中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 04 手机 (含答案)

热点04 手机

手机无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：手机。

【预测题目】

（一）

近十年来，随着通讯网络的迅猛发展，手机几乎成为了人们不可或缺的东西。毫无疑问，手机大大改善了我们的生活，但同时也给我们的生活带来了不好的影响。对于这个问题，你班将于下周举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请根据表格提示，写一篇英语发言稿。

要求：1. 内容包含以上要点并作适当发挥。

      2. 词数：80-120（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

      3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的姓名。

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the people around the world. _______

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【答案】

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. We held a discussion about whether we can take mobile phones with us in our studying time. Different students have different opinions.

Some think we can search the information online at any time and contact our family and friends with the cell-phones. Besides, we can relax ourselves by listening to music or watching movies. And we can turn to others for help when we’re in trouble. While others think differently. First, Some are addicted to cell-phones.They seldom communicate with their family. Second, the radiation from mobile phones is bad for health. Many students often play mobile games and read novels with their mobile phones, which affects their study. Third, many students can’t control themselves and play mobile phones in class.

In my opinion, we can take mobile phones with us in our studying time. But we must use them in the right way.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，给出了主要写作要点，主要包括三部分的内容。手机使用的好处，手机使用的弊端，个人观点与建议。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 

写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，阐述了使用手机的利与弊，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。

（二）

21世纪,许多发明改变了我们的生活,智能手机( smart phone)的出现以及对我们生活产生了巨大的影响,作为一名中学生,谈谈你对智能手机使用的看法。请你根据下面提示,写一篇短文。内容包括：

1.智能手机使用的现状

2.智能手机对生活的的影响;(包活优点和缺点）

3.呼吁大家合理使用智能手机

要求:

1不得照抄原文:不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名

2语句连贯,词数80左右。

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【答案】

As we all know，smart phones are becoming more and more popular and they are playing an important role in our daily life.There is no doubt that we have benefited a lot from smart phones．We can read news，watch films，take photos，chat with friends，keep in touch with our relatives，or play games to get relaxed．

But every coin has two sides．Smart phones also have bad effects on people．They are very common for young people to lower down their heads to check on smart phones．They don't have face−to−face communication with others，which is not good．What's worse，more and more students are so addicted to playing games using their smart phones that their grades have gone down．

As for me，I think we should make good use of smart phones，which is just a tool，not the main part of our life．

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。要求根据内容提示写一篇短文，谈谈自己对智能手机恒用的看法。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

（一）

现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。

提示：

1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？

2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？

3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？

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【答案】

The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and  convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.

So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

（二）

随着智能手机的逐渐普及,  人们可以用手机做的事情越来越多。很多人喜欢玩手机,  尤其喜欢用免费WiFi上网。用手机上网的确能做很多事情,  比如聊天、查询信息、购物等。但是手机上网也存在一定的弊端和风险,  比如个人信息泄露,  遭遇网络攻击或者网络诈骗。请你结合自身经历，用英语写一篇短文,  谈谈你对用免费WiFi上网的看法。

要求：1.词数不少于80词；

2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。

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【答案】

It’s true that many people like getting online by using free WiFi. It’s very convenient. However, there are many dangers lying in using the free WiFi.

I used to use free WiFi when I was out. But later, many useless messages came to my phone. And one day, I was told that I won a prize that was worth 5,000 yuan and they needed my bank account. Of course I didn’t believe it. But it was clear that some of my personal information had been exposed to someone.

So we should learn to keep us safe online. First, we’d better not use free WiFi in public, especially in strange places. Second, we shouldn’t put too much personal information on the Internet. Finally, we should be careful when we lend our mobile phones to others.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，在介绍免费WiFi上网给人们带来便利的同时，也存在一定的弊端和风险。并结合自身经历，发表对免费WiFi上网的看法。本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥，作文主要包括三部分的内容。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称。注意多种时态的交替使用；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

（三）

随着互联网和科技的发展，手机的功能越来越强大。然而，对手机的过度依赖却成了社会的一种普遍现象。请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。

注意事项：

1.短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；

2.根据情况作适当发挥；

3.90个词左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名。

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【答案】

The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has also brought us some problems. First of all, some students stay up late using the smart-phone. Some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for the answer rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework. Some use the smart phone when they crossing the street. As we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory worse and worse. Besides, no one can ignore the fact that a growing number of people are occupied in chatting online and Wechat so that it will be difficult for them to communicate with others face to face in real life. In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health. They can’t listen to teachers in class carefully.

In my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中正确使用比较形式，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

（四）

近来网络上流行一句话：“世界上最远的距离是我在你对面，你却在看手机。”这句话真实反映了当前的社会现象，“手机控”，“低头族”越来越多且呈年轻化趋势。请你以“My opinion on using the mobile phone"为题针对这一现象发表个人观点，并提出改进建议。

提示词：a mobile phone freak 手机控

My opinion on using the mobile phones

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【答案】

My opinion on using the mobile phones

Mobile phones are widely used these days. More and more people use mobile phones to do different kinds of things, such as chatting and shopping. But they spend too much time on the mobile phones. More and more mobile phone freaks appear. Not only the adults but also the children are members of them.

I don't think it's normal. Watching mobile phones too much is bad for our eyes. We have little time to exercise. It's not good for our health. We pay more attention to it, it influences our study and lives. We have less and less time to communicate with others.

In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time. Reading, exercising, visiting friends and communicating with families are also good ways to spend your free time.

I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求对‘手机控’这一现象发表个人观点，并提出改进建议。结合要求可以首先描述现在的实际情况，然后发表个人观点，最后提出改进意见。短文主要用一般现在时态。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色.. Not only the adults but also the children are members of them.，such as，More and more，I don't think it's normal.，less and less ，In my opinion, instead of，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。

In my opinion, we can take mobile phones with us in our studying time.

But we must use them in the right way.

As for me，I think we should make good use of smart phones，which is just a tool，not the main part of our life．

In my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life.

In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time.

I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.

First, when you send messages or play the mobile phone games, you can't pay attention to your study.

In addition, some students spend too much money on the phones.

And the mobile phone radiation can do harm to our health as well.

 So I don't think it's necessary for students to bring mobile phones at school.

（一）

目前，中学生带手机上学已成为一种普遍现象。在一次英语课上同学们就此问题进行了讨论。请你根据下面的提示写一篇发言稿， 阐述自己的看法。

提示：

1、学生玩手机游戏或接发短信影响学习。

3、上课时手机铃声影响老师上课。

2、手机费用给自已和父母带来麻烦。

4、手机辐射对身体有害。

要求：

1、内容充实,语义连贯；

2、参考提示内容，也可适当发挥；

3、80-100词左右，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：手机辐射mobile phone radiation

Hello, everyone!

We all know that mobile phones have become popular with middle school students. But I think mobile phones can bring us problems.

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【答案】

Hello, everyone!

We all know that mobile phones have become popular with middle school students. But I think mobile phones can bring us problems.

First, when you send messages or play the mobile phone games, you can't pay attention to your study. Second, the rings of the phone will influence other students and teachers in class. In addition, some students spend too much money on the phones. This brings trouble to themselves and their parents. And the mobile phone radiation can do harm to our health as well.

So I don't think it's necessary for students to bring mobile phones at school.

【解析】

题干解读：这篇作文要求以中学生带手机上学这一普遍现象，就此问题进行讨论。并根据提示写一篇发言稿。这一题目设计非常贴合学生们的实际生活，题目给出了一些提示，学生们可以此为依据，联系自己的生活实际，组织语言，串联成文。审题可知，短文应主要从三个方面进行介绍：1.对学生的危害；2.对老师的影响；3.对家人的影响。文章应使用一般现在时态、第一、三人称叙述。

例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，从实际生活出发，根据题干中给出的关键词，介绍了手机在学生生活中对学生、老师及家长的影响，提出了自己的看法和建议。首先文章内容完整，结构清晰。短文分三段：第一段总体说中学生带手机上学很普遍，但会带来危害；第二段具体说影响及危害是什么；第三段只有一句话，是对整篇文章的一个总结，提出了学生带手机上学是没有必要的。短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。文章中使用了简单句、宾语从句、状语从句等结构，句式多变，表达流畅。

高分亮点：

短语：pay attention to；do harm to；play the mobile phone games；in addition；as well。

句型：1. First, when you send messages or play the mobile phone games, you can't pay attention to your study.

2. In addition, some students spend too much money on the phones.

3. And the mobile phone radiation can do harm to our health as well.

4. So I don't think it's necessary for students to bring mobile phones at school.

（二）

随着手机的普及，越来越多的人痴迷于手机，纷纷加入低头族。请你参考下图反映的现象及内容提示，围绕“拒为低头族”（stop phubbing），用英语写一篇80词左右短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

内容提示：

1.我身边也有很多低头族，非常喜欢玩手机。

2.他们不停用手机发信息、上网、玩游戏或拍照。

3.影响学习和生活。上课或工作时间玩手机极大浪费时间。

4.引发健康问题，长时间玩手机引发眼、背、颈痛。

Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them. ______________________________________________________________________

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【答案】

Nowadays, lots of people have their own mobile phones, but more and more people are crazy about their mobile phones. It is common to see people staring at their mobile phone everywhere all the time, taking no notice of the people around them.

There is a lot of phubbing around me. They like playing with mobile phones very much. They can’t stop sending text messages, surfing the Internet, playing mobile games and even taking photos with mobile phones.

However, phubbing influences /affects not only our studies, but also our life. Phubbing, whether playing phone games or sending text message, especially in class or at work, is a big waste of time. What’s more, it can lead to health problems. For example, using a mobile phone too much can cause eyes or back and neck pain.

In my opinion, it is time for us to throw away our phones and raise our heads. We should do more exercise and take part in real-life activities. When we use phones properly we can live a happy life.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读写作提示并认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。在检查环节，考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

（三）

根据要求完成大作文，70-80词。(15分)智能手机(smart-phone)的使用现在已经非常普遍了，尤其是在年轻当中。它在给我们带来方便的同时，也带来了一些问题：

1、手机强大的储存功能使得人们的记忆力越来越差；

2、网络聊天、微信使得人与人之间缺乏面对面的交流，造成人际交往困难；

3、青少年沉迷于网络游戏，导致睡眠质量差，影响身体健康；

4、学生甚至做作业也依赖智能手机，不愿自己独立思考。

5、你的观点……

（写作内容）

1.智能手机带来的问题；

2.你的观点。

（写作要求）

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。文章开头已给出

The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has also brought us some problems.________

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【答案】

The smart-phone has brought us great convenience. However, it has brought us some problems. First of all, as we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory get worse and worse. Besides, no one can ignore the fact that a growing number of people are occupied in chatting online and WeChat so that it will be difficult for them to communicate with others face to face in real life. In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health. Last but not least, some students prefer to surf the Internet to search for the answer rather than think it by themselves even when they do their homework. As a consequence, in my opinion, we should use the smart-phone correctly instead of depending on it too much in our daily life.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，要点是以提纲形式出现的，做题时包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。又要包括所有的要点，考生要多使用复杂句，一句话中多包含些信息。

写作亮点：范文使用一些多变的高级句式，如定语从句的使用First of all, as we all know, the smart-phone can store a great deal of information, which makes our memory get worse and worse.和In addition, some teenagers are addicted to playing Internet games, resulting in their suffering a poor sleep, which does great harm to their health..等；高级词汇和短语的灵活运用，如Last but not least，As a consequence等

（四）

请以“Mobile phone”为题写一篇英语短文。

要求：1. 词数80左右，文中不能出现自己的姓名和班级的名称；

2. 要求从手机的生产、形状、功能等等方面阐述手机的过去与现在的不同；

3. 书写规范，卷面整洁。

参考词汇：智能手机smartphone 功能 function 形状 shape 微信wechat

Mobile phone

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【答案】

With the fast development, more and more people have mobile phones. Mobile phones used to be very big, but now they get smaller and smaller. They have more functions. They are called smart phones. The smart phones bring lots of happiness to people and we can use them to do a lot of things. Such as, we can talk with each other by WeChat. No matter how far we are, we can send text messages, take photos, listen to music, read, play games and so on. It is very convenient for us to use mobile phones. But if we spend too much time on the phone, it's bad for our health. So we should use it properly.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇以“手机”为话题的作文，结合写作要求把各项有条理地表达出来。根据内容提示可知本文主要运用一般现在时态，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了used to, bring...to..., such as，no matter , send text messages, take photos，listen to, but, so等词或固定搭配，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰；还使用了被动语态、if引导的条件状语从句、固定句型“It’s +形容词+for sb. +to do sth.”等丰富的句型，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。