河北省唐山市迁安市2021-2022年三年中考二模英语试题分类汇编：书面表达

河北省唐山市迁安市

2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2022年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

十五、材料作文

86．三年来，因为疫情，我们经历过特殊的学习生活，有的居家隔离不能按时上学，有的被封控在学校不能回家。请你选择其中一种情况谈谈你的经历、感受和收获。

提示要点: (1) What did you do when you stayed at home/school

(2) How did you feel at that time

(3) What did you learn from this special experience

参考词汇: positive（乐观的）, self-disciplined（自律的）

注    意: (1) 短文须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇供选用。

(2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

(3) 词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)

When I stay at _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

七、看图作文

56．请根据下面三幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文，记述你们学校上周六的志愿者活动。

注意：（1）短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息，可适当发挥，提示词语供参考；

（2）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名；

（3）词数80左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Last Saturday was the Volunteer Day of our school. The students _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2020年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

十五、材料作文

86．你是英语校报编辑李华。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题，请你根据以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由。

要求：1. 回信须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；

2. 回信中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名；

3. 词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：lonely, be friendly to, smile, keeping an English diary

Dear Ben,I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Good luck with everything!

Yours,

Li Hua

答案：

2022年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

86．例文1

When I stayed at home, I tried my best to manage my time wisely. I spent most of my time studying. To keep healthy, I spend some time to do some exercise every day. On weekends, I usually read some books to relax myself. Besides, I helped mum do some housework. I felt comfortable and relaxed.

I learned to be more self-discipline during these days. It was not easy, But I made it. I also learned that we should do something meaningful to encourage ourselves when facing difficulties.

例文2

When I stayed at school, I studied and rested with our classmates, our school offers us many kinds of healthy food every day. What a pity that we can not go home on weekend as usual, some of my classmates missed their parents and felt sad. But our teacher cared for us, they often communicated with us after class. On weekends, we had many colorful activities, I think I didn’t feel lonely.

From this special experience, I learned to be positive and active when facing difficulties. I also learned that we can overcome any difficulty if we get together.

【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于材料作文写作，写作时按说明文的格式来写。根据题目要求，在“居家学习”和“在校学习”两种情况中任选一种来写，要包括提示的三个要点内容。

2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态采用一般过去时。写作时承接短文开头，直接表明写的是“居家学习”还是“在校学习”，再按照提示的要点依次说明。叙述所做的事情这一部分应详写，感受可略写。第三部分写个人感悟时可结合“面对困难”和“克服困难”时应具备的精神品质这一方面展开说明。

2021年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

56．例文：

Last Saturday was the Volunteer Day of our school. The students took an active part in attending volunteer activities.

The students in Class One planted trees in the West Mountain in order to protect our environment. They tried their best to plant more trees. The students in Class Two picked up rubbish in our city park, so that many people could enjoy their stay there. The students in our class took care of old people in old people’s home. Some students danced for the old people, some students chatted with them, and other students cleaned the rooms for the old people.

It’s very meaningful to be a volunteer, and we will do more volunteer activities and help more people.

【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图写作，在写作时应承接短文开头；第一段叙述上周六我们学生参加了志愿者活动；第二段根据图片描述进行的志愿者活动；第三段描述自己的感受。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主，描述参加志愿者活动；用一般现在时描述感受；保证内容包含图片主要信息，适当发挥，条理清晰。

2020年河北省唐山市迁安市中考二模英语试卷

86．One possible version:

Dear Ben,

I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble getting used to life in middle school. In your letter you said that you always felt lonely because of having few friends. I think it is a good choice to join some clubs in your school. In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you. Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. Smile at others and you are sure to get a smile in return. On the other hand, you found it difficult to remember English words. Reading more English stories and news can help you learn English words in a practical way. In addition, if you can develop a habit of keeping an English diary every day, it will be easier for you to remember more words. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.

Good luck with everything!

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。校报收到初一新生Ben的来信，他提出了所面临的两个问题，你作为英语校报编辑李华，以下提示写一封回信，说明Ben的问题，提出你的建议并陈述理由，要求根据提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

例文点评：这是一篇不错的文章，时态综合运用一般现在时，文章用到了第一人称和第二人称。将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。

高分亮点：

短语：feet lonely ；because of ；have  few friends；make more friends；be friendly to…；read more English stories；develop a habit of keeping an English diary等。

句型：In this way, you can make more friends who share the same interest with you.；Besides, you’d better be friendly to others. ；it will be easier for you to remember more words.； I hope you will find these suggestions useful.

【点睛】首先认真审题，看清文章的要求和要点；其次，理顺自己的行文思路；再次紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡；最后要仔细检查是否有单词拼写错误和标点的误用等，还要注意是否出现语法错误，有无重复遗漏，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。