中考英语二轮复习书面表达高分作文攻略01 写人 素材储备与写作指导 (含答案)

01 写人 素材储备与写作指导

素材储备

记叙文体裁解读

记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容的文章，通常包括六个要索:时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果，写作时各要素要交代清楚，但并不要求全部具备。写记叙类文章时除了六个要素外，还要注意以下几点:

1记叙方式。 通常有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种。顺叙是英语记叙文最常用的一 种记叙方式，即按照事件发展的时间先后顺序来叙述。

2.人称。一般用第一人称和第三人称进行写作。第一人称是从“参与者”亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历开始叙述;第三人称是以“观察者”的身份进行记叙，通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事呈现在读者面前。

3.时态。记叙文用于记叙过去发生的事件或经历，因此常用一般过去时， 还可根据上下文辅以其他时态。

人物描写篇

人物描写类的作文， 大多围绕亲情、友情、师生情、榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题展开，或叙事抒怀，或表明个人对人物所持的情感。此类文章以记叙文居多，也可夹叙夹议。来出在中学生英语课程标准中，初中阶段的内容与要求中所提到的话题，比如famous people(名人)、interests and hobbies (兴趣和爱好)等，会涉及到人物描写。

人物描写的文章，对人物各方面的描写是必不可少的:外貌描写、语言描写、神态描写、动作描写、心理描写等等，根据文章的需要，确定写哪些，哪些详写，哪些略写。写人离不开写事，因为人物的特点总是在具体的事例中表现出来的。文章时态要根据事情发生的频率而定:经常性的行为多用一般现在时， 一次性的行为多用一般过去时，当然，其他时态也可能会涉及。

人物描写写法点拨

在写人的时候，我们可以通过以下三部分来写作:

1.简单介绍人物的概况。般包括姓名 、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等。写作时使用的语青必须符合英语表达习惯如姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等。

2从多方面对人物进行刻面。为了使人物的形象丰满起来，给读者留下深刻印象，我们可以对人物的外貌、神态、动作等进行描写，并选取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性。在具体写作时，要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法。

3.对人物进行评价。在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受，无论是喜欢还是讨厌，是称赞还是批评，都要明确地表达出来。

必备词汇

➊家庭背景

live in...居住在....                  be born in..出生......

spent one' s childhood in... ...过童年   live a happy busy life过着幸福/忙碌的生活

❷外貌特征

tall高的                         short矮的

slim苗条的                      thin瘦的

overweight超重的                 fat胖的

ugly丑的                         beard胡须

beautiful漂亮的                   pretty漂亮的

handsome帅气的                  strong强壮的

round face圆脸                    broad face宽脸

straight hair直发                  curly hair卷发

short/long hair短/长发             long nose高鼻梁

big/bright eyes大的1明亮的眼睛   good-looking好看的

ordinary-looking长相普通的      wear glasses戴眼镜

❸教育背景

graduate from..毕业于....         get a... degree得到...学位

major n... .....为专业            study hard at...努力学.....

get further education深造        study abroad出国留学

❹品质个性

kind和蔼的                   determined坚决的

open-minded思想开明的        reliable可靠的

humorous幽默的              clever/smart聪明的

gentle温柔的                 considerate体贴的

active/optimistic积极的        easy-going随和的

attractive有魅力的            charming有魅力的;迷人的

patient耐心的                hard-working努力的

friendly友好的              warm-hearted热心的

generous慷慨的             responsible有责任心的

sensible明智的            sociable好交际的

strict严厉的               honest诚实的

selfish自私的                       shy害羞的

impatient没有耐心的                rude粗鲁的

bad-tempered坏脾气的              careless 粗心的

❽兴趣爱好

be good at... 擅....                  do well n...擅长.

be fond of...喜.....                  enjoy doing sth.喜欢做菜事

be crazy about.. .对....着谜          have a git for. ....天赋

be interested in... .对....感兴趣       be in the lead处于领先地位

❻评价

knowledgeable知识渊博的         famous著名的

well-known知名的               think highly o... .对....评价很高

be remembered as...被后人誉.为....   be regarded as..被当......

be respected by..受....尊微          devote one's lifetime to.倾注毕生精力

必备句型

➊介绍人物的基本情况

(1) Wang Nan, a world champion in ping-pong, is.. tall with the weight of..王楠，乒乓球世界冠军，.高.... 体重....

(2)  My mother is a rural woman, who..我的母亲是一个农村妇女，她...

.(3) is young beautiful lady. ..是位年轻漂亮的女士。

(4) If you ask me who ....1 will tell you it is. ..at once.

如果你问谁是.....我会马上告诉......

(5)      ...was from a worker / teacher's family ..生于一个工人/教师家庭。

(6)      He/She was born on..(time) in ...(place) 他/地出生在......(时间）......(地点）。

❷

进一步刻画人物的形象

(1) Her eyes are very big/bright.她的眼睛很大/很明亮。

(2) He often wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.

他经常穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。

( 3) He had very little school education, but he knows that...

他没怎么上过学，但是他知道

( 4) His/Her family was so poor/ rich that..

他/她的家庭是如此的贫穷/富裕以至于....

(5) He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.

他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。

(6) When at... he..当..... ....

(7) I was about to...when...我正要....突然......

（8）He/She worked hard so as to improve.... 他/她为了提高.... 工作1学习很努力。

(9) His/Her father was so strict with him/her that..

他/她的父亲对他/她是如此的严厉以至.....

❸对人物的看法、 感受

( 1 ) He deserves/is worthy of our respect.他值得我们尊重。

(2 ) Without her help, I will never... 如果没有她的帮助，我永远都无法.....

(3) I will respect and love.... forever. 我将会永远尊敬和爱戴.....

( 4 ) She is honest and always ready to help others.她为人诚实，并且乐于助人。(5) She has set an example for...她给....树立了榜样。

( 6 ) Now I understand my father's love for me. I will never forget my father.

现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。

写作示例指导

题目：

每个人心目中都有自己最喜欢的一位明星，你可能喜欢他(她)的歌声，也可能喜欢他(她)英俊或甜美的外表。请以"My Favorite Star”为题，说说你最喜欢的明星，不得少于80词。

要求:

1.       描述他(她)的外貌和个性特征。

2. 你为什么特别喜欢他(她)?注意:内容可以适当扩充。

思路导航

第➊步:例文审题题目要求说说你最喜欢的明星，故主体人称应为第三人称“he" 或主体人称

"she"。

主体时态

由于文章主要介绍最喜欢的明星的一般情况， 放主体时态用般现在时。题目要求中包含的要点主要为三点，故可以将文章分为三部分进行损写:

写作贴士

要点1要求写的是外貌和个性特征两方面内容，注意不要遗漏。

第❷步:列提纲

(1)简单介绍明星的基本概况，如外貌等;

(2)详细描写明星的个性特征;

(3)你最喜欢他(她)的原因。

第❸步:参考词句

(1) singer; be born on; beautiful...

（2）voice; attract; full of  energy and confidence stage: charity: feel proud of

(3) favorite; excellent..

第❹步:连句成篇

My Favorite Star

My favorite star is a singer called Sun Yanzi, who is well received by many people from all over the word. She was born on July, 23rd, 1978. She is 162 cm high with a beautiful face.

Sun Yanzi has a great voice. And the songs she sings can always attract me. Besides, she can be full of energy and confidence all the time, whether on the stage or in her real life. What she impresses me most is that she often takes part in the charity work. We all think highly of what she has done to help people in need. She helps poor children go to school and the blind see the world again.This is why I choose her as my favorite star. I feel very proud of her.

This is my favorite star, an excellent singer.

参考译文

我最喜欢的明星

我最喜欢的明星是一个叫孙燕姿的歌手，她受到全世界很多人的热爱。她出生于1978年7月23日。她身高162cm,有着漂亮的脸蛋。

孙燕姿的声音很好听。她唱的歌总能吸引我。除此以外，不管是在舞台上，还是在现实生活中，她总是充满能量和自信。最让我印象深刻的是，她经常做慈善活动。我们都对她帮助生活困难的人这一一行为评价很高。 她帮助穷苦孩子上学，帮助盲人重见光明。这也是我法她作为我最喜爱的明星的原因。我为她感到很自豪。

这就是我最喜欢的明星，一位卓越的歌手。

相关话题满分作文必背

Father

Father is nostalgic. He always is. Nothing annoys him more than the quick changes in life: streets getting crowded day by day, hideous new buildings of glass and steel, cheats, dishonesty and rumor that teem the social column of newspapers, and odd shaped pieces of modern art.

Father is forever talking about the past, the good old days of his childhood, when rain water was fit for drink, stars were clear in the night sky. hare and squirrels darted across empty streets and people lived upright upon their honor. These are his favorite topics over dinner table and he never gets tired of get tired of them. Things were so much better," he would begin with a sign,and we (Mother and I) know that this marks the prelude to a two hours' monologue. Yet I like the passionate obstinacy he carries,mixed with wistfulness and regret.

I left my family when I went to college. Father keeps things what they were after I left; he even does not bother to rearrange my bookshelf. Every time I return, I am greeted with that familiar smell of home on the doorsteps, the very smell that never seem to have changed since the earliest days of my remembrance, and my eyes go wet immediately .To me, home is where Father is Nothing ever changes there, so it i the safest place in the world (Adapted from Father by Pierre Leloup)

赏析:

开篇前两句话开门见山地点明了人物描写的主题:父亲是一- 个怀旧的人。从那些容易让父亲生气的社会变化，到父亲爱回忆的过去美好时光，最后到我远离家乡上大学，但父亲一直把我的房间维持原状，无- 不表现出父亲是一一个非常怀旧的人。全文句型变化多样，语言地道，比如节选第一段中用了 很多并列结构，把生活中改变的东西一样样列了出来: streets getting crowded day by day, hideous new buildings of glass and steel, cheats,dishonesty and rumor that teem the social column of newspapers, and odd shaped pieces of modern art.