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高考英语应用文写作专项训练
展开应用文
1.请根据以下提供的材料写一篇演讲稿。
Your ship is wrecked, and you and two other people survive on a life raft, drifting in the middle of the ocean. No food, no water, no hope of rescue. If one of them is eaten, there is a chance that the other two will survive. Otherwise, all three will starve to death.
题目: My Moral Dilemma
主要内容:
1. Describe the dilemma
2. Your solution to the dilemma
3. The reasons for your solution
4. Conclusion
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2.假如你是李华,是你们学校学生会主席,近期你们学校迎来了一批美国孔子学院的学生,他们将在你们学校进行有关于孔子思想的交流,在交流大会上,你作为学生代表发表演讲,主题是介绍孔子与“仁”字,主要内容包括:
1. 表示欢迎,阐述演讲主题;
2. 简述“仁”字的历史、来源、特点、文化影响;
3. 希望和祝福。
注意:词数120左右。
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3.假如你是李华,在World Food Day(WFD)即将到来之际,你校英语报征集作文,希望大家分享庆祝的活动方式。请你据此写一篇文章投稿。
内容包括:1.喜欢的庆祝活动;
2.活动的意义。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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4.你校英语俱乐部征稿,主题:如何度过假期。请你写一篇题为How to Have an Efficient and Meaningful Vacation的文章投稿。内容包括:
1.你的做法;
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.标题已给出。
How to Have an Efficient and Meaningful Vacation
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5.假设你是李华,你们学校英语报近期举行题目为“What life will be like on Mars in the future?”的征文比赛,请你给报社投稿,主要内容如下:
① 肯定未来在火星上生活的可能性;
② 想象未来在火星上生活的样子;
③ 个人对在火星上生活的态度。
注意:字数80左右。
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6.假设你叫李华,针对因学业紧张而疏于运动的问题,你校将举办以“More sports,better health”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你写一份演讲稿。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
More Sports, Better Health
Hello, everyone! It’s my great honor to be here to talk with you on “More sports, better health”.
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7.假如你是李华,国际学校的老师Paul邀请你星期六参加该校举行的“中国文化日”活动,但是你因为某些原因不得不拒绝他的邀请,请给Paul写封邮件。
内容包括:
1. 表示歉意;
2. 说明原因;
3. 预祝活动成功。
注意:1.写作词数应为 80 左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Paul,
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Yours,
Li Hua
8.假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris对中国体育运动感兴趣。他来信让你介绍你最喜欢的运动,请你根据以下提示,给他写封电子邮件,内容如下:
1.何时开始喜欢此项运动和原因;
2.现在练习的情况;
3.给你带来的益处。
注意:1.词数不少于100; 2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9.假定你是李华,你的书法班的英国同学Coco因为在汉语书法大赛中表现欠佳而心情沮丧。请你给她写一封信表示安慰。要点如下:
1. 表示理解;
2. 帮其分析原因;
3. 提供辅导。
参考词汇:汉语书法Chinese calligraphy
Dear Coco,
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Yours
Li Hua
10.假定你是李华,准备参加你校英语社举办的英语演讲比赛,主题为“我最敬佩的人”,参赛者需提前写好演讲稿并提交。内容包括:
1.人物介绍;
2.敬佩的原因。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
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Thank you for your listening.
11.假定你是李华,你班最近组织了一场讨论,主题是“Make friends online”。请综合正反两方的观点,陈述自己的看法。
要点包括:
1.赞成的理由:可广交朋友、获取更多信息;
2.反对的理由:容易上当受骗;存在安全风险;
3.你的看法。
注意:
1. 词数100左右,可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
2. 标题已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Make friends online
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12.假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。你校为来自美国的交流生举办了一场介绍中国传统节日的欢迎宴会,请你代表学校向他们介绍一个你认为最重要的中国传统节日。
内容包括:
1. 节日的庆祝时间和方式;
2. 节日的象征意义。
注意:词数80左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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13.假设你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom近期读到苏东坡的《水调歌头》英文版,他不是很理解,特别是这首诗与中秋节联系的部分,请结合以上文本和你个人的理解,给Tom 回个邮件谈谈你的理解。注意:词数在80左右。
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14.假如你是李华,几天前你从国外某网站购买了一个扩音器,现在请你发一封电子邮件给该网站的管理员反映以下问题,并提出你所期待的解决办法。
1.音质不清;
2.操作不简便;
3经常出问题
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文流畅。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
15.假定你是李华,校学生会主席。现在全国中小学生近视问题日益严峻,这一现象已经引起了国家的高度重视。为此,请你在全校升旗仪式上做演讲,呼吁爱眼护眼。
内容包括:
1. 问题的严重性;
2. 改进和预防措施等。
要求:
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 文中不得透露考生的真实身份信息;
3. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
4. 文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:近视 nearsightedness
Dear teachers and fellow students,
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That’s all! Thanks for all your attention!
16.Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华,你校学生会正在征集志愿者活动方案,请在以下三项活动中选择一项:一、深入社区宣传环保知识;二、担任“奉贤博物馆”义务讲解员;三、去孤儿院为孩子们上兴趣课。请你给学生会写封邮件,内容须包括:
1. 你的选择及理由
2. 你准备如何做
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17.假定你是李华,最近刚转学到一所新学校。你发现与新同学交往有困难,为此你感到非常苦恼。请你给外教Chris写封信向他求助,内容包括:
1.表明写信目的;
2.请求给出建议;
3.期待收到回复。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:转学transfer
Dear Chris,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
18.假定你是李华,你的加拿大笔友August在今年该校举办的“汉语桥”大赛中失利。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.给予安慰和鼓励;
2.提出建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear August,
I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Bridge Competition in your school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
19.假定你是李华,一名高二在校生。你校将要举办新生英语夏令营活动,请你作为学生代表发言。内容包括:
1. 祝贺他们升入高中;
2. 分享你过去一年的高中生活经验;
3. 提出你的建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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20.你校正在举办题为“The Road to Success”的英文演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 成功之路上可能面对的困难;
2. 身体对于成功的重要性;
3. 学习对于成功的重要性。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The Road to Success
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参考答案:
1.
My Moral Dilemma
Hello, everyone,
Now I am faced with the dilemma that my ship has been wrecked, and I and two other men have survived on a life raft adrift in the middle of the ocean. No food, no water, no hope of rescue. If one of us gets eaten, there’s a chance the other two will survive. In the face of this dilemma, I decide not to eat anyone, because everyone’s life is precious and eating people is very cruel. I’ll convince the other two to work with me, to try and get help, in the hope that a passing ship will find us and save us, because I believe that unity is strength.
Thank you for your listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生根据提供的材料写一篇演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
机会:chance→opportunity
决定:decide→determine
宝贵的:precious→valuable
救:save→rescue
2.句式拓展
同义句转换:
原句:In the face of this dilemma, I decide not to eat anyone, because everyone’s life is precious and eating people is very cruel.
拓展句:In the face of this dilemma, I decide that I will not eat anyone, because everyone’s life is precious and eating people is very cruel.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Now I am faced with the dilemma that my ship has been wrecked, and I and two other men have survived on a life raft adrift in the middle of the ocean. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
[高分句型2] I’ll convince the other two to work with me, to try and get help, in the hope that a passing ship will find us and save us, because I believe that unity is strength. (运用了that引导的同位语从句,because引导的原因状语从句和that引导的宾语从句)
2.Dear students,
Hello, I’m Li Hua. First of all, on behalf of our school, I would like to extend a warm welcome to all the students of Confucius Institutes in the United States. At the same time, it is my great honor to stand here as a student representative and make a speech about Confucius’ thoughts. Confucius is an ancient Chinese sage and the most influential thinker in Chinese history.
I think Confucius’ most important explanation of benevolence is love. A “lover” is a universal love. Confucius emphasized that this kind of love “must begin with one’s parents.” Therefore, Confucius said that “filial piety” is “the root of benevolence.” Children should take their parents’ heart as their own heart, which is filial piety. So there is an inseparable relationship between benevolence and filial piety.
I hope everyone can become a person who knows filial piety, and I also hope you can have a good memory here.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为学生代表欢迎美国孔子学院学生的到来发表演讲。同时在该演讲中,介绍孔子与“仁”字。内容包括:表示欢迎,阐述演讲主题;简述“仁”字的历史、来源、特点、文化影响;希望和祝福。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:first of all→first and foremost
表达:extend →express
我认为:I think→as far as I am concerned
希望:hope→expect
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:First of all, on behalf of our school, I would like to extend a warm welcome to all the students of Confucius Institutes in the United States.
拓展句:First of all, I am so pleased to be on behalf of our school to stand here, and I would like to extend a warm welcome to all the students of Confucius Institutes in the United States.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Confucius emphasized that this kind of love “must begin with one’s parents.” (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Children should take their parents’ heart as their own heart, which is filial piety. S(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.Dear Editor,
With the World Food Day approaching, I’m writing to share my recommendations of its celebration.
As we all know, food is essential in our daily life. Still, there are tens of thousands of people suffering from hunger. To raise the awareness and knowledge of the problems and causes behind it, from my point of view, we can hold some kinds of activities to celebrate it. First, we can hold an English speech contest to have students share their opinions and thoughts on this problem. Besides, a food show can also be hosted to deepen our love for different kinds of food. What’s more, an agricultural science and technology exhibition can inform us of the latest knowledge about agriculture and inspire us to discover and create.
Yours,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,在World Food Day(WFD)即将到来之际,你校英语报征集作文,希望大家分享庆祝的活动方式。请你据此写一篇文章投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
临近:approach→around the corner
举行:hold→host
在我看来:from my point of view→in my opinion
此外:what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:To raise the awareness and knowledge of the problems and causes behind it, from my point of view, we can hold some kinds of activities to celebrate it.
拓展句:From my point of view, we can hold some kinds of activities to celebrate it so that we can raise the awareness and knowledge of the problems and causes behind it.
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the World Food Day approaching, I’m writing to share my recommendations of its celebration. (运用了with的复合结构)
[高分句型2] To raise the awareness and knowledge of the problems and causes behind it, from my point of view, we can hold some kinds of activities to celebrate it. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
4.How to Have an Efficient and Meaningful Vacation
With the winter vacation approaching, I plan to have an efficient and meaningful vacation. Here are some details as follows.
First and foremost, I will do sports such as playing table tennis, which is good for my health. In addition, it is essential for me to read four great books to improve myself. After that, I’ll enjoy an interesting sight for two weeks. Last but not least, I suggest you participate in some social practice, inducing being a volunteer to help old people in an old people’s home in my city, do some cooking, washing and so on.
I believe that I’ll have a fantastic time during the vacation.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以How to Have an Efficient and Meaningful Vacation为题写一篇文章,向校英语俱乐部投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
有意义的:meaningful→significant
此外:in addition→besides
参加:participate in→take part in
相信:believe→have faith in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:In addition, it is essential for me to read four great books to improve myself. After that, I’ll enjoy an interesting sight for two weeks.
拓展句:In addition, it is essential for me to read four great books to improve myself, after which I’ll enjoy an interesting sight for two weeks.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First and foremost, I will do sports such as playing table tennis, which is good for my health.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe that I’ll have a fantastic time during the vacation.(运用了that引导宾语从句)
5.What life will be like on Mars in the future?
In the future, Mars will be a good place for people to live in, because people will produce enough air and water on Mars.
What life will be like on Mars in the future? Just like they’re on the earth, people will be busy with working and studying on week-days. At weekends, they will relax by going to the park. During a long holiday, they’ll return to the earth by spaceship to visit their families and friends.
Life on Mars will be very interesting.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给报社投稿,参加你们学校英语报近期举行题目为“What life will be like on Mars in the future?”的征文比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
足够的:enough →adequate
休息:relax → have a break
返回:return → come back
拜访:visit →pay a visit to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:During a long holiday, they’ll return to the earth by spaceship to visit their families and friends.
拓展句:During a long holiday, they’ll return to the earth by spaceship in order that they can visit their families and friends.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In the future, Mars will be a good place for people to live in, because people will produce enough air and water on Mars.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】During a long holiday, they’ll return to the earth by spaceship to visit their families and friends.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
6.One possible version:
Hello, everyone! It’s my great honor to be here to talk with you on “More sports, better health”. As senior three students, we are heavily burdened with school work, and thus spare little time for regular physical exercise.
However, we all need a sound body. Not only does exercise build up our body, but also it provides us with time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. So I suggest we fit exercise into our busy schedule and make it part of our daily routine. Put down our books and stretch our arms now and then. Do some jogging and push-ups every day. If we are able to make exercising our life habit, we will surely benefit from it both physically and mentally.
That’s all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你叫李华,针对因学业紧张而疏于运动的问题,你校将举办以“More sports,better health”为主题的英语演讲比赛,请考生写一份演讲稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
因此:thus→therefore
加强:build up→ strengthen
建议:suggest→recommend
能够:be able to→ be capable of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Put down our books and stretch our arms now and then.
拓展句:Put down our books and stretch our arms now and then, which will be helpful to our bodies and minds.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only does exercise build up our body, but also it provides us with time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer.(运用了倒装句和现在分词作状语)
【高分句型2】If we are able to make exercising our life habit, we will surely benefit from it both physically and mentally.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
7.Dear Paul,
Thank you very much for inviting me to attend the “Chinese Culture Day” to be held at your school this Saturday. I have been looking forward to it. I believe it will give your students more ideas about Chinese culture and will be great fun. However, much to my regret, I shall not be able to make it now. My grandpa suddenly fell ill and is in hospital. I will visit him with my parents on Saturday.
I’m awfully sorry for the sudden change of plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity to be with your students. I wish the activity a great success and hope I will have another chance to join you in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,国际学校的教师Paul邀请考生星期六参加该校举行的“中国文化日”活动。但考生因为某些原因不得不谢绝他的邀请。请考生给Paul写信表明歉意,说明原因,并预祝活动取得成功。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
看望:visit→ pay a visit to
观点:view→ idea
机会: opportunity→ chance
非常:awfully→ terribly
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:My grandpa suddenly fell ill and is in hospital. I will visit him with my parents on Saturday.
拓展句:My grandpa suddenly fell ill and is in hospital so that I will visit him with my parents on Saturday.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I believe it will give your students more ideas about Chinese culture and will be great fun.(省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Thank you very much for inviting me to attend the “Chinese Culture Day” to be held at your school this Saturday.(动词不定式作后置定语)
8.Dear Chris,
I am more than delighted to learn that you are obsessed with Chinese sports. My favorite Chinese sport is tai chi.
My affection for tai chi dates back to my PE class back in primary school. I was impressed by its magical combination of softness and strength. I practiced hard to sharpen my skills, and the constant praise from my teacher pushed me forward to learn it in depth. I am now a member of my school’s tai chi club, where students of various levels who are passionate about tai chi gather around to practice tai chi together. Tai chi has brought me massive benefits. Not only has it bettered my health, but also built my confidence, thus improving my studies.
I hope my introductions can be of some help. What’s your favorite sport? I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Chris写封电子邮件,向他介绍自己最喜欢的中国体育运动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→pleased/delighted
得知:hear→learn
希望:expect→hope
帮助:assist→help
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:My affection for tai chi dates back to my PE class back in primary school.
拓展句:My affection for tai chi dates back to my PE class back in primary school, where there was a strong atmosphere of traditional Chinese culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am now a member of my school’s tai chi club, where students of various levels who are passionate about tai chi gather around to practice tai chi together. (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句及who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Not only has it bettered my health, but also built my confidence, thus improving my studies. (运用了not only…but also句型以及否定词位于句首引起的部分倒装句)
9.Dear Coco,
I am sorry to hear that you didn’t perform well in the contest of Chinese calligraphy and that you are feeling discouraged.
Anyhow, as a foreigner, you have tried your best. As the proverb goes, failure is the mother of success. Facing failure, you shouldn’t feel sad and lose heart. On the contrary, you should analyze the cause of your failure. As far as I am concerned, you are not well prepared for it and you need more time to practice more. Chinese calligraphy is a time-consuming art, so what you need to do is spend more time on it.
If you want to practice, I am willing to work as a tutor to help you improve it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给书法班的英国同学Coco写信,对其在汉语书法大赛中表现欠佳而心情沮丧表示理解,帮其分析原因并提供辅导。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛:contest→competition
沮丧的:discouraged→disappointed
原因:cause→reason
帮助:help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Facing failure, you shouldn’t feel sad and lose heart.
拓展句:When you are facing failure, you shouldn’t feel sad and lose heart.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Chinese calligraphy is a time-consuming art, so what you need to do is spend more time on it.(运用了what引导主语从句)
【高分句型2】If you want to practice, I am willing to work as a tutor to help you improve it.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
10.Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,
The person I respect most is my physics teacher. She is of medium height, with long and blonde hair. She is so patient with each student that we all like her.
It’s her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her. When I failed the exam last month and was in low spirits, she patted me gently on my shoulder and gave me great encouragement. She teaches us not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
Thank you for your listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“我最敬佩的人”为题,写一篇演讲稿来参加你校英语社举办的英语演讲比赛,内容包括:人物介绍;敬佩的原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
友好:friendliness→amity
责任感:sense of responsibility→sense of duty
情绪低落:be in low spirits→be down in spirits
获得:gain →acquire
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:She teaches not only how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
拓展句:She teaches us that we should not only learn how to gain knowledge but also how to be a good person.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The person I respect most is my physics teacher.(运用了省略关系代词who/that引导的限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It’s her friendliness and the sense of responsibility that make me admire her.(运用了强调句型)
11.A discussion about making friends online was held in our class last Sunday. The students have two different kinds of opinions about it.
Some students are in favor of it because they think that making friends online can, firstly, help to make friends widely to meet more people all over the world. Secondly, students can express their thoughts freely while talking online behind. And in addition, making friends online can help them to study English better and get their English improved.
On the contrary, others are against making friends online as they think that it is a waste of time to talk a lot with online students, which has a bad influence on their study. What’s worse, making friends online may make the students cheated and fooled, resulting in turning evil and being guilty in their future life because of the harmful behaviors caused by the evil friends.
In my opinion, making friends online is a doubled-edged sword and we students should deal with it properly. Having online friends could open our eyes to new worlds and discuss on topics freely, talking to people from all over the world, learning new things and exchange ideas. Of course, it’s not wise to spend too much time online and ignore everything else. Anyway, reality is the most important.
【导语】本文属于议论文写作。要求考生就“Make friends online”为主题,谈谈利弊以及自己的想法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
支持:be in favor of→ be for/be in support of
首先:firstly → first of all
此外:in addition→ what’s more/besides
反对:be against→ be opposed to/object to
2.句式拓展
句式转换
原句:Secondly, students can express their thoughts freely while talking online behind.
拓展句:Secondly, students can express their thoughts freely while they are talking online behind.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Some students are in favor of it because they think that making friends online can, firstly, help to make friends widely to meet more people all over the world.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】On the contrary, others are against making friends online as they think that it is a waste of time to talk a lot with online students, which has a bad influence on their study.(运用了as引导的原因状语从句、that引导的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句)
12.Good evening, my dear teachers. I’m Li Hua.
Knowing you’re keen on traditional Chinese culture, I’d like to introduce a traditional Chinese festival to you — the Dragon Boat Festival.
The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month, so it’s also called the Double Fifth Festival. On that day, we usually eat Zongzi — sticky rice dumplings wrapped in bamboo leaves. As the festival name shows, people hold dragon boat races to celebrate it, especially in the southern places in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet of ancient China. Therefore, it’s regarded as a day of mourning and cherishing the memory.
Thanks for your listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求考生在晚会上给外教介绍一个最重要的中国传统节日,包括节日庆祝时间、方式和象征意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
喜爱:be keen on → be fond of/like
经常:usually → often
庆祝:celebrate → observe
为纪念……:in memory of→ in honor of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:The Dragon Boat Festival falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month, so it's also called the Double Fifth Festival.
拓展句:The Dragon Boat Festival, which falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month, is also called the Double Fifth Festival.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Knowing you’re keen on traditional Chinese culture, I’d like to introduce a traditional Chinese festival to you — the Dragon Boat Festival. (运用了现在分词短语作原因状语)
[高分句型2] As the festival name shows, people hold dragon boat races to celebrate it, especially in the southern places in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet of ancient China. (运用了as引导定语从句)
13.Dear Tom,
I know that you have been reading Su Dongpo’s Shuidiao Getou recently. I am glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese culture. I have the following thoughts.
This poem is composed on the basis of the love that Su Shi and his brother Su Zhe have not seen for seven years. It begins to imagine and think around the Mid-Autumn moon, and brings the love of joys and sorrows in the world into the philosophical pursuit of life in the universe. It expresses the poet’s missing and good wishes for his relatives, as well as his lofty and detached mind and optimistic scenery when he is frustrated in his political career.
These are my thoughts and I hope they will be helpful to you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国朋友Tom回信,告知他对你苏东坡的《水调歌头》的理解。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→pleased
基础:be on the basis of →be based on
追逐:pursuit→chase
希望:hope→expect
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句: It begins to imagine and think around the Mid-Autumn moon, and brings the love of joys and sorrows in the world into the philosophical pursuit of life in the universe.
拓展句: It begins to imagine and think around the Mid-Autumn moon, which also brings the love of joys and sorrows in the world into the philosophical pursuit of life in the universe.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This poem is composed on the basis of the love that Su Shi and his brother Su Zhe have not seen for seven years. (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
【高分句型2】It expresses the poet’s missing and good wishes for his relatives, as well as his lofty and detached mind and optimistic scenery when he is frustrated in his political career.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
14.Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to tell you something about the megaphone. I bought it from your website several days ago. However, there seems to be something wrong with it. First, the voice isn’t so clear as you claimed. Second, it’s not easy to operate, which has caused me much trouble. What I expect is a human-friendly one. Third, it often breaks down, while a megaphone at such a price shouldn’t have had so many problems.
Due to its poor quality and much inconvenience it has caused, I wonder whether you can do something about it. I would appreciate it very much if I can get my money back. I’ll send it back to you as soon as you return the money to me. If it can’t be helped, I wish you could have it repaired or changed. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,几天前你从国外某网站购买了一个扩音器,现在请你发一封电子邮件给该网站的管理员反映以下问题,并提出你所期待的解决办法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
购买:buy→purchase
然而:however→nevertheless
由于:due to→owing to
感激:appreciate→gratitude
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:I am writing to tell you something about the megaphone. I bought it from your website several days ago.
拓展句:I am writing to tell you something about the megaphone which I bought from your website several days ago.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Second, it’s not easy to operate, which has caused me much trouble.(运用了不定式作主语,it作形式主语,which引导非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What I expect is a human-friendly one.(运用了what引导的主语从句)
15.Dear teachers and fellow students,
It’s my great honour to stand here and present a speech about the worrying situation of nearsightedness among Chinese students. Nowadays in China, huge numbers of students are near-sighted, college students included. Worse still, the tendency is still on the rise. So, it is high time we took immediate and proper measures right now. Here, I do appeal to you all to stick to the practice of eye exercises at least twice a day. Besides, don’t read in an environment where it is too dim or too bright. As you know, too much screen time contributes a lot to poor eyesight, so you’d better stay away from digital devices as well. Last of all, please remember to give your eyes a short rest between classes by looking far outside. Take good care of the window of your heart, and you’re bound to enjoy a bright future.
That’s all! Thanks for all your attention!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一篇演讲稿,呼吁学校所有同学意识到近视的危害,爱护眼睛,切实采取措施保护我们心理的窗户。
【详解】1.词汇积累
作演讲:present a speech→make a speech
导致,造成:contribute to→lead to
号召:appeal to→call on
必定:be bound to do→be sure to do
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Nowadays in China, huge numbers of students are near-sighted, college students included.
拓展句:Nowadays in China, huge numbers of students, which include college students, are near-sighted.
【点睛】[高分句型1] So, it is high time we took immediate and proper measures right now. (运用了虚拟语气的相关句型)
[高分句型2] Besides, don’t read in an environment where it is too dim or too bright. (运用了where引导的定语从句)
16.Dear Sir/Madam
Our school will hold a volunteer activity, which may be chosen from the following three programmes: publicizing knowledge of environmental protection to communities, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum and conducting interesting lessons to kids in the orphanage. In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students.
There are two reasons why I choose the second activity. To start with, it’s a valuable opportunity for students to have a better knowledge of the Fengxian Museum, during which they can broaden their horizons. Besides, it’s beneficial for students to improve their communication skills especially English speaking because there are many foreigners visiting it.
If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as one guide, I will cherish the golden opportunity and make full preparations, such as searching materials on the Internet and asking teachers for help.
Sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写封邮件在三个志愿者活动策划中选择某一项活动,并阐述选择的理由和要如何做。
【详解】1.词汇积累
项目:programme→project
除此之外:besides→moreover
珍惜:cherish→treasure
寻求某人的帮助:ask sb for help→seek sb’s help
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students.
拓展句:In my opinoin, being a volunteer guide for the Fengxian Museum is suitable for students, from which students can learn a lot.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To start with, it’s a valuable opportunity for students to have a better knowledge of the Fengxian Museum, during which they can broaden their horizons.(运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If I’m lucky enough to be chosen as one guide, I will cherish the golden opportunity and make full preparations, such as searching materials on the Internet and asking teachers for help. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句和主将从现)
17.Dear Chris,
How’s everything going? I recently transferred to a new school and found it difficult to get along well with my new classmates. So I am writing to ask for your help.
Since you are an expert on personal development and have rich experience in helping teenagers with their problems, I would like you to offer me some tips on how to improve my personal relationships. Besides, it would be better if you could also recommend me some good books that can help me improve my interpersonal communication skills.
Your early reply would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Chris写信,就自己在新学校与同学交往有困难这一问题向他求助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
困难的:difficult→tough
专家:expert→professor
此外:Besides→Additionally
回复:reply→response
2.句式拓展
句式变化
原句:I recently transferred to a new school and found it difficult to get along well with my new classmates.
拓展句:I recently transferred to a new school, finding it difficult to get along well with my new classmates.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Since you are an expert on personal development and have rich experience in helping teenagers with their problems, I would like you to offer me some tips on how to improve my personal relationships.(运用了since引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, it would be better if you could also recommend me some good books that can help me improve my interpersonal communication skills.(运用了that引导的限制性定语从句和固定句型it would be…if you could…)
18.Dear August,
I am sorry to hear that you failed to pass the Chinese Bridge Competition in your school.
I hope this failure won’t let you down.Your standard pronunciation and devoted love for Chinese always amaze me whenever I meet you. So,summon up your courage and keep on trying.
As we all know, delivering a speech in public is not an easy thing, especially when the speaker is the second language learner.From my viewpoint,firstly,you should pay attention to the use of Chinese words and expressions in different situations.Reading some Chinese poems is also a good choice.Lastly,learn from the mistakes and you will make great progress.I hope you can make it in the next competition.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给在校举办的“汉语桥”大赛中失利的加拿大笔友August写一封回信表示安慰。其内容包括给予他安慰和鼓励以及提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
使失望:let down→disappoint
标准的:standard→normal
观点:viewpoint→perspective
竞赛:competition→match
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:From my viewpoint, firstly, you should pay attention to the use of Chinese words and expressions in different situations.
拓展句:From my viewpoint, firstly,it is essential that you should pay attention to the use of Chinese words and expressions in different situations.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I hope this failure won’t let you down.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】As we all know, delivering a speech in public is not an easy thing, especially when the speaker is the second language learner.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
19.Dear schoolmates,
Good morning, everyone. I’m Li Hua, from Class 5, Grade 2. Congratulations to you on entering senior high school. Last year, I experienced the excitement of becoming a high school student like you. Now, I want to tell you the only way to earn respect from others is to work hard and achieve high grades. I suggest all of you make full use of the summer vacation to be well prepared for the high school life. First, take exercise for at least an hour daily, since good health is the basis of our study and work. What’s more, develop a good habit of study. Thank you for your listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇发言稿,为将要举办的新生英语夏令营活动作为学生代表发言,内容包括:1. 祝贺他们升入高中;2. 分享你过去一年的高中生活经验;3. 提出你的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
经历:experience→undergo
兴奋:excitement→thrill
建议:suggest→advise
另外:what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 5, Grade 2.
拓展句:I’m Li Hua, who is a student from Class 5, Grade 2.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I suggest all of you make full use of it to be well prepared for the high school life. (运用了that引导的宾语从句,省略了that)
[高分句型2] First, take exercise for at least an hour daily, since good health is the basis of our study and work. (运用了since引导的原因状语从句)
20.The Road to Success
Ladies and gentlemen! It’s my great honor to deliver my speech here. I believe success is never easy. On the way to success, we’ll come across lots of trouble and setbacks, even failure, such as failing in exams.
In order to succeed, we must build up bodies, because it is health that is the basis of success, which is of great importance on the way to success. What’s more, study makes people progress so it is also a great road to success.
To sum up, if we work hard, we’ll make it sooner or later.
Thank you!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。你校正在举办题为“The Road to Success”的英文演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿参赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
基础:basis→foundation
为了:in order to→so as to
此外:what’s more→besides
重要性:importance→significance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:To sum up, if we work hard, we’ll make it sooner or later.
拓展句:To sum up, we won’t make it unless we work hard.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To sum up, if we work hard, we’ll make it sooner or later. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] In order to succeed, we must build up bodies, because it is health that is the basis of success, which is of great importance on the way to success. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
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