专题09 书面表达-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（上海专用）

2023上海中考英语逆袭冲刺 名校模拟真题特快专递

第五期

专题09 书面表达

一、话题作文

1．（2023·上海虹口·统考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

下列是学校征集的模范学生的其中四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请举例说明。

注意：1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

3. 请选择一条填在横线上作为标题。

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【答案】例文

Be honest

As we know, honesty is very important. It is one of people’s good qualities. People need honesty and I hope everyone is honest and trusting. Last term, my best friend wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework. But I thought it was against honesty, so I told him not to copy my homework and I would help him next time.

Honesty is quite an important quality to a person. So I think as a model student, he must be honest.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；

③提示：本文首先要选择其中一条标准，并通过举例说明，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，引出话题，表示诚实是很重要的，并讲述为什么诚实很重要；

第二步，通过举例说明诚实的重要性；

第三步，书写结语。

[亮点词汇]

①one of……之一

②play computer games玩电脑游戏

[高分句型]

①People need honesty and I hope everyone is honest and trusting.(and连接的并列句)

②Last term, my best friend wanted to copy my homework because he played computer games until midnight and had no time to do his homework.(because引导原因状语从句)

二、材料作文

2．（2023·上海长宁·统考一模）Write at least 60 words about the topic “My suggestions for the new schoolmates” (请根据下面的提示，以“给新同学的建议”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)

度过了几年的初中学习生活，你终将面临毕业，而马上又会有新的同学即将进入你上过的初中。请根据你的亲身体验写封短信给这些新同学，给他们提一些学习生活方面的建议，如：学习方法、参与活动、业余生活、师生关系、课后作业等等。短信的开头2句已提供。

(注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他标志性的具体信息，否则不予评分。)

My suggestions for the new schoolmates

Dear fellow schoolmates,

Welcome to our school. As I’m leaving here for a senior high school, I’d like to write a few lines of suggestions for you…

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear fellow schoolmates,

Welcome to our school. As I’m leaving here for a senior high school, I’d like to write a few lines of suggestions for you.

In your school life, you should prepare well for each lesson. In class, you must listen to the teacher carefully. And you should always be friendly to your classmates and teachers. Besides, it’s important for you to do your homework on your own. In your daily life, you ought to keep a healthy diet. Also, it’s necessary for you to exercise a lot. You can take active part in all kinds of activities. And you should learn to make good use of your time.

I hope you will have a wonderful school life.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍对新同学各方面的建议；

第二步，结尾总结。

[亮点词汇]

①be friendly to对……友好

②all kinds of各种各样的

③prepare well for准备好

[高分句型]

Also, it’s necessary for you to exercise a lot.（It固定句型）

3．（2023·上海·九年级一模）三人行，必有我师焉。在我们的成长过程中，一定有这样一位“老师”，他们的某种品质让我们佩服，他们的某个行为让我们赞叹，或者他们说的某句话给予了我们力量……每个人都有长处，如果我们能善于发现他人的长处，借此来弥补自己的短处，那么我们将变得更加优秀。请按以下要求，写一篇短文。

内容须包含以下要点：

1.Who is your “teacher”?

2.What did he/she do?

3.What have you learned from him/her?

要求：

1.80~120词；

2.文中不出现真实的人名、校名。

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【答案】例文：

Just as the old saying goes, “When three are walking together, I am sure to find teachers among them.” My best friend Lucy is such a “teacher” who taught me the importance of planning ahead.

Last summer, Lucy and I made an appointment to go climbing after finishing our homework. Thinking I still had days to finish it, I kept putting off doing my homework. As a result, Lucy finished it ahead of time while I had too much homework to do. I had to break my promise and apologize to Lucy. Although she felt disappointed, she expressed her understanding and advised me to make a plan ahead. Instead of going climbing, she volunteered in a park at last.

I have learned if we plan ahead and carry out our plans accordingly, we still have plenty of time to get things done and do more meaningful things.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作提示已给出，要围绕写作提示进行写作，并可以适当发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开篇点题，使用提示中所给的谚语“三人行，必有我师焉”，交代写作目的；

第二步，介绍自己难忘的经历；

第三步，介绍从这次经历收获了什么。

[亮点词汇]

①make an appointment预约

②put off推迟

③break my promise违背诺言

④plenty of大量的

[高分句型]

①As a result, Lucy finished it ahead of time while I had too much homework to do.（while引导的比较状语从句）

②I have learned if we plan ahead and carry out our plans accordingly, we still have plenty of time to get things done and do more meaningful things.（if引导的条件状语从句）

4．（2023·上海·九年级一模）你的学校正在开展主题为“The most beautiful volunteer”的征文活动，请写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹。

文章内容可以包含以下几个问题：

1. Who is he/she?

2. What did he/she do? (What does he/she do?)

3. What can you learn from him/her?

注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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【答案】例文：

The Most Beautiful Volunteer

Li Hong is a polite girl. She is both kind and patient. She is a helpful volunteer. At school, she is always ready to help teachers and classmates. At weekends, she takes part in a lot of activities. She often does some cleaning in the street. Besides, she goes to the library to help carry books. Also, she looks after old people in the nursing home. We all think Li Hong is such an excellent girl that we should learn from her. We’d like to recommend her for The Most Beautiful Volunteer.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对这位志愿者的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表明写作意图。借用“写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹”来引出重点介绍的内容；

第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“品质、所做的事、对她的评价等”几个方面重点介绍这位志愿者的具体情况；

第三步，书写结语，表达“我们想推荐她成为最美志愿者”的愿望。

[亮点词汇]

①be ready to do sth.乐意做某事；

②take part in参加；

③look after照顾；

④nursing home养老院。

 [高分句型]

①We all think Li Lei is such an excellent boy that we should learn from him.（such...that引导的结果状语从句）

②Many volunteers come to the libraries to do the service after work.(动词不定式作目的状语)

5．（2023·上海·九年级一模）每个人在人生旅途中总会遇到过困难，遭受挫折。在你遇到的那些困难和挫折时，是否也有那么一个人曾经启发你、引领你笑着面对困境，努力战胜困难。请根据表格提示内容，选择其中一个对象（老师，同学，父母或者其他人）写出你们之间的故事。

要求：1. 包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；

2. 书写规范、工整，条理清晰；

3. 文中不得出现真实人名、地名、和校名等；

4. 词数：100左右。

首句供参考：Looking back to my past life, I’ll never forget …

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【答案】例文:

Looking back to my past life, I’ll never forget my friend Tom who always encourages me when I want to give up.

One day on a hot afternoon, we were going to have a PE test, which I was not good at it. When the test started, I was already out of energy. So I ran much more slowly than my classmates. Just at the moment, I heard Tom said, “Come on! You can do it. Never quit.” Suddenly I felt the warmth from the bottom of my heart. I started to try my best to follow him. At last, I passed the test.

Without Tom’s encouragement, I wouldn’t do it successfully. And I also learned that keep working hard and never quit. Doubtlessly, you’ll succeed.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、条理清晰，无语法使用错误。

[写作步骤]

第一步，开篇点题；

第二步，围绕要点进行介绍，具体包括遇到的困难、他/她是如何帮助你等方面；

第三步，阐述自己从这次经历中学习的东西。

[亮点词汇]

① look back to 回顾

② give up 放弃

③ be good at 擅长

④ try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事

[高分句型]

① I’ll never forget my friend Tom who always encourages me when I want to give up.（who引导的定语从句）

② we were going to have a PE test, which I was not good at it.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）

③ And I also learned that keep working hard and never quit.（that引导的宾语从句）

6．（2023·上海·统考一模）中国的茶是世界上最受欢迎的饮品之一，假如你叫李华，你的学校正在举行用英语讲好中国故事的比赛，请围绕茶的历史、种类、加工、饮茶、益处等方面，根据下面的思维导图，以“Chinese Tea Culture”为题，写一篇英语短文。

要求：

1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；

2. 短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要逐字翻译；

3. 词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Chinese Tea Culture

Good morning! Ladies and gentleman. My name is Li Hua. I am happy to share my topic with you here. Chinese tea is one of the most popular drinks in the world. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Come to enjoy Chinese tea culture. Maybe, you will like it.

【答案】例文

Chinese Tea Culture

Good morning! Ladies and gentleman. My name is Li Hua. I am happy to share my topic with you here. Chinese tea is one of the most popular drinks in the world.

Chinese people have liked drinking tea since ancient times. Tea has a history of over 4000 years since the Chinese began to grow and drink tea. There are many kinds of tea in China, such as green tea, black tea, oolong tea and so on. Longjing Tea is famous all over the world. People use tea pots or tea cups to drink tea. They are made of ceramics.

Drinking tea is good for health. It’s said that green tea can prevent cancer. When you are tired, a cup of tea can help you relax.

Come to enjoy Chinese tea culture. Maybe, you will like it.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇说明文；

②时态：本文采用“一般现在时”；

③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。

[写作步骤]

第一步，具体阐述茶的历史、种类、加工等；

第二步，阐述喝茶的好处；

第三步，表达希望。

[亮点词汇]

①many kinds of tea很多种茶

②and so on等等

③all over the world全世界

[高分句型]

①Drinking tea is good for health.（动名词作主语）

②It’s said that green tea can prevent cancer.（主语从句）

③When you are tired, a cup of tea can help you relax.（when引导时间状语从句）

7．（2022春·上海金山·九年级校考一模）Write at least 60 words on the topic “My views on online study” (以“在线学习之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)

随着在线学习模式的开启，你对在线学习的态度是什么？你在线上学习的过程中有什么经验可以向大家分享？请结合自己或他人在线学习的经历，谈谈你对这个话题的看法。

（ 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）

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【答案】例文：

My views on online study

This spring our new term doesn’t come on time because the epidemic broke out. We have to learn online at home. We have lessons from Monday to Friday. Classes begin at 7:30 and end at 4:00 every day. We study Math, English, Chinese, Physics and PE. During online learning, there are many problems. Some students think that this kind of learning method is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning. If they meet problems in learning, they can ask the teacher for help in time. But some other students think it’s not good because they can’t concentrate on learning and they can not study as carefully as in class. When their parents go to work, they feel lonely at home alone.

As for me, I like learning at home because I needn’t get up early. I have more sleep time. I won’t hurry to school. But I miss my school, my teachers and my classmate. I look forward to meeting them soon.

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：写作中需要回答额问题已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的要点。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍在家在线学习的经历；

第二步，分享同学在线学习的经验和看法；

第三步，表达自己对在线学习的看法。

[亮点词汇]

① stimulate激发

② concentrate on专心于……

[高分句型]

①Some students think that this kind of learning method is very fresh and can stimulate their interest in learning.（that引导的宾语从句）

②When their parents go to work, they feel lonely at home alone.（when引导的时间状语从句）

三、电子邮件

8．（2023·上海徐汇·统考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。

假设你是Joe，你校校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目（section）。

备选栏目如下：

·School sports

·Word games and crossword puzzles

·School clubs

·Book or Film reviews

·Poems by students

请给校报写封邮件，谈谈你的选择，并简要说明理由。

注意：

1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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【答案】例文

Dear Editor,

I’m glad to hear that you are selecting the most popular section. From the point of my view, my favorite one is the School sports. There are several reasons which can account for my opinion as below. First of all, every teenager has his own sports idol. In this column, we can get the latest sports information in time. Secondly, in this column, we can often get some sports suggestions, which will help students to arrange sports reasonably during school.

Yours,

Joe

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；

②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③提示：要求根据题目要求谈谈你喜欢的栏目及原因。不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。

[写作步骤]

第一步，首先介绍校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目的消息；

第二步，谈谈你最喜欢哪个栏目；

第三步，谈谈你选择这个栏目的理由。

[亮点词汇]

①From the point of my view在我看来

②First of all首先

③help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事

[高分句型]

①I’m glad to hear that you are selecting the most popular section.（宾语从句）

②There are several reasons which can account for my opinion as below.（定语从句）

四、看图作文

9．（2023·上海杨浦·统考一模）Last Friday, Mary went to the night market. Look at the pictures and write a story in at least 80 words on the topic Lucky Mary (上周五，Mary 去了夜市。请根据图片提示，以《幸运的玛丽》为题，写一篇不少于80个单词的短文)

写作提示及要求：

①下列词汇你在写作的过程中可能会使用到：dart n.飞镖，teddy bear n.玩具熊，game stand游戏摊位。

②关注图片传递的信息与图片之间的关联，适当增加对话或内心独白。

③写作内容中不得出现真实姓名和校名。

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【答案】例文：

Lucky Mary

Last Friday, Mary went to the night market. While she was walking aimlessly, she saw a game stand playing darts. The prize was a teddy bear. Mary liked this teddy bear very much. She spent ten yuan playing with darts. Playing this game was not too difficult for her. In the end, all three of her darts were hit. The game stand owner was surprised. Mary won the teddy bear. She went home with the teddy bear happily. How lucky she was!

【详解】[总体分析]

①题材：本文是一篇图画作文；

②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；

③提示：考生要根据三幅图片中传递的信息介绍玛利的经历。

[写作步骤]

第一步，介绍玛利去玩飞镖游戏的过程；

第二步，感慨玛利很幸运。

[亮点词汇]

①very much 非常

②spend money doing sth. 花钱做某事

[高分句型]

①While she was walking aimlessly, she saw a game stand playing darts.（while引导的时间状语从句）

②Playing this game was not too difficult for her.（动名词作主语）

③How lucky she was!（感叹句）

五、书信作文

10．（2022春·上海闵行·九年级上海市实验学校西校校考一模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)

假如你是李华，收到同班同学王涛的e-mail 来信，在信中他提到自从他家小区进入封控以来，“线上学习”和“足不出户”让他感到焦虑万分。没有老师面对面督促、鞭策、叮咛，他无法独立高效地进行线上自主学习；同时“足不出户”让他无法通过户外运动保持良好的精神状态。即将面临中考，他现在待在家里既担心学习又担心身体健康。请你回信给他，给他一些学习和生活上的建议。

（注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）

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【答案】例文：

Dear Wang Tao,

I’m sorry to hear some of your problems. During the COVID-19 pandemic, we often encounter problems, but we need to face them with confidence.

First of all, you should make a study schedule and study according to the plan. In this way, you can learn effectively and independently. Second, you should do some proper exercises at home, such as push-ups, cordless jumping rope and so on. Finally, you should learn to relax yourself and keep a good mood.

Yours,

Li Hua

【详解】[总体分析]

① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；

② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；

③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。

[写作步骤]

第一步，表达自己对于对方问题的同情；

第二步，具体给出对方一些学习和生活上的建议。

[亮点词汇]

①need to do sth需要做某事

②first of all首先

③in this way以这种方式

[高分句型]

During the COVID-19 pandemic, we often encounter problems, but we need to face them with confidence.（but连接的并列句）