中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 15 交通问题 (含答案)

这是一份中考英语二轮复习作文热点素材+精彩范文热点 15 交通问题 (含答案)，共18页。
热点15 交通问题 交通问题无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，选择的2021年中考英语写作预测话题是：交通问题。【预测题目】（一）越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢?　　请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右)　　内容包含：遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。劝父母不能酒后驾车。　　你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。　　参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线　　注：第一段已给出，不计入总数　　With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents.　　Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc.　　We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks. （二）请根据下面所给的题目和英文提纲，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈你对城市交通问题的看法。 Almost every modern city faces traffic problems.There is always heavy traffic on the main streets and traffic accidents often happen.Main causeThe increasing populationHow to deal with (处理）traffic problemsTake some measures (措施) to reduce the traffic problemsBe more careful on the street.  _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Urban traffic problemAlmost every modern city faces traffic problems .There is always heavy traffic on the main streets and traffic accidents often happen. People waste a lot of time in waiting the bus or on their way home. It's time the government take measures to improve the traffic conditions. The main reason is the increasing population.
    In my view,first,government should broad the road to make more cars pass through.second,people should be encouraged to go by bus or bike instead of driving cars,this will definitely reduce the air pollution as well.Third,people can go by subway in the rush hours.Fourth,people must be careful on the street.In a word ,I believe that we can improve our traffic conditions if we try our best.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍城市的交通问题，并列出交通的原因，以及解决措施，其中，列出改善交通的措施是本文的难点。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如waste a lot of time in waiting the bus, on their way home, instead of driving car, try our best . In my view，In a word等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。 （一）由于社会的发展，人们的生活水平有了很大的提高，但随之也出现了许多问题。现在，学校举办征文活动，请大家介绍我们的家乡，并为更好地建设家乡出谋划策。要点如下：1. 我们家乡过去是个小镇，……，如今……。(适当扩充)2. 游玩的最佳时节：春天。天气……景色……3. 存在问题：一些人不遵守交通规则; 污染严重，……4. 措施：自己……，希望政府……具体要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，字迹工整；2. 必须包含所有相关信息，并作适当发挥。3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数, 100词左右。My hometownWith the development of our society, my hometown has changed a lot.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】With the development of our society, my hometown has changed a lot. It used to a small town. There were small houses everywhere. The roads were narrow. But the air was fresh and the river was clean. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. Tall buildings and Wide Streets can be seen in it. Spring is the best time to visit here. The weather is fine and you can enjoy the beauty views. Everything seems to be nice.Surely, there’re some problems. For example, some people don’t obey the traffic rules. That causes traffic accidents easily. And pollution is also another biggest problem.In many places, rubbish is thrown into lakes and rivers. So many of them are polluted.Because of this, I think the government should make stricter laws to protect the environment. As a teenager, I should plant more trees around my neighbourhood and help the police watch the traffic in my free time. I hope that everyone can do something to make a difference.【解析】试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。 （二）李雷和他的同学要到圆山去春游。因为春天是爬山的最好时候。天气好，即不会太冷也不会太热。李雷和他的同学骑自行车去圆山，结果在路上，李雷拐错了弯，发生了交通事故，伤到了右腿。所以说遵守交通规则对于我们来说非常重要。 我们平时必须遵守 交通规则。 1. 注意交通灯。红灯停,绿灯行。 2.不要骑得太快，应该靠右边行。3. 骑车要小心，戴头盔。 4. 不能违反交通规则， 否则会被罚款。We should obey the traffic rules_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】We should obey the traffic rulesLi Lei and his classmates wanted to go to Mount Yuan for the spring field trip .Because spring is the best time to climb mountains. The weather is very fine .It’s not too cold and not too hot .Li Lei and his classmates decided to go there by bike. But on the way, Li Lei made a wrong turn, and a traffic accident happened. Li Lei’s right leg was hurt. (His classmates had to send him to the hospital.)So it’s very important for us to obey the traffic rules. First, when the lights turn red, we must stop. When the lights turn green, we can cross the road. Second, we shouldn’t ride too fast and we should ride on the right of the road. Third, we should always be careful and wear bicycle helmets when we ride bikes. Fourth, if we break the traffic rules, we’ll get a fine.【解析】试题分析：根据题目要求可知本文主要以第一人称书写。在介绍春游及发生交通事故时要用一般过去时，但介绍交通规则时要用一般现在时，并使用情态动词should。可以适当使用序数词使得行文条理。 （三）你的朋友住在美国乡村，学校离家2公里远，在那里，人们最常用的交通工具是公共汽车，自行车和小汽车。请写一封信，向你远方的朋友介绍一下你最喜欢的一种交通工具，并向他（她）建议一种合适的交通工具。（50词以上）_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear Jack,Thanks for your last letter.You said you live in the countryside.It’s 2kilometers from your home to school.People take a bus,ride their bikes or drive their cars to go anywhere they like.As for me,my home isn't far from school.I usually go to school on foot.But sometimes I go by bike.Bicycle is my favorite,because it's easy and comfortable.I can go anywhere if possible.I don’t have to worry about rush hour and traffic jam.Meanwhile,I can enjoy the sights along the road.It doesn't do harm to the environment too.Is bicycle your favorite transportation? I hope you will like it .Please write to me soon.Yours,Wang wei【解析】试题分析：这是一篇书信作文。题目所给材料内容清楚，观点鲜明，要求明确，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，注意书信格式以及上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写作亮点: 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上使用了简单句和复合句，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。同时，书信格式符合英文习惯，符合八年级学生的写作水平。 （四）假如你在街上目睹了一起交通事故，一辆小汽车违反交通规则，撞倒了一位老人，最后路人把老人送到了医院。请你把事情的经过写成一篇70词左右的英语短文。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】It was 7：15 in the morning. I saw a car accident with my own eyes. I was on my way to school at that time. I saw a car was going fast on the Third Street. When the traffic light turned red, the car didn't stop and hit an old man. The old man could not move, so he just sat on the ground. Everyone was surprised. About two minutes later, people stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.【解析】这篇作文要求我们描写一次交通事故的经过。题目中简单地给出了事故的起因、过程和结果，而学生们写作时，应再增加更多的细节，更详细地叙述事情的经过，这样才能使文章“有血有肉”，更加充实。审题可知，短文描述的是过去发生的事情，因此应使用一般过去时，注意谓语动词应变为过去式，尤其应注意不规则动词过去式的变化。写作时应注意：首先按照事情发生、发展的顺序记叙该事件，叙述应条理、清楚，内容应完整、充实。其次应注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。如可以简单句结构为主，穿插并列句和复合句的使用，使文章句式富于变化，也可以提升文章的档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意衔接自然，表达流畅。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，记叙了一次交通事故的经过。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章叙述清晰、有条理。短文按照事情发展的顺序记叙，符合记叙文的特点和要求。内容完整、充实，叙述详细。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时、第三人称为主来叙述，注意了谓语动词过去式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式，如was, saw, could, took等等。语法规范，用词准确，语言得体。句式结构完整，以简单句结构为主，也使用了时间状语从句和并列句的结构，长短句结合，使文章富有节奏的变化，也提升了作文的档次。短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如I saw a car accident with my own eyes. I was on my way to school at that time.、When the traffic light turned red, the car didn't stop and hit an old man.、The old man could not move, so he just sat on the ground. Everyone was surprised. 、About two minutes later, people stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.等等。The law requires you wear a seatbelt.This vehicle stops frequently.Here is my claim tag.How soon will I find out my lost baggage?Where is the tourist service center?Is there an airport bus to the city?You can get a taxi at the pick-up point.Take me to this address,please.Is there Chinese cuisine in the dining car?What is the gate number?           （一）越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如塞车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(100字左右)内容提示：1、遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。2、别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。3、劝父母不能酒后驾车。你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents。Traffic safety is everybody's business. We must obey the rules. For example, we must walk on walk side, when we cross zebra – crossing, stop and look right and left, then go across fast. Don’t play football on the road .We can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc。We can say cars are coming into our life, but only when everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody's business can we be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks。【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇有关交通安全的短文, 介绍作为中学生我们应该怎么做，结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we are happy that……，it has also brought…….，Traffic safety is……，we must……，we can……，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了现在有很多交通问题，接下来介绍我们应遵守的交通规则，最后指出人人认为交通安全是自己的事，我们才能在路上安全行驶。此处come into, such as, for example, tell sb not to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 （二）随着路面上车辆越来越多，交通安全成为了人们日益关心的问题。在车祸中丧生的人数每年都在增长。我们应该怎样提高人们的安全意识呢？请向你的同学写一篇倡议书。内容包括：1. 认真遵守交通规则，时刻牢记安全第一。2. 有许多交通规则，但最基本的是红灯不能过马路；3. 请你提出两条有关遵守交通规则方面的建议。要求：1、表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；2、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；3、词数80左右（不含首尾句所给出的词数）。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Dear classmates,Nowadays, more and more people drive cars. However, more and more people are killed in car accidents. Traffic safety is everybody’s business. Remember safety is the first all the time. There are many traffic rules in our country, but the most basic is that we mustn’t cross the road when the light is red. We must obey the traffic rules seriously. For example, we must walk on sidewalk. When we cross crosswalk, stop and look both ways, then go across fast. Don’t play on the road, we can tell our parents not to drink before they drive, not to run through red lights, not to talk and laugh while driving etc. If everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody’s business, we can be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.Thank you for your patience!【解析】试题分析：本题要求以提高交通安全意识，向你的同学写一篇倡议书。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，确定写作内容；文章必须包括所给的三条信息，但不要逐句翻译，注意表达的条理性，用好连接词，可适当发挥使行文连贯。为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。写作亮点：本文要点明确，语言精练。层次分明。不同要点英语使用的句式也不一样。语言的表述符合语法的结构，复合句If everybody thinks traffic safety is everybody’s business, we can be safe driving on roads and walking on sidewalks.表达的非常到位，向全社会发出呼吁，具有号召力。 （三）如今的交通已经成了许多城市的主要困扰。假如你是一名工程师，请你设计一种交通工具，既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。要求：1. 要展开大胆的想象，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具。2. 内容要合理、完整、丰富与流畅。3. 词数：不少于80。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。An Important VehicleAs an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.【参考范文】 An important vehicleAs an engineer, I try my best to invent an important vehicle. It's an air bus. You are right. It's a kind of special bus, and it can also fly in the air. When there are too many cars and buses on the street, it can fly in the air. It doesn't cause any accidents or trouble. At the same time, it is so convenient that lots of people will take it. On the bus, there are enough seats for the passengers. What's more, it doesn't run on oil but a kind of special water.  That's to say it will be very good for people to take it, because it doesn't produce any pollution at all. I hope my idea can come true one day, and everyone can be interested in it.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文。假如你是一名工程师，要求你展开大胆的想象，设计一种交通工具，可以假设为一种空中交通工具，也可以是地上交通工具；既可以解决部分交通运行的问题，又有助于环保。根据所给的提示材料可知本文时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一和第三人称。在写作时，要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查字数是否符合要求。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。 （四） Traffic is now becoming a more and more serious problem in Shanghai. Could you please write a letter to the mayor to give your advice on how to solve the problem? Write at least 60 words. 上海的交通问题越来越严重，请你给市长写一封至少60个字的信提提建议来解决问题。Suggested points:* How is the traffic problem in Shanghai at the moment?* How does the traffic problem affect your life?* What good advice have you thought about on solving this problem?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】A letter to MayorRespected mayor, I’m a student from XXX. I’m worried about the traffic in Shanghai. It’s becoming a more and more serious problem, especially during rush hour because many people go to work in their own cars and some people don’t obey the traffic rules.I know Shanghai is trying to solve the traffic problem in different ways. However, the problem hasn’t been solved yet. I think it’s a good idea for the government to improve the public transportation so that more and more people would like to take the subway or buses. In addition, the government had better reduce the number of cars by increasing the cost of driving.I really hope there will be fewer traffic problems in our city.Best wishesXiaoH hua【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含目前上海的交通问题怎么样；交通问题如何影响你的生活；对于解决这个问题你有什么好的建议。2.例文点评：例文通过对目前上海的交通问题怎么样；交通问题如何影响你的生活；对于解决这个问题你有什么好的建议等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。3.高分亮点：词组：be worried about；a serious problem；obey the traffic rules；solve the traffic problem；in different ways；improve the public transportation；so that；In addition；the cost of driving等。句型： It’s becoming a more and more serious problem, especially during rush hour because many people go to work in their own cars and some people don’t obey the traffic rules./I know Shanghai is trying to solve the traffic problem in different ways./I think it’s a good idea for the government to improve the public transportation so that more and more people would like to take the subway or buses./I really hope there will be fewer traffic problems in our city.【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如be worried about；a serious problem；obey the traffic rules；solve the traffic problem；in different ways；In addition；the cost of driving等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。