2023新教材高考英语二轮专题复习层级二巧练板块组合40分写作规范练四

40分写作规范练(四)

第四部分　写作(共两节，满分40分)

第一节(满分15分)

[2022·广东省深圳市高三二模 ]4月22日，你校举行了 Earth Day Trade活动，倡议同学们交换闲置物品。请你为学校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

1．时间、地点；

2．活动简况；

3．活动效果。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

第二节(满分25分)

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

[2022·辽宁省辽南协作校高三第三次模拟]As long as I can remember, it is more than 5 years since Dad left us, whom we missed very much. And what we are supposed to do now is accompany Mum very well, caring for her as much as possible. Mum cherishes everything from Dad, especially the thing that gives her a beautiful memory.

Yesterday, after telling my brother Rhys, and me to stop playing like wild animals, Mum went to take a bath. We were having a pillow fight when suddenly one hit a vase. Mum heard the loud crash. Wasting no time, she went wiping into the room. I was sure that she was going to shout at us, but instead she just knelt by the pieces and began to cry.

This made Rhys and me feel pretty awful. We went over and put our arms around her, and she explained to us why she was so upset. In the pieces lay a broken glass rose, one pedal(花瓣) gone, which was given by Dad on their first wedding and anniversary. Dad had said that if he ever forgot to bring flowers home for an anniversary in the future, Mum was to look at that one. It was like their love: it would last a lifetime.

We began crying, and offered to glue it. But Mum said that wouldn't really fix. Now that it had been broken, the value of the “limited edition” had reduced. As Mum slowly began to pick up the mess, we tried everything we could think of to cheer her up, but even our best funny faces didn't work. Everything was picked up. Tears kept coming down her cheeks.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2．请按如下格式作答。

Seeing Mum going back to the bath, I stopped her.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

Mum hugged me very tightly and finally smiled.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

40分写作规范练(四)

第一节

参考范文

An activity named Earth Day Trade was held at 5 p. m．， on April 22 in our school to raise the students' awareness of caring for the earth.

The students actively took part in it and brought the stuff that they didn't need any more to the school. Many old things were traded, such as books, used electronic devices and so on. The students were glad that their old stuff wouldn't end up in trash cans, but instead turned out useful to others.

The activity proved a big success, and the students involved realized that even small acts could make a difference to the earth.

第二节

参考范文

SeeingMumgoingbacktothebath, Istoppedher. With great regret, I put both my hands on her shoulders, saying, “We are extremely sorry for what we carelessly did ，Mum. Please do forgive us”. Mum remained in sadness, keeping sobbing. And I continued /proceeded to comfort her, “All things can be broken, Mum. But the only thing that cannot be broken is our love, which is the strongest thing that can never be broken/destroyed.” At this time/Hearing this, Mum seemed to be a little relieved. Turning to me and looking me in the eye, she responded, “ You are right, my son.”

Mumhuggedmeverytightlyandfinallysmiled. She said genuinely to me, “Thank you, my dear son！” still with tears sparkling in her eyes. She felt really comforted and delighted to have a deeper understanding of what is the most valuable in the world—that is love. After dinner that night, Mum glued the petal with great care back onto the rose. Though stuck together, the places with cracks were still visible. Then she softly said, “My rose is truly unique. Its tiny damages remind me of something more important: the realization that love lasts forever.”