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这是一份中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 13 学雷锋 (含答案)，共18页。

热点13 学雷锋

学雷锋无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：学雷锋。

【预测题目】

（一）

助人为乐是中华民族类传统美德(virtue)。作为一名中学生，我们应该在学习和生活中学会帮助别人，关心他人……请你以“Helping Others”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的想法。

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【答案】

Helping Others
     All of us know everyone needs help and everyone can help others.
    For example, it's our duty to clean up the classroom. We can help our classmates keep the classroom
clean.
     Our English teacher often tells us: helping others is helping ourselves! You help others today. Maybe you
will get a great help from others. But I think to give is better than to receive. I like to help the people who are
in trouble. His or her smile is enough.
     To make the world more beautiful, let's help each other.

（二）

3月5日是学雷锋纪念日，你校师生去敬老院开展志愿者活动。假如你是李华，请通过邮件将此活动情况介绍给Mary。

　　活动时间：3月5日

　　活动地点：幸福敬老院(Nursing Home)

　　参与人员：志愿者

活动形式：

1. 送鲜花、水果和美好的祝福。

　　2. 帮老人整理房间、打扫卫生……

　　3. 陪老人聊天;为老人表演(唱歌、跳舞)，读报……

　　活动感想：此活动很有意义，从中学会了关爱老人、尊重老人……

要求：

1. 要点齐全，条理清晰，语句通顺，不要逐字翻译，须适当发挥。

　　2. 词数100字左右。(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)

　　Dear Mary,

　　Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March.______________________

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If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.

　Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Mary,

　　Thank you for your last E-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March.

　　As a member of volunteers, I got up early because I was too excited to sleep. In the morning, we volunteers brought some flowers and fresh fruit. As we arrived at the Happiness Nursing Home, we sent them our best wishes too. How happy they were!

　　Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, some of us performed activities for them, such as singing songs and dancing. Some of us read newspaper for them. Some of us chatted with them. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.

　　From this meaningful activity, I found that we are supposed to care for the old and respect them. In our daily life, we should offer our seats to them on buses. And we should treat our own grandparents more kindly.

　　If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.

　　Li Hua

（一）

作为中学生，在学雷锋活动中可以做些什么呢?请以How can I help others 为题写篇英语短文。

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【答案】

How can I help others

　　Last month, our school hold an activity about" learn from uncle Lei feng".As we all known, Lei feng devoted his whole life to helping others.but he gets lots of respects. He give us a good example.we should learn from him to help others. We can feel good when we help others.

　　How can I help others. I think I can do lots of things. For example, I can help my classmates with their study and other things. I can give my seat to the old people on bus. And I can sent money or clothes to help the poor children. I can also volunteer to take care of the old people on weekends.

　　Everyone may have troubles in his life. Helping others is very important in our life. I think we can get much when we help the people around us.And our world will become more and more beautiful.

（二）

今年我市深入开展了“学习雷锋精神，共创文明城区”的活动。在3月5日学雷锋纪念日这天，你校组织志愿者去广安敬老院开展“学雷锋，送温暖”活动。假如你是广安七中学生张华，请你将活动情况介绍给美国朋友Ben，与他分享你的美好经历。

活动时间：3月5日活动

地点：广安敬老院（Guang’an Nursing Home）

参加人员：学校志愿者（volunteer）

活动形式：

1．送去鲜花和水果

2．帮助打扫卫生

3．陪老人聊天（chat with sb）、唱歌、跳舞

4．送去美好祝愿

5．……活动感想关爱（care for）老人（the elderly people），尊重（respect）老人

要求：

1．短文应包括表中所有要点，可适当发挥；

2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

3．文章不低于80词。开头、结尾已给出。

Dear Ben,

Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.__________________

___________________________________________________________________________________________

If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

【答案】

Dear Ben,

Thank you for your last e-mail. Let me tell you what we did on 5th March in our school.

As soon as we volunteers got to Guang’an Nursing Home, they gave us a warm welcome. We brought some flowers and fruits to the elderly people. We cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. Then we sang and danced. How happy we were! After that, we sat together chatting with each other and gave our best wishes to them. The elderly people were very excited. When it was time for us volunteers to leave, they were grateful for our kindness. But I felt it our duty to care for the elderly people and respect them.

If you have the chance in China, I hope you can join us.

Yours,

Zhang Hua

（三）

每年三月是我国的学雷锋活动月，来自英国的交换生对雷锋同志和雷锋精神了解很少。请你根据下列提示写一篇文章向交换生们介绍一下雷锋同志的生平和事迹。

注意事项:1.词数: 100词左右; 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名,校名等信息; 3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并做适当发挥.

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【参考范文】

Lei Feng

Lei Feng was born in a poor family in Hunan in 1940. He lost all the family members at the age of 7, and he became an orphan. At the age of 20,he joined the army. He died in an accident in 1962.

He was kind and friendly to others. He was helpful. When he saw the people in need, he always helped them. He was selfless. When facing difficulties, he always thinks of others first.

He gave his all to his country. He set a good example to people. Chairman Mao called on all Chinese to learn from him. Now every March is the month of learn-from-Lei Feng activities in China.

【解析】

这是一篇材料作文，根据下列提示写一篇文章向交换生们介绍一下雷锋同志的生平和事迹。字数100字左右。本文人称主要是第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时。认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读所给提示，所给提示就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚。不能出现真实的姓名、学校名和地名。要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

雷锋

雷锋1940年出生在湖南一个贫困家庭。他在7岁时失去了所有的家庭成员，成为了孤儿。他20岁时参军了。他在1962年的一次事故中丧生。

他对别人和蔼可亲。他总是乐于助人。他乐于助人。当他看到有需要的人时，他总是帮助他们。他无私奉献。面对困难时，他总是先想到别人。

他把他的一切奉献给了他的国家。他给人们树立了一个好榜样。毛主席号召全体中国人向他学习。现在每年三月都是学习雷锋在中国活动的月份。

【点睛】

书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，语言要规范，时态运用要正确，叙述清楚条里，信息表达清晰、完整，意思连贯。要学以致用。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

（四）

假如你是王伟，你在“学雷锋纪念日”参加了志愿者去敬老院慰问老人的社会实践活动。请你根据以下提示，给你的美国笔友Lisa写一封电子邮件，向她介绍此次活动。

提示：活动：送鲜花、水果；打扫卫生；读报 ……

你参加活动后的感想：……

要求：要点齐全，80词左右，可适当发挥。电子邮件的格式已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lisa,

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Yours,

Wang Wei

【答案】

Dear Lisa,

I went to an old people’s home with some volunteers. We did many things for the old people. We brought them some flowers and fresh fruit. And we helped clean their rooms. After that, some of us sang songs and danced for them. Some of us read newspapers to them. Some of us talked with them. How happy they were!

I think this activity is very meaningful. I learned that we should care for the old around us every day.

Yours,

Wang Wei

【解析】

这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如with some volunteers，for the old people，clean their rooms，after that,，some of us，talk with，be very meaningful，care for，around us等。而结尾I think this activity is very meaningful. I learned that we should care for the old around us every day.两个宾语从句的运用更是为文章增色不少，是本篇习作的亮点。

【点睛】

这是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容可知用一般过去时，按照提示内容逐词进行扩句，进行适当发挥，最后连接成一篇短文。

When you help them ,you can know the meaning of happiness.
Helping each other is very important.
From now on, let us help others together!
Lei Feng has gone, but we can be new Lei Fengs.
Whenever and wherever, we can show our kindness.
As soon as we got there, the old gave us a warm welcome.
How happy we were!
If you have the chance to come to our school, I hope you can join us.
When it was time to leave, they were grateful for our kindness.
He thinks that we should care for the old people, because everyone will be old.

（一）

三月是学雷锋月，武汉三中的学生们计划做一些志愿者工作，请根据以下要点，写一篇短文（开头已给出）

1.李雷擅长修理东西，他决定去公园为人们修理自行车和电脑。

2.王英喜欢小孩，她想去帮助孩子们学读书。

3.陈欢希望去给老人们读报纸和讲故事，他认为我们应该关心老人,每个人都会老。

4.童小飞准备下周去打扫江滩公园，但他患了感冒并且发烧，为了让他早日康复，请你给他两三条建议。

参考词汇：擅长：be good at 关心：care for 江滩公园：Riverside Park

March is a month for us to learn from Lei Feng.The students in No.3 Middle School plan to do some volunteer work________________________________________________________________________________________

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【答案】

March is a month for us to learn from Lei Feng. The students in No.3 Middle School plan to do some volunteer work. Li lei is good at fixing things, he decides to go to the park to repair bicycles and computers for people. Wang Ying likes children, she wants to help the children learn to read. Chen Huan wants to read newspapers and tell stories to the old people. He thinks that we should care for the old people, because everyone will be old. Tong Xiaofei is going to clean Riverside Park next week, but he had a cold and fever. I think he should give up his plan and see a doctor. Stay at home and have a good rest. I hope he will get better soon.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用信息提示写作的材料作文。要求根据信息提示，以志愿者工作为话题，写一篇短文。由于在要点中给出了写作的大致方向，动笔前要围绕要点组织材料，确定人称及时态。写作中，应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

写作亮点：本文要点明确，语言精练。层次分明。要点全面。语言的表述符合语法的结构，时态的选择非常准确，并注意到主谓一致。He thinks that we should care for the old people, because everyone will be old.具有教育意义。

（二）

2019年济南市入选全国文明城市。为巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委正在开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该从以下几个方面来规范自己的言行举止。请根据下列提示，写一篇短文。

倡导低碳	骑自行车或步行上学，注意节约……
保护环境	爱护花草，不乱扔垃圾……
礼貌待人	常说“谢谢”、“ 对不起”、“ 请”等礼貌语言……
帮助他人	助人为乐，积极参加志愿者活动……

要求： 1.词数100个左右。

2.所写短文必须包括以上内容，自由发挥的内容必须围绕主题。

3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.

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【参考范文】

In order to build a civilized city, we students are supposed to behave well in our daily life.

First.we should choose to live a low-carbon life. We’d better go to school by bike or on foot. When we are shopping. we can use baskets or cloth bags instead of plastic bags. We should also pay attention to saving. We must say NO to waste. We shouldn’t buy anything we don’t need.

Second，it’s our duty to protect the environment. We mustn’t throw litter or rubbish about and we should take care of trees and flowers.

Third，it’s necessary for us to show good manners to others/ be polite to others. We need to say polite words such as“Thank You. I’m sorry and Please” as often as possible.

Finally, we should devote ourselves to helping others. We should learn from Lei Feng and be willing to help others. It’s important for us to take part in voluntary work.

We should try our best to make our city more and more beautiful!

【解析】

本文是一篇给材料作文。为使济南市入选全国文明城市，巩固文明城市创建成果，共建美好济南，济南市团委开展“学雷锋、讲文明、树新风”的活动，作为一名中学生，我们平时应该规范自己的言行举止。要求根据所给出的提示，写一篇短文。根据所给材料可知时态用一般现在时，人称用第一人称。本文给出的材料比较具体全面，考生需要用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，并可进行适当想象发挥。写作中注意理顺要点，防止漏写，注意表达的条理性、连贯性；注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误；要使用自己有把握的句式、单词，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求；检查段落是否完整，句子表达是否准确，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。

点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

（三）

在和谐幸福的社会里，人与人之间互相帮助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。三月份是“学雷锋”月，学校将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World More Wonderful”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李文要参加这次比赛，请你以“李文”的名义用英语写一篇演讲稿。（要点：当志愿者去敬老院帮助老人，捐赠钱物给贫困地区的儿童，热爱班级，为班级做一些力所能及的事情）

词数：60-80词, 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数；

文中不能出现自己的姓名及学校名称；

包含所有要点，可适当发挥。

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Wen. It’s nice to speak here. ______________________________________________

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Thank you for your listening!

【参考范文】

Hello, everyone. I’m Li Wen. It’s nice to speak here. Helping others is a wonderful thing. It is nice for people who you help and it is also nice of you. When you help your classmates, you can get along well with them, your friendship can develop quickly. If you give a hand to the old , you will feel very happy. In our life, patients are worth needing help most. When you help them ,you can know the meaning of happiness. Helping each other is very important. From now on, let us help others together!

Thank you for your listening!

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。

写出顺序的词来表达文意更清楚。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

（四）

全国各地都在积极开展“学雷锋”活动。你了解雷锋吗？请谈谈你的看法和今后的打算。

1. 谈谈你所了解的雷锋。

2. 你将来的打算：

（1）努力学习；（2）送书，帮助贫困孩子；（3）周末看望老人；（4）在家帮助父母做家务。

注意：1. 词数在100个左右；开头已给出，不计入总次数。

2. 覆盖所有要点；可适当发挥，增肌细节，以便行为连续。

The Spirit (精神) of Lei Feng

The people all over China are learning from Lei Feng now._______________________________________

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【参考范文】

The Spirit of Lei Feng

The people all over China are learning from Lei Feng now. He is the great example to all of us. He was always ready to help others and never asked for anything. So he became the spirit of Chinese people.

As a students of the 21stcentury, we should learn from him and try to help others. But what should we do? First , we should study hard so that we can have more abilities to help others. Second, we could help the children. Give them books, warm clothes, raise money for charities and so on. And on weekends, we can visit old people, spend time with them and help them as much as possible .Finally, we should help our parents with housework at home. Because parents are often tired of hard work.

Lei Feng has gone, but we can be new Lei Fengs. Whenever and wherever, we can show our kindness.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。话题内容贴近学生学习生活实际，学生有较大的发挥空间。动笔前要认真审题，挖掘深层内涵，勾勒要点，并适当发挥。行文时注意时态及主谓一致问题，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】

这篇短文内容表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，使文章自然流畅。同时，使用了一些常用的句式和短语，这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累，牢记一些常用句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

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