高考英语写作感谢信专项训练

这是一份高考英语写作感谢信专项训练，共30页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学高三学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。

1. 表示祝贺；
2. 回顾本次活动；
3. 表达希望。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear fellw schlmates,
It’s my great hnr t make a cncluding statement here.
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That’s all. Thank yu!
2．假定你是李华，在你生日到来之际你收到了美国朋友Peter寄来的礼物——一本畅销的英文小说。请你给他回信，要点如下：
1.小说收到；
2.回赠一份小礼物；
3.邀请来华。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack在你因疫情居家学习期间经常在网上帮你辅导英语，鼓励你积极面对疫情、学习和生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 回顾帮助并感谢；
2. 邀请来中国游玩；
3. 表达期待。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：流行病 epidemic；疫情 epidemic situatin；新型冠状病毒肺炎COVID-19(Crna Virus Disease 2019)
Dear Jack,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假设你是李华，你的南非朋友Martin给你发来一封邮件, 告诉你他在外国人汉字书法大赛(Chinese Calligraphy Cntest Fr Freigners)中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他回一封邮件。内容包括：
1.对他表示祝贺；
2.肯定他的付出；
3.了解参赛经验。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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5．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你参加了学校举办的线上英文演讲比赛。在准备的过程中，你的英国朋友Jim给了你很多帮助。请你用英文给他写一封邮件表达感谢，内容包括：
1. 介绍比赛结果；
2. 回顾Jim对你的帮助。
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
6．假设你是李华，近期你收到“Z世代国际青年说(Vice Z)”节目组邀请为其“文化”板块录制一个演讲视频，请你给节目联络人Emma写一封信商讨相关事宜，内容包括：
1. 感谢邀请;
2. 告知演讲话题并说明原因;
3. 期待回信。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Emma,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，在交换生好友Alan的鼓励和帮助下，你在上周五的英语演讲比赛中取得了好成绩。请你就此写一封邮件给他，内容包括：
1.告知成绩；2.表示感谢；3.邀请一同庆祝。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.开头和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Alan,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
8．假如你是李华，在英国做交换生时曾患病住院，寄宿家庭房东Eric给予你悉心照料，并经常辅导你功课。你现已回国，请给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 回顾帮助；
3. 邀请来中国游玩。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，近期你校举办了“成人礼”仪式。在仪式上，你和同学们都收到了父母的祝贺信。信里有父母的道贺、鼓励及期望……请给父母写一封回信，表示你最真诚的感谢。内容包括：
1. 感谢父母的照顾和引导；
2. 不负期望，真诚祝愿。
注意：1. 词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：Cming-f-Age Ceremny 成人礼
Dear mm and dad,
Having heard frm yu at the Cming-f-Age Ceremny,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
10．假定你是校学生会主席李华，你校外教布朗先生在学校英语文化节中应邀给学生做了一场讲座。请你代表学生会给他写一封信，内容包括：
1．表达感谢；
2．告知讲座反响。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr Brwn,
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Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
11．假定你是李华，你的好友英国留学生Michael在China Daily举办的My China Stry征文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝愿；
2. 获奖的意义；
3. 未来的期望。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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12．假定你是学生会主席李华。你校上周邀请Smith教授为同学们做了场有关科学研究的讲座。请你代表全校同学用英语给Smith教授写一封邮件，
内容包括：1.表示感谢：
2.感谢缘由：
3.你的期待。
注意:1.词数100左右:
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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13．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Philip送给你一本英语读物，你读后收获颇多。请你给他写一封email，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；
2. 分享阅读收获。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Philip,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
14．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你因为是新冠病毒的密接人员而居家隔离了一周，隔离期间，社区的外国志愿者Jim给予了你很多帮助，你打算给Jim写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1. 感谢所帮你做的事情;
2. 对你的意义和你的感受。
注意：新冠病毒的密接人员: a clse cntact with COVID-19;
隔离：quarantine v./n.
1. 词数100左右;
2. 信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
15．假定你是李华，现任所在中学学生会主席。近期学校邀请英国剑桥大学Li教授来你校给学生作了有关AI(人工智能)的报告。请你代表你校学生会给Li教授写一封邮件，表示感谢。内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 浅谈收获；
3. 期待对方再次来校作报告。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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16．假定你是李华，得知英国籍外教Jhn因工作出色而受到学校表彰，为此请你给他写一封邮件表示祝贺，内容要点包括：
1.表示祝贺；
2.对其工作的欣赏；
3.感谢其付出。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jhn,
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Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
17．假定你是李华，不慎将Pride and Prejudice这本书落在了操场。你校外教Vincent捡到后交还于你。请给他写一封感谢信，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.描述经过；
3.表达感谢。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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18．假定你是李华，你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs. Wilsn写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助，内容包括：
1. 表达感谢；
2. 回顾老师对你的帮助；
3. 表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。
注意：1. 词数不少于100；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mrs. Wilsn,
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Yurs,
Li Hua
19．假如你是高考应届生李华，你的好友Mark被常春藤大学联盟(Ivy League University)录取，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示祝贺
2. 询问学习方法
3. 表达祝愿
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右:
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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20．假定你是李华，你校正在举办英语演讲比赛。请以“The persn I thank mst”为题写一篇发言稿，内容包括∶
1.感谢的人
2.感谢的原因。
注意1.写作词数应为80左右
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Gd mrning, everyne,
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参考答案：
1．One pssible versin:
Dear fellw schlmates,
It’s my great hnr t make a cncluding statement here. At this mment, I’d like t extend my sincere cngratulatins t all f the participants.
The cmpetitin wuld nt be a great success withut the jint effrts f everyne. My hearty thanks g firstly t ur teachers, whse guidance and encuragement have given us much insight int translatin f Chinese petry. Besides, all the participants’ devtin and wnderful perfrmance impressed us a lt. Mst imprtantly, the cmpetitin has further stimulated ur passin fr Chinese petry and bsted ur cultural cnfidence.
I sincerely hpe that we students will wrk t learn English well, carry frward and spread traditinal Chinese culture.
That’s all. Thank yu!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表校英语翻译爱好者协会在中华诗词英译大赛颁奖仪式上进行总结发言，回顾活动并表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
此刻：at this mment→ nw
诚挚地：sincerely→genuinely
比赛：cmpetitin→match
推进：bst→prmte
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, all the participants’ devtin and wnderful perfrmance impressed us a lt.
拓展句：Besides, what impressed us a lt is all the participants’ devtin and wnderful perfrmance.
【点睛】【高分句型1】My hearty thanks g firstly t ur teachers, whse guidance and encuragement have given us much insight int translatin f Chinese petry.（运用了whse引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】I sincerely hpe that we students will wrk t learn English well, carry frward and spread traditinal Chinese culture.（运用了that引导宾语从句）
2．Dear Peter,
I’m mre than glad t receive the best seller nvel that yu gave me as my birthday gift. It is what I have been expecting fr a lng time. Thank yu s much fr that.
I knw yu’re interested in Chinese traditinal festivals. S I have bught an album f paper cutting fr yu. Paper cutting is a unique kind f Chinese cultural relics and thrugh it yu can learn smething abut Chinese traditins. We ften use it as a decratin fr a happy event. I hpe it can bring happiness and luck t yur family.
Lking frward t yur cming t China and experiencing the rich culture in persn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是应用文。文章要求考生给朋友Peter写一封信，感谢他给自己送来了生日礼物并给以回礼。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：mre than→very
高兴的：glad→delighted
礼物：gift→present
对…感兴趣：be interested in→have an interest in
2.简单句变复合句
原句：S I have bught an album f paper cutting fr yu. Paper cutting is a unique kind f Chinese cultural relics and thrugh it yu can learn smething abut Chinese traditins.
拓展句：S I have bught an album f paper cutting fr yu, which is a unique kind f Chinese cultural relics and thrugh it yu can learn smething abut Chinese traditins.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m mre than glad t receive the best seller nvel that yu gave me as my birthday gift.（由that引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】It is what I have been expecting fr a lng time.（由what引导的表语从句）
3．范文一：
Dear Jack,
I’m writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur generus assistance during my stay at hme because f the epidemic situatin.
Withut yur timely help with my English nline, I culdn’t have gt alng with my English study. Besides, it was yur cnstant encuragement and psitive attitude twards life that enabled me t g thrugh the tugh time. Nw I sincerely invite yu t cme t China, whse breathtaking scenery and splendid culture will surely guarantee an enjyable jurney.
Thank yu again. Lking frward t yur arrival.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
范文二：
Dear Jack,
I’m writing t cnvey my heartfelt gratitude t yu fr yur generus assistance during my stay at hme because f the epidemic situatin.
Never will I frget yur practical and patient guidance n my English nline, which made it pssible fr me t make great prgress in English study. Additinally, if it hadn’t been fr yur devtin and cnstant encuragement, I wuldn’t have been s psitive t my study and life. In return fr yur kindness, I’d like t invite yu t travel in China next summer vacatin.
Thanks again fr all yur help. Lking frward t yur arrival.
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。假如考生是李华，你的英国笔友Jack在你因疫情居家学习期间经常在网上帮你辅导英语，鼓励你积极面对疫情、学习和生活。请你给他写一封电子邮件。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express→cnvey
真挚的：heartfelt→sincere
此外：besides→furthermre
帮助：help→aid
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr yur generus assistance during my stay at hme because f the epidemic situatin.
拓展句：I’m writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr what yu help during my stay at hme because f the epidemic situatin.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Withut yur timely help with my English nline, I culdn’t have gt alng with my English study.(运用了含蓄型虚拟语气)
[高分句型2]Nw I sincerely invite yu t cme t China, whse breathtaking scenery and splendid culture will surely guarantee an enjyable jurney.(运用了whse引导的非限制性定语从句)
4．Dear Martin,
Learning that yu’ve wn the first prize in Chinese Calligraphy Cntest Fr Freigners, I’m writing t ffer my cngratulatins t yu.
Success favrs the mind that is prepared. Nt nly have yu referred t calligraphy bks, but als yu have cnsulted sme masters. It is yur hard wrk and talent that make yu succeed in winning the champinship.
I’d like t knw sme experience abut taking part in the cntest. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给南非朋友Martin写信祝贺他在外国人汉字书法大赛中获得一等奖，同时肯定他的付出并了解参赛经验。
【详解】1.词汇积累
天赋：talent→ gift
知道：learn→ knw
获得一等奖：win the first prize→ win the champinship
参加：take part in→ jin in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Learning that yu’ve wn the first prize in Chinese Calligraphy Cntest Fr Freigners, I’m writing t ffer my cngratulatins t yu.
拓展句：Because I learn yu’ve wn the first prize in Chinese Calligraphy Cntest Fr Freigners, I’m writing t ffer my cngratulatins t yu.
【高分句型1】Success favrs the mind that is prepared.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Nt nly have yu referred t calligraphy bks, but als yu have cnsulted sme masters.（运用了nt nly…but als…引导的部分倒装句）
5．Dear Jim,
I can’t wait t tell yu the gd news that I wn the first prize in the English Speech Cntest held in ur schl! I am writing t shw my gratitude t yu.
I wuld always remember that befre the cntest, yu gave me many valuable suggestins abut hw t perfrm better during the cntest, such as reading English text ludly every mrning. Besides, yur encuragement als made me full f cnfidence. Thanks t yur guidance, I really kept calm and shwed the best f myself t thers.
Withut yur patient help, I culdn’t make such an achievement. Thank yu again fr yur kindness! Best wishes t yu!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达是一篇感谢信。要求考生以学生李华的身份对在准备英语演讲比赛过程中，给予了很多帮助的英国朋友Jim写一封邮件表达感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：cntest→cmpetitin
感谢：gratitude→thanks
有用的：valuable→useful
建议：suggestin→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, yur encuragement als made me full f cnfidence.
拓展句：Besides, yu encuraged me s much that I were full f cnfidence.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I can’t wait t tell yu the gd news that I wn the first prize in the English Speech Cntest held in ur schl! (运用了that引导的同位语从句)
[高分句型2] I wuld always remember that befre the cntest, yu gave me many valuable suggestins abut hw t perfrm better during the cntest, such as reading English text ludly every mrning. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
6．Dear Emma,
Thank yu fr inviting me t d a vide speech fr the Culture Clumn f the Z Era Internatinal Yuth Talk Prgram.
Referring t the tpic, I’d like t talk abut the generatin gap. It is a cmmn phenmenn exiting everywhere between parents and children, which results in misunderstandings between lved nes. I will discuss the harm f it and recmmend sme ways t slve it.
If yu have any requirements, please cntact me. Lking frward t yur reply.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给“Z世代国际青年说(Vice Z)”节目联络人Emma写一封信商讨为其“文化”板块录制一个演讲视频，表示感谢并告知演讲话题和说明原因。
【详解】1.词汇积累
谈及：refer t→ in terms f
引起：result in→ cause
谈论：talk abut→ discuss
介绍：recmmend→ intrduce
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I will talk abut the harm f it and recmmend sme ways t slve it.
拓展句：I will talk abut the harm f it and recmmend sme ways that peple can use t slve it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It is a cmmn phenmenn exiting everywhere between parents and children, which results in misunderstandings between lved nes.（运用了现在分词短语作定语以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If yu have any requirements, please cntact me.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
7．One pssible versin:
Dear Alan,
I have a burning desire t tell yu that I wn first prize in the English Speech Cntest held in ur schl last Friday.
There’s n dubt that my achievement is largely credited t yu because yu gave me much encuragement and help. Withut yu, I wuldn’t have imprved my prnunciatin and eased my nervusness. Fr that, I’m deeply grateful.
I’m sure that yu’d like t share my happiness, s I’d like t invite yu t my huse t enjy a dinner n Tuesday evening. I will ck sme traditinal Chinese fd t treat yu.
I’m lking frward t yur early reply.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生好友Alan写一封邮件，表示对他给予你的帮助的感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
告诉：tell →infrm
因为：because → as
缓和：ease →alleviate
期望：lk frward t→ expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Withut yu, I wuldn’t have imprved my prnunciatin and eased my nervusness.
拓展句：If yu hadn’t helped me, I wuldn’t have imprved my prnunciatin and eased my nervusness.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I have a burning desire t tell yu that I wn first prize in the English Speech Cntest held in ur schl last Friday.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】There’s n dubt that my achievement is largely credited t yu because yu gave me much encuragement and help.（运用了that引导的同位语从句和because引导的原因状语从句）
8．Dear Eric,
I’ve returned t China, and yur kindness has always warmed me. S I’m writing t express my gratitude t yu fr yur great help with my exchange prgram.
What impressed me mst was what yu did fr me when I was in hspital. In my life, yu attended t me like my parents, which sn eased my anxiety and made me feel at hme. In my study, yu patiently tutred me. Withut yu, I culdn’t have made great prgress in my curses.
Many thanks again. I d hpe yu will cme t China t have a nice trip where yu can witness the perfect cmbinatin f culture and nature in persn.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给寄宿家庭房东Eric写一封电子邮件，表示对他给予你的照顾的感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：gratitude→thanks
照顾：attend t→ lk after
减轻：ease→lighten
旅行：trip→ jurney
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Withut yu, I culdn’t have made great prgress in my curses.
拓展句：If yu had nt helped me, I culdn’t have made great prgress in my curses.
【点睛】【高分句型1】What impressed me mst was what yu did fr me when I was in hspital.（运用了what引导的主语从句，what引导的表语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】In my life, yu attended t me like my parents, which sn eased my anxiety and made me feel at hme.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
9．Dear mm and dad,
Having heard frm yu at the Cming - f - Age Ceremny, I am writing t cnvey my sincere gratitude t yu fr all yu have dne fr me.
The last 17 years has witnessed my amazing grwing up, which is due t yur greatest care f my daily life. Besides, yu always have spared n time t inspire me t adpt a psitive attitude twards life, enabling me t embrace life actively. Withut yur selfless devtin t me, I culdn’t have such a bright life nw.
My dear mm and dad, my true appreciatin is beynd wrds nw. What I can d nw is just t wrk harder t reward yur lve, and genuinely wish yu all the best.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给父母回一封信，向父母表示最真诚的感谢。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
表达：cnvey → express
目睹，见证：witness → see
此外：besides → furthermre
贡献：devtin → cntributin
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Besides, yu always have spared n time t inspire me t adpt a psitive attitude twards life, enabling me t embrace life actively.
转换句：Besides, yu always have spared n time t inspire me t adpt a psitive attitude twards life, which enables me t embrace life actively.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
The last 17 years has witnessed my amazing grwing up, which is due t yur greatest care f my daily life. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
Besides, yu always have spared n time t inspire me t adpt a psitive attitude twards life, enabling me t embrace life actively. （运用了现在分词作状语）
10．Dear Mr. Brwn,
First f all, n behalf f the Student Unin, I am hnred t express ur mst sincere thanks t yu.
We benefited a lt frm the lecture that yu gave us during this year’s English Cultural Festival. The lecture left a deep impressin n every student present. They shwed great interest in the cntent f the lecture and enjyed it very much. In the past few days, we have received a fld f emails frm the audience telling us hw yur lecture has helped them crrect the mistaken belief that English is nly a tl.
It wuld be great if there were mre lectures like this in the future! Finally, thank yu again fr yur wnderful lecture!
Sincerely yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校外教布朗先生在学校英语文化节中应邀给学生做了一场讲座。请你代表学生会给他写一封信表达感谢，并告知讲座反响。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：n behalf f→ represent
荣幸的：hnred →privileged
最后：Finally→ At last
喜欢：enjy→ be fnd f
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：They shwed great interest in the cntent f the lecture and enjyed it very much.
拓展句：They shwed great interest in the cntent f the lecture s that they enjyed it very much.
【点睛】【高分句型1】We benefited a lt frm the lecture that yu gave us during this year’s English Cultural Festival.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】It wuld be great if there were mre lectures like this in the future!（运用了if引导的条件状语从句。）
11．Dear Michael,
I’m s happy t hear that yu have wn the first prize in the essay cntest My China Stry held by China Daily.
What a pleasant surprise yu have given me! Yur winning the prize shws nt nly yur brilliant talent fr writing but als yur deep understanding f China, which means a great deal t yu. Hpefully, yu’ll wrk in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassadr, bridging the gap between China and the rest f the wrld.
I hpe yu will cntinue yur explratin f China and make even greater achievements in the years t cme.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的好友英国留学生Michael在China Daily举办的My China Stry征文比赛中获得一等奖。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 表示祝愿；2. 获奖的意义；3. 未来的期望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→glad
举办：hld→rganise
很好的：brilliant→great
天赋：talent =gift
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hpefully, yu’ll wrk in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassadr, bridging the gap between China and the rest f the wrld.
拓展句：Hpefully, yu’ll wrk in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassadr, which will bridge the gap between China and the rest f the wrld.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Yur winning the prize shws nt nly yur brilliant talent fr writing but als yur deep understanding f China, which means a great deal t yu. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Hpefully, yu’ll wrk in China in the future and serve as a cultural ambassadr, bridging the gap between China and the rest f the wrld. (运用了现在分词作状语)
12．Dear Prfessr Smith,
Thank yu fr sharing yur vast knwledge abut scientific research at the lecture fr us students last week.
Yur presentatin abut tpic selectin will be extremely helpful t students wh are cmpletely new t research. Als, we appreciate yur thughtfulness in preparing and giving the presentatin as well as helpful advice. What’s mre, it’s very kind f yu t be patient with students befre and after yur talk.
Thank yu again fr helping t create the next generatin f research schlars. We hpe t learn mre frm yu.
Yurs sincerely,
LiHua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对史密斯教授上周做的一场有关科学研究的讲座表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
考虑：thughtfulness →cnsideratin
此外：what’s mre →besides
完全地：cmpletely →ttally
感激：appreciate →be grateful fr
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank yu fr sharing yur vast knwledge abut scientific research at the lecture fr us students last week.
拓展句：Thank yu fr sharing yur vast knwledge abut scientific research at the lecture fr us students last week, which is very useful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Yur presentatin abut tpic selectin will be extremely helpful t students wh are cmpletely new t research. (运用了wh引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】What’s mre, it’s very kind f yu t be patient with students befre and after yur talk.(运用了it作形式主语)
13．Dear Philip,
I’m writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr the English riginal nvel yu mailed t me. I benefited a lt frm The Little Prince, which is a fairy tale fr bth children and adults. I was deeply mved by the prince’s attitude twards the wrld, which brught my inner sincerity and pure inncence back. Mrever, this bk made me well acquainted with a splendid culture f English, which laid a slid fundatin fr my English learning.
Thank yu again fr yur generus present.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Philip送给你一本英语读物，你读后收获颇多。请你给他写一封email，内容包括：1. 表示感谢；2. 分享阅读收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感谢：gratitude→appreciatin
感动：mve→tuch
有益的：splendid→excellent
熟悉的：acquainted = cnversant
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Thank yu again fr yur generus present.
拓展句：Thank yu again fr yur generus present, frm which I benefited a lt.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I benefited a lt frm The Little Prince, which is a fairy tale fr bth children and adults. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] I’m writing t express my heartfelt gratitude fr the English riginal nvel yu mailed t me. (运用了省略关系代词that或者which的限定性定语从句)
14．Dear Jim,
I’m writing this letter t shw my appreciatin t yu fr yur help during my quarantine.
As a clse cntact with COVID-19 ,I had t stay at hme.As a student in Hngxing Middle schl,I need study t keep up with ther students,and yu ffered t help me with my study.Nt nly did yu help me with my study,but yu tk gd care f me.Withut yur help,I wuld fall behind thers.
What yu did means a lt fr me.I determine t wrk hard and t be a persn like yu wh help thers as a vlunteer.Thanks fr yur devtin again!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，因新冠密接而居家隔离，社区志愿者Jim给予许多帮助，要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢他所做的事及这些事的意义及自身感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累建议:
感谢：appreciatin→gratitude
照顾：take care f→lk after
帮助：help →favr
表达：shw→express
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句：What yu did means a lt fr me.I determined t wrk hard and t be a persn like yu wh helps thers as a vlunteer.
拓展句：What yu did means a lt fr me,s I determine t wrk hard and t be a persn like yu wh helps thers as a vlunteer.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nt nly did yu help me with my study,but yu tk gd care f me.(运用了nt nly的倒装句)
【高分句型2】What yu did means a lt fr me.I determine t wrk hard and t be a persn like yu wh helps thers as a vlunteer. (运用了what引导的主语从句以及wh引导的定语从句)
15．Dear Li,
On behalf f the Students’ Unin f ur schl, I’m writing t express ur heartfelt thanks fr yur wnderful speech n AI.
We Chinese have a saying that listening t yur wrds fr an hur is mre beneficial than reading fr ten years. We have learned a lt frm yur speech indeed. Having heard yur speech, we nt nly gain a better understanding f what AI is, but we’re als aware f what effects it might have n us human beings. We d hpe yu’ll cme t ur schl t deliver mre brilliant speeches in the near future.
Thanks again!
Yurs sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给Li教授写一封邮件，感谢他来你校给学生作有关AI的报告，并谈谈收获和期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：n behalf f→represent
表达：express→cnvey
有帮助的：beneficial→helpful
衷心的：heartfelt→sincere
2.句型拓展
陈述句变倒装句
原句：Having heard yur speech, we nt nly gain a better understanding f what AI is, but we’re als aware f what effects it might have n us human beings.
拓展句：Having heard yur speech, nt nly d we gain a better understanding f what AI is, but we’re als aware f what effects it might have n us human beings.
【点睛】[高分句型1]We Chinese have a saying that listening t yur wrds fr an hur is mre beneficial than reading fr ten years.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
[高分句型2]We d hpe yu’ll cme t ur schl t deliver mre brilliant speeches in the near future.（运用了that（已省）引导的宾语从句）
16．Dear Jhn，
I am writing t ffer my sincere cngratulatins t yu n yur winning the award. As yur student, I just want yu t knw hw glad I am at yur achievement.
Fr these years, yu've shwn great passin in teaching and kept n imprving ur English ability. It is yur humrus and instructive teaching that makes English learning an entertaining and eye-pening experience fr us. Withut yur selfless devtin, we culdn't have made such great prgress. Thank yu fr yur cmpany.
I really hpe that yu can enjy yur stay here and make mre achievements.
Yurs sincerely，
Li Hua
【导语】本文为应用文写作，要求考生给英国籍外教Jhn写一封邮件表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
继续：keep n→ g n
赢得：winning→getting
喜欢：enjy→ be fnd f
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Withut yur selfless devtin, we culdn't have made such great prgress.
拓展句：If there was n yur selfless devtin, we culdn't have made such great prgress.
【点睛】【高分句型1】s yur student, I just want yu t knw hw glad I am at yur achievement.（运用了hw引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】It is yur humrus and instructive teaching that makes English learning an entertaining and eye-pening experience fr us.（运用了强调句）
17．Dear Vincent,
I’m Li Hua, a student frm Class One, Senir Tw. I’m writing t express my gratitude fr yur returning my bk.
Last Sunday, I left my bk Pride and Prejudice n the playgrund wing t my carelessness. I was wrried because the bk was a gift frm my best friend, which were very imprtant t me. Just as I was at a lss, I was infrmed that my bk was at the schl’s Lst and Fund Office and it was yu wh had fund my bk. My excitement was truly beynd descriptin at that mment!
I am deeply tuched by yur thughtful kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks again.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给捡到你丢失书的外教Vincent写一封感谢信，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.描述经过；3.表达感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciatin
由于：wing t→n accunt f
感动：tuch→mve
真诚的：sincere→genuine
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I am deeply tuched by yur thughtful kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks again.
拓展句：I am s deeply tuched by yur thughtful kindness that yu must accept my sincere thanks again.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I was wrried because the bk was a gift frm my best friend, which were very imprtant t me.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Just as I was at a lss, I was infrmed that my bk was at the schl’s Lst and Fund Office and it was yu wh had fund my bk.(运用了that引导宾语从句以及强调句型)
18．Dear Mrs. Wilsn,
I’m glad t write t share with yu my happiness f being admitted t cllege, which I have been dreaming f. I’m writing t express my heartfelt gratitude t yu fr yur help.
It was yu wh ffer me a series f practical appraches t learning English. But fr yur guidance, I culdn’t have made such unbelievable prgress in English. In additin, it’s indeed a pleasant surprise fr me t win the first prize in a recent English speech cntest, which mtivated me t devte myself t learning English and built up my cnfidence. What’s mre, nt nly did yu cheer me up in difficulties, but yu als inspired my enthusiasm fr learning English. Wrds fail t express my endless appreciatin t yu, as yu have dne s much fr me.
Thanks again and wish yu a pleasant and safe jurney hme.
Yurs,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给外教Mrs. Wilsn写封感谢信，感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ delighted
感谢：gratitude→ appreciatin
要不是：but fr→ withut
比赛：cntest→ cmpetitin
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：But fr yur guidance, I culdn’t have made such unbelievable prgress in English.
拓展句：If I hadn’t had yur guidance, I culdn’t have made such unbelievable prgress in English.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In additin, it’s indeed a pleasant surprise fr me t win the first prize in a recent English speech cntest, which mtivated me t devte myself t learning English and built up my cnfidence.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s mre, nt nly did yu cheer me up in difficulties, but yu als inspired my enthusiasm fr learning English.（运用了nt nly置于句首引起的倒装句）
19．Dear Mark,
I’m mre than glad t hear that yu’ve been admitted int Ivy League University. I’d like t express my crdial cngratulatins n yur prmising future! It was yur intelligence and persistence that enabled yu t make it!
Hnestly, with ur cllege entrance examinatin appraching, I wnder if there are sme efficient learning methds. I’d appreciate it if yu can share yur learning strategies with me.
Wish yu further success! Anticipating yur early reply!
Yurs,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。好友Mark被常春藤大学联盟(Ivy League University)录取，要求考生写一封邮件表示祝贺。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad → delighted
衷心的、由衷的：crdial → heartfelt
老实说、确实：hnestly → t be hnest
期待：anticipate → lk frward t
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：I’m mre than glad t hear that yu’ve been admitted int Ivy League University.
拓展句：Hearing that yu’ve been admitted int Ivy League University, I am mre than delighted.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was yur intelligence and persistence that enabled yu t make it!(运用了强调句)
【高分句型2】Hnestly, with ur cllege entrance examinatin appraching, I wnder if there are sme efficient learning methds.(运用了with复合结构和if引导的宾语从句)
20．Gd mrning, everyne,
It’s a great hnr t stand here and address my speech titled “The persn I thank mst”. The persn I thank mst is my English teacher, Miss Hu.
She is a middle-aged wman wh taught me English in junir high schl. I felt it very difficult when learning English. She ften tutred me after class. Gradually, I made prgress and felt cnfident. Thanks t her help, nt nly did I have a gd cmmand f English, but I als gained cnfidence. Withut her help, I culdn’t have made myself what I am tday.
That’s all. Thank yu!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“我最感谢的人”为题写一篇发言稿，要求写感谢的人和感谢的原因。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
发表：address → deliver
命名：title → name
困难的：difficult → hard
精通：have a gd cmmand f→have a gd knwledge f
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s a great hnr t stand here and address my speech titled “The persn I thank mst”.
拓展句：It’s a great hnr t stand here and address my speech whse title is “The persn I thank mst”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】She is a middle-aged wman wh taught me English in junir high schl. （运用了wh引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】Thanks t her help, nt nly did I have a gd cmmand f English, but I als gained cnfidence.（运用了nt als引导的部分倒装句）