高中英语高考读后续写升华类素材(主题升华+句式升华)
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升华类素材
一、主题升华
(一)助人为乐
1.Roses given, fragrance in hand.(赠人玫瑰,手留余香。)
2.You reap what you sow.(种瓜得瓜;善有善报。)
3.Small kindness can bring/contribute to/give rise to a big difference.
(小小的善意可以产生大的影响。)
(二)积极向上,坚持不懈
1.Where there is a will, there is a way.(有志者事竟成。)
2.Actually, each individual possesses talent.Be brave, rise to setbacks/obstacles, and make efforts.You will end up creating miracles.(实际上,个人都有天赋。直面困难/努力/终将制造奇迹。)
3.Life without dreams is like a bird with a broken wing.(没有梦想的人生就像折翼的小鸟。)
4.Even you are suffering from the darkest moment, you should focus to seek the light.(当你遭遇最艰难的时刻也应该去寻找光明。)
(三)亲情主题
1.Family and friends are hidden treasures.(家庭和朋友是隐藏的财富。)
2.Family love is the greatest gift in life.(家人的爱是生命中最大的礼物。)
3.Family is to us what harbor is to ships.(家庭之于我们就像港口之于船只。)
二、句式升华
(一)非谓语(ing\ed作状语)
1.Breathing fire and fury, he gave me a look of burning anger.
他充满着怒火,用灼热的目光怒视着我。
2.She shook all over, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.如坐针毡
3.Seized by a sense of tension/terror, my palms were sweating.
紧张/恐惧感使我手心冒汗
(二)with伴随
1.I sat on the back of the bike with an uneasy expression on my face.
我坐在自行车后座,脸上带着不自在被情。
2.With excitement plunging abrupt,she grasped that I did mean it.
她突然激动起来,明白了我的意思。
3.She timidly replied with a slight frown.
她怯生生地皱着眉头回答。
(三)无灵主语句
1.A big smile of excitement lit up his face as he heard the good news.
听到这个好消息,他脸上露出兴奋的笑容。
2.Fear slowly crept upon her.
恐惧慢慢向她袭来。
3.Fear flooded over/ welled up in her.
恐惧涌上她的心头。
4.A frown slowly crept on my face.
我慢慢皱起了眉头。
5.The harsh words sent him into the depths of guilt.
刻薄的话语把他推进了内疚的深渊。
(四)强调句
1.Gratified and thrilled, I quickly told him what it was that we felt like doing.
又高兴又激动,我很快告诉他我们到底想要做什么。
2.It was exactly at that moment that I finally realized mother's love weighed more than anything in this world.或realized that nothing is more precious than mother's love.
正是在那时,我才意识到,母爱是世界上最珍贵的东西。
(五)倒装句
1.Recalling these hurtful words, so furious was Paul that he stormed out and slammed the door heavily, striding away without looking back.
他回想起这些伤人的字眼,气得暴跳如雷,重重摔门而去,头也不回地大步走开。
2.So scared did he feel that he felt his legs trembling unconsciously.
他感到如此害怕,以至于感觉自己的腿在不知不觉中颤抖。
3.On his rigid face there stood an expression of horror and hatred.
他僵硬的脸上有一种恐惧和仇恨的表情。
4.Never in my life had I been crushed by such a feeling of guilt.
在我生命中,从未对母亲感到如此愧疚。
(六)独立主格
1.Laughter lingering around the room, people's faces gleamed with joy.
笑声在房问萦统,人们的脸上都闪烁着快
(A flood of fear welling up, he felt like sitting on pins and needles.
他心中涌起了一阵恐惧,觉得坐如针毡。
2.Blood rushing to my face and heart thumping fiercely, I leapt to the back seat of the bike and ducked my head to avoid my friends' glances.
我涨红了脸,心脏怦怦直跳,跳起来坐到自行车后座,低下头以躲避朋友的眼神。
3.His heart ached/ sank, tears streaming down his cheeks.
他心头一沉,泪如雨下。
(七)形容词副词做状语
1.Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family.
满怀失望和沮丧,这个可怜的人回到了他的家。
2.Thrilled and enraptured, Jane quickened pace and sprinted to the helicopter, knowing that she would be rescued eventually.
简欣喜若狂,加快了步伐,向直升机冲去,她知道自己终于获救了。
3.Remorseful for my simple-minded behavior, thinking about the harsh words I had poured to my mother, I couldn't control my tears of guilty any more.
我对自己愚蠢的行为感到非常后悔。想着我对母亲说的那些难听的话,我再也没办法。