高考英语写作建议信专项训练

这是一份高考英语写作建议信专项训练，共31页。试卷主要包含了假设你是红星中学高三学生李华等内容，欢迎下载使用。
建议信
1．假如你是李华，最近收到你的美国笔友Tina的来信，信中说弟弟总是泄露自己的秘密，为此感到很苦恼，你打算给她写封回信。内容包括：
1 .给予安慰；
2 .提出建议；
3 .表达希望。
注意:1.写作词数为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tina,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友David发现他的好朋友偷偷吸烟，而且学习成绩明显下降，他很担心他的朋友，但又不知道怎么劝说，所以写邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 给出建议；
2. 你的祝愿。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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3．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件，说居家上网课时注意力难以集中，她担心成绩落后，因此向你求助。请你回复她， 内容包括：
1. 安慰；
2. 建议；
3. 祝愿。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mary,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英国交换生Jim对中国文化非常感兴趣，他希望你推荐一件他在寒假里可以做的事情，便于他更好地了解中国文化。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1.你推荐他做的事情;
2.你的理由。
注意：1.词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假定你是李华，你的朋友Tom来信说，近来他经常感到心烦易怒。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1.表示安慰；
2.提出建议。
注意：1.词数10左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假如你是李华， 你的美国笔友Tom来信说， 当他了解到人工智能（AI）围棋手Master战胜了60位顶尖职业围棋高手后， 他迷上了下围棋（Go）， 希望你能给他关于提高棋艺方面的建议。要点如下：1. 最好到中国参加培训班。2. 熟能生巧，尽量在网上对进行对弈练习。3.多观看网上的围棋大赛直播。
注意:1. 词数100左右；2.可加入适当细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，请你给离家读书并生病好几天的美国网友David写一封建议信，内容包括：
1.对David目前生病状况的感受；
2.说明锻炼和学习的关系；
3.鼓励他积极锻炼身体。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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8．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Mike发来邮件说他最近身体不好，请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 健康的重要性；2. 养成健康的生活习惯的建议。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I am sorry to know that you are not well these days, so I’d like to talk about how to keep healthy with you.
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I do hope you will become strong soon with all my advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是学生会主席李华，因为感染新冠病毒人数还在不断增加，请你代表学生会就 如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。内容包括：
1 .做好个人防护。
2 .注意劳逸结合。
注意：
1 .写作词汇应为80左右;
2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：新冠病毒novel coronavirus
Dear students,
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Students’ Union
10．假定你是李华，你的外籍朋友Jim在邮件中提到他对如何有效管理自己的时间感到困惑。请你回封邮件，给出你的建议，内容包括：
1. 时间管理的重要性;2. 时间管理的技巧。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
11．假定你是李华，你校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整，正在向听众征求意见。请你写封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的建议；
2.你的理由。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
Dear English radio station,
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．假如你是李华, 就China Daily的环境保护话题写信, 阐述一次性筷子对环境的危害, 及树木对环境的重要性, 并提出你的建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右(信的格式和开头已为你写好, 不计入词数)；
2. 参考词汇: throwaway chopsticks一次性筷子； ecological value 生态价值。
Dear Editor.
I’m more than delighted to express my view about environmental protection.
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Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
13．假设你是李华，你的英国网友David来信说他最近因经常感冒而苦恼，请你给他回一封信，包括以下要点：
1、表示关心。
2、提出防感冒的建议(至少两条)。
3、表达祝愿。
注意：1、词数100词左右。
2、可适当添加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours.
Li Hua
14．假定你是校英语报“读者来信”栏目的主编李华。学生张明写信向你寻求帮助。他对父母充满感激之情，却又不知如何表达，有点苦恼。请给他回信，内容包括：
1.表达理解；2.提出建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Zhang Ming,
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Li Hua
15．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你所居住的小区，虽地处闹市，但因建成较早，当年规划的300个停车位早已不能满足500户居民的停车需求。小区业委会(owners’ committee)现正就如何缓解小区停车难这一问题征求居民们意见。在小区公众号留言，谈谈你的看法。留言中包括：
1.你的建议;
2.你的理由。
(文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息)
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16．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
随着数字技术的广泛使用，现在，学校里有些老师喜欢给学生布置线上作业，也有一些老师仍然喜欢布置线下作业，还有一些老师喜欢布置线上和线下混合式作业。作为一名高三学生，请你给老师写一封邮件，提出你关于作业方面的建议。邮件内容必须包括：
1.你觉得哪种作业形式更适合你们班级；
2.简单陈述你的理由，说明其利弊。
(文中不要出现真实姓名和学校名称)
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17．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近收到好友王磊的邮件，信中提到他对如何选择大学专业感到非常困惑。回复王磊一封邮件，内容须包括：
1.你对选择专业的建议；
2.你的理由。
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18．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 最近给你来信，请根据下面信中所提的问题予以回信并提供相关建议。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything? Do you remember last time you asked me to visit your hometown in the future? I was so thrilled at the idea that I signed up for a Chinese course at school.
However, it is not as easy as I thought. Chinese uses a writing system that is unfamiliar to English speakers. Chinese doesn’t have an alphabet (字母) like we do. There are thousands of characters. That means have a lot of memorizing to do. And characters are just part of the learning. I suddenly feel at a loss.I was wondering if you could offer me some practical advice about this.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Tom
注意：1.词数 100 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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19．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校英语报正在进行主题为“如何应对压力”的征文，你有意参加，写一篇短文，内容须包括：
1)你对如何应对压力的建议；
2)用具体的事例说明这一建议的有效性。
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20．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是中华中学高三学生徐晶，校团委为了帮助高三学生缓解学习压力，拟利用本月最后一个星期五下午开展一个高三年级减压活动，目前正在向全年级同学征求活动意见。你给校团委王老师写一封邮件，内容须包括：
Ø 你的建议；
Ø 你的理由。
注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。
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参考答案：
1．Dear Tina,
I am very glad to hear from you. Thank you for your trust and telling me your trouble.
Now I have known your problem clearly. I do think that the best way to stop it is to make a friendly talk with your brother as soon as possible. As a teenager, we have the right to keep something secret by ourselves. So you should tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret, even though he is your brother. I am sure he will keep your secret and you will be happy again.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Tina写一封回信，为她弟弟总是泄露她的秘密而感到很苦恼给予安慰并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad →delighted
收到来信：hear from →receive a letter from
即使：even though→even if
问题：trouble→problem
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句：So you should tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret, even though he is your brother.
拓展句：What you should do is to tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret again, even though he is your brother.
【点睛】【高分句型1】So you should tell him politely that you do not want him to let out your secret, even though he is your brother.（运用了even though引导的让步状语从句以及that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I am sure he will keep your secret and you will be happy again.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
2．One possible version:
Dear David,
I am glad to receive your email. As for how to persuade your friend to get rid of smoking, I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
To begin with, you should talk to him face to face and find out why he started smoking. What I want to remind you is that you should pay attention to your way of speaking. Second, in order to discourage him from smoking, you can inform him of its dangers. Third, if he shows a desire to quit smoking, you can accompany him to the hospital and ask the doctor to give professional advice. I believe your friendship will be stronger after your sincere help.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友David发现他的好朋友偷偷吸烟，而且学习成绩明显下降，他很担心他的朋友，但又不知道怎么劝说，所以写邮件向你征求建议。请你回复邮件，内容包括：1. 给出建议；2. 你的祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
提供：offer→provide
建议：suggestion→advice
首先：to begin with→first of all
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As for how to persuade your friend to get rid of smoking, I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
拓展句：As for how you can persuade your friend to get rid of smoking, I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, you should talk to him face to face and find out why he started smoking. (运用了why引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] What I want to remind you is that you should pay attention to your way of speaking. (运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
3．Dear Mary,
Terribly sorry to learn that you have trouble in studying online. Don’t worry about your falling behind. Here are my suggestions.
How about tidying up your desk, which will keep you away from all the distractions. What’s more, turn off all the apps that will disturb you. Last but not least, it is of importance for you to engage yourself in the class actively like sharing your views and discussing problems because it leaves you no room for being absent-minded.
Hopefully, these proposals will be of some help to you. Best wishes for your improvement.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华，你的英国好友Mary给你发来邮件，说居家上网课时注意力难以集中，她担心成绩落后，因此向你求助。请你回复她， 内容包括：1.安慰；2.建议；3.祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
得知：learn→ know
建议：suggestion → advice
此外：what’s more→besides
参加：engage in→ participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully, these proposals will be of some help to you.
拓展句：I hope that these proposals will be of some help to you.
【点睛】【高分句型1】How about tidying up your desk, which will keep you away from all the distractions. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Last but not least, it is of importance for you to engage yourself in the class actively like sharing your views and discussing problems because it leaves you no room for being absent-minded.（运用了动名词作宾语）
4．Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I recommend you to read Chinese classical literature which can help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture. Here are my specific suggestions.
First, you can read the four great classics. I know this is very difficult for you, but you can read them by consulting a dictionary or a book. In the process of reading, you will not only improve your Chinese level, but also gain more knowledge. In addition, you can also watch the ancient TV series to understand the specific plots, so that you can more fully feel the Chinese classical literature.
These are my suggestions. I hope they will be helpful to you. If you don’t understand any details, you can always write to me. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jim写一封信，建议他在寒假里做一件事，以便于他更好的了解中国文化。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：recommend→suggest
首先：first→first of all
此外：in addition→what’s more
希望：hope→expect
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hearing that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I recommend you to read Chinese classical literature which can help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
拓展句：Because I hear that you are interested in Chinese traditional culture, I recommend you to read Chinese classical literature which can help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I know this is very difficult for you, but you can read them by consulting a dictionary or a book. In the process of reading, you will not only improve your Chinese level, but also gain more knowledge. （运用了not only…but also…固定句型）
【高分句型2】In addition, you can also watch the ancient TV series to understand the specific plots, so that you can more fully feel the Chinese classical literature.（运用了so that引导状语从句）
5．Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to know that you tend to be upset and annoyed these days. In fact, it’s a common phenomenon for teenagers especially before an exam, so you don’t have to worry a lot. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are some useful tips.
First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. What’s more, you’d better keep optimistic about your future. A positive attitude towards life can be helpful in cheering you up. It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.
Hopefully, you will find my advice helpful. Looking forward to your early reply.
                                   Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给朋友Tom写一份回信，针对Tom近来他经常感到心烦易怒的现象，表示安慰，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
倾向于做：tend to do →have a tendency to do
事实上：in fact →as a matter of fact
建议：tips →suggestions
此外：what’s more →besides
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
拓展句：Firstly, my suggestion is that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I suggest that you talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，省略关系代词的限制性定语从句，how引导的宾语从句，which引导的非限制性定语从句，动名词作介宾。）
【高分句型2】It is also a good idea to go outdoors and play team games with your friends because physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.（运用了it作形式主语，动词不定式作主语，because引导原因状语从句，动词不定式作后置定语。）
6．Dear Tom,
I am delighted to receive your letter, in which I’ve learned that you became a Go addict after knowing that Mater had defeated 60 world-class professional players and asked for my advice on how to learn Go well. Here are some tips for you.
To begin with, it is a good idea for you to register for a training class in China, where Go was born. In addition, as the proverb says, practice makes perfect. Therefore it is advisable that you play the game online as much as possible, preferably on a daily basis. Last but not least, I strongly recommend that you watch live broadcasts of international games online. Not only will it help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills, but also keep you informed of the latest trends in the Go field.
I hope my advice proves useful. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如考生是李华， 你的美国笔友Tom来信说， 当他了解到人工智能（AI）围棋手Master战胜了60位顶尖职业围棋高手后， 他迷上了下围棋（Go）， 希望你能给他关于提高棋艺方面的建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→ pleased
建议：advice→ suggestion
获得： acquire→ obtain
因此：therefore→ thus
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Here are some tips for you.
拓展句：Here are some tips for you, which are beneficial to you.
【点睛】[高分句型1] To begin with, it is a good idea for you to register for a training class in China, where Go was born.（where引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Not only will it help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills, but also keep you informed of the latest trends in the Go field.（部分倒装句）
7．Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you have been ill for days and hope you have got better now. You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise. It is really harmful to your health. I feel it would be more beneficial to your health if you could take more exercise in the future.
In fact, exercise can contribute to your health and fresh your mind. Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying hard without feeling bad or ill. Otherwise, your study will be interrupted from time to time by sickness.
In a word, exercise is as useful and important as your study. So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day from now on.
Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给离家读书并生病好几天的美国网友David写一封建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
抱歉：sorry → regrettable
沉溺于：be absorbed in → be addicted to/be indulged in
有助于：contribute to→ benefit
总之：in a word → in short/in brief
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise. It is really harmful to your health.
拓展句：You have been so absorbed in study away from your home that you have had no time for exercise,which is really harmful to your health.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Only when you have a strong body can you keep on studying hard without feeling bad or ill. （运用了only引导的倒装句）
【高分句型2】So I put forward a suggestion that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day from now on.（运用了that引导的同位语从句）
8．Dear Mike,
I am sorry to know that you are not well these days, so I’d like to talk about how to keep healthy with you.
Just as the saying goes, “Health is wealth.” So if you attach great importance to fitness, it will have good effects on both of your physical and mental health. Firstly, you should have a balanced diet. While eating healthy food, you are more likely to be healthy. Secondly, I believe it is a good idea to make a reasonable schedule to study, play and rest at a good time. Actually it can only make you disappointed at, even ashamed of the low efficiency in spite of your devoting all your time to studying. Finally, have enough sleep and try to go to bed early and get up early.
I do hope you will become strong soon with all my advice.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Mike回一封邮件，说明一下健康的重要性并对养成健康的生活习惯提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重视健身：attach great importance to fitness →pay great attention to fitness
事实上：Actually →As a matter of fact
尽管：in spite of →despite
足够的：enough→ adequate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Actually it can only make you disappointed at, even ashamed of the low efficiency in spite of your devoting all your time to studying.
拓展句：Actually it can only make you disappointed at, even ashamed of the low efficiency though you devote all your time to studying.
【点睛】【高分句型1】So if you attach great importance to fitness, it will have good effects on both of your physical and mental health.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
【高分句型2】I believe it is a good idea to make a reasonable schedule to study, play and rest at a good time.（运用了宾语从句省略了关系词that, 并且从句中使用了it做形式主语，不定式短语做真正主语）
9．Dear students,
With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.
To begin with, confronted with the serious condition, we students had better have personal protection in public and stay at home to have enough rest if possible. In addition, so precious is the time that we can’t afford to waste it as senior students. It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.
Hopefully, the advice will of benefit to you.
Students’ Union
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生代表学生会就如何过好即将到来的寒假，给全体学生一些建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
首先：to begin with→first of all
另外：in addition→what’s more
放松：relaxation→easing
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With many people being infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.
拓展句：As many people are infected with novel coronavirus, we’d like to make some constructive suggestions to help you spend a meaningful winter holiday.
【点睛】[高分句型1]In addition, so precious is the time that we can’t afford to waste it as senior students.(so位于句首的倒装句和that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]It is advisable that we should keep a balance between relaxation and study.(that引导的主语从句)
10．Dear Jim,
Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions.
Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance. The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. Being organized also helps a lot when you prepare for your lessons and activities. Most importantly, you must learn to prioritize all your tasks and stick to the goals you have set.
I hope you’ll find my suggestions practical and helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本文是一篇应用文写作。要求考生给外籍朋友Jim回封邮件，就如何有效管理自己的时间给出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
知道：learning→know
问题：trouble→problem
建议：suggestion→advice
有用的：helpful→beneficial
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Effective time management can help reduce your stress and boost your performance.
拓展句：Not only can effective time management help reduce your stress, but also boost your performance.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Learning that you have trouble in managing your time effectively, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]The first thing you need to do is to plan ahead by making a daily to-do list. (省略which的定语从句)
11．Dear English radio station,
Knowing that you will adjust the broadcast time slot, length and column, I am writing to give my suggestions.
First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students get to know national events and stimulate their listening ability. Secondly, English pop songs can be played for ten minutes after school at noon, which can relieve students’ study pressure . Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.
Hoping my suggestions can be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考写一封邮件，就学校英语广播电台将对播出时段、时长、栏目等做调整情况给出自己的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestions→ advice/tips
缓解，放松：relieve→ relax/ease
压力：pressure→ stress
优秀的：excellent→ terrific/outstanding
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.
拓展句：Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays which are published by students can be played.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, I think a 20-minute news summary can be played before the morning reading class, which will help students get to know national events and stimulate their listening ability.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。)
【高分句型2】Finally, during the afternoon break, some excellent sample essays published by students can be played.(运用了非谓语动词作后置定语。)
12．Dear Editor,
I’m more than delighted to express my view about environmental protection. Nowadays, throwaway chopsticks are gaining increasing popularity for their convenience and low price.
However, what we fail to realize is that they cause great damage to the environment. The manufacture of throwaway chopsticks consumes large numbers of trees every year, which accounts for great loss of forests. Where the forests disappear, dust storms will occur occasionally. The weather will get hot and dry and the whole earth will become a big desert.
So we should spare no effort to protect the environment. To begin with, everyone should be made aware of the importance of protecting forests. Besides, the government is expected to make strict laws to ban forest cutting. Only in this way can we live in harmony with nature.
Yours sincerely.
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给China Daily写信，阐述一次性筷子对环境的危害以及树木对环境的重要性，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
受欢迎：gain popularity→become popular
破坏：damage→ harm
生产：manufacture→production
不遗余力做某事：spare no effort to→ try one’s best to do
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Nowadays, throwaway chopsticks are gaining increasing popularity for their convenience and low price.
拓展句：Nowadays, throwaway chopsticks are gaining increasing popularity because they are convenient and at low price.
【点睛】【高分句型1】However, what we fail to realize is that they cause great damage to the environment.（运用了what引导的主语从句和that引导表语从句）
【高分句型2】The manufacture of throwaway chopsticks consumes large numbers of trees every year, which accounts for great loss of forests.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
13．Dear David,
I am so sorry to learn from your letter that your study suffers due to your constant colds. And I’m quite concerned about that and hope you are feeling better now.
I have some suggestions for you to prevent colds. First of all, have a balanced diet, which is vital for your body to function well. The better your body functions, the less likely you are to catch a cold. Besides, keep a positive mind and take regular exercise to guarantee a strong body. And you know a strong body really matters even when exposed to viruses.
I hope my suggestions are helpful to you. Wish you a speedy recovery.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国网友David回信，对他经常感冒的苦恼表达关心，并提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
担心：be concerned about→ worried about
首先：First of all→ To begin with
对……是至关重要的：be vital for→ be essential to
另外：Besides → Additionally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I have some suggestions for you to prevent colds.
拓展句：I have some suggestions that can prevent you from colds.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, have a balanced diet, which is vital for your body to function well.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 And you know a strong body really matters even when exposed to viruses.(运用了时间状语从句的省略)
14．Dear Zhang Ming,
       I’m glad to hear from you. You said that you are full of gratitude to your parents, but you don’t know how to express it. I can quite understand your situation. In our traditional culture, we seldom express love and our feelings directly to each other. Here I have some suggestions for you.
First, as you are at this stage, you should study hard and develop good living habits, and do not let parents worry. Second, you can do some housework within your power to share the burden for parents. Besides, on holidays, you can try writing thank-you letters or giving cards to our parents.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假定你是校英语报“读者来信”栏目的主编李华。学生张明写信向你寻求帮助。他对父母充满感激之情，却又不知如何表达，有点苦恼。请给他回信，内容包括：1.表达理解；2.提出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
很少：seldom→rarely
建议：suggestion→advice
有益的：helpful→beneficial
此外：besides=in addition
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I can quite understand your situation. In our traditional culture, we seldom express love and our feelings directly to each other.
拓展句：I can quite understand your situation, because in our traditional culture, we seldom express love and our feelings directly to each other.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You said that you are full of gratitude to your parents, but you don’t know how to express it. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Besides, on holidays, you can try writing thank-you letters or giving cards to our parents. (运用了动名词作宾语)
15．Dear owners’ committee,
As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how to alleviate the parking problem in this community:
First, I think the community can scientifically and reasonably plan the parking spaces, number them, and guide the car owners to check the number. At the same time, we can also talk with residents in the community to reduce the public green space and increase the number of parking spaces. Second, we could seek help from the relevant departments, putting forward the proposal of building a large parking lot or three-dimensional parking building; Meanwhile, we can negotiate with the surrounding shops to implement the method of “dislocation parking” to relieve the tension of parking in the community. Third, I strongly recommend that public transportation and public bicycle travel should be advocated. By doing these not only can we could relieve the pressure of tight parking space，but also build up our bodies, which could be called win-win.
The above is my opinion,which I hope will be helpful to you.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给业主委员会写一封建议信，针对“小区停车难”问题提出自己的建议和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→ advice
首先：first → first and foremost
其次：second→ in addition
有益处的：helpful→ beneficial
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how to alleviate the parking problem in this community.
拓展句：As a resident of this community, I have the following suggestions on how we could do something to alleviate the parking problem in this community.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, I think the community can scientifically and reasonably plan the parking spaces, number them, and guide the car owners to check the number. （运用了动词的并列结构）
【高分句型2】Third, I strongly recommend that public transportation and public bicycle travel should be advocated. （运用了虚拟语气以及that引导的宾语从句）
16．Dear Mr. Hu,
I’m writing to express my opinion about the online homework. With the scientific development, the Internet is developing rapidly. Online homework will become a trend. Therefore, I think that online homework can be more suitable for our Senior Three students.
The contents and forms of online homework are relatively rich, which not only can promote students to actively complete their homework, but also can greatly relieve the tense learning atmosphere. Besides, online homework can shorten the time of teachers’ correcting homework so that they can help us with important learning problems, because senior three students need more help from teachers. Although online homework also has drawbacks, such as computer time, I think we can control ourselves as teenagers.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给老师写一封邮件，提出你关于线上作业和线下作业更适合自己班级的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适用：be suitable for → apply to
积极地：actively → positively

此外：Besides → What’s more
有用：be helpful to → be beneficial to
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to express my opinion about the online homework.
拓展句：I’m writing to express my opinion about the online homework, which I think is useful to our study.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The contents and forms of online homework are relatively rich, which not only can promote students to actively complete their homework, but also can greatly relieve the tense learning atmosphere. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Besides, online homework can shorten the time of teachers’ correcting homework so that they can help us with important learning problems, because senior three students need more help from teachers. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句)
17．Dear Wanglei,
Hearing that you have trouble deciding which major you should choose when you enter the university, I’d like to offer you some suggestions. And I hope they will give you a hand.
First of all, it’s advisable that you choose one that is fit for your own interest because interest is the best teacher. When an obstacle arises, you will have the enthusiasm to crack it instead of giving it up. Also, pick a major you are good at. Sufficient knowledge may contribute to your progress. Last but not least, you’d better consider the career prospects since you will have to take advantage of what you’ve learnt in college to find yourself a job. When choices are multiple, you will have more chances.
Hope my advice is worthy taking and you can find your ideal major!
Yours,
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以高三学生李明的身份写邮件给好友王磊，对他将来如何选择大学专业提出建议并给出理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
决定：decide→determine
建议：suggestion→advice
擅长：be good at→do well in
机会：chance→opportunity
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Also, pick a major you are good at. Sufficient knowledge may contribute to your progress.
拓展句：Also, pick a major you are good at because sufficient knowledge may contribute to your progress.
【点睛】【高分句型1】First of all, it’s advisable that you choose one that is fit for your own interest because interest is the best teacher.（运用了that引导的主语从句、that引导的定语从句和because引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】Last but not least, you’d better consider the career prospects since you will have to take advantage of what you’ve learnt in college to find yourself a job.（运用了since引导的状语从句和what引导的宾语从句，不定式作目的状语）
18．Dear Tom,
        I am glad to know that you signed up for a Chinese course. As for how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions.
       First, prounciation and listening. You can listen to more news programs and watch Chinese movies. Second, keeping a Chinese diary is good for your Chinese writing. You will learn to think in Chinese instead of translating everything into English. Third, try to speak in Chinese in your daily life, which is vital to your Chinese study.
        I hope the suggestions will be helpful for you. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一封建议信。要求考生给英国笔友Tom 写一封信，就如何学习汉语向其提供一些建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
了解：know → learn
课程：course → lesson
建议：suggestion → advice
重要：vital → important
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： As for how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions..
拓展句： As for how to learn Chinese well, I’d like to give you some suggestions which I hope will be helpful.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Second, keeping a Chinese diary is good for your Chinese writing. (运用了动名词短语作主语)
【高分句型2】
Third, try to speak in Chinese in your daily life, which is vital to your Chinese study. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
19．Psychologist tell us that stress is a state of worry caused by the problem in life , such as too much work or study, heavy responsibilities, and quickened pace of life. I think there are lots of things we can do to solve these problems.
As we know, music is the most beautiful language in the world. I think it's helpful to listen to some music when we are under too much pressure. It will make us forget all our problems and recall some good memories. Or we could read some jokes and a burst of laughter helps a lot. Besides, doing sports is another great way to deal with the problems. It's not only good for our health but also our mood. Having worked out, we will feel very tired physically, which helps us to fall fast asleep and have a good sleep. When I failed the last exam in Junior school, stress began to mount. I was in low spirits and couldn't concentrate. Luckily, one weekend, my best friend pulled me to the wood, where we hiked and jogged for the whole morning. Sweating thoroughly,and mountains of load gone, I felt confident about my entrance exam. Last, we can talk about our problems with our teachers or best friends, who may help us to get over it.
In a word, everything depends on our attitude. It is important to stay happy all the time, isn't it? The more meaningful things we do, the happier we will be.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文给校英语报进行的主题为“如何应对压力”的征文比赛投稿。内容须包括：
1)对如何应对压力的建议；
2)用具体的事例说明这一建议的有效性。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力：stress→pressure
此外：besides → what’s more/furthermore/additionally
情绪低落的：down→depressed/in low spirits
增长：increase→accumulate/mount
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, doing sports is another great way to deal with the problems. It's not only good for our health but also our mood.
拓展句：Besides, doing sports is another great way to deal with the problems, which is not only good for our health but also our mood.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Sweating thoroughly,and   mountains of load gone, I felt confident about my entrance exam.（运用了现在分词和独立主格结构作状语）
【高分句型2】Having worked out, we will feel very tired physically, which helps us to fall fast asleep and have a good sleep.（运用了现在分词作状语及which引导的非限制性定语从句）
20．Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very glad to hear that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress. I am writing to offer my advice.
I suggest that a fun game for all Senior Three students should be held on the school playground. Various sports games, fun and exciting, will attract lots of participation, among which Riding Pigs, Mud Wrestling and Chinese Rolling will be the most welcomed. The playground will be filled with the students’ laughter and cheers. Aiming to relieve the senior 3 students from pressure and get them a break from heavy school work, the activity will be a great success.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Xu Jing
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生给团委王老师写一封邮件，就最后一个周五开展的高三年级减压活动提出自己的建议，并陈述理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
刺激的：exciting→thrilling
充满：be filled with→be full of
考虑：take...into consideration→take...into account
2.句型拓展
合并句子
原句：I am very glad to hear that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress. I am writing to offer my advice.
拓展句：Hearing that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress, I am writing to offer my advice.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am very glad to hear that our school is going to carry out an activity to help students relieve stress. （运用了that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]Aiming to relieve the senior 3 students from pressure and get them a break from heavy school work, the activity will be a great success.（运用了现在分词作状语）