【江苏专版】2022-2023学年中考英语二模汇编-作文训练Ⅱ
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作文训练Ⅱ
学校:___________姓名:___________班级:___________考号:___________
一、材料作文
1.(2022·江苏无锡·统考二模)随着科技的发展和疫情的影响,网络学习备受青睐。假如你是李华,受邀为全校同学作以“To be a smart online learner”为主题的演讲。请你结合自身的经历,用英文写一份演讲稿,对网络学习的利或弊发表观点并提出相关建议。以下信息为非限定内容,仅供参考。
My experience
In early April, I had online classes. …
My opinion
Its advantages
Its disadvantages
provide different kinds of resourcesoffer us a great chance to …
influence our attentiondo harm to …
My advice
develop good learning habits, …
注意事项:1. 演讲稿必须包含所有要点,并作适当发挥,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3. 词数100左右。
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2.(2022·江苏·统考二模)人们通常会通过赠送礼物表达他们对亲情、友情、爱情的珍重,每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。那么,你收到的最特别的礼物是什么呢?对你来说它有什么特殊的意义?请以 “A Special Gift” 为题写一篇英语作文。
1. What is the special gift you have received?2. What is the story behind the gift?
3. Why is it so special to you?
...
注意事项:
(1)词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥。
A Special Gift
People often give gifts to show their family affection, friendship and love. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3.(2022·江苏盐城·统考二模)在我们的成长历程中总会遇到这样那样的困难。阳光总在风雨后。你校英语俱乐部组织了“How to Face Difficulties”的征文比赛,请根据下面要点提示,写一篇英语短文参赛。
1. What kind of difficulty did you have?
2. How did you solve it?
3. What have you learnt from it?
注意:1.紧扣话题,语言表达要准确,语意要通顺、连贯;
2.词数100左右,短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名及其他相关信息。
It’s common to have difficulties in life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.(2022·江苏盐城·统考二模)你的学校正在开展主题为“The most beautiful volunteer”的征文活动,请根据下列提示用英文写一篇文章介绍一位你心目中的最美志愿者。
1. Who is he/she?
2. What did he/she do? (What does he/she do?)
3. What can you learn from him/her?
注意事项:
(1)词数:100词左右;
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;
(3)文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
The most beautiful volunteer
In my mind, the most beautiful volunteer is__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(2022·江苏泰州·统考二模)人生不是一帆风顺的,任何人都会遇到挫折和失败。在磨砺和失败中成长,会成就更美好的自己。
某英文网站正在开展以“Learning from Failure (失败)”为主题的征文活动。请用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你的故事。内容包括:你的失败经历,你的态度,以及你的收获。
要求∶
1. 必须包括导图里的所有要点,并适当拓展;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
3. 词数100字左右(文章开头不计入)。
Learning from Failure
Life is beautiful, but not always sweet. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.(2022·江苏南通·统考二模)初中三年的学习生活即将结束,请你根据下表中内容要点提示,为学校英语俱乐部写一篇英语短文,为七年级新生在学习生活上提几点建议,并祝福他们在未来的学习生活中过得愉快。
一些建议
学习
1. 找到正确的学习方法,养成良好的学习习惯,比如……
2. 多阅读,了解传统文化和外国文化;
3. 学习中遇到难题时……
生活
1. 多做锻炼,保持健康;
2. 参加兴趣小组,花点时间在兴趣爱好上,因为……
3. 与同学友好相处,不要轻易生气,而是……
希望
……
要求:
⑴表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
(3)词数;90词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Welcome to our school! In junior high school, life will be different from before. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(2022·江苏南京·统考二模)“Kids’ Fun” 杂志正在举办征文活动,请根据征文要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Just as our magazine’s name, “Kids’ Fun”, we pay special attention to the fun kids have. Over your school days in junior high, you have experienced many school trips. Which one is the most unforgettable one? Write a passage to tell us why you always remember that trip.
Is it because of the place you went? Or the things you saw? Or the activities you enjoyed yourself? Or the feelings you would never forget? We are looking forward to your sharing.
注意:1.要点齐全,文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3.词数80左右,邮件的开头与结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
What an unforgettable school trip!
I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.(2022·江苏无锡·统考二模)为增强安全意识,学校英语俱乐部将开展“How to protect ourselves”的讨论,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿。以下信息非限定性内容,仅供参考。
How to protect ourselves
At school
get along with our classmates;…
In public
never run after each other;…
On the Internet
protect our personal information;…
…
…
注意事项:
1. 短文须自拟,要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数在100个左右,短文标题、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us. It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
9.(2022·江苏徐州·统考二模)“双减”工作之一是减轻学生过重的作业负担,控制中小学生的书面作业总量,合理布置不同类型的作业。为此,某英文杂志社正在开展以“My Creative English Homework”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇征文,讲述自身经历,提出合理建议。
内容包括:
1.做过的最有创意的英语作业(内容、收获……);
2. 1-2条有创意的英语作业建议(形式、理由……);
要求:
1. 90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等。
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.
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10.(2022·江苏南通·统考二模)今秋开学起,劳动课将正式成为中小学的一门独立课程。近期Simon所在的英语社团将组织一次以“Let’s enjoy doing housework”为题的英语演讲比赛,假如你是Simon,请根据以下问题提示写一篇演讲稿。
提示:1. Do you think it’s important to do housework? Why? (at least 2 reasons)
2. Have you ever done housework? Please share an experience and your feelings about it.
3. What other kinds of skills would you like to learn? Fixing, Cooking, Washing, Gardening, Decorating and so on. (Choose at least one and tell the reason)
注意:1.词数90词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.讲稿需包括所有问题提示要点,可适当发挥,使讲稿连贯、通顺;
3.稿中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Let’s enjoy doing housework
Dear friends,
It’s my pleasure to say something about doing housework! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Come on, let’s learn to do housework and enjoy doing it!
11.(2022·江苏南通·统考二模)三年时光,如诗如歌。丰富多彩的校园活动给我们留下了美好的回忆。你曾参加过什么校园活动,有过怎样的经历,又有怎样的收获?请联系自身实际,在下列图示中任选一类或自选一类其他校园活动,用英语写一篇短文。
注意: 1. 词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
School activities can make students’ life more colourful. In the past three years, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
12.(2022·江苏泰州·统考二模)志愿服务我先行,幸福温暖洒人间。利用课余时间积极参加志愿者服务活动是新时代中学生的责任和义务。请你以 “My experience of being a volunteer”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你参加一次志愿者活动的相关情况。
内容要点:1. 活动原因;
2. 活动过程;
3. 活动感受。
写作要求:1. 文中不能出现题目以外的人名、校名或地名;
2. 词数80词左右。
My experience of being a volunteer
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13.(2022·江苏宿迁·统考二模)书面表达。
假如你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语演讲比赛。请按要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括:(1)保持快乐的心情;(2)努力学习;(3)积极参加体育锻炼。
注意:(1)词数80词左右;
(2)可以适当发挥想象,增加细节,使行文连贯;文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends, we all want to grow happily and healthily. So we have to do some things.
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14.(2022·江苏扬州·统考二模)踏青(Spring outing)是学校组织学生参加的春季户外活动,对于即将毕业的你来说也是一段段难忘的记忆。请以“A/An ________ spring outing”为题,完成学校英文报刊“Our voice”毕业季专栏的投稿。
1.What do you think of a spring outing?
2.What did you do in one of your spring outings? (Including:the weather, the all﹣day activities, the feelings, ...)
3.What advice can you offer to make a better spring outing?
注意:
(1)填写合适的单词完成习作标题;
(2)词数100个左右;
(3)包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
(4)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
A/An________outing
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15.(2022·江苏苏州·苏州市振华中学校校考二模)假设某英文报社在开展学习木兰精神的征文活动,请你根据下图内容写一篇英文稿件,以“What to learn from Mulan”为题,简述木兰身上体现出的精神品质,并说一说你将如何以实际行动学习木兰精神。
注意:
1. 图中省略号为自拟一个木兰的精神品质。
2. 表达中须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
3. 词数 90 左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及本人姓名。
What to learn from Mulan
Many children, teenagers and even adults like Mulan for her spirit. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As a student, I
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16.(2022·江苏常州·校考二模)请根据下列提示,以“The person I admire most”为题,用英语写一篇短文。
As time goes by, many excellent persons have devoted themselves to the whole world in many different ways. You are always moved by their spirits and their contribution. Please write about a great person you admire most. Try to tell us who he/she is, what he/she did for us, why you admire him/her so much.
注意:
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
3.词数不少于100。
The person I admire most
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二、话题作文
17.(2022·江苏常州·统考二模)假如你是 Sigmund Friend,有一位叫李涵的九年级学生向你求助,面对中考,他压力比较大,想找周围的人倾诉,但有各种担心。请根据来信内容,用英文写一封回信,帮助李涵解决问题。
Dear Sigmund,
I am Li Han in Grade 9. I have a problem and I need your help.
As the high school entrance exam is coming, I am feeling quite stressed. I am under too much pressure. I can’t keep it to myself. I want to find someone to talk with about it. Can I ask the teacher for help? Can I talk to my parents? Can I tell my friends about it?
I don’t know what I should do. Would you please give me some advice? I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Han
注意∶
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
3.词数不少于100。文章开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Li Han,
Thank you for your letter. I hope I can help you. It is common that the Grade 9 students face lots of stress before the high school entrance exam comes. I think talking with others about your worries is very necessary.
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Best wishes,
Sigmund
18.(2022·江苏镇江·统考二模)世纪英文报正面向中学生举行征文比赛,主题如下:随着科学技术的发展,人类在不久的将来就可能实现移居火星。一旦实现,人类就要面临选择:继续居住在地球,还是移居火星?
请根据下表提供的信息,写一篇英语短文,参加该报社的征文比赛。
1. Continue living on the Earth
Reasons for staying
1. many kinds of delicious food2. close friends and relatives
...
Problems with staying
1. a big population and limited space2. serious pollution
...
2. Move to Mars
Reasons for moving
1. plenty of space and large comfortable houses2. no pollution or noise
...
Problems with moving
1. only pills for three meals2. no plants
...
要求:
1.说明你的选择和理由,并阐明你如何解决或面对这种选择带来的问题;
2.所阐述的理由和问题可以是上表中所提到的,也可以是自创的,但均不能少于两条;
3.文章不少于90词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
With the rapid development of science and technology, it will soon become possible for human beings to move to Mars. It’s really time to think about where to live, on the Earth or on Mars? After giving the question a lot of thought, I’ve decided to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、电子邮件
19.(2022·江苏苏州·星海实验中学校考二模)假定你是李明,你的英国朋友David给你发了一封邮件,想了解一下有关寒假期间你在家进行线上学习的情况。请你认真阅读下面的邮件,并根据信中的内容和生活实际用英语回复,可以有适当的发挥。
To: liming@163.com
From: david@gmail.com
Subject: online learning
Dear Li Ming, During the COVID-19 pandemic (大流行), a lot has happened. Many schools in my country are closed and so is mine. We have started online learning instead. I've heard you kept learning that way in the winter holiday. Could you tell me something about online learning?
●What subjects were included in your online lessons?
●How much time did you spend every day online?
●Did your teachers help a lot when you studied at home?
●What should I pay attention to when I'm taking online lessons?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
David
注意:
1、词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2、回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯,通顺;
3、文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear David,
I'm very happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about how I studied online during the COVID-19 pandemic. I do have something to share with you.
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I hope my reply will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Ming
四、书信作文
20.(2022·江苏镇江·统考二模)今年九月, 学校将开设劳动课(labor course)。阳光中学计划为学生提供一门劳动课程,请你以李华的身份,在烹饪与营养(Cooking and Health)和志愿者服务(Voluntary Tour Guide)中选择其一,写一封英文信给学校课程管理处主任,说明你的选择及理由。
Cooking and Health●Introduce your family members and their health conditions.
●Design a day’s menu (three meals) and write down reasons.
●Think about what advice you will give to your family members.
Voluntary Tour Guide●Introduce your town (Sunshine Town) to foreign visitors.
●List challenges your town is facing and think of ways to improve them.
●Imagine (想象) what your town will be like in the future.
要求:
(1)所写内容必须包括你所选择的一项劳动课程中的所有要点及理由;
(2)文章不少于90词, 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数;
(3)语意通顺, 意思连贯, 条理清楚, 书写规范;
(4)文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I have known there will be a new labor course next term. I’ll choose ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
参考答案:
1.Possible version one:
Dear students,
I’m glad to stand here to give you a speech on how to be a smart online learner.
In early April, I had online classes. I searched for something useful on the Internet. And I handed in my homework to the teachers online every day. It was really a special experience for me.
There’s no doubt that online learning has its advantages. For example, it can provide us with different kinds of resources, which are of help to us. Besides, it will offer us a great chance to manage our time by ourselves.
In order to be a smart online learner, we should develop good learning habits, make a study plan and make full use of the resources.
That’s all. Thanks for listening! (100 words)
Possible version two:
Dear students,
I’m glad to stand here to give you a speech on how to be a smart online learner.
In early April, I had online classes. I wanted to chat with my friends online at first. But soon I couldn’t catch what the teacher said. So, I paid more attention to the classes. As a result, I have made great progress in my studies.
However, online learning has its disadvantages. For example, it’s much easier to influence our attention. What’s more, too much screen time can do harm to our eyes.
In order to be a smart online learner, we should develop good learning habits, take notes to go over what we have learned and be strict with ourselves.
That’s all. Thanks for listening! (100 words)
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给材料内容,以“To be a smart online learner”为主题,写一篇短文。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般过去时为主,人称以第一人称为主。根据提示材料,从在线学习的优势和劣势着手进行描述,写作时要注意保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
2.例文:
A Special Gift
People often give gifts to show their family affection, friendship and love. I have received many gifts and the most special one is a hand-made calendar.
It was made by my best friend Andy on my 14th birthday. On each page of the calendar, there is a picture of Andy and me with some encouraging words he wrote.
The gift is special to me because it is a memory of the wonderful time we spent together. Besides, the words on it encourage me to keep trying whenever I want to give up in the face of difficulties. Thanks to his gift, I have become more confident, and solved many problems by myself. What’s more, I have learned the importance of friendship.
Whenever I look at the calendar, I am touched by something warm, and my heart is filled with love. I will keep this special gift forever.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文。要求以“A Special Gift”为题写一篇英语短文,文章开头已给出,写作时注意衔接。写作时要包含所有写作要点,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文以第一人称和第三人称为主进行写作;时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章可采用四段式:第一段,写明你收到的最特别的礼物是什么;第二段,写这个礼物的由来;第三段,写这个礼物背后的故事;第四段,写为什么这个礼物对你来说如此特别。写作时注意条理清晰,语句通顺,语法正确。
3.One possible version:
It’s common to have difficulties in life.
Once my English was poor. I couldn’t understand it very well and often got low marks in exams. What was worse, my parents only cared about my marks. So I felt much stressed.
I asked my teacher for help. She advised me to communicate with my parents and put my heart into English learning. I talked sincerely with my parents and often turned to my teachers or friends when I had trouble with my English. Now my parents support me and my English is getting better.
From it, I have learnt that we should manage to solve the problem bravely and take on challenges.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据要点提示写一篇英语短文;要求包含所有提示要点。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态以一般过去时为主;采用第一人称;可采用4段落格式,第一段:文章已给出;第二段:阐述曾经遇到什么样的困难;第三段:阐述如何克服这个困难的;第四段:阐述学到了什么。
4.例文
The most beautiful volunteer
In my mind, the most beautiful volunteer is Danny. He is a pupil in Xinhua primary school. He organized several activities to raise money for a boy from a poor family. The boy got a serious disease. With Danny’s help, the boy was cured after the operation. Last year, he found his classmate Lily had to leave school. He wrote to the local government and helped the girl return to school.
Danny is helpful and warm. He is willing to help others and never asks for rewards. We should learn the spirit from him.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“The most beautiful volunteer”为题,结合提示问题,介绍心目中的最美志愿者。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为两段,第一段引出话题,介绍心目中的最美志愿者是谁以及他/她做了什么事情;第二段介绍自己从他/她身上学到了什么。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
5.One possible version:
Learning from Failure
Life is beautiful, but not always sweet. We may experience failure in our life. When I was in Grade 8, I found it easy to learn physics. So I paid little attention to the teacher in class. As a result, I did badly in the first exam. When I saw the score, I couldn’t help crying. After class, I went to the teacher for help. My teacher had a long talk with me and helped me realize my problem. From then on, I listened carefully in class and corrected my mistakes in time. Through my efforts, I came first in the mid-term exam.
From the experience, I know we should treat our study seriously. What’s more, it’s important to be brave to ask for help whenever we have difficulty.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作。写作时注意一定要紧紧围绕“从失败中学习”这一主题展开叙述。内容要包括谈论自己经历了什么失败,是怎么处理的,从中有什么收获,即题目要求的内容都要写到。内容要积极向上,条理要清晰。
2. 写作指导:本文写作应该使用第一人称。时态应根据情境运用一般现在时和一般过去时。可以根据要求分三部分叙述。第一部分开门见山,引出失败这一话题;第二部分根据要求展开,分述失败的经历和怎么处理解决的,要具体;第三部分总结全文,表达感受,感情升华,阐述从这次经历中有什么收获。
6.例文
Welcome to our school! In junior high school, life will be different from before. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you.
Firstly, you will have more subjects to learn, so it is not easy to find good learning methods. Also, you should form good studying habits. In class, you need to listen to the teachers carefully; After class, you need to read more books. In this way, you can learn more about our traditional culture and foreign culture as well. When you have some problems with your study, go to your friends or teachers for help.
Secondly, to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. You can join some clubs in your spare time. It’s important for you to spend some time on your hobbies. That will make your school life more interesting and colourful. To get along well with your classmates, try to avoid getting angry. If you have a problem with some of them, talk about it. It’s wise not to keep it in your mind.
I hope you will have a wonderful school life.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求根据内容提示,为学校英语俱乐部写一篇英语短文。要包含所有要点,并适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文时态为一般现在时,主要采用第二人称来行文。写作可分为四段式:第一段总体介绍将为其提供一些建议;第二段具体介绍学习上的建议;第三段介绍生活上的建议;最后一段表示祝福。在写作时应该注意符合题意,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
7.
例文:
What an unforgettable school trip!
I have experienced many school trips, but the one I will never forget is visiting the Great Wall and the Fragrant Hills.
We met at the school gate at eight and then we set off by bus. First, we visited the Great Wall. When we got there, it was nine. We started to climb the great wonder of ancient China immediately. That was the first time that we had visited it, so we were very excited. We took many photos of the Great Wall. Then we had lunch there, after which we left for the Fragrant Hills. When we got there, we were amazed at the beautiful maple leaves, which made us not want to leave. We stayed at the top of the mountain for an hour and at five we returned by bus.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇投稿,写自己最难忘的一次旅行。写作时需要包含以下要点:(1)你最难忘的旅行是哪一次?(2)为什么你总是记得那次旅行。在写作时应承接短文开头,围绕主题展开。语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚。
2.写作指导:本文是讲述过去的一场旅行,故时态为一般过去时;主语为第一人称;描述旅行时,内容应描写细致;并且把旅行时的所见、所闻、所感都介绍清楚。
8.One possible version:
How to protect ourselves
There is lots of possible danger around us. It’s important for us to learn how to protect ourselves.
First of all, it’s necessary for us to get along well with our classmates. Never forget your teachers. Ask them for help while meeting any danger at school. Second, not doing something dangerous in public is also important. Remember not to run after or crowd with each other, especially not push past others. Third, be careful to make friends online. Don’t give any personal information to others. Never meet e-friends alone. Let your parents go with you if you have to. Last but not least, we must follow the traffic rules outside and don’t carry too much money with us.
Danger is never as far away as we think. Take good care of ourselves at all times!
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇提纲类作文,以“How to protect ourselves”为题参照表格中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括表格中所有要点,并适当拓展。
2.写作指导:本文以第一、二人称为主,时态为一般现在时;写作时注意分段叙述,第一段开门见山,引入话题;第二段介绍如何从三个方面保护自己,可以多采用祈使句句式;第三段原文已给出;保证文章条理清晰,语句通顺。
9.范文:
My Creative English Homework
Doing English homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework can make us more interested in English. Last winter vacation, our teacher asked us to design a poster about the Spring Festival. That was my favourite homework. It took me about three hours to finish it. It not only helped me go over the knowledge we’ve learned, but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture.
In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to write book reviews. It can help us to have a better understanding of the book. Besides, we can do some surveys on our hobbies and write reports. In this way, our English will develop quickly.
I hope we’ll have more creative English homework in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,在写作时应承接短文开头,根据汉语提示的内容,讲述自己做过的最有创意的一次英语作业,包括作业内容和自己的收获;接下来对有创意的英语作业提出自己的几点建议。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称为主来叙述内容,时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主。在叙述内容时,力求语句通顺,语法正确,保证提示内容完整,条理清晰,行文连贯。
10.Possible versions:
Let’s enjoy doing housework
Dear friends,
It’s my pleasure to say something about doing housework!
I think it’s important for us to do housework. Doing housework can not only teach us how to look after ourselves but also show our love to parents.
I would like to share my own story. One Sunday, I found my bedroom in a mess. So I decided to tidy it up. First, I made the bed and put away my clothes. Next, I swept the floor. Finally, I mopped it. When my parents came in, they were so surprised that they couldn’t help praising me. I felt glad as well as proud.
I also want to learn cooking so that I can make dinner for my parents and myself.
Come on, let’s learn to do housework and enjoy doing it!
【详解】题干解读:本文是提纲类作文,根据提示要点写一篇关于家务劳动的作文,题目是“Let’s enjoy doing housework”。
写作指导:本文应以第一人叙述,时态为一般现在时和一般过去时,叙述做家务的重要性和表达你想学哪种做家务的技能时采用一般现在时,描述做家务的经历时用一般过去时。作文开头和结尾已给出,重点写做家务的重要性,做家务的经历和想学哪种技能。叙述要完整,可适当补充,适当使用连词和副词,注意表达的顺序,保证条理清晰连贯通顺,无语法和单词拼写错误。
11.例文
School activities can make students’ life more colourful. In the past three years, I have got so much from different activities.
Last month, I went on a school trip to Sunshine Zoo with my classmate. The zoo is not far away from our school. We went there by bike. In the zoo, we saw many kinds of animals, such as tigers, lions, pandas, elephants and so on. Among all the animals, I liked monkeys best. They were clever and funny. They jumped around and made people laugh.
During the trip, my classmates and I learned a lot of amazing things about animals. We had a good time. We also knew it was important to protect the animals. It was such a nice trip that we hoped to visit Sunshine Zoo again.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍自己曾经参加过的一次校园活动。
2. 写作指导:本文采用一般过去时,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。本文分为三段式:第一段开头已给出;第二段介绍自己的一次难忘经历;最后一段表达自己的感触。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
12.例文:
My experience of being a volunteer
As a volunteer, you can not only help people in need, but also learn a lot from your experience. That is why I enjoy being a volunteer.
I still remember my experience of being a volunteer last year. At that time, I had to stay at home because of COVID-19. I joined a group to help the neighbours throw out their rubbish. Every morning, I needed to get up very early, wear a mask and collect the rubbish from door to door. At first, I found it hard to get up early. It was very tiring, but I did it for one month. I got a thank-you letter from the neighbours in the end.
I feel proud of being a volunteer, which means I am able to offer help. What’s more, I am also thankful for the people who have helped me.
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。以 “My experience of being a volunteer”为题,针对自己曾经的志愿者活动经历进行写作,叙述活动原因、活动过程和感受。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导:本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时,人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍成为志愿者的重要性和好处;第二段叙述自己曾参加过的志愿者活动的原因和过程;最后一段表达自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
13.Dear friends, we all want to grow happily and healthily, so we have to do some things.
First, we should keep ourselves happy. Life is not always full of sunshine. When we are in trouble, we should be brave enough to deal with problems. Next, we must study hard. The more knowledge we have, the more confident we will be. Finally, we have to do sports to keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or take a walk after a day’s study. If we do those things well, we will grow happily and healthily.
【详解】这是一篇假如你是李华,准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语演讲比赛。动笔前先要认真阅读要点,围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称,一般现在时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
重点句型和短语:keep +形容词 保持……状态,be in trouble处于困境中,enough足够的,放在形容词/副词后面,the+比较级……,the+比较级…… 越……就越……
14.One possible version:
An unforgettable spring outing
I think spring outing is an opportunity to experience nature and life, and it can also make us relax better. I remember when I was 6 years old, my parents and I went for a spring outing in the mountains near my home. It was a fine day. We flew kites, had picnics and chatted on the mountain. We were very happy. If you want to have a spring outing, I will give you some suggestions. First of all, listen to the weather forecast. If the weather is bad,don’t go for a spring outing. Then make full preparations and bring more water and food. Finally, pay attention to safety. If you do this, you will also have a pleasant spring outing.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求以“A/An ________ spring outing”为题写一篇短文;要求包含所有提示内容。
2. 写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主;采用第一人称口吻;可采用1段落格式,阐述对春游的看法、曾经难忘的一次春游以及有关春游的建议;注意无语法和拼写错误。
15.例文
What to learn from Mulan
Many children, teenagers and even adults like Mulan for her spirit. Mulan is an excellent woman. She is hard-working and kind, honest and simple, smart and lively. As a young girl, she joined the army instead of her sick father in order to protect her home and serve the country. Mulan loved her family and was loyal to her country. She fought bravely to protect her country.
As a student, I shall try my best to improve my knowledge and never give up when facing difficulties. In this way, I’ll have the ability to devote myself to our country. And our country will be stronger.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文以“What to learn from Mulan”为题,并结合题干图片中的提示写一篇文章,可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段主要简述木兰身上体现出的精神品质;第二段讲述你将如何以实际行动学习木兰精神。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
16.例文
The person I admire most
Nowadays, many teenagers are crazy about young idols, and they support their idols with all their hearts. They are attracted by the beautiful faces, the dance and singing skills. But for me, the person l admire the most is my father. He is always the hero in my heart.
My father is a typical father. He does not say much, but he never does less for me. My father never misses the important moment for me. When school needs parents to present at the meeting, no matter how busy he is, my father will always be one of the members. When other students are complaining about their fathers, I feel so lucky to get enough care from him.
My father has a strong personality, which influences me greatly. He is never late for work. It tells me that I should finish my own job first. Thanks to him, I keep a good habit of study.
My father is a great person for me, who sets a good example and influences me all the time.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目是一篇材料作文,要求以“The person I admire most”为题谈谈你最敬佩的人,他/她都做了些什么以及为什么这么敬佩他/她。注意要点齐全。
2. 写作指导:本文应以第三人称、一般现在时为主来描述。第一段先点题;第二段详细具体地写清楚他/她做了什么以及敬佩他/她的原因,写作中可以选用合适的连词,短语和句型来进行串联和拓展;行文要语句通顺,符合逻辑关系;无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。
17.例文:
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your letter. I hope I can help you. It is common that the Grade 9 students face lots of stress before the high school entrance exam comes. I think talking with others about your worries is very necessary.
Firstly, you can consider talking to your teachers. They know your problem with your study better. Though they are strict, they are ready to listen to you patiently. They will also give you some useful advice about your future.
Secondly, a conversation with your parents is good for you. Parents’ opinions may influence the decision you make. It is certain that parents will devote all they have to giving you a happy life.
Finally, you can share every happy and sad moment with your friends. They may have the similar problems. You can talk with one another freely and find out the solution. Some friends may give you some suggestions that are of great help to you.
I hope my advice is worth taking. Good luck for your high school entrance exam.
Best wishes,
Sigmund
【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求根据来信内容,给一个由于面临中考而压力较大的学生写一封回信,给对方提出建议。
2.写作指导:本文主要内容是给对方提建议,故主要采用第二人称叙述;时态以一般现在时为主;文章结构要清晰,第一段陈述作者的态度;第二段到第四段是主体,从向老师、父母、朋友三方面倾诉,分别表达作者的建议;最后一段总结并祝愿。
18. With the rapid development of science and technology, it will soon become possible for human beings to move to Mars. It’s really time to think about where to live, on the Earth or on Mars? After giving the question a lot of thought, I’ve decided to continue living on the Earth, because I love the wonderful and colourful life on the Earth. I can enjoy many kinds of delicious food and I have a lot of close friends and relatives here. We get on well with each other and we are living a happy life on the earth.
However, we are facing some problems. For example, there is a big population and the space is limited on the Earth. In order to solve the problem, I think something must be done to control the rapidly increasing population. Moreover, serious pollution is another problem. We should take action to stop all kinds of pollution and protect the environment.
In a word, the Earth is our home. It is our duty to try our best to make it a better place for humans to live.
【详解】题干解读:本文属于开放式写作,可根据题目中的提示并结合自己的想法来构思内容。写作时要注意内容的完整性,应包括选择、理由、问题、解决方式等方面。
写作指导:本文应以第一人称来叙述;时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;可分段叙述,第一段陈述选择的结果及理由;第二段陈述该选择所带来的问题及解决问题的建议;第三段总结并提升主题。
19.Dear David.
I'm very happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about how I studied online during the COVID-19 pandemic, I do have something to share with you.
Most of the subjects I'm learning were included in the online lessons, even P.E. I spent about four hours a day online. My teachers helped me a lot. They not only gave us classes but also answered our questions.
It was good to have classes at home during this special time, but I don't think I learned as well as I do in school. One important thing about online learning is that you should have a good communication with your teachers. Also, you must complete all your learning tasks carefully.
I hope my reply will be of some help to you.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】题干分析:阅读题干,根据英国朋友David给你的邮件的内容和生活实际用英语回复有关寒假期间你在家进行线上学习的情况。阅读邮件内容可知写作内容包括关于在线课程包括哪些科目;每天花多少时间上网;当在家学习的时候,老师帮了很多忙吗;当在网上上课时,应该注意什么。
例文点评:这是一篇优秀的例文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确的运用的时态,例文中运用的是过去时为主,人称是第一人称为主,主谓一致。例文第一段及最后一段已经给出;重点写作第二段:详细的介绍关于“我”寒假网课的内容与情况和三段:提出一些关于上网课的一些注意事项。例文同时使用一些亮点词句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
高分亮点:
短语:a lot许多,修饰动词;at home在家;as well as和…...一样好;have a good communication with sb与某人进行良好的沟通;must必须,情态动词后接动词原形。
句型:(1)They not only gave us classes but also answered our questions. 他们不仅给我们上课,还回答了我们的问题。Not only…,but also…不仅……而且……;(2)One important thing about online learning is that you should have a good communication with your teachers. 关于在线学习的一件重要的事情是你应该和你的老师有一个良好的沟通。That引导的表语从句。
20.例文
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I have known there will be a new labor course next term. I’ll choose Cooking and Health. Because I like cooking for my family. There are 4 people in my family, parents, sisters and me. We are all healthy. This summer is really hot and humid. Sometimes, my parents and I lost appetite because of the heat. In the morning, I think it would be better to have some lemonade because the taste of lemon can keep us fresh. At noon, we can have a light lunch and eat more fruits in between meals because fruits can provide us enough water and taste better than water itself. At night, we can eat watermelon while watching TV because watermelon can cool us down. I suggest my family should take more exercise for their health. Mom and dad should go to work by bike. My sister and I had better walk to school.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
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