读后续写---语言描写(说)课件-2023届高三英语写作专项
展开Step 1 Lead in
Kid: Hw much is the mvie ticket?Man: Ten dllars, kid.Kid: I nly have 5 dllars. Please let me in. I will see it nly with ne eye.
The kid ______, “Hw much is the mvie ticket?”The man ________________, “Ten dllars, kid.”The kid __________________, “I nly have 5 dllars. Please let me in. I will see it nly with ne eye.”
replied / answered
begged / said jkingly
Step 2 Knw ways t express “say” mre vividly
说道 ________ 回答道 ________ 问道 _______ 补充说 ______ 解释道 _______ 叹气地说 ______ 承认道 ______ 同意地说 ______ 大笑地说 ______ 尖叫道 _____________ 大声地吼道 ___________ 通知 _______ 承诺 ________ 宣布 _________ 安慰 ________ 道歉 ________ 陈述 _______低/耳语 _______ 低语/嘟囔 _______ 辩论 ______抱怨道 ________ 争论 _______ 说服 ________
shut/ yell / rar
scream/exclaim
Tip 1 Use different verbs
1) _____________ 激动地说 2) said _______ 轻柔地说 3) ____________ 冷静地说 4) replied_______________________ 不冷不热地说5) answered ________ 胆怯地说 6) _______________ 冷冷地回答
said excitedly
replied cldly
said calmly
half cldly, half kindly
Tip 2 Use verbs + adv
1) said Mr. Wilsn _____________________________ 一脸严肃地2) he said______________________ 用一种坚定地语调 3) He said __________ 他慌慌张张地说4) she said______________________ 用一种坚定地表情 5) Jenny laughed________________ 兴奋地笑了起来 6) said the stranger_________________ 冷笑着说7) She asked ____________________ 用一种梦幻般地语调说
in a dream-like vice
in a flurry
with a serius lk n his face
in a determined/firm vice
with a determined lk
with excitement
with a cld smile
Tip 3 Use verbs + prep phrases
1) said Newland, __________________ 心里暗自高兴 2) she begged him,______________________ 眼睛充满恐惧3) she said, _________________________ 眼睛在跳跃着/闪闪4) she murmured, ______________________ 又沮丧又担忧
upset and cncerned
her eyes dancing/shining
her eyes filled with fear
secretly delighted
Tip 4 Use verbs + 伴随状语(adj, ding, dne)
(改编自Unit Tw Mdule Three: Healthy Eating)
He smiled as he welcmed sme custmers warmly at the dr but the smile left his face when he saw Yng Hui walking in. She did nt lk happy and glared at him. “ May I ask what yu were ding in my restaurant the ther day? I thught yu were a new custmer and nw I knw that yu nly came t spy n me and my menu!” she said. “Please excuse me,” he calmly said, “I wanted t knw where all my custmers had gne last week. I fllwed ne f them and fund them in yur restaurant. I dn’ t want t upset yu, but I fund yur menu was limited. Why dn’t yu sit dwn and try a meal?” Yng Hui agreed t stay and sn they were bth enjying dumplings and breast f chicken cked with garlic. When they were served the ice cream, Yng Hui began t lk ill. “The fd is t fat and heavy,” she said, “I miss my vegetables and fruit.” Wang Peng was enjying a secnd plate f dumplings s he sighed. “Yes,” he said, “ and I wuld miss my dumplings and fatty prk when I was in yur restaurant. Dn't yu get tired quickly?” “Well, I d have t rest a lt,” said Yng Hui. “But dn't yu think it wuld be better if yu were a bit thinner? I’m sure yu’ d feel much healthier.”
shut explain cmment add admit
1. ---“Whatever are yu ding up here, Bill?” __________________________. ---“I’m trying t repair the bell,” answered Bill.2. ---“Have yu anything t declare?” he asked, _____________________. --- “ N,” I answered cnfidently.
asked the vicar in surprise
lking me in the eye
3. --- “Perfume, eh?” he __________________. “Yu shuld have declared that …….” --- “But it isn’t perfume,” I said. “It’s hair gel.” Then I __________________, “It’s a strange mixture I make myself.” As I expected, he did nt believe me. --- “Try it!” I ___________________.
asked sarcastically
added with a smile
said encuragingly
Step 3 Blank Filling
1. 习大大笑着说:“嫦娥五号的成功发射,表明了中国人民的智慧(wisdm)。Xi Dada _____________________, “The successful________ f Chang'e-5 shws the wisdm f Chinese peple”.
said with a smile
2. 这位球迷不断重复:“马拉多纳(Maradna)已经走了。再见了,球王!”The fan _______________,“Maradna has ____________ . Gdbye, King f the Ftball!”
kept repeating
passed away
3. 就在这时,一个小女孩尖叫起来,“那就是那个因纯真笑容而一夜走红的男孩丁真!” Just then a little girl __________, “That's the by Ding Zhen wh became famus vernight fr his_________ smile’’.
4. 几秒钟之内,他们就像老朋友一样开始聊了起来,谈到他们作为打工人(labrer)的快乐。Within secnds, they ______________________like ld friends, ______________their happiness as labrers.
began chatting/t chat
talking abut
5. 在直播节目中,李佳琦发出一声惊人的喊叫,“我的妈呀,答应我,买它!”In a live streaming, Li Jiaqi ________________________________, “Oh, my Gd! Prmise me t buy it”!
shuted with a surprised vice
6. 一些人问李子柒为何视频做得那么优秀, 她没有回应。 Sme peple asked Li Ziqi why she made such excellent vides, she _____________.
didn’t respnd
7. 很多同学都叹息说,他们没有时间去看 《八佰》这部电影。__________________ that they had n time t see the film The Eight Hundred.
Many students sighed
8. 女主持人来到台前,宣布钟南山获得了共和国勋章(medal),他的事迹受到全国人民的高度赞扬。
The hstess came t the stage, ____________that Zhng Nanshan wn the Medal f the Republic. His deeds were________ praised by the peple f the whle cuntry.
9. 他低声对我说,就是洋仔唱火了这首 《可可托海的牧羊人》。He ________________ , “It was Yangzai that made the sng The shepherds f Ccthai s ppular.”
whispered t me
10. 特朗普是如此生气,以致于他在办公室 大声吼道,“这下完蛋了!”S annyed_______________________ that he_____________ in the ffice, “It's ver”!
rared ludly
was Dnald Jhn Trump
11. 这位记者打断我的话,解释说,“封锁”(lckdwn) 这个词带给了人们太多的回忆。 The reprter ______________, _____________ that the wrd “Lckdwn” brught back t many memries t peple”.
interrupted me
12.一些小区居民总是在抱怨说,新冠病毒的传播给他们带来了太多的不便!Sme residents f the cmmunity ___________________ that the spread f Cvid-19 has brught them t much _____________ .
incnvenience
Step 4 Cnslidatin
Last week at a dinner party, the hstess asked me t sit next t Mrs. Rumbld. Mrs. Rumbld was a large, unsmiling lady in a tight black dress. She did nt even lk up when I tk my seat beside her. Her eyes were fcused n her plate and in a shrt time, she was busy eating. I tried t make a cnversatin. “Will yu be spending yur hlidays abrad this year?”①_____________________________②__________________________________ “ Yes. ” “Will yu be staying in England?”③____________________________ “N, ④”_____________________________⑤________________________, “ D yu like yur meal? ” “Yung man,” ⑥ ________________________________, “ if yu ate mre and talked less, we wuld bth enjy ur dinner.”
I asked plitely with a smile.
She answered withut lking up,
I cntinued in a gentle tne.
I inquired, lking int her eyes
She respnded in an annyed vice
she replied, shaking his head.
就在那时,一位年轻人来到警察局,宣称 他找到了凶手(murderer)。2. 保罗突然尖叫起来,“赶快!狼朝我们冲过 来了!”3. “噢,就这样了,但愿下次运气好些,” 她 叹息道。4. 这一次,儿子对父亲喊道:“你为什么一次 又一次问我同样的问题?”5. 当我冲向(dash)终点时,队友们都在为我 尖叫,欢呼。 6. “等一下,”一个虚弱而苍老的声音回答道。
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