专题05 计划与愿望- 2023年高考英语书面表达热点话题考前押题必背

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专题05 计划与愿望
目 录
I. 词汇积累
II. 高频短语
III. 经典句型
IV. 范文背诵10篇
范文1………………………………………………………….理想职业
范文2………………………………………………………….大学专业计划
范文3………………………………………………………….介绍高三生活
范文4………………………………………………………….推荐大学
范文5………………………………………………………….我的梦想
范文6………………………………………………………….学习中医
范文7………………………………………………………….旅行计划
范文8………………………………………………………….道歉信
范文9………………………………………………………….计划安排
范文10………………………………………………………..倡议信-世界助残日










专题05计划与愿望
词汇积累
1．accomplish v．完成；达到；实现
2．acquire v．获得；取得；学到
3．addicted adj.入了迷的，上了瘾的
4．admit v．承认；许可进入
5．advise v．劝告；建议
6．ambition n．雄心
7．apply v．申请
8．arrange v．安排
9．arrangement n．安排；布置
10．attempt n．努力；尝试；企图
11．attitude n．态度；看法
12．aware adj.意识到的；知道的
13．beneficial adj.有益的
14．career n．职业；生涯
15．chance n．机会
16．compare v．对比；比较；比喻
17．conflict n．冲突；争执；矛盾；分歧
18．consult v．咨询，请教；商量
19．culture n．文化
20．declare vt.宣布；声称；声明
21．delay v．&n．拖延，推迟
22．desire n．愿望；欲望
23．despite prep.不管；尽管；任凭
24．distinction n．差别，区分
25．environmental adj.环境的
26．equality n．平等
27．evidence n．根据；证据
28．evident adj.明显的
29．general adj.普遍的；全面的
30．harm n．损害；危害
31．imagine v．想象
32．indicate v．表明；显示；指出
33．invitation n．邀请
34．lack v．&n．缺乏；不足
35．legal adj.合法的
36．meanwhile adv.与此同时；在此期间
37．motivation n．动机；动力；积极性
38．obvious adj.明显的；显然的
39．opinion n．意见；看法；主张；观点
40．opposite adj.相反的；对面的；prep.在……的对面
41．otherwise adv.否则；要不然
42．organize v．组织
43．outcome n．后果；结果
44．overcome v．战胜；克服
45．persuade v．劝说；说服
46．pollute v．污染；弄脏
47．prefer v．更喜欢；宁愿
48．prove v．证明
49．punish v．惩罚
50．recycle v．回收利用，再利用
51．refuse v．拒绝
52．relevant adj.有关的；相关的
53．remind v．提醒；使想起
54．schedule n．日程；安排
55．seek v．寻求；追求
56．suitable adj.合适的；适宜的
57．suppose v．认为；猜想；假设
58．therefore adv.因此；所以
59．thus adv.因而；于是
60．truth n．真相
61．unbelievable adj.难以置信的
62．view n．观点，看法
高频短语
1．above all 尤其；最重要的是
2．all in all 总而言之
3．according to 按照；根据；取决于
4．aim at 目的是……
5．be home to/be the home of 是……的产地/生长地
6．be prepared to do 准备做
7．be similar to 与……相似
8．ask permission from sb. 征得某人的许可
9．decide/be determined to 决定
10．devote oneself to 献身于；致力于
11．do the deed 付诸行动
12．end up 以……结束
13．feel like 想要
14．for lack of 因……不足
15．have a desire to do 希望做；有做……的欲望
16．have permission to do sth. 得到做某事的许可
17．in a word 总之；简言之；一句话
18．in the hope of 怀着……的希望
19．long for 渴望
20．long/hope/wish/want to do 渴望/希望/想做
21．lose sight of 看不见
22．make efforts to do sth. 努力做某事
23．mean/plan/intend to do 计划做
24．participate in 参加
25．realize one’s dream 实现某人的梦想
26．take action 采取行动
27．take up 从事
28．with the purpose of 带着……目的
29.in order to do sth 为了做某事
30.the Students’ Union 学生会
31. make a plan 制订计划
32.set goals; set a goal 设立目标
33.achieve one’s aim; reach/attain one’s goal; realize the goal
实现目标
34. after-school/extracurricular activities 课外活动
35. mean/plan/intend to do 打算做
36. deliver a speech 发表演说
37. have a picnic/barbecue 去野餐/烧烤
38. have an outing at the seashore 在海边郊游
39. hold a sports meet 举行运动会
40. hold the graduation ceremony 举行毕业典礼
41. make an announcement 通知
42. make preparations for; get ready for 为 ……做准备
43. meet the challenge 迎接挑战
44. do voluntary labor 做义务劳动
45. take part-time jobs 做兼职工作
46. take part in the social practice 参加社会实践
47. feel like doing sth; would like to do sth; want to do sth 想要做某事
48. be determined to do sth/make up one’s mind to do sth 下定决心做某事
49. would rather (not) do sth 宁愿(不)做某事
50. sign up for a match/contest/competition 报名参加比赛
51. broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界
52.Think twice before you do. 三思而后行
53. Great hopes make great man. 伟大的抱负造就伟大的人
经典句型
1．虚拟语气在非真实条件句中的用法
Had I worked harder in high school，I would be studying in university and enjoying the colorful life now.
如果我在高中更加努力学习，现在我会正在大学里享受着丰富多彩的生活。
2．where引导非限制性定语从句
I think，microblogs are just like a real world，where everybody should obey the laws and moral codes，and no absolute freedom should exist there at all.
我认为，微博就好像一个真正的世界，人人都应该遵守法律和道德标准，在那个世界没有绝对的自由。
3．rather than...
Firstly，we should try to listen to others’opinions.If he makes mistakes，try to point them out in a polite way rather than blame him.Secondly，never force your ideas on others.
首先，我们要努力聆听别人的观点。如果他犯了错误，用礼貌的方式指出而不是责备他。其次，不要把你的观点强加于他人。
4．get/be used to (doing)sth.
I will try to get used to the college schedule as soon as possible.
我将尽力尽快地适应大学的时间安排。
范文背诵
1.向往的职业
你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你以所向往的职业为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1.职业简介；
2.向往这一职业的原因。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文题目已为你写好。
My dream job
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【答案】 My dream job
I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession. As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times. Besides, I want to be a teacher because of the power of an example. Miss Li, the head teacher of my junior high school, is a kind and patient person who is very popular with us students. I have always followed her as an example and made up my mind to be a good teacher like her when I grow up. Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是提纲类作文，要求以所向往的职业为题写一篇文章。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求介绍自己向往的职业：你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你以所向往的职业为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：1.职业简介；2.向往这一职业的原因。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； profession（职业），sacred（神圣的），respect teachers and value education（尊师重教），example（榜样）， redouble（加倍）及realize（实现）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】
范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有dream of doing(梦想做某事)，because of（由于），make up one's mind to do（下定决心做某事），grow up (长大)，be popular with（受……欢迎）以及redouble one's efforts to do（加倍努力做某事），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As we all know, China has respected teachers and valued education since ancient times.”，定语从句“Miss Li, the head teacher of my junior high school, is a kind and patient person who is very popular with us students.”，状语从句“Although I know it is not easy to be a teacher, I will redouble my efforts to realize my dream.”及“I have dreamed of being a teacher since I was a child, because I think teaching is a sacred profession.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
2.大学专业计划
假如你是李明，刚刚高中毕业，你的美国好友 Jim 给你写信祝贺并想了解你大学的专业学习计划。请你根据自己的情况用英语写封回信，主要内容包括：
1. 你的专业选择；
2. 你选择该专业的理由；
3. 为此你打算怎么做。
注意：
1. 词数 80 左右；
2. 文中不得出现人名、校名等真实个人信息；
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
4. 可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
5. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
Thanks for your best wishes!
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear Jim,
Thanks for your best wishes!
I’m writing to tell you about the major I will choose in the university. I have decided to major in computer science. There are some reasons why I made such a decision. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life. Secondly, browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies, so I can study computer science better. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.
I know there is a long way to go. So now I must devote myself to study and try my best to get good grades in all subjects. If I can learn computer science as I wish, I will focus on it and study hard to develop some software.
Best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回信，向朋友讲述自己大学的专业学习计划。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：四段式结构。第一段表示感谢（已给出）；第二段讲述大学专业学习和理由；第三段讲述为此打算如何做；第四段寒暄结束并表达期待（已给出）。
要求：1.表达感谢（已给出）
2.讲述大学专业选择及理由
1）专业选择：计算机科学专业（major in computer science）
2）理由（play an important role; one of my hobbies; find a good job）
3.打算如何做。（focus on; study hard）
4.寒暄结束并表达期待（已给出）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
decide to do; major in; play an important role; graduate from college; devote oneself to; try one’s best to; focus on
第三步：连词成句
1. I have decided to major in computer science.
2. Firstly, with the development of society, computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.
3. Last but not least, being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.
4. So now I must devote myself to study and try my best to get good grades in all subjects.
5. If I can learn computer science as I wish, I will focus on it and study hard to develop some software.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：first of all; firstly/first; secondly/second…; and then; finally; in the end; at last
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了主从复合句，如：
I’m writing to tell you about the major I will choose in the university.(我写信是想告诉你我将在大学选择的专业。)这句话中“I will choose in the university”为定语从句，修饰先行词the major，从句中作宾语，关系代词可省略。
There are some reasons why I made such a decision.(我做出这样的决定是有原因的。)这句话中why引导定语从句。
If I can learn computer science as I wish, I will focus on it and study hard to develop some software.( 如果我可以如我所愿学习计算机科学，我会专注于它，努力学习，开发一些软件。)这句话中if引导条件状语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如decide to do; major in; play an important role; graduate from college; devote oneself to; try one’s best to; focus on等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3.介绍高三生活
假定你是李华，是重点中学的一名高三学生。请你用英语给你的美国笔友John写一封邮件，向他描述你的高三生活。内容包括：
1.你的高三学习生活；
2.你理想的大学。
注意：
1词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，但是不计入总词数。
Dear John,
I am glad to hear from you.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear John,
I’m very glad to receive your e-mail. I am writing to tell you something about my life of Senior 3.
As you know, I am a student in a key class of a key high school in our city. All the students in my class work very hard to get high scores in the coming College Entrance Examination. Thus, most of us are suffering from heavy pressure. But we strike a balance between work and rest and help each other. Tired as I am, I will do my best to improve my grades. Because I want to enter my dream university — Peking University, which is famous in China. I would like to realize my dream by working hard.
Is your life of Senior 3 busy and stressful?
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文。给美国笔友John写一封邮件，向他介绍你的高三生活以及理想的大学。
【详解】
第一步：根据提示可知，本文需用第一人称。
第二步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：a key high school, College Entrance Examination, suffer from, a balance between…and…, realize one’s dream等。
第三步：确定文章结构，本文可以采取三段的写法，第一段主要说明收到对方来信很高兴，并乐意介绍自己的高三生活；第二段介绍高三的生活和理想的大学；第三段提出自己的疑问表达自己想要了解对方的愿望。
第四步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要用一般现在时。
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多高级句型，如： Because I want to enter my dream university — Peking University, which is famous in China. 这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句；文章也使用了一些固定词组，如write to ; suffer from; do my best to等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
4.推荐上哪所大学
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1.表示欢迎；
2.推荐他上哪所大学；
3.建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim ,
I'm so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and 1 am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 1 suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in profound Chinese history and rich culture. As for preparation, some reading in advance is needed like The Story of'the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt to the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it's my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours ,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一则书信。
【详解】
根据提示可知，本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一则书信，时态应为一般现在时。关键要点如下：①对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学；②表示欢迎；③推荐他上哪所大学；④建议他做哪些准备工作。
第二步：根据关键要点，确定关键词，如：express my warmest welcome（热烈欢迎），Peking University（北京大学），spoken Chinese（汉语口语），Chinese Literature major（汉语言文学专业）等。
第三步：根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使之自然流畅，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面。
【点睛】
本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合书信的要求，其中不乏亮点句型。
非谓语动词的使用Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, 1 suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China.
地点状语从句的使用Its Chinese Literature major is perfect for you where you can be completely soaked in profound Chinese history and rich culture.
5.我的梦想
刚上高三的你，准备参加学校组织的英语演讲比赛。请以“我的梦想”为题，写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：
1. 梦想的具体内容；
2. 实现梦想的计划。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
My Dream
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【答案】
My Dream
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
Everyone has a dream. Some hope to be a doctor to help others relieve pain while others dream about travelling. My dream is to be a lawyer, for I’m an outgoing boy who cares about right and wrong. I will have a great sense of achievement if I help others.
To realize my dream, I’m going to take selective courses to get familiar with basic laws, reading more books on law as well. After graduation from college, I will set up my own law firm to help more people in need.
I know it is tough, but I do believe if the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.
Thank you.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇演讲稿，谈谈自己的梦想。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求： 1. 梦想的具体内容；
2. 实现梦想的计划。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
relieve pain；dream about travelling；care about；right and wrong；a great sense of；to realize my dream；get familiar with；set up；help people in need
第三步：连词成句
1. Some hope to be a doctor to help others relieve pain while others dream about travelling.
2. My dream is to be a lawyer, for I’m an outgoing boy who cares about right and wrong.
3. I will have a great sense of achievement if I help others.
4. To realize my dream, I’m going to take selective courses to get familiar with basic laws, reading more books on law as well.
5. After graduation from college, I will set up my own law firm to help more people in need.
6. I know it is tough, but I do believe if the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的语法结构，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整篇文章结构紧凑。如：To realize my dream, I’m going to take selective courses to get familiar with basic laws, reading more books on law as well.这句话运用了动词不定式to realize和 to get familiar with做目的状语，同时也使用了现在分词reading做状语。作者还使用了一些固定词组，如a great sense of；get familiar with等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6.学习中医
假定你是李华，你与美国笔友Jack约定在高考之后去美国拜访他，但现在因为新冠疫情你不能遵守约定，请你给他写封邮件,内容包括：
1.诚挚的歉意；
2.因疫情触发学习中医的想法。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.信的开头与结尾已经给出。
提加词:the novel coronavirus新冠病毒
Dear Jack,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours ,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jack,
How is everything going with you? It is a long time since we met last time. Much to my regret, I’m writing to extend my deepest apology for not being able to keep my word to pay a visit to you this summer.
With the novel coronavirus striking the whole world, all the countries are experiencing a lockdown. Undoubtedly, staying at home is the best policy for everybody. Having experienced the pandemic, I’ve learned that traditional Chinese medicine, as an indispensable part of Chinese culture, has remarkable effects in boosting immunity to resist rare diseases. Compared to western medicine, it also enjoys a more reasonable price and has fewer side effects, as a consequence of which I’m determined to learn it after the national entrance examination, hoping to inherit this cultural treasure and carry forward it to the whole world in the future.
Terribly sorry for any inconvenience caused, I would appreciate it if you could accept my apology. Looking forward to our next marvelous meeting.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达要求给美国笔友Jack，约定在高考之后去美国拜访他，但现在因为新冠疫情你不能遵守约定，请你给他写封邮件。
【详解】
这是一篇提纲类作文。审题：假定你是李华，你与美国笔友Jack约定在高考之后去美国拜访他，但现在因为新冠疫情你不能遵守约定，请你给他写封邮件,内容包括：1.诚挚的歉意；2.因疫情触发学习中医的想法。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：to one’s regret；keep one’s word；undoubtedly；indispensable；compare to；as a consequence of；inherit the cultural treasure；accept my apology等。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, as well as, not only…but (also) 。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句和固定句型：Much to my regret, I’m writing to extend my deepest apology for not being able to keep my word to pay a visit to you this summer.和Undoubtedly, staying at home is the best policy for everybody.使用了非谓语动词；With the novel coronavirus striking the whole world, all the countries are experiencing a lockdown.使用了with的复合结构；Compared to western medicine, it also enjoys a more reasonable price and has fewer side effects, as a consequence of which I’m determined to learn it after the national entrance examination, hoping to inherit this cultural treasure and carry forward it to the whole world in the future,这句话运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和非谓语动词。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
7.旅行计划
假设你是李明，你打算和几位朋友在暑假进行一次探险旅行。请根据所给信息，给住在另一座城市的外籍朋友Peter 发一封电子邮件介绍这次旅行计划，并邀请他一起旅行。
地点：海南岛
时间：7 月 15 日—21 日
主要活动：远足、爬山、游泳、篝火晚会等
注意事项：请带好游泳衣和护照
注意：1 词数 100 左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；
2 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3 篝火晚会campfire party; 护照 passport
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going? My friends and I have decided to go on an adventure trip to Hainan Island during the summer holiday. I am writing to tell you about our travel plan.
We will be traveling around Hainan Island from July 15th to 21st. While there we will go hiking, climb the mountains, swim near the beach and have a campfire party. We also plan to go diving if weather permits. I’d like you to join us if possible. I am sure we will have a lot of fun being together. Please remember to pack your bathing suit and take your passport.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，介绍海南岛旅行计划，并邀请他一起旅行。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：三段式结构。第一段寒暄问候以及讲述写信目的；第二段讲述具体旅行计划；第三段表达期待。
要求：1. 寒暄问候及讲述写信目的（how is everything going; tell you about our travel plan）
2. 讲述具体旅行计划
1）旅行目的地和时间安排（travel around Hainan Island from July 15th to 21st）
2）主要活动（go hiking; climb the mountains; swim near the beach; have a campfire party; go diving）
3) 提出邀请及注意事项（join; remember to pack your bathing suit and take your passport）
3. 表达期待（I am looking forward to your reply.）
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
decide to do; tell sb. about sth; travel around; go hiking; climb the mountains; swim near the beach; have a campfire party; go diving; plan to do; join sb.; have a lot of fun doing; remember to do; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. My friends and I have decided to go on an adventure trip to Hainan Island during the summer holiday.
2. I am writing to tell you about our travel plan.
3. We will be traveling around Hainan Island from July 15th to 21st.
4. While there we will go hiking, climb the mountains, swim near the beach and have a campfire party.
5. We also plan to go diving if weather permits.
6. I’d like you to join us if possible.
7. I am sure we will have a lot of fun being together.
8. Please remember to pack your bathing suit and take your passport.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。
1.作者在范文中使用了高级句式，如：
We also plan to go diving if weather permits.(如果天气允许的话，我们还计划去潜水。)这句话中“if weather permits”为独立主格结构。
I am sure we will have a lot of fun being together.(我相信我们在一起会很开心的。)这句话中“we will have a lot of fun being together”为宾语从句。
2.使用了一些固定词组，如decide to do; tell sb. about sth; travel around; go hiking; climb the mountains; swim near the beach; have a campfire party; go diving; plan to do; join sb.; have a lot of fun doing; remember to do; look forward to等。
全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
8.道歉信
假定你是李华，原定今年6月高考结束后去英国旅游并约定探访朋友Peter，现因故推迟。请你给Peter写信，包含以下要点：
1. 写信目的； 2. 推迟的原因； 3. 告知新计划。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
How are things going with you these days?
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How are things going with you these days? I’m terribly sorry to tell you that I can’t make it to London and visit you in June as previously scheduled.
With COVID-19 spreading around the world, everybody has been more or less affected, and I’m no exception. The greatest impact on me is that the College Entrance Exam this year in China has been postponed until July, as a consequence of which my summer vacation won’t begin until mid-July and I have to reschedule my trip to your city. If the virus is brought under control soon, I will go and see you next January, during my first college winter vacation, when it’ll be convenient for both of us.
Looking forward to seeing you then. Please stay safe.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信，向朋友Peter说明因为疫情自己不能如约去英国探访他。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
   总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：1. 说明写信目的
2. 解释推迟原因
3. 告知对方新计划
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
make it to；as promised；COVID-19；spread；College Entrance Exam；postponed；reschedule；under control；look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to visit you in London as promised.
2. With COVID-19 spreading around the world, our life has been affected seriously.
3. Especially, the College Entrance Exam this year in China has been postponed until July.
4. My summer vacation this year is also postponed, so I have to reschedule the trip to London.
5. If the virus is under control soon, let’s meet next winter vacation.
6. Look forward to seeing you. Take care of yourself please.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：The greatest impact on me is that the College Entrance Exam this year in China has been postponed until July, as a consequence of which my summer vacation won’t begin until mid-July and I have to reschedule my trip to your city.这句话运用了表语从句以及介词+关系代词引导的定语从句，这一长难句显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。全文没有中式英语的句式，上下句转换自然，表达流畅地道，使人赏心悦目。



9.计划安排
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony在你校做交换生，希望你教他包饺子，你写邮件告诉他你的安排。内容包括：
1.确定时间和地点一起买原材料；
2.回你家包饺子；
3.看网络视频预先学习；
4.吃饺子。
注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tony,




Yours, Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tony,
How are you getting along with your Chinese study these days?
In your last e-mail you asked me to teach you to make Jiaozi and now I’ll tell you my plan. At three o’clock this Saturday afternoon, I’ll meet you at the school gate, and then we’ll ride bicycles to a supermarket near my home to buy the materials for Jiaozi. After that, I’ll take you to my home to make Jiaozi. At dinner time we’ll cook and eat Jiaozi together. In order to learn faster and better, you can watch a video about jiaozi making in advance, which you can find a lot on the Internet.
I’m looking forward to seeing you this Saturday afternoon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。
【详解】
第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony在你校做交换生，希望你教他包饺子，你写邮件告诉他你的安排。内容包括：1.确定时间和地点一起买原材料；2.回你家包饺子；3.看网络视频预先学习；4.吃饺子。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：get along with(取得进展)；ask sb. to do sth.(让某人做某事)；plan(计划)；the school gate(校门口)；ride bicycles(骑自行车)；materials(材料)；in order to(为了)；in advance(提前)；on the Internet(在网上)等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般将来时。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如In order to learn faster and better, you can watch a video about jiaozi making in advance, which you can find a lot on the internet.运用非限制性定语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
10.倡议信-世界助残日
12月3日是世界助残日（the World Disability Day),请你以学校英语俱乐部的名义向同学们写一封倡议信，内容包括：
1.倡议的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？
2.活动安排：世界助残日当天，访问残疾人。
3.今后的打算。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Classmates,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The Students English Club
【答案】
Dear classmates,
December 3, the World Disability Day, is around the corner. To show our great concern about the disabled, we Students Union will organize an activity with the theme “What can we do for the disabled”. Anyone who volunteers is welcome. On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes. To make this kind of activity a rule, every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them.
The Students English Club
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生学校英语俱乐部的名义向同学们写一封倡议信。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：一般现在时和一般将来时
结构：总分法
要求：
1.倡议的主题：我为残疾人做点什么？
2.活动安排：世界助残日当天，访问残疾人。
3.今后的打算。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
the World Disability Day；around the corner；concern；disabled；organize；volunteer；cleaning the house；washing clothes；
第三步：连词成句
1. December 3, the World Disability Day, is around the corner.
2. We Students Union will organize an activity with the theme “What can we do for the disabled”
3. Anyone who volunteers is welcome.
4. On that day, we will visit some disabled people near our school, doing some work for them, such as cleaning their houses and washing clothes.
5. Every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them.
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition ;including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), On the one hand…
4.表因果关系：Consequently , Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰
第五步：润色修改。
【点睛】
范文内容符合题目要求，格式正确，运用的语言和句式合乎英语的表达规范并且运用了高级句式如：Anyone who volunteers is welcome.这句话使用who引导定语从句；Every one of us is welcome to get a disabled person as a partner, and will do what we can to help them.这句话使用what引导宾语从句；此外还使用了较多的高级词汇：around the corner；concern；disabled；organize；volunteer等。