【江苏专版】2022-2023学年中考英语二模汇编-作文训练Ⅰ

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【江苏专版】2022-2023学年中考英语二模汇编
作文训练Ⅰ
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________

一、材料作文
1．（2022·江苏常州·校考二模）2022北京冬奥会，谷爱凌因超人的运动天赋、乐观的个性和不断挑战自我的形象，成功收获了众多粉丝的喜爱。谷爱凌曾直言，生命里最高兴的东西是通过努力得到的。“谁是真正的偶像”话题被再度热议。为此，21世纪英文报组织“The Person I Admire Most”征文，请你选取以下其中一个材料写一篇新闻投稿。
Player! Student
Scientist/ doctor
Gu Ailin (生于 2003.9.3)
Tu Youyou (生于1930. 12.30)
兴趣广泛，如骑马、钢琴、滑雪等；
对植物利医药感兴趣，喜欢研究；
三岁学习滑雪并很快展现出天赋；
北京大学，努力学习，取得了优良的成绩；
2022年北京冬奥会获得两枚金牌；将于2022年秋季进入斯坦福大学学习；
研究青蒿素，拯救上百万生命；中国首位诺贝尔医学奖获得者；
品质：1.自信
2. ……
3. ……
品质：1.努力：亲自品尝测试药
2.耐心：从不抱怨工作的辛苦
3. ……
参考词汇：
斯坦福大学：Stanford University； 青蒿：sweet wormwood；青蒿素：artemisinin；诺贝尔医学奖：Nobel Prize in Medicine
要求：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3.词数不少于100。
The Person I Admire Most
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2．（2022·江苏扬州·校考二模）每个人心中都有一个自己的榜样，他们无时无刻不在激励着我们克服困难，勇往直前。请你 以“My role model”为题，根据以下提示问题谈一谈你心目中的榜样。
提示词语：role model
提示问题：
1. Who is your role model?
2. What is your role model like?
3. Why is he/she your role model?
4. What can you learn from him/her?
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 词数100词左右；
3. 不得使用真实姓名，校名和地名。
My Role Model
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3．（2022·江苏无锡·校考二模）由贾玲导演及主演的电影《你好，李焕英》是一部充满温情的电影，激发了观影者对身边人感情的共鸣。你观影之后感触颇多，发现许多感恩的人和事，要就此写一份日志。
感恩父母
悉心照顾、不辞辛劳……
感恩老师
耐心教导、善于激励……
感恩同学
合作分享、互相帮助、共同进步
感想和打算
我很幸运……（请结合自身实际，但不得提及自己的姓名相关信息）
要求：
1.上面的提示供参考，可适当发挥，要使语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚；
2.段落开头已给出，不计入总词数；要求写100个词左右。
Today I watched a film called Hi, Mom. It tells a story of Jia and her mother showing her longing and regret at failing to see her mother before she died. I was touched by its raw emotion.
I have become a 15-year-old middle school student. During the past few years, I have gained a lot and I don’t want to be a person full of regret like Jia in the film.
So first, I should say thanks to my dear parents. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．（2022·江苏宿迁·校考二模）随着“双减”政策的实施，中学生的书面作业总量减少了，自由支配的时间增多了。为此，某英文杂志社开展以“My colorful school life”为题的征文活动。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文参赛。
课    堂
老师提出问题，学生相互讨论；学会与他人合作，从而找出解决问题的方法……
课    后
丰富多彩的课外活动，如……
个人感受
……(至少两点）
要求：
1.必须包含表格中所有信息，并适当发挥。
2.文章90词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
3.不得出现真实姓名、校名等。
My colourful school life
My school life is becoming more and more colourful
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5．（2022·江苏连云港·校考二模）“双减”政策落实以后，同学们的课余生活有了很大变化。某英文网站正在举办征文活动，请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇“Our wonderful spare time”为题的短文投稿。
（1）过去：作业多，考试难，压力大。
（2）现在：有更多时间，帮助父母表达爱心，亲近自然放松自己……（另举两个活动及益处）
（3）评价或感受：……至少两条。
注意：
1．短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2．词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Our wonderful spare time
On July 24, 2021, the Double Reduction policy came out. Since then, our life has changed a lot and been greatly improved. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2022·江苏盐城·校考二模）你校举办了“中学生安全教育日”英语征文活动，请根据所给提示，以“Live a Safe Life”为题，写一篇短文参赛。

注意事项：1.词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
Live a safe life
As middle school students, we should always keep safety in mind. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2022·江苏徐州·统考二模）“双减”工作之一是减轻学生过重的作业负担，控制中小学生的书面作业总量，合理布置不同类型的作业。为此，某英文杂志社正在开展以“My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文，讲述自身经历，提出合理建议。
内容包括：
1.做过的最有创意的英语作业(内容、收获……);
2. 1-2条有创意的英语作业建议(形式、理由……);

要求：
1. 90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等。
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.
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8．（2022·江苏扬州·统考二模）假设你是李华，你们班英语老师为了提升你们的英语学习能力，丰富了作业的形式。你的外国好友Andrew对此很感兴趣，请你根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件，介绍以下作业形式及意图，并谈谈你认为能提高英语能力的作业形式，并说明理由。
Forms of homework
Purposes
do a book report
develop reading abilities
role play a conversation
improve speaking skills
draw a mind map of vocabulary
memorize words and expressions easily
(Your idea)
...
注意：
（1）短文必须包含表格中的所有信息，并适当发挥。
（2）短文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
（3）词数：80-100。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Andrew
From: Li Hua
Hi, Andrew,
How’s it going?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
9．（2022·江苏徐州·校考二模）三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，崭新的高中生活即将到来，回顾过去，你一定有许多令你开心、难忘或者难过的事情，请你以Something Made Me ________ 为题，写一篇80字左右的英语短文。要点要包含叙述这件事情及介绍自己的感受和学到了什么，未来将要怎么做。
要求：
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2.内容连贯，条理清晰；
3.标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Something Made Me ________
Hello, everyone! How time flies! I want to share something in my life.
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10．（2022·江苏连云港·统考二模）假如你是李华，你班最近上了一节主题班会课，同学们围绕“线上学习的优缺点”展开了热烈讨论。请根据下面表格中的要点提示，写一篇英语短文。
优点（Advantages）
缺点（Disadvantages）
1．提供各种线上课程，开启新世界；2．节省时间，帮助学习新技能；
1. 一些人放弃休息时间玩游戏，对眼睛有害；2. 一些人学习不认真，导致在学业上落后于别人；
1．你的观点：……2．理由：……（不少于1条）
注意：
1．文章必须包括所给要点提示，并适当补充信息；
2．语句通顺，行文连贯；词数90个左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3．不得提及考生所在学校及自己姓名等信息。
Our class discussed about whether it’s good for students to study online at home. Here are two different groups of ideas.
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11．（2022·江苏宿迁·统考二模）中国女足在亚洲杯决赛上克服一切困难，再次获得金牌。在我们的成长过程中，我们也会遇到各种各样的困难，如学习、运动和人际关系等方面。假如你是九年级学生 Simon，请你根据以下图片信息，写一篇英语短文，谈谈这三个方面的困难并给出解决方法。

注意：1.词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Grade 9 students are facing many problems in our daily lives. We have a lot of homework everyday. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12．（2022·江苏泰州·统考二模）格言的魅力往往体现在一言可以胜九鼎，一语可以化危机。它简洁凝练，寓意深广。它是人类机智的精华，众人汇成的睿智。请在下列格言中选择一句自己最爱的格言并根据要求写一篇英语短文。
1.No pain, no gain.2.The early bird catches the worm.
3.A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Tips:
*What’s your understanding of the motto?
*Why do you like it best?
*Who or what comes to your mind first when you read the motto? Why?
*How does the motto influence you?
注意：
1.语意连贯，层次清楚，书写规范。
2.表达中切勿提及真实姓名和校名。
3.内容要涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥。
4.词数100词左右。
My favourite motto
My favourite motto is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

二、电子邮件
13．（2022·江苏无锡·校考二模）假设你是无锡市第五中学的张颖，你的英国笔友珍妮想了解中国学生课外阅读的情况。请根据下图提示，给她回一封电子邮件。

注意事项：
1. 回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，并展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
2. 所给斜体字提示为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，回复邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
4. 回复的邮件中不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ying

三、看图作文
14．（2022·江苏常州·校考二模）With “Double Reduction” policy(双减政策), students have more free time at weekends. So what do they do at weekends? You have done a survey on Weekend Activities in Sunshine Middle School. Please write an English report according to the table below, you need to introduce the information in the survey and give at least two pinions of your own.

注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范
3. 词数不少于100，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Weekend Activities Report
Since the “Double Reduction(双减)” policy was launched, students now have more free time on weekends. So I did a survey about how the students spend their weekends in Sunshine Middle School.
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四、书信作文
15．（2022·江苏常州·校考二模）今年，响应党中央和政府号召，“双减”政策正式施行，许多学校也根据自己的实际情况增加了课后服务。假如你是Sam，你的英国朋友Tom对此很感兴趣，写信来询问有关的情况，请你根据信的内容，给Tom写一封英文回信，谈谈你的认识和建议。
Dear Sam,
I have heard that in your city the “double reduction” policy (政策) has been carried out. After school is over, students can choose to stay there to take part in different activities. It’s really interesting and I want to know more about it. What kind of activities are provided? How do you feel about the activities? Do you have any further suggestions?
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Tom
注意：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范;
3. 词数不少于100。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
In July, China introduced the double reduction policy, since when after-school activities and clubs have been provided by different schools.
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Yours,
Sam
16．（2022·江苏扬州·校考二模）假如你是心理老师Mrs. Wang，九（2）班同学给你发了一封求助邮件，请你根据邮件内容，用英语给Peter回一封电子邮件，帮助他分析情况并提出合理建议。
Dear Mrs. Wang,     I’m Peter from Class Two, Grade Nine. I have met a problem, being shorter than other students in my class. And they often play jokes on me. I’m feeling angry and often want to fight with them. Could you help me? Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Peter
要求：
1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
3.词数在100词左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数；
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I hope I can help you.
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Best wishes,
Mrs. Wang
17．（2022·江苏常州·校考二模）近年来，国家越来越重视中小学生的劳动教育，要求各学校对学生进行热爱劳动、热爱劳动人民的教育。假如你是Sigmund，请阅读初三学生林涛的求助信，根据来信内容用英文写一封回信，帮助解决问题。
Dear Sigmund,I hear that our government now pays much attention to education on the hard-working spirit among students in China. Students should get basic working ability for their life and their own development.
However, as a Grade Nine student, I spend so much time on my study that I seldom do any housework at home or voluntary work in society.    
I want to be an excellent student to develop the hard-working spirit. Can you tell me what I can do both in and out of the school?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lin Tao
注意事项：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
3. 词数不少于100，开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：education on the hard-working spirit 劳动教育
Dear Lin Tao,
I’m glad that you work so hard in your study. However, as a student, we should also learn to do something meaningful for our school, family and our country.
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五、讲稿
18．（2022·江苏淮安·校考二模）初中三年，或兴奋，或失落，一切过往，皆为序章。毕业之际，学校将举办以“Sharing”为主题的演讲活动。请根据下面的要点提示，与一篇演讲稿：
1.分享心情：高兴、激动、不舍；
2.分享心得：在学习、人际交往、克服困难方面的心得；
3.分享未来：暑假安排、未来目标。
注意:
1、文中不能出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息；
2、词数在80-100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。
Sharing
Good morning, my dear teachers and friends! It is my great honor to make a speech here. I will graduate from my school soon.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!

参考答案：
1．例文
The Person I Admire Most
The person I admire most is Gu Ailing. She is a player, also a student.
Gu Ailing was born on September 3, 2003. She is 1.75 meters tall. She has many hobbies, such as horse riding, piano, skiing and so on. She studied skiing at the age of three and soon showed her talent. On the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games, she won gold medals and one silver medal. She will enter Stanford University in the fall of 2022.
She is self-confidence, brave self- conscious and self disciplined. I think Gu Ailing’ achievement and talent are only part of it. Most of them are hard training and self disciplined. Ambition and love are the wings of Gu Ailing’s success.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，叙述我心中的偶像；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时，叙述经历时用一般过去时，叙述将于2022年秋季进入斯坦福大学学习使用一般将来时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说出心中的偶像是谁；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从出生、兴趣、经历等方面来叙述心中的偶像。
第三步，书写总结。描写她的品质和值得学习的地方，结束全文。
[亮点词汇]
① be born on/in生于
② and so on等等，及诸如此类
③ at the age of three三岁时
④ the wings of success成功的翅膀
[高分句型]
① The Person I Admire Most is Gu Ailing.（定语从句）
②I think Gu Ailing’ achievement and talent are only part of it.（宾语从句）
2．例文：
                                                                                  My Role Model
    Perhaps everyone has a role model in his heart that encourages him to overcome difficulties and keep going bravely. Me too. My role model is my deskmate.
     My deskmate’s name is Rose. She is a beautiful and excellent girl. She always gets the best grades in our grade. I admire her because she is clever and hard-working. Also, she is helpful and kind. She always explains questions to me and other classmates. She is also talented. She can play the piano and sing very well. She is even good at playing volleyball and swimming.
     How great my deskmate is! I will work harder and help others more as she does. I will take up a new hobby like playing the piano or volleyball. I believe I will be better.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明每个人都有自己的榜样，并阐明自己的榜样是谁；
第二步，具体阐述榜样的特点和是自己榜样的原因；
第三步，书写结语，说明自己在榜样身上学到的东西，并表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①explain sth. to sb.向某人解释某事
②play the piano弹钢琴
③be good at擅长于
④take up开始从事
[高分句型]
①Perhaps everyone has a role model in his heart that encourages him to overcome difficulties and keep going bravely. (that引导的定语从句)
② She always gets the best grades in our grade. (运用形容词的最高级)
3．参考例文
Today I watched a film called Hi, Mom. It tells a story of Jia and her mother showing her longing and regret at failing to see her mother before she died. I was touched by its raw emotion.
I have become a 15-year-old middle school student. During the past few years, I have gained a lot and I don’t want to be a person full of regret like Jia in the film.
So first, I should say thanks to my dear parents. They take care of me without any complaint. They work hard to support the whole family. They are always trying their best to make me live a better life.
Second, I’m thankful to all my teachers for their great help and support. They are patient enough to spend lots of time explaining problems to me. Besides, they always encourage me when I am in trouble. It’s selfless of them to devote their time to education.
Finally, I also feel very grateful to my classmates. We work together and share things with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. As a result, we have made great progress.
I think I am lucky to have so much love and care. I will never forget these happy days together. I am going to do well in the future so that they can be proud of me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日志，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，首先表达要感谢父母，接着按照要点阐述父母如何照顾和关爱我们；其次表达感谢师长，结合具体事例阐述老师们的耐心教导和鼓励；接着再表达对同学的感谢，可结合具体事例阐述同学间的互帮互助、共同成长；
第三步，抒发自己的感情及打算并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①take care of me without any complaint毫无怨言地照顾我
②be thankful to sb for sth因某事感激某人
③be in trouble遇到困难
④devote one’s time to sth把某人的时间奉献在某事上
[高分句型]
①Besides, they always encourage me when I am in trouble.（when引导时间状语从句）
②It’s selfless of them to devote their time to education.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
③I am going to do well in the future so that they can be proud of me.（so that引导目的状语从句）
4．例文
My colourful school life
My school life is becoming more and more colourful.
In class, our teachers always give us enough time to discuss questions with each other. We can speak, listen, and think. In this way, we have learned how to work with others and find out the ways to solve problems. So our learning abilities have improved.
After class, we have different kinds of activities, such as Buddy Club and English Corner. We can choose one and join it to have fun.
It is really good to have such colourful school life. I’m sure I’ll learn more, and enjoy more in my school life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要描述双减后多彩的校园生活。在写作时应承接短文开头，可适当增加细节
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；叙述校园生活要细致，根据要点适当发挥想象，适当运用连词和固定句型，叙述要完整，注意表达的顺序，保证条理清晰、语言通顺，确保单词拼写、语法和标点使用正确。
5．参考范文
Our wonderful spare time
On July 24, 2021, the Double Reduction policy came out. Since then, our life has changed a lot and been greatly improved. Next let me talk about it. I used to have a lot of homework every day. So I had to stay up late at night. In the past, I found it difficult to take many exams. I was under great pressure to study. I didn’t have time for other sports. Now everything is better. I have little homework every day, so I can finish it at school. In addition, I don’t have to get up so early, so I can get enough sleep every night.
In my spare time, I can do what I like. I have more rest time. I help my parents do housework to express my love. I have more time to get close to nature and relax myself. I join the art club to learn my favorite piano. This helps to cultivate my hobbies. I often play basketball and football with my friends. I not only exercise now, but also have a good relationship with my classmates. Now I’m very happy. I think “double reduction” policy is very good, which reduces the burden on our students and makes our school life more wonderful.
【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍“双减”政策带来的一些变化，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
6．范文：
Live a safe life
As middle school students, we should always keep safety in mind. Here are some of my suggestions.
Firstly, we should eat healthy food such as fruit and vegetables every day. It’s wise to stay away from too cold food in summer.
Secondly, it’s necessary to follow traffic rules when crossing the road. Don’t ride side by side. It’s wrong to touch mobiles on the way.
Besides, be careful when we make friends online. We’d better not tell others our telephone number, address or passwords, especially strangers.
Finally, we ought not to run after each other at school. Moreover, when having sports, remember to protect ourselves from danger.
In a word, safety must come first.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“Live a Safe Life”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给出安全的生活的建议”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“饮食、道路安全、交友，校园安全”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语，安全必须是第一位的。
[亮点词汇]
①keep...in mind记住
②stay away from远离
③had better最好
④run after追赶
[高分句型]
①Secondly, it’s necessary to follow traffic rules when crossing the road.（It固定句型）
②Besides, be careful when we make friends online.（when引导的时间状语从句）
7．范文：
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework can make us more interested in English. Last winter vacation, our teacher asked us to design a poster about the Spring Festival. That was my favourite homework. It took me about three hours to finish it. It not only helped me go over the knowledge we’ve learned, but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to write book reviews. It can help us to have a better understanding of the book. Besides, we can do some surveys on our hobbies and write reports. In this way, our English will develop quickly.
I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，在写作时应承接短文开头，根据汉语提示的内容，讲述自己做过的最有创意的一次英语作业，包括作业内容和自己的收获；接下来对有创意的英语作业提出自己的几点建议。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来叙述内容，时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。在叙述内容时，力求语句通顺，语法正确，保证提示内容完整，条理清晰，行文连贯。
8．例文
Hi, Andrew,
How is it going? I’m writing to tell you we have homework in different forms to improve our English.
In order to develop reading abilities, we are required to do a book report every week. It makes us read more books. As we know, reading makes a full man. Moreover, we role play the conversations, it’s the best way to improve English speaking skills. Have you ever been troubled by memorizing new words? That won’t be a problem for me now. Our teacher comes up with a new form to remember words and expressions by drawing a mind map of vocabulary.
As for me, dubbing is another interesting form which provides us with more chances to practice English pronunciation. What do you think of our homework forms? Looking forward to your reply.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求写一封电子邮件，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导，写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。作文可以分为三段，第一段进行问候以及介绍写邮件的目的；第二段根据提示介绍作业形式及意图；第三段简述你认为能提高英语能力的作业形式以及理由，并进行收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
9．例文
Something Made Me Happy
Hello, everyone! How time flies! I want to share something in my life.
Something that made me happy was winning the piano competition. It was held on September 20th in City Music Hall. On that day I saw many people there. I was so nervous. I was worried if I would make mistakes during my performance. Then I remembered what my father told me —-always believe in yourself; you are the best. His words made me feel much better. When it was my turn to play, I walked up to the piano with confidence and performed well. You wouldn’t believe how much I wanted to know the result. When I learned I won the first prize, I hugged my parents in excitement.
This experience taught me that it’s very important to have confidence in yourself.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是描述初中生活中发生的一件让你开心或难过的事情，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，以第一人称为主。首先把题目补充完整；第一段已给出；第二段主要描述让自己开心的事情；最后一段描述自己从中学到了什么。介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。
10．例文
Our class discussed whether it’s good for students to study online at home. Here are two different groups of ideas about it.
Some students think it provides different kinds of online courses and opens a new world to them. It also saves time and helps them learn new skills. However, other students hold that its disadvantages are also quite clear. For example, some students give up their spare time to play computer games, which harms their eyes, and others don’t study hard and have fallen behind others in their schoolwork.
I think studying online is a good choice, because we are sure to make great process in this new way of learning if we try to keep a balance between online study and playing.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态主要为一般现在时；
③提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并可以在内容提示的基础上适当发挥，使文章内容更加丰满。
[写作步骤]
第一步：陈述线上学习的优点；
第二步：陈述线上学习的缺点；
第三步：阐述自己的观点，并给出适当的理由。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同种类的
②fall behind 落后于
③make great process 取得巨大的进步
[高分句型]
①Some students think it provides different kinds of online courses and opens a new world to them.（宾语从句）
②However, other students hold that its disadvantages are also quite clear.（运用转折连词）
③For example, some students give up their spare time to play computer games.（动词不定式作目的状语）
11．例文
Grade 9 students are facing many problems in our daily lives. We have a lot of homework every day. Sometimes we fail in the exam. We can make a list of the homework and plan the day carefully. We should pay attention to listening to the teacher carefully in class and work hard.
Some students don’t like sports. Some of them are too lazy to do sports. Some of them are not good at it. If you have this problem, we should change our mind. Sport is good for our health. What’s more, exercise can make us feel confident. We can choose the sport we like.
Some students have few friends. They can not get along well with others. I think we should be friendly to others. Then we can share our happiness and sadness with our friends. And we will have a lot of close friends.
I hope everyone can grow happily in our lives.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示信息，从学习、运动和人际关系三个方面谈谈解决方法，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学习方面的困难；
第二步，介绍运动方面的问题；
第三步，介绍人际关系方面的问题；
第四步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①fail in the exam考试不及格
②make a list列清单
③pay attention to注意
④get along well with与某人相处得很好
[高分句型]
①If you have this problem, we should change our mind. （if引导的条件状语从句）
②I hope everyone can grow happily in our lives.（省略that的宾语从句）
12．例文：
My favourite motto
My favourite motto is “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
I think when you succeed, you may share with friends. But when you fail, the friends who are always around you must be true friends.
Whenever I see this motto, I think of my friend Bob. Once I failed my English exam, I sat alone in the corner crying. Bob saw my unhappiness here. He took the initiative to help me learn English during my break. After a period of study, my English score has finally improved. From this thing, I really understand this motto. In the future, when my friends are in trouble, I will help them in time.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求从所给格言中三选一并结合提示要点写一篇100词左右的英语短文，内容包括：你对所选格言的理解、喜欢的原因、读到这句格言首先想到的人或事以及原因；所选格言对你的影响。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一和第三人称进行写作，时态主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。
13．例文
Dear Jenny,
Thank you for your email. I would like to tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. In fact, most students in our school haven’t realized the importance of extra-curricular reading. Therefore, the time devoted to reading is limited. Some students prefer comic books to classic reading materials. Here are the reasons. Some students haven’t formed a good habit of reading. Others have so little interest in reading that they would rather spend time on videos or computer games. Some people have no time or interest. Reading is good for both our life and study, which can open up a new world to us. So it is necessary for students to take up reading. Since last year, I have read many world classics, such as a Dream of Red Mansions. I have learned a lot about Chinese history.  
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Ying
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和现在完成时”；
③提示：注意回复的邮件须包括所给内容要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。根据所给内容要点，给英国笔友珍妮回一封电子邮件，介绍一下中国学生课外阅读的情况。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先点明主题；其次介绍中国学生课外阅读的现状；接着介绍学生不喜欢阅读的原因；接下来介绍阅读的好处；最后介绍我的阅读经历。
第三步：书写结语。表示祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①would like想要
②the importance of……的重要性
③prefer…to…比起……来，更喜欢……  
④would rather宁愿；宁可
⑤open up打开
[高分句型]
①Others have so little interest in reading that they would rather spend time on videos or computer games.（so…that…引导结果状语从句，表示“如此……以至于……”）
②Reading is good for both our life and study, which can open up a new world to us.（which引导的定语从句）
③So it is necessary for students to take up reading.（It is+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.”意为“对某人来说做某事怎么样”）
14．例文
Weekend Activities Report
Since the “Double Reduction(双减)” policy was launched, students now have more free time on weekends. So I did a survey about how the students spend their weekends in Sunshine Middle School.
Here is the result. Almost half of the students study by themselves at home. About 25% of them prefer to watch TV or listen to music. 20% of them like to chat online or play computer games, while 10% of them help their parents do housework. Only a small number of them go out to do sports or go for a trip.
In my opinion, all of us students should have a proper plan for our weekends. We should learn to manage our time better, learn more knowledge or developing some interests. We should also learn to relax, but I don’t think it’s a good idea to spend too much time watching TV, chatting online or playing computer games.
Let’s make good use of our weekends, enjoy a healthy and happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文。
②时态：本文要用一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，根据图标提示，介绍学生周末所从事的活动；
第三步，发表自己对此的看法，以及写出总结。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to do 更喜欢做
②while 然而
③in one’s opinion 在某人看来
④proper 恰当的
[高分句型]
①20% of them like to chat online or play computer games, while 10% of them help their parents do housework. (while表对比)
②We should also learn to relax, but I don’t think it’s a good idea to spend too much time watching TV, chatting online or playing computer games. (think后为宾语从句，从句中it为形式主语，to do作真正主语)
15．例文：
Dear Tom,
In July, China introduced the double reduction policy, since when after-school activities and clubs have been provided by different schools.
First, we can do our homework at school. If we come across some difficult problems, we can ask the teachers for help instead of leaving the problems till the next day. Second, there are many clubs for students to take part in, such as the basketball club, the music club, the art club and so on. We can choose what we like to improve ourselves. Third, our school will hold some entertainment activities regularly to promote the communication between teachers and students.
However, students don’t have enough time to communicate with parents because they return home late every day, which may lead to a deeper generation gap. I hope this problem can be paid attention.
Yours,
Sam
【详解】①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏Tom来信中想要了解的问题，给出对应答复。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点明信件的主题；
第二步，具体介绍课后参加的活动及自己的感受；
第三步，给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①come across 遇到
②take part in 参加
③lead to 导致
[高分句型]
①If we come across some difficult problems, we can ask the teachers for help instead of leaving the problems till the next day.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②Second, there are many clubs for students to take part in, such as the basketball club, the music club, the art club and so on.（There be句型）
16．例文
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your letter. I hope I can help you. You said you have some trouble with your height now. I think height doesn’t matter. As we know, Spud Webb, the famous NBA star is short but very successful. Moreover, it’s their fault to play jokes on you. It’s not wise of you to fight with them for their faults. You should pay no attention to those who laugh at you.
You can work hard on your subjects and get good results in your study to prove yourself. On the other hand, whenever you meet such a problem, keep calm and try to talk to them or ask your teachers and friends for help.
I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.
Best wishes,
Mrs. Wang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇建议信，属于书信作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，不要遗漏提示中的“帮他分析情况”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，点明写信目的；
第二步，先帮他分析情况，并阐述自己对这一问题的看法，接着重点就这一问题给出相关的建议，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达祝愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble with在……方面
②as we know众所周知
③play jokes on sb开某人的玩笑
④on the other hand另一方面
⑤be valuable to sb对某人来说有价值
[高分句型]
①Moreover, it’s their fault to play jokes on you.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
②It’s not wise of you to fight with them for their faults.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
③You should pay no attention to those who laugh at you.（who引导的定语从句）
④On the other hand, whenever you meet such a problem, keep calm and try to talk to them or ask your teachers and friends for help.（whenever引导时间状语从句）
⑤I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.（省略引导词that的宾语从句）
17．例文
Dear Lin Tao,
I’m glad that you work so hard in your study. However, as a student, we should also learn to do something meaningful for our school, family and our country.
First of all, in order to have a good place to learn knowledge, we should keep our classroom as well as other parts of the school clean and tidy. When attending courses in the youth centre, we can make full use of the good chances and learn more skills which can’t be learned from textbooks.
As for our family, our parents are getting older now and it’s time for us to do something for them. Why not cook dinners for them when they are busy and spend more time communicating with them when they are free. There are also many things we can do for ourselves like washing our shoes and clothes.
Last but not the least, we must learn to do some voluntary work for society. For example, we can visit the home for the elderly and donate something to the children in poor areas. Respecting people from different careers for their hard work is also necessary because every job is important.
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Yours,
Sigmun
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：对方求助内容已给出，考生应注意就“来信”中“如何去实践生活劳动”提出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，写作时从学校、家庭和社会的角度，分点提出具体建议；
第二步，书写结语，希望建议有所帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了
②attend courses上课
③As for关于
④Last but not the least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①When attending courses in the youth centre, we can make full use of the good chances and learn more skills which can’t be learned from textbooks.（when引导的时间状语从句，which引导的定语从句）
②Respecting people form different careers for their hard work is also necessary because every job is important.（because引导的原因状语从句）
18．例文
Sharing
Good morning, my dear teachers and friends! It is my great honor to make a speech here. I will graduate from my school soon. It’s hard to say farewell to all of you.
During the past three years, I realize that we should take study seriously. For myself, I always work hard in class. I listen to teachers carefully and take notes. I finish homework on time. My classmates often help with my schoolwork. With their help, I overcome lots of difficulties and become much better. I want to say thank you to all the people who have helped me.
This summer holiday, I plan to visit my grandparents in another city. And in the future, I’ll keep on studying hard and stick to my dream. I will never give up on my new journey.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍过去三年在学习、人际交往、克服困难方面的心得；
第三步，分享暑假安排、未来目标。
[亮点词汇]
①take note记笔记
②on time按时
③keep on doing sth继续做某事
④give up放弃
[高分句型]
①It’s hard to say farewell to all of you.（动词不定式作主语）
②I want to say thank you to all the people who have helped me.（who引导定语从句