2022-2023年仁爱版英语八年级下册专项复习精讲精练：专题10 书面表达（原卷版+解析版）

专题10 书面表达

书面表达专练（一）

1．（2022春·海南海口·八年级校联考期中）2022年3月21日的东航客机坠毁事件和持续三年多的新冠肺炎疫情告诉我们：人生在世，生命很重要，健康很重要。但是在学习和生活中，我们会有一些不好的情绪(bad feelings)，坏的情绪会影响我们的健康，请以“Good Ways to Keep Happy”为题，谈一谈中学生如何在学习和生活中保持愉快的心情。

提示词：listen to music， do more exercise，make friends， smile often…

要求：1.语句通顺，表达连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2.必须包含所给信息；

3.词数70左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）

Good Ways to Keep Happy

It is very important for us to keep happy. Because being happy is to be healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us happy?

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I hope you can keep happy every day.

【参考范文】

Good Ways to Keep Happy

It is very important for us to keep happy. Because being happy is to be healthy. But do you know the ways to keep us happy?

First, we can listen to music. It makes us relaxed. Also, we should try to do more exercise every day. After school we can spend hours playing ball games with our friends. Second, making friends is another way to keep happy. When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends. It is a good way to keep us happy. If we smile often, we also feel happy. Third, it’s a good idea to have good hobbies, such as reading and learning something new. That’s because interests give us a lot of fun.

I hope you can keep happy every day.

【解析】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

②时态：时态主要是“一般现在时”；

③提示：本文写作话题已经明确，考生应结合该话题以及提示词阐述自己的观点，注意逻辑清晰和行文连贯。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图，用问句“但你知道让我们快乐的方法吗”引出下文；

第二步，结合提示词有逻辑地介绍让我们快乐的方法；

第三步，总结并希望能够每天开心。

[亮点词汇]

①make sb adj让某人……

②try to do sth尽力做某事

③spend time doing sth花时间做某事

④such as例如

[高分句型]

①Second, making friends is another way to keep happy.（动名词短语作主语）

②When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends.（when引导的时间状语从句）

书面表达专练（二）

2．（2021春·广东广州·八年级统考期末）有一批国外交换生要来你校进行交流学习，他们对我国的传统文化艺术非常感兴趣。作为校园文化使者，请你根据以下提示写一篇文章向他们介绍 4 种我国传统文化艺术。

（1）    参考词汇：pray for 祈求

（2）    词数 100 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）    不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。

China is a great country with different kinds of traditional folk culture. I would like to introduce_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

China is a great country with different kinds of traditional folk culture. I would like to introduce some of them. The first one is Sugar painting, which is always yellow and made of sugar. And it is not only beautiful but also tasty. Next is the Cantonese opera, which is popular in Guangdong and Guangxi. It tells stories of history and tradition. Another one is Lion dancing, which is often performed during festivals and prays for a better life. The last one is Paper cutting in red, which can be cut into different shapes and each of them expresses different meanings.

Here are the unique handicrafts in China. Each of them is beautiful and meaningful. I hope that you like them.

【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍四种中华传统文化艺术，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。

2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍糖画，粤剧，舞狮和剪纸四项中华传统文化艺术。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。

书面表达专练（三）

3．（2022春·贵州铜仁·八年级统考期中）在成长过程中，每个人都会遇到困难，面对困难你该如何解决呢？请根据下表的提示以“Learn to Smile”为题，写一篇80词以上的作文，开头已给出，不计入总数。

提示词：fail in the exam, smile to yourself, feel confident, overcome (克服), make friends, get close to, make sb. happy

Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence is “Just a smile and the rain is gone”. Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile.

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【参考范文】

Learn to Smile

I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence is “Just a smile and the rain is gone”. Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile.

First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself. Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence. Sometimes the one who beats you isn’t others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.

Second, learn to smile at others. It helps you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes you happy as well.

In a word, smile can adjust the mood of people, convey friendship, and make yourself grow up happily.

【解析】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意逻辑清晰、行文连贯、无语法拼写错误。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开篇点题：面对困难时应该学会微笑；

第二步，结合表格提示，具体介绍该如何做；

第三步，总结全文。

[亮点词汇]

① unpleasant 不愉快的

② misunderstand 误解

③ confidence 自信

④ communicate with sb. 与某人交流

⑤ adjust 调整

[高分句型]

① If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad.（if引导的条件状语从句）

② Sometimes the one who beats you isn’t others, but yourself.（who引导的定语从句）

书面表达专练（四）

4．（2022春·广西梧州·八年级统考期中）请以“A Trip to Beijing ”为题，用英语写一篇关于你去北京旅游的文章。

要点：

要求：

1. 包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译，可以适当发挥；

2. 文中不能出现考生的真实校名、人名、地名等信息；

3. 60 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。A Trip to Beijing

As we know, Beijing is a must visit for everyone. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【参考范文】

A Trip to Beijing

As we know, Beijing is a place where visitors must go. The day finally arrived, my parents and I visited it last summer. Let me tell you something about it.

On the first day, we went to Tian’anmen Square in the morning. It’s the biggest square in the world. There were many people there. In the afternoon, we watched Beijing Opera. We had great fun. On the second day, we visited the Summer Palace and the Palace Museum. We learned much about Chinese history culture. On the third day, we climbed the Great Wall. We enjoyed the natural beauty very much. I couldn’t stop taking photos. We went to Wangfujing Street and did some shopping on the fourth day. We bought some presents for our relatives and friends. We had a big meal. Beijing Duck was very delicious.

This trip will always have a special place in my heart.

【解析】［总体分析］

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；

③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。

［写作步骤］

第一步，介绍去旅游的时间、地点、人物等信息。

第二步，按照时间顺序重点描述旅游经历。

第三步，抒发旅游感受。

［亮点词汇］

①have great fun 玩得很开心

②take photos 照相

③do some shopping 购物

［高分句型］

①Let me tell you something about it.（let sb. do sth. 句型）

②We bought some presents for our relatives and friends. （buy sth. for sb. 句型）

③This trip will always have a special place in my heart.（have a special place in one’s heart在某人心中占有特殊的地位）

书面表达专练（五）

5．（2022春·江苏淮安·八年级校考期中）读万卷书，行万里路。在即将到来的4月23日世界读书日，我校将举行“读好书，行好路”的主题征文活动。请以“Reading and travelling make a better me”为题，写一篇80—100字的英语短文。内容必须包括表格中所有要点，不得出现真实的校名和人名。

Reading and travelling make a better meFriends are not books, yet books are friends. I have read different kinds of books. But my favourite one is_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Reading and travelling make a better me and I hope you can find a better you some time in a future.

【参考范文】

Reading and travelling make a better me

Friends are not books, yet books are friends. I have read different kinds of books. But my favourite one is the English writer Daniel Defoe’s Robinson Crusoe, which is a famous novel in the world. After reading the book, I learn many things from it. Especially, when we get tried of the life, we should remember that taking measures to face it is better than giving up. Reading good books can teach us a lot of knowledge. It can help us know a new world, also can make us relaxed in our spare time.

Travelling is our friend, too. I have traveled to plenty of places. But my most unforgettable is the trip to Beijing in my childhood. During the trip, I experienced the long history of China and the deep pride. So travelling can help us to know the cultures of the different places.

Reading and travelling make a better me and I hope you can find a better you some time in a future.

【解析】[总体分析]

①题材：本文应是一篇说明文。

②时态：本文要用到一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时。

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

①第一步，开头已给出，接着开头来介绍自己最喜欢的书，并表达出读好书的好处；

②第二步，介绍自己的一次旅行，并表达出行好路的好处；

③第三步，总结全文，说明阅读和旅行会让我变得更好。

[亮点词汇]

①learn…from… 从……学到……

②especially 尤其

③get tired of 厌倦

④take measures to do 采取措施做某事

⑤give up 放弃

[高分句型]

①But my favourite one is the English writer Daniel Defoe’s Robinson Crusoe, which is a famous novel in the world. (which引导非限制性定语从句)

②when we get tried of the life, we should remember that taking measures to face it is better than giving up. (when引导时间状语从句，that引导宾语从句，动名词作主语)

书面表达专练（六）

电子邮件

6．（2021春·广东深圳·八年级校联考期中）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Tom 想了解中国的卡通电影，同时他对孙悟空特别感兴趣。请你根据以下提示，给 Tom 回一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1.中国卡通电影的历史(在20 世纪 60 年代和 80 年代出现了很多好的卡通电影）。《大闹天宮》 是最为著名的一部；

2.介绍孙悟空：他是《西游记》的主要人物之一； 他有一根神奇的棍子；他会七十二变；……（请自己补充一点）

3. 你对当下中国卡通电影的评价。

提示词汇：卡通电影：animated film；《西游记》Journey to the West；《大闹天宮》The Monkey King

Dear Tom,

I am glad that you are interested in China’s animated films. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Tom,

I am glad that you are interested in China’s animated films. As we all know, China’s animated films have a long history. In the 1960s and 1980s, there were many good animated films.

Monkey King is one of the main characters in Journey to the West. He has a magic stick which can be put into his ears. In addition, he can also turn himself into seventy-two different images. What’s more, he is so confident and he never gives up easily when he faces difficulties.

In summary, China’s animated films are becoming better and better. I hope you will have chances to enjoy more Chinese films.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以李华的身份给Tom写信，为他介绍中国卡通电影的情况。题目中给出了具体的写作内容，包括对卡通电影《大闹天宫》及主要人物孙悟空的介绍以及对中国动画电影的评价等，学生们可以此为提纲，增加更多的细节信息，然后用正确的英语表达出来。

2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态和一般过去时态叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。注意将题目中给出的提示内容都包括在文章中，不要遗漏要点。英语句式结构和汉语的表达习惯是不同的，不要逐词翻译，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句和其他句式，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文意的衔接，使文章表达流畅，意思连贯。

书面表达专练（七）

书信作文

7．（2022春·广西柳州·八年级统考期中）假设你是李华，某英语网站正在举办以“感恩父母”为主题的征文活动。请根据表格中的内容用英文写一篇题为“A Letter to My Parents”的短文，用于投稿。

参考词汇：感谢某人……thank sb. for ...    养育raise        做饭cook food生病be sick            信任trust            关心care about

个人感受personal feelings    处于困难中be in trouble

A Letter to My Parents

Dear Mum and Dad,

I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. Firstly, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

A Letter to My Parents

Dear Mum and Dad,

I’m writing to express my thanks for all your care and love. Firstly, I want to thank you for raising me. I thank you for cooking delicious food for me every day, and taking care of me when I am sick. Secondly, I am grateful to you for trusting me, caring about my personal feelings and encouraging me when I am in trouble. In order to repay you, I will study hard and not let you down. I really hope you can be healthy and happy every day.

Thanks again for everything you have done for me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无语法和拼写错误。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表达对父母的感谢，介绍父母为自己做过的事情；

第二步，表达自己的决心和祝愿；

第三步，书写结语，再次感谢父母做的一切。

[亮点词汇]

① thank you for doing sth. 感谢某人做某事

② take care of 照顾

③ grateful 感激的

④ encourage 鼓励

⑤ let sb. down 使……失望

[高分句型]

① I am grateful to you for trusting me, caring about my personal feelings and encouraging me when I am in trouble.（when引导的时间状语从句）

② I really hope you can be healthy and happy every day.（hope后接省略that的宾语从句）

书面表达专练（八）

8．（2022春·广东云浮·八年级统考期中）假如你是李华，你的笔友Ben计划来你的家乡——一个福建东部的海滨小城旅行。你建议他骑自行车游城。请结合以下内容，写一封信向他介绍自行车旅行的好处，以及骑车时该如何保证安全。

要求：80 词左右。作文要包含以下要点，并适当拓展。

1.自行车方便好停，不拥挤；

2.自行车环保，不导致空气污染；

3.骑车时要戴头盔，靠右行驶；

4.遵守交规，注意安全。

Dear Ben,

I’m really excited to know that you will come to my hometown for your holiday. My hometown lies in the east of Fujian. It’s famous for its beach.

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I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】

Dear Ben,

I’m really excited to know that you will come to my hometown for your holiday. My hometown lies in the east of Fujian. It’s famous for its beach. My hometown is not very big, and the houses are often crowded with passengers. So it’s better to travel by bike. You don’t need to worry about the parking lot because a bicycle is easy to park. What’s more, it’s good for the environment and doesn’t cause pollution. But when you ride a bike on the road you should pay attention to the traffic around you. It’s necessary to wear a helmet. It can protect your head. Remember to ride on the right side of the road. In a word, the most important way to keep safe is that you must obey the traffic rules and be careful.

I’m looking forward to meeting you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中给出的关键信息，写信建议Ben骑自行车去游玩，介绍自行车旅行的好处及骑车时如何保证安全。

[写作步骤]

第一步，建议Ben骑自行车旅行；

第二步，介绍骑自行车旅行的优势；

第三步，介绍骑自行车旅行需要如何注意安全；

[亮点词汇]

①worry about 担心

②what’s more 更重要的是，而且

③pay attention to 注意

④obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则

[高分句型]

①My hometown is not very big, and the houses are often crowded with passengers.（and连接并列句）

②You don’t need to worry about the parking lot because a bicycle is easy to park.（because引导原因状语从句）

③Remember to ride on the right side of the road.（祈使句的肯定形式）

书面表达专练（九）

日记

9．（2019春·八年级课时练习）书面表达。

请根据下列提示写一篇日记，记录5月1日（星期六）你和莉莉一起去参观郑州博物馆的事。

1. 天气：晴朗；     2. 距离：博物馆离家约两千米；

3. 交给工具：自行车；    4. 时间: 8点出发，10点回家；

5. 内容: 见到许多照片，实物，学到很多东西；

6. 游人: 见到很多父母和孩子、学生和老师等。

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【参考范文】

Saturday, May first, Fine

It was fine today. Lily and I went to visit Zhengzhou Museum. It’s about 2 kilometers away from our homes. So we decided to go there by bike. We started out at 8:00. At the museum we saw many photos and other things. We learned a lot. There we saw a lot of children, parents, students and teachers. At 10:00 we left the museum for home. We had a wonderful time today.

【解析】本文属于材料作文，描述我和莉莉一起去参观郑州博物馆的事情。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如2 kilometers away from, decide to do, by bike, start out, leave for以及have a wonder time等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

书面表达专练（十）

通知

10．（2022春·八年级课时练习）假设你们班要组织一次郊外的春游活动，请你写一个通知。通知中要包括出发的时间、地点以及所乘的交通工具、要带的东西及注意事项。

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NOTICE

April 6th

Our class will go on a spring field trip this Saturday. We’ll go to the West Hill and have a picnic there. Let’s meet at the school gate at 6:30 a. m. We’ll take a bus to go there. Please take some food like bread, drinks, fruit and vegetables for the picnic. Please be on time.

Class 1, Grade 8

【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一个通知，你们班要组织一次郊外的春游活动，要求写一个通知；通知中要包括出发的时间、地点以及所乘的交通工具、要带的东西及注意事项。

2.写作指导：文中介绍郊游具体的时间，地点及需要注意的事项；文中用到了一般将来时和一般现在时态，用到祈使句，语言简洁大方，使读者一目了然。