
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3．（2021·广东惠州·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In our kitchen, there was a wooden table and three chairs — one for Dad, one for Mom, and one for me. In the cellar (地窖), the very last jar of apple jam lay quietly on the shelf, waiting to be turned into an apple pie when Dad came back. Mom sat at one end of the table. I sat in the middle between her and Dad. I tried not to look at Dad’s empty place. Dad had gone to the city to look for work for a long time.
Every night, I lay awake in bed and waited for the train to stop. Waited to hear the creaky (嘎吱作响的) gate Dad’s going to fix when he came home. Waited to hear the sound of his work boots dropping on the step by the kitchen door, and his voice calling, “I’m home!”
Every night, as I lay there, I stared at the window and the curtains Mom made from empty flour sacks (麻布袋).
Every night, Mom came to kiss me good-night — after the train’s gone by. She had been listening, too. “Go to sleep. Your dad will be home soon. Maybe for Thanksgiving.”
Time dragging by, it finally came the day before Thanksgiving. I went to sleep with the sound of train wheels in my head, whispering, “Maybe tomorrow, maybe tomorrow.”
Early the next morning, the smell of coffee woke me. I ran into the kitchen. There he was! Dad lifted me onto his shoulders and pretended to stagger from my weight. “How’s my boy? You’ve gotten so big that I can barely lift you up anymore.”
He put me down, and I stared at the two sacks on the table. One said FLOUR — I knew that word. I tried reading the other: S-U-G-A-R. Dad whistled admiringly and winked at me. Mom and I had been practicing my letters most days. I could see that Mom was pleased with me. “I’m going to bake a pie for your dad’s homecoming dinner. Jimmy, bring me that jar of apple jam from the shelf in the cellar.” Mom smiled at me.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右:
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar.
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“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,” Dad said and wiped my tears.
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4．（2021·湖南·长郡中学三模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
For nearly twenty years, my life was about two things: smoking cigarettes—and trying to quit smoking cigarettes.
When I married Cassie ten years ago, I threw my pack of cigarettes and swore I was quitting.
When we bought our first house eight years ago, I celebrated it by pulverizing (粉碎) my pack of cigarettes with my shoe heel.
When my son, Cole, was born five years ago, I threw my cigarettes into a garbage can.
I even began working out—running days a week, rain or shine. I lost forty pounds but I never was able to outrun those cigarettes.
You know cigarettes are deadly—but every cell in your body screams out for that nicotine. Then, one day the willpower I had lacked arrived from most unexpected place: an unclouded corner of my son’s mind.
As Cassie was driving Cole home from kindergarten, they passed a cemetery (墓地), which made the boy ask: “Mom, what’s under tombstones?”
Realizing there was no delicate answer, she frankly said, “Dead people.”
“Is that where Dad’s going to be because he smokes?” Cole asked. “I hope not,” Cassie replied. “Dad shouldn't smoke,” Cole said, his voice rising in anger. He kicked the back of the front seat. “Dad’s stupid for smoking. When I'm twenty, he’ll be dead.”
Cassie was speechless, shocked by Cole’s innocence. Then, just as quickly as he had exploded, Cole calmed down. “I hope he comes back as a ghost and talks to me,” he said peacefully. “Like Obi-Wan Kenobi did to Luke Skywalker in Star Wars.”
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I arrived home from work that evening, Cassie recounted the story to me.
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Later that evening, I found Cole and said, “Cole, I’m going to quit smoking, but I need your help.”
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5．（2021·江苏宿迁·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Some of my earliest memories involve silting with my dad in his study every night when he came home from the office. I’d watch as he put his personal items away: his watch, wallet, comb and car keys would always occupy the same spot on the table every time. It was as if he could see invisible lines drawn specifically for these things, not a centimetre more or less.
Dad's comb was jade green. I heard he bought it when he married Mum, which made the comb two years older than I was. Every night, he would smile, hand me the comb and say: “Be a good girl and help Daddy clean it, OK?”
I was more than happy to do it. At age five this ordinary task brought me such joy. I would excitedly turn the tap on, then brush the comb with a used toothbrush as hard as I could. Satisfied that I’d done a good job, I would proudly return die comb to Dad. He would smile at me, and place the comb on top of his wallet.
About two years later, Dad left his sales job and started his own wholesale business. I started primary school. That was when things started to change. Dad's business wasn’t doing so well, and our stable life started getting shaky. He didn’t come home as much as he used to - just a couple of times a week. And when he did come home, it was always late and I'd already be in bed. I started to get mad. Why didn't he listen to Mum and just stick to his old job? Why take the risk and place the whole family in trouble? Over the years, I stopped waiting for him to come home, and stopped going downstairs to check on him.
Today, I'm no longer a kid. Now 28, I ’ve graduated from college and got a job. Dad’s business has also started to get back on track. Things are better now. Yet the uncomfortable silence between Dad and me continued.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Two days before my birthday last year, Dad came home early.
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When I passed the clean comb back to Dad, I noticed the wrinkles next to his eyes.
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6．（2021·江苏省前黄高级中学一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右．
I woke up after surgery with my leg bandaged beyond recognition, with tubes coming out of various limbs(肢体），with my mouth dry and my mind confused.
The operation had required two bone transplants to fill the chunk(组块）I'd broken (it was in a million pieces, a doctor said). They'd inserted a titanium rod, a dozen or so screws. I wouldn't walk for three months, optimistically. I couldn't drive. I couldn't navigate the steps in our house. I couldn't even shower on my own.
I would be sent home to California with a machine designed to train my leg to regain its range of motion. I would sit in it for six hours a day, and when I wasn't sitting in the machine, I would be at physical therapy or limited to bed rest.
I was not thinking normally on my IV drip(静脉滴注） but my mind was clear enough and I turned to my husband Adam and asked,"How are we going to manage?" Who would get the kids to the bus at 7:15 a.m., since my husband was in his office by 6 am, each day? Who would deal with the dogs,who relied on my companionship and long walks? Who would prepare dinner?Who would drive to tennis practices and softball games and sleepovers?
＂We'll figure it out," Adam said. I nodded, because what was the alternative? But nowhere in any of my Vicodin-infused cells did I believe him. Not even a tiny bit.
I posted about my accident on Face-book. An image of me with tubes up my nose,and a picture of my leg,wrapped and swollen.
注意：
1.续写的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
Friends' responses flooded in asking for ways they could help.
Paragraph 2.
Both my children and husband learned to be autonomous and considerate.
7．（2021·湖北·襄阳五中二模）阅读下面材料， 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
"Missy," I cried to my wife, "did you put the banana skin on my desk?" "No, honey, Meghan probably did," As I'd feared, she had missed my real purpose of the question which was to make it clear to her that she hadn't done her job: defend my desk against the invader--our naughty girl.
I abandoned the conversation.
I sat here at the desk, and stared at the screen. I waited patiently for ideas to come to me, exam questions for a test I would give my English students. My wife was off to a reunion somewhere, but I was not alone. Meghan, our 22-month-old daughter, kept me company. Yet her plans that day seemed to go against mine.
She followed a daily routine that was both time-consuming and challenging. It included certain basic tasks: watching the fish, sweeping the carpet in her room, climbing up and down her bed.
At first I could concentrate on designing my test paper. But I was soon sidetracked（分心的）． I had not counted on the arrival of the "bib-bibs" ("Bib-bibs" were birds). "Bib-bibs, bib-bibs!" Meghan screamed excitedly, her eyes alive with expectation. She insisted that I go with her to the window.
"In a second, just let me finish this question," I said. She pulled me by the hand (two fingers, actually) toward the window. I saw myself as a fool, being led to watch the bib-bibs. And we did watch them. They chattered and leaped back and forth on the lawn just outside our apartment window. Meghan was absorbed, but as I watched them, I still thought about my work.
Suddenly she rushed out from the room, and I heard her naked feet slapping against the wooden floor outside. She returned with her doll, Dumpty. She held him up to the window, stretching him out by his two arms and whispering into his nonexistent ear. "Bib-bibs, Dumpty, bib-bibs!" Then I left them in conversation and returned to my desk.
注意：
l ．所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Unfortunately, she came again soon, with her shoes in hands and preparing for an outing.
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Out of the comer of my eye I could see the little girl sobbing because I didn't have time for her.
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8．（2022·辽宁·高二期末） I was visiting my sister and watched as my fifteen-year-old nephew, Ben, emptied the trash without being asked. “You’re such a great kid,” I told him. “Thank you for doing that.” He smiled, “The trash is my job. I’m ATT around here.” At my confused look, my sister Mandy explained that ATT stood for All Things Trash. “Emptying the trash has always been Ben’s job, and sweeping the floor is Anna’s job. Whenever some of the trash would spill out onto the floor, they’d argue about whose responsibility it was to clean it up,” she said. “So, we came up with the word act to solve that problem. If it has anything to do with trash, no matter where it is, it’s Ben’s job.” I nodded. “That makes sense. I love easy ways to solve common problems.”
A few days later, I was back home with my own family. I had a deadline for a huge project at work, and I was really feeling the pressure. When I’d picked up my son from school that afternoon, I’d enter the grocery store to buy a toasted chicken for dinner. I figured that would buy me an extra hour to work on my project since I wouldn’t have to cook that night.
Now, it was 6:00 p.m., and I was typing away, making good progress. My kids were downstairs watching TV. My eleven-year-old son, Nathan, came into the room and said, “Mom, I’m getting hungry. Can you warm up the chicken now?”
“In a little bit,” I answered without looking up from the computer, “I’m trying to work.”
Ten minutes later, my older son, Jordan, came in to tell me that he was hungry too, and I needed to warm up the chicken. “I’ll do it as soon as I’m at a stopping point,” I said.
Fifteen minutes after that, my eighteen-year-old daughter, Julia, made the same request. I exploded. “Each of you is old enough to put a toasted chicken in the microwave,” I nearly shouted. “You are watching TV while I’m working on something important. I would think you would realize that I’m busy and just take some responsibilities.”
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
Twenty minutes later, a paper plate filled with chicken and cheese appeared on the desk next to my computer.
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Sharing the load has given me more time to read and rest.
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参考答案
1． Upon hearing the teacher’s feedback, Victor’s parents got lost in thought. Since their second child Linda was born, they have devoted all their attention to her. To some degree, they neglected victor’s feelings. After all, he wanted to share the love from parents with Linda. So they made a decision that they should treat the two children equally. Gradually, something changed in the family. After school Victor often found some delicious food and new toys on his desk. When he did his homework, his father came to his room and sat beside him, reading a book quietly, which made him comfortable and warm. At that time, his mother was taking care of his sister Linda. After he finished his homework, his mother asked him to play with Linda. Seeing her sweet smile, he felt so happy.
Victor realized that his parents still cared for him.So he was determined to help his parents take good care of his sister. Having finished his homework, he learned to clean their rooms and do all the chores that he could. While his mother was cooking, he played with his sister happily. He came to realize that he should take responsibility for the family because he grew up.
【分析】
本文以一个小男孩Victor的感受为线索展开，讲述了在Victor的妹妹Linda出生以后，父母将全部的注意力集中到她身上，这让他感到被忽略，因此他用对抗来引起父母的注意。最后父母也意识到这一点，就做出改变，让Victor重新感受到父母的爱。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“听到老师的反馈，父母陷入沉思”可知，第一段可描写父母对自己行为的反省。
②由第二段首句内容“Victor意识到父母仍旧关爱他”可知，第二段可描写Victor感受到父母仍旧爱他后的积极行动。
2.续写线索：沉思——反省——改变——陪孩子——感受到爱——回报
3.词汇激活
行为类
①全身心投入：devote all one’s attention to / put one’s heart into
②决定：make a decision/ make up one’s mind
③.照看：take care of / look after
情绪类
①感到高兴：feel happy/ feel pleased
②幸福地：happily / merrily
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. So they made a decision that they should treat the two children equally.(运用同位语从句）
[高分句型2]. Having finished his homework, he learned to clean their rooms and do all the chores that he could. (运用现在分词作状语以及定语从句）
2．Para1:
Dad could see my disappointment. My tears welling up in eyes, he pulled me onto his lap and gently assured me, “Dad will build it.” As promised, he got down to preparing all the materials right after Christmas. Night after night, Dad would come home from his job dead tired, yet he’d always find time to work on the doll house. So eager was I that I often stood nearby, occasionally giving a helping hand under his instructions. Gradually, my doll house began to take shape.
Para2:
Four months later, a beautiful doll house was in front of me. With the shape like an upturned log, it looked exactly the same as the one in the toy store—little oval windows, white curtains and even the tiny balconies. But to me, no doll house in the world was better than the one Dad made just for me with his two hands. It was he who brought my dream to life! Screaming with excitement and gratitude, I threw myself at him, “Thank you, Dad.” He smiled, patting me gently on the head with his rough hands. I always know “Dad will build it.” is his Fatherlish to say “I love you.”
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了“我”小时候喜欢上商场里的娃娃屋，爸爸亲手制作，送给“我”做礼物的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“爸爸能看出我的失望。”可知，第一段可描写爸爸为了不让我失望，答应我帮我制作娃娃屋。
②由第二段首句内容“四个月后，一个漂亮的娃娃屋出现在我面前。”可知，第二段可描写我看到爸爸为我所制的娃娃屋时，我非常高兴，再一次感受到了父亲对我的爱。
2.续写线索：
喜欢娃娃屋——期待圣诞礼物——失望——爸爸制作——兴奋感激
3.词汇激活
行为类
①. 涌出：well up/roll down
②.帮助：help/give a helping hand
③.尖叫：scream/shout/yell
情绪类
①.渴望的：eager/greedy/desperate
②.兴奋：excitement /thrill
③.感激：gratitude/appreciation
【点睛】
[高分句型1].My tears welling up in eyes, he pulled me onto his lap and gently assured me, “Dad will build it.”（句中使用了独立主格作状语）
[高分句型2].So eager was I that I often stood nearby, occasionally giving a helping hand under his instructions.（句中使用了部分倒装）
3．Possible version 1:
Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar. The next second I was in front of the shelf. I stood on tiptoe and took down the jar carefully. I could hear Dad and Mom laughing upstairs and Mom’s hands slapping the dough. Wanting to join them, I hurried up the steps, and my foot caught on the middle one. I put out my hand to steady myself, but I tumbled down. The jar slipped through my fingers and smashed on the floor. The jam we’d been saving and saving flew everywhere. Wrong-footed, I burst into tears and heard Dad’s footsteps closer and closer.
“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,” Dad said and wiped my tears. These words seemed to have magic and gradually I settled down. Through the shirt, I could smell the dust of the train and the city as well as that of Dad’s. How I wished I hadn’t hurried. “Next time I will be more careful,” I thought to myself. Having swiftly dealt with the mess, Dad lifted me onto his shoulder and went back to Mom. “Now out of the kitchen, you two,” Mom said, “I'm going to bake my mama’s sugar pie, without apple jam!” I followed Dad out and helped him fix that old creaking gate until Ma called us in for Thanksgiving dinner.
Possible version 2:
Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar. “No problem.” I jumped at the request and rushed downstairs. The jar just stood quietly on the shelf, but it seemed a bit high. I climbed up the chair nearby and extended my arms as long as possible. When I just grasped the jar, I lost my balance and fell down. I couldn’t help crying. What made me sad was not the pain but the jam — now scattered everywhere. There came Dad’s footsteps and Mom’s voice, “Are you hurt?” I shook my head slightly. She helped me up and asked me to go upstairs. With heavy footsteps, I moved slowly and tears welled up in my eyes.
“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,” Dad said and wiped my tears. “But I ruined your homecoming dinner.” Sorrow overwhelmed me and I kept sobbing. “No, my son,” Dad smiled gently, “My homecoming dinner is not about pies, but about you and Mom.” Hearing this, I stopped sobbing, “But what can we eat tonight?” “How about an apple pie without apple jam?” Mom came upstairs and cut in. Dad and I exchanged a glance and nodded. After a while, I found myself sitting in the chair, but this time, I sat in the middle between Dad and Mom.
(We can go without apple jam. Why not make a pie with apple jam?)
(…but this time, I sat with Dad on the left and Mom on the right.)
Possible version 3:
Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar. “Yes! Madam.” I saluted, acting as if I were a solider. I ran downstairs as fast as my legs could carry me. After a while, I jumped upstairs with the jar in both hands, humming a joyful tune. But after I handed the jar to Mom, things went crazy. Mom was busy slapping the dough and asked me to pass her the sugar. Instead of scooping a bowl of it, I held the sack up. Just at that very moment, the sugar sack slipped away and all the sugar ended up on the mud floor. Realizing I spoiled Dad’s homecoming dinner, I burst into tears.
“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,” Dad said and wiped my tears. “I meant to help,” I whimpered, “but... I should have scooped some of it...” Dad squatted down and brushed the hair out of my eyes. “Next time it will just be fine.” I looked into Dad’s eyes and nodded. Dad lifted me onto his shoulder and turned to Mom, “Dear, can we make a sugar-free apple pie?” Mom, who had been watching us lovingly, replied “Of course!” and began to work on it. On that Thanksgiving evening, beside the wooden table sat three of us, I myself between Mom and Dad. Though sugar-free, the apple pie tasted sweeter than ever before.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。所给文章为记叙文，以苹果酱和苹果派为线索。作者家的厨房中有一张木桌和三把椅子，分别是爸爸的妈妈的和作者的。爸爸出门务工，每当地窖中的最后一瓶苹果酱被放到桌上，等待被做成苹果派的时候，就是爸爸回家的时候。作者和妈妈每个晚上都在等爸爸回家。感恩节的时候爸爸终于回家了，妈妈要给爸爸做苹果派，并让作者去把地窖的苹果酱拿出来。
【详解】
1.段落续写
第一段首句内容为“听到这话，我一两步走到地窖”。可知，第一段可描写作者听了母亲话后去地窖拿苹果酱的经历。
第二点首句内容为“没关系，孩子，意外总会发生的，”爸爸说着擦干了我的眼泪。可知，第二段可能描写作者在拿苹果酱时发生了意外后，爸爸妈妈给作者的安慰。
2.续写线索：急匆匆拿果酱——摔了一跤——爸爸安慰——妈妈接着做水果派
3.词汇激活：
行为类：
①形容加快步伐/步伐很快：take the steps two at a time/hurry up the steps
②突然…起来：burst into tears/ burst into laughter
情感类
平静下来：settle down/calm down
【点睛】
[高分句型1] How I wished I hadn’t hurried.（用虚拟语气表达后悔，惋惜的情绪）
[高分句型2] Having swiftly dealt with the mess, Dad lifted me onto his shoulder and went back to Mom.（分词短语作状语，可模仿性高）
[高分句型3] I followed Dad out and helped him fix that old creaking gate until Ma called us in for Thanksgiving dinner.（until引导的时间状语从句）
4．Possible Version:
When I arrived home from work that evening, Cassie recounted the story to me. She stared right into my eyes and said：" Cole's come to terms with the fact that you won't be around. And if he can only have you as a ghost, that's what he'll take. "The words were a simple truth. Smoking could only lead to one conclusion, and when they placed me under that tombstone, life would have to go on without me. If I couldn't even fool my own five-year-old kid, why was I continuing to try to fool myself?
Later that evening, I found Cole and said: “Cole, I’m going to quit smoking, but I you’re your help.” The seconds ticked by as he hatched his plan. Finally, he spoke. "Okay. Here’s what we'll do: every morning and every night, I'll tell you not to smoke.”Every time I had an urge to smoke, I fought it off with thoughts of tombstones and Obi-Wan Kenobi and a little boy trying desperately to help his old man out of a jam. So here I am, checking off the days that I've been cigarette-free. I know I have promise to keep and people to love.
【分析】
本文是记叙文，讲述了我多次戒烟失败，但儿子的话深深地刺激了我，让我重新下定决心戒烟，并在儿子帮助下取得成效的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天晚上我下班回到家，凯西把事情的经过讲给我听。”可知，第一段可描写听了凯西转达科尔的话后，我的反思。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚上晚些时候，我找到科尔说：‘科尔，我要戒烟，但我需要你的帮助。’”可知，第二段可描写科尔帮助我戒烟的过程和效果。
2.续写线索：科尔的话——深受感触——决定戒烟——向科尔寻求帮助——初见成效
3.词汇激
行为类
①.讲述：recount the story /tell the story /relate the story
②.继续：continue /go on
③.策划：hatch /plan
情绪类
①.冲动，欲望：an urge to smoke /a desire to smoke
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. And if he can only have you as a ghost, that's what he'll take.（if引导的条件状语从句和what引导的表语从句）
[高分句型2]. Every time I had an urge to smoke, I fought it off with thoughts of tombstones and Obi-Wan Kenobi and a little boy trying desperately to help his old man out of a jam.（every time引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3]. I know I have promise to keep and people to love.（省略连词that的宾语从句）
5．Two days before my birthday last year, Dad came home early. As usual, I helped him carry his bags into his study. When I turned to leave, he said: “Hey, would you like to help me clean my comb? It's been a while since I last cleaned.” It hit me then why, as a child, helping my dad clean his comb was such a joy. That routine meant that my dad was home early to spend the evening with Mum and I. It meant he would watch TV with us or play a few video games with me. It meant a happy and loving family.
When I passed the clean comb back to Dad, I noticed the wrinkles next to his eyes. They are more noticeable when he smiles, but his smile is still as heartwarming as before. The smile of a father who just wants a good life for his family. Dad carefully places his comb on top of his wallet. After so many years, he still organizes his personal items in the same care fill way. I guess some things never change. And for that. I'm glad.
【分析】
本文以时间为线索，讲述了作者小时候很喜欢等父亲下班，帮父亲清理他的梳子。但是后来父亲自己创业，初期艰难，便再也没有经常很早回家，和作者之间的亲子互动也少了很多。作者对此心怀怨念。在作者28岁时，父亲和作者之间解开了心结。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“去年我生日的前两天，爸爸提早回家了。”可知，第一段可描写作者父亲很早回到家，久违地让作者为他清理梳子，作者有很大的触动。
②由第二段首句内容“当我把干净的梳子递给爸爸时，我注意到他眼睛旁边的皱纹。”可知，第二段可描写作者看到父亲的皱纹，理解了他的辛苦和对家的责任，并且发现一切都没有变。
2.续写线索：要求清理梳子——引起触动——理解父亲——归置东西——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类①转身离开：turn to leave/turn away
②归还：pass back/return
情绪类
①暖心：heartwarming/warm
【点睛】
[高分句型1]When I turned to leave, he said: “Hey, would you like to help me clean my comb? It's been a while since I last cleaned.” （when引导时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]The smile of a father who just wants a good life for his family. Dad carefully places his comb on top of his wallet.（who引导的定语从句）
6．Friend's responses flooded in, asking for ways they could help. Jenna and James, a couple living nearby, offered to walk my dog and prepared dinner for my family every evening. Before I could blurt out a trembling thank you, they had already loaded the kitchen cupboard and fridge with pizzas, turkey, milk and fresh vegetables. Michael, a father from my son's class, proposed to pick up our two kids at 7:15. Most amazingly, Christy, an overloaded mother of three, asked my son and daughter to sleep over her house at weekends, joking the joining of Tom and Lisa would turn her house into a bigger amusement park.
Both my children and husband learned to be autonomous and considerate. Tom and Lisa, who usually slept in and were always dragged out of bed by my roaring or nagging, offered to prepare breakfast for the whole family. Leo, my husband, normally allergic to housework of all kinds, took up the chores in and outside our villa. Overwhelmed by my friends and families' generosity and kindness, I felt my mental pressure was taken off and tears of gratitude blurred my vision. I knew, deep in heart, that a quick recovery was right on the horizon.
【分析】
本文讲述了作者在一次严重的腿伤之后要长时间治疗和恢复，无法照顾家庭。作者认为自己的丈夫并不能承担照顾家庭的重任。于是作者在脸书上发表了自己的困境，很多朋友伸出援手，作者的丈夫和孩子们也主动分担。作者感到生活充满了希望，对恢复身体充满了信心。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“朋友们的回复如潮水般涌来，询问他们能提供帮助的方法。”可知，第一段可描写作者收到的朋友对于提供帮助的各种提议。
②由第二段首句内容“我的孩子和丈夫都学会了自主和体贴。”可知，第二段可描写作者的丈夫和孩子是如何自主承担家务和体贴作者的，作者是什么样的感受。
2.续写线索：朋友回复——丈夫和孩子的表现——感谢和感动——充满希望和信心
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.遛狗：walk my dog
②.准备晚餐：prepare dinner
③.装冰箱和碗柜：load the kitchen cupboard and fridge with
④.接孩子：pick up our two kids
⑤.让孩子去家里睡觉：asked my son and daughter to sleep over her house
⑥.准备早餐：prepare breakfast
⑦.承担家务：take up the chores in and outside our villa
情绪类
①.感谢和感谢：blurt out a trembling thank you/ overwhelmed by my friends and families' generosity and kindness/ tears of gratitude blurred my vision
②.积极：my mental pressure was taken off/ a quick recovery was right on the horizon
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Tom and Lisa, who usually slept in and were always dragged out of bed by my roaring or nagging, offered to prepare breakfast for the whole family. （由who引导的非限定性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. I knew, deep in heart, that a quick recovery was right on the horizon.（由that引导宾语从句作knew的宾语）
7．Unfortunately, she soon came again, with her shoes in hands and preparing for an outing. “Don’t even ask, Meghan. Not today.”I knew her plan too well: First the shoes. Then the stroller. And pretty soon we were in the park. The way she always did. Having sensed my impatience with her, Meghan put down the shoes, tugged at my sleeve with her free hands and pleaded using her hard to understand baby talk. “No, Meghan,” I said again. “Not now. Go away and leave me alone.”Finally, she left. She made no further attempt to bother me. Then I tried to concentrate on the test paper.
Out of the corner of my eye I could see the little girl sobbing because I didn’t have time for her. She stood with her back against the sofa, watching me type and slowly brushing Dumpty’s arm for comfort. Obviously Dumpty was doing my job to keep her company. I suddenly felt guilty. “Meghan, I feel like taking a walk down to the park. I was wondering if you would like to join me.” Hearing this, she laughed excitedly and began the search for her shoes. I knew I should put aside my work and go right at the moment while my girl thought that a walk with her father was a gift beyond measure.
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。通过阅读所给的文章可知，作者的妻子要去某个地方参加宴会，留下作者和22个月大的女儿梅根在家，作者在集中精力设计自己的英语试卷，结果思绪被岔开了，因为女儿看到了两只鸟的到来，非常兴奋，坚持要作者带她去窗子旁边。那两只鸟在在公寓窗外的草坪上叽叽喳喳地跳来跳去。梅根完全被吸引住了，作者却仍然在想着工作。后来，梅根光着脚冲出房间，作者发现她和娃娃在聊天，就没有管她了。
【详解】
续写部分分为两段，第一段的开头是：不幸的是，她很快又回来了，手里拿着鞋子，准备外出。接下来可以写“别问了，梅根。不是今天”。我太了解她的计划了:首先是鞋子。然后推车。很快我们就到了公园。就像她一直做的那样。感觉到我对她的不耐烦后，梅根放下鞋子，用空闲的手拽着我的袖子，用难懂的婴儿语恳求我。“不，梅根。”我又说了一遍。“不是现在。走开，让我一个人呆着。”最后,她离开了。她不再想打扰我了。然后我试着把注意力集中在考卷上。第二段的开头是：从眼角的余光我可以看到那个小女孩在哭泣，因为我没有时间陪她。接下来可以写她背靠着沙发站着，看着我打字，慢慢地抚摸着Dumpty的胳膊，让我感到舒服。显然，Dumpty是在做我的工作来陪伴她。我突然感到内疚。“梅根，我想去公园散步。我想知道你是否愿意和我一起去”。听到这里，她兴奋地笑了起来，开始寻找她的鞋子。我知道我应该放下手头的工作，马上就走，因为我的女儿认为和父亲散步是一份无以伦比的礼物。
【点睛】
续写内容详略得当，使用了固定短语和高分句型。如：put down；go away；leave sb. alone； make no attempt to；concentrate on；would like to do；put aside；search for等固定短语。①Having sensed my impatience with her, Meghan put down the shoes, tugged at my sleeve with her free hands and pleaded using her hard to understand baby talk.中having sensed为现在分词的完成式作状语；I knew I should put aside my work and go right at the moment while my girl thought that a walk with her father was a gift beyond measure.中I should put aside my work and go right at the moment为省略了that的宾语从句，that a walk with her father was a gift beyond measure.为that引导的宾语从句。
8．Twenty minutes later, a paper plate filled with chicken and cheese appeared on the desk next to my computer. I smiled shyly at the kids. “Sorry I shouted at you guys. But I am so busy.” Of course, they forgave me kindly. I told them what I saw when I dropped in at my sister’s house and suggested that we do as Ben. They listened to me carefully and thoughtfully. After they knew what I thought, they gladly agreed to my suggestion and went out to discuss how they could assign different tasks.
Sharing the load has given me more time to read and rest. The kids also know what it means to take responsibility. Now in my family when the trash is full, Nathan will do it without being asked to. When I take food from stores, my daughter always try to help. My older son will help clean the house and make sure the house is tidy. I save myself from doing too much housework and the family can go out together on weekends. Taking care of my own needs makes me a better mom
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者发现姐姐家的孩子们用ATT法来解决家务活的安排。而在作者家里，闲着看电视的孩子们却无视她的忙碌还一个个来要求她给帮忙热烤鸡，作者因此生气地批评了孩子们。过后，孩子和作者之间达成了和解，同时作者也把姐姐家的家务安排法用在了自己家里，培养了孩子的责任感，也使自己有了自己的时间。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“二十分钟后，一个装满鸡肉和奶酪的纸盘出现在我电脑旁边的桌子上。”可知，第一段可描写作者与孩子们的交流以及孩子们的反应：作者为刚才对孩子们大喊大叫行为道歉；分享姐姐Mandy家孩子们的家务安排法，并在自己家也进行家务安排。
②由第二段首句内容“分担工作让我有更多的时间阅读和休息。”可知，第二段可描写作者和孩子们的变化：孩子们变得有责任感，家庭氛围更和谐，作者也能从容面对工作压力，生活事业都很成功。
2.续写线索：分享炸鸡——我道歉和孩子们接受道歉——我分享家务安排法和孩子们欣然接受——一家人都有了变化
3.词汇激活
行为类
①叫嚷：shout at/roar at/ yell at somebody
②拜访：drop in at someplace/drop in on somebody /pay a visit to/call at someplace
情绪类
亲切地：kindly/obligingly
高兴地：rejoicingly/ merrily / joyfully/gladly
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I told them what I saw when I dropped in at my sister’s house and suggested that we do as Ben.（由连接代词what引导的宾语从句作tell的宾语；由when引导的时间状语从句，由连词that引导的宾语从句作suggest的宾语）
[高分句型2] After they knew what I thought, they gladly agreed to my suggestion and went out to discuss how they could assign different tasks. （由after引导的时间状语从句；由连接代词what引导的宾语从句作know的宾语；由连接副词how引导的宾语从句作discuss的宾语
[高分句型3]Sharing the load has given me more time to read and rest. （动名词作主语）