广东省汕头市潮南区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编：书面表达

广东省汕头市潮南区

2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编

书面表达

2023年广东省汕头市潮南区中考一模英语试题

七、书面表达(本题15分)

根据要求完成短文写作, 请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

81. 某少年英文杂志开设了Problems and Advice专栏, 帮助读者解决问题。假如你是 专栏编辑李华, 今日收到了来自Tony 的求助邮件。由于痴迷于手机, Tony 的学习受到

了严重的影响, 为此他感到很苦恼。请你给Tony 回封电子邮件, 帮他解决困扰。 内容包括：1. 宽慰对方； 2. 提出建议(至少两条) ; 3. 表达祝福。

作文要求：语句连贯, 词数80左右。邮件的开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。

Dear Tony,

I've read your email carefully.     

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours

Li Hua

2022年广东省汕头市潮南区中考一模英语试题

七、书面表达

2020年，新型冠状病毒性肺炎在全球蔓延，极大地影响了人们的生活，很多人的健康因此受到了影响甚至失去了生命。目前，接种疫苗成为预防新冠肺炎最有效的方法，而中国研发的新疫苗也已经上市。某英文网站正在进行主题为“Do you want to get the COVID-19 vaccine?”的讨论，请你在此版块下跟帖回复你的观点并描述原因。

参考词汇： epidemic（流行病），herd immunity (群体免疫)，side effects(副作用)

作文要求：1.根据提示，完成一篇80词左右的文段写作。

2.表格中已给出的内容不计入总词数。

3.不能照抄原文。

I want to get the COVID-19 vaccine, too. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2021年广东省汕头市潮南区中考一模英语试题

十二、材料作文

81．随着科技的发达，众多的点餐APP如美团外卖、饿了么、百度外卖等的应用改变了人们的就餐方式，人们足不出户就享用美食。由于送餐速度快、食物选择多，点餐APP越来越受年轻人的青睐。但是，外卖食物也存在不少问题，如餐品的外观较差，食品卫生没有保障等问题也困扰着喜爱外卖的人们。假如你是李华，你们学校校刊正在征集学生对网络订餐的看法，请你用英语写一篇短文，发表你的看法。

内容包括：

1.网络订餐发展迅速的原因（至少列举两项）；

2.网络订餐的优点与缺点（各写两点）；

3.你的希望及看法。

写作要求：

1.意思连贯、符合逻辑、语句通顺；

2.不少于80词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；

3.不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。

As we all know, with the development of technology, there are more and more Apps of ordering food online in our daily life.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

答案：

2023年广东省汕头市潮南区中考一模英语试题

56．One possible version:

Dear Tony,

I’ve read your email carefully. I’m sorry to learn about your problems. Here is my advice. First, it’s important to cut down the time you spend on the mobile phone. I think an hour a day enough. Second, you’d better spend more time with your family and friends and communicate with them more. Third, you should take up some other hobbies to make your life more colorful. For example, you can read books or do some sports every day. Finally, don’t use the mobile phone before going to bed. It may cause a bad night’s sleep and make you sleepy the next day.

I hope my advice will be of some help and that you will have a better life.

Yours,

Li Hua

56．[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，格式为书信；

②时态：一般现在时；

③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示，使用正确的词汇和句型，注意行文逻辑和连贯性，并注意在适当的地方补充和发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图，宽慰对方并以“这是我的建议”引出下文；

第二步，结合实际情况，有针对性地提出至少两条建议，注意使用时态的正确性，可使用first, second, third等之类词语使得文章连贯；

第三步，结尾表达祝福，希望对方能够有更好的生活。

[亮点词汇]

①cut down 削减

②make your life more colorful让你的生活更加丰富多彩

③spend time with sb与某人度过时间

④take up培养

[高分句型]

①It’s important to cut down the time you spend on the mobile phone.（it作形式主语，time后面用定语从句修饰）

②I hope my advice will be of some help and that you will have a better life.（宾语从句）

2022年广东省汕头市潮南区中考一模英语试题

51. 参考范文：

I want to get the COVID-19 vaccine, too. Since there is no medicine that can be used to treat this disease, a vaccine will be a better choice for stopping the virus.

I think the COVID-19 vaccine can effectively prevent people from being infected by the virus. Vaccines are the key to ending epidemics and achieving herd immunity. Although the vaccine might have side effects, these are rare. I believe in the safety and effectiveness of China’s vaccines. I want to get one myself.

I hope that after we are vaccinated, the epidemic will end quickly and we can take off our masks as soon as possible.

【51题详解】

1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己对新冠疫苗的看法、是否接种及理由等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。

2021年广东省汕头市潮南区中考一模英语试题

81．例文：

As we all know, with the development of technology, there are more and more Apps of ordering food online in our daily life. More and more people are using these Apps to order food online because it saves time and is quite convenient for people. Also, our way of eating is changing rapidly.

Ordering food online does good to us. First of all, we can enjoy delicious food without leaving home. Secondly, there are so many kinds of food for us to choose online. However, every coin has two sides. Ordering food online also brings us a lot of problems. For example, the look of the food is not so good as that in the restaurants. What’s more, we may eat unclean or unhealthy food without knowing.

I hope our government can make some laws and pay more attention to the food safety problem and the use of such Apps. Only in this way can we make good use of this technology.

【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，题目要求以李华的身份根据所给内容写一篇关于对网络订餐的看法，主要描述网络订餐发展迅速的原因、网络订餐的优缺点以及对网络订餐的希望与看法。

2.写作指导：本文可以按照所给内容分为三部分：第一部分说明网络订餐迅速发展的原因；第二部分主要描述网络订餐的优缺点；第三部分主要写明自己对网络订餐的看法与希望。人称主要采用第一人称和第三人称，时态主要采用一般现在时。准确运用时态，内容要充实，句子要通顺。